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Eldritch Fruit: “The Color Out of Space”

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Published on September 16, 2014

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Welcome back to the Lovecraft reread, in which two modern Mythos writers get girl cooties all over old Howard’s original stories. Today we’re looking at “The Color Out of Space,” written in March 1927 and first published in the September 1927 issue of Amazing Stories. You can read the story here. Spoilers ahead.

Summary: A surveyor for the new reservoir tours the area to be inundated. He’s heard the shunned countryside west of Arkham is “not good for the imagination.” Even he is spooked by the “blasted heath:” five acres of gray dust like a “great spot eaten by acid into the woods and fields” where a well releases vapors that stain the sunlight with strange hues.

Arkhamites tell him to ignore Ammi Pierce’s stories about the heath, so (of course) he seeks Ammi out. The old farmer’s surprisingly reconciled to a reservoir sinking the familiar landscape—it’s better underwater since the “strange days” of 1882-1883.

It began with the meteorite that fell on Nahum Gardner’s prosperous farm. Miskatonic professors troop out to see the space rock. They find it weirdly plastic and uncooling; also, it’s shrinking. A brittle globule within bursts under their hammer with a “nervous little pop.” A gouged sample exhibits invulnerability to reagents, and a spectroscope shows unknown bands. The puzzled scientists collect one more specimen before lightning destroys the meteorite. This sample, too, dwindles to nothing in their lab.

The meteorite at first seems a propitious omen. Gardner’s pears and apples ripen to unprecedented size and beauty. Yet they prove too bitter to eat. Nahum figures the meteorite poisoned the orchard soil.

Winter comes early. The Gardners grow reserved and melancholy. Nahum hints at odd behavior in the local wildlife, and his sons shoot a woodchuck subtly monstrous in form and expression. In the spring plants sprout into abnormal shapes and colors—colors reminiscent of the meteorite’s unknown spectrum. Trees appear to sway without wind. A faint luminosity inheres to the vegetation. But scientists merely ridicule “the dark fears of rustics.”

By summer the vegetation goes gray and brittle. The horses bolt from their stable, mad, and must be destroyed. The Gardners’ mental health declines apace. Nabby goes mad, screaming that something’s fastened itself on her. Nahum locks her in an attic room, where she grows luminous. Son Thaddeus goes mad next, after a visit to the well, and gets an attic room of his own. The livestock begin, like the plants, to die gray and brittle deaths, shriveling and falling to bits before the end. Thaddeus succumbs to the gray death. Nahum buries him and tells Ammi and his wife the sad tale.

His next visit to the Pierces is no happier. Youngest son Merwin’s vanished, leaving a melted lantern and pail near the well. Remaining son Zenas is an obedient automaton, no more. Something creeps on the edge of sight and hearing. Nahum supposes it’s a judgment, though his family have always walked uprightly in the Lord’s ways.

After two weeks with no word, Ammi visits the farm. Nahum tells him that Zenas now lives in the well. Ammi goes to Nabby’s attic room. Something clammy brushes him. Strange color dances before his eyes. Then he sees the thing on the floor that moves slowly as it continues to crumble.

Ammi mercifully stills it. Downstairs, he hears dragging and a sticky sucking noise. Outside Ammi’s horse bolts. Something drops into the well.

What’s left of Nahum meets Ammi below. In half an hour, the gray death has devoured him. Before he dies, Nahum mutters of color that sucks the life from everything, grown from a seed-globule in the meteorite, come from a place where things aren’t as they are on earth.

Ammi reports to the Arkham authorities, who return to the farm with him. They empty the well and find Merwin and Zenas’s remains, along with animal bones. Probing the bubbling ooze in its depths, they find no bottom.

The party convenes indoors at twilight. Before long they notice weird color shooting from the well like a spotlight. Ammi warns the others not to go out. Soon the trees claw the darkening sky, every bough tipped with radiance. The authorities’ horses flee. Ammi’s horse falls dead as the column of unearthly color flares stronger. When the wood inside the house starts to glow, the party decides it’s time for all healthy living things to get the hell out of there.

From a hilltop, they see the valley alight with “unrecognizable chromaticism.” Suddenly the column from the well leaps skyward and vanishes through a hole in the clouds. Moments later, smaller fires and sparks hurtle after it. A fierce wind sweeps in. The men stagger homewards, only Ammi looking back. He’ll regret it forever, because he sees a faint remnant of color sink back into the well.

Fifty years later, bad dreams still drive settlers from the area. The blight spreads slowly from the heath, maybe an inch a year, and certain fat oaks shine and move in the night.

Ammi has never moved from the periphery of the cursed land. The narrator will ask the reservoir gang to watch him. He hates to think of the good old man ending up a gray monstrosity like the one that now troubles his dreams.

What’s Cyclopean: Nothing—this is an old New England houses story, not a scary alien architecture story. [Anne: Yeah, too bad Lovecraft didn’t write about the Newport mansions, which are at least titanic.] However, in addition to two separate uses of “eldritch,” we do get: “that alien and undimensioned rainbow of cryptic poison from the well—seething, feeling, lapping, reaching, scintillating, straining, and malignly bubbling in its cosmic and unrecognizable chromaticism.”

The Degenerate Dutch: We get some confusion over whether foreigners refuse to live near the blasted heath, or whether only foreigners try to live there. But for the most part, “rustics” is our word of the day, along with any number of patronizing dismissals of same. And seriously, HP should have been prevented, by force if necessary, from attempting to write dialect.

Mythos Making: Alien colors are not only alarming to look at and capable of consuming your life force, but can change the capabilities of pedestrian scientific instruments.

Libronomicon: No books out in the “rustic” countryside, apparently, and all we see of Miskatonic is the chemistry lab.

Madness Takes Its Toll: Nabby is the first unfortunate member of her family to go mad from the color-tainted water. Nahum locks her in the attic rather than send her to the asylum, which says something about either him or the asylum. Eventually she crawls on all fours and… glows in the dark. (Bioluminescence: not a symptom listed in the DSM.) Their oldest son goes mad likewise… and gets locked in a different part of the attic. Nahum goes last, so he gets to stay in the main house. Lucky him, or not.

Anne’s Commentary

Today’s story had me at the title—the color out of space? What’s that about in 1927, way before the days of LSD and black-light posters? Speaking of black-light posters, their eye-searing hues might approximate the Color, but no more than approximate it; in this tale we’re looking at top contender for most difficult illustration assignment in history. Only a painter with ground-up meteorite globule could hope to give us the chromatic freak itself.

I’ve always admired “Color’s” evocative and precise description. It’s not the wildlife in general that starts acting funky around Gardner’s farm—it’s the squirrels and rabbits and foxes and that awful woodchuck. It’s not flowers in general with a funky color—it’s skunk cabbages, Dutchman’s breeches, bloodroots, asters, goldenrod, zinnias, hollyhocks. Nahum doesn’t find a ruined bucket by the well—he finds a bent bail and twisted iron hoops, half-fused. The sense of place—near-coastal rural Massachusetts—foreshadows the masterly merging of the observed real and the invented fantastic that will reach its Lovecraftian zenith in “The Dunwich Horror” and “The Shadow Over Innsmouth.” The narrative foci are effective, both in the surveyor frame and in Ammi’s account of the strange days. Then there’s the Color, weirdest of the weird, most alien of the alien, least nameable of the unnamable, cosmic contagion personified, er, embodied, um, well, visible and clammily tangible anyhow.

But on this reread, family and social dynamics interested me the most, the human side of the story. Also, as a writer, how optimal family and social dynamics would have torpedoed the story from the start. By which I mean, if all the characters acted with optimal intelligence and compassion and efficiency, we wouldn’t have the kind of personal train wreck that makes fiction so much fun for us (safely far from the disintegrating track) spectators. Do we want the Color to kind of inconvenience some people? No! We want it to wreak utter havoc, like cosmic contagion should! Which means that the chosen victims can’t simply walk away from the contagion zone, or be hustled away by officious authorities.

So Lovecraft has the Color fall not in Arkham itself but on one of the more remote farms, where the family treats it as a novelty rather than a calamity. Then he gives the Color’s influence a convenient mental component: It renders its victims weary, melancholy, withdrawn. They don’t have the energy or emotional/intellectual bandwidth to assess their plight and escape. And friends have less chance to assess their plight for them. Lovecraft also sets the story in the 1880s, before cars and phones eased movement and communication. Modern writers might likewise set a story before those insidious destroyers of befuddlement and suspense, the Internet and cell phone.

So Lovecraft deliberately isolates the Gardners, and I don’t know enough about safety nets of 1880s New England to say whether he makes effort enough. As a latter-day Yankee myself, I have a sense that the legendary Yankee self-reliance would make the Gardners’ reluctant to complain or ask for extraordinary assistance. Nahum does recruit help haying after his horses run mad, and confide his troubles to Ammi. He approaches scientists and an Arkham editor about the initial weird developments. That’s about it, though. Yankee pride and stoicism discourage more, and the authorities pooh-pooh Nahum’s concerns as rustic superstition. Police and coroner and medical examiner don’t visit the farm until everyone’s dead. A veterinarian makes one visit when livestock starts dying, and a second with the other investigators. He’s baffled, but hey, at least he tried.

Incidentally, there’s no more likable and normal and undeserving-of-their-fate family in Lovecraft than the Gardners. They even have good old Yankee names: Nahum and Nabby, the boys Zenas and Thaddeus and Merwin. Nahum is actually described as “genial,” and his farm is trim and pleasant and fertile. Even more than Nathaniel Peaslee, they don’t read forbidden tomes or poke around in primordial ruins. So what’s up when Nabby and Thaddeus end up mad in the attic, like not only Mrs. Rochester but poor Asenath in Ephraim’s dying body?

Nahum, mentally compromised, may have some excuse for not seeking help for his wife and son. But what about Ammi? Should he intervene on their behalf—for that matter, on behalf of the other children and Nahum? Or is nineteenth century (and not yet extinct) hesitation to interfere with family autonomy his reason for inaction, as it was presumably reason for the narrator of “Thing on the Doorstep” not to inquire into “Asenath” locked sobbing in the Derby library?

Anyhow, if you set “Color” in today’s Massachusetts, think about the obstacles to your plot! It likely wouldn’t just be local professors in the farmyard, and camera vans would block the road, along with meteorite hunters alerted by son Zenas’s Tweets. Police and fire departments, water and agricultural authorities, child welfare and mental health professionals and animal advocates, would screw up that necessary isolation of the victims. Once the gray death started, the CDC would descend in Level Four contamination suits. Or at least we can hope all that would happen, and fast, right?

For sure, the color of the Color would be all over the Webz, and doubtless Nike would run a contest to capture it in mundane dyes for its next line of high-end sneakers.

Ruthanna’s Commentary

The thing that most creeps me out about this story isn’t the deadly alien color, but the degree to which I appear to have made unwarranted inferences from my first reading. I recall the story very explicitly taking place around the construction of the Quabbin Reservoir—in fact, I’ve spent a fair amount of time joking about the supposed wrongness of the water I drank throughout college.

The story was written in 1927, and construction on the Quabbin started in 1930, so the timing is right and plans for the new infrastructure were almost certainly an inspiration. However, the Quabbin is over 60 miles from Arkham’s coastal county—rather more than a couple of hours walk if your horses bolt. This is a different town-flooding reservoir.

If we could correlate all the contents of our memories, we’d probably go mad. But sometimes it would be awfully useful.

The infectious, life-sucking color is meant to be a truly alien alien, incomprehensible to earthly minds, born of a different physics. It is, in fact, so alien that at least for me, its differences cease to have power. We don’t know anything of its motivations, but they seem to be pretty monster-of-the-week: it pollutes the land and eats everything it can get its not-hands on, then returns home. Leaving behind only the chromatic runt that’s too weak to go along. Aw, poor thing.

In spite of my failure to be overwhelmed with xenophobia, I do find some of the surrounding effects pretty effective. Although as usual, there’s a little squid in mouth about what HP finds disturbing. Meteorite-tainted fruit: creepy. Whole family gradually going mad and getting eaten: creepy. Fact that their house was built in the 1600s: not creepy.

“A scene out of Fuseli”: also creepy, and evocative. Seriously, take a look.

We get some nifty religious imagery here—interesting as HP didn’t usually go for that sort of thing. When three “wise men” examined the meteorite, I thought it might be coincidence, but then we get repeated descriptions of the color as unholy and “tipping each bough like the fire of St. Elmo or the flames that came down on the apostles’ heads at Pentecost.”

Religion and science are equally adamant that the color falls outside their respective domains. It confounds instruments and mocks known natural law. It comes from some other universe, not from the comfortable suns that shine in earth’s sky. In this, the superstitious “rustics” and the stolid, rational city folk are in one accord.

(Though actually, the most impressive thing the color does in the whole story is show up on the spectroscope. HP, honey, I don’t think you understand how the electromagnetic spectrum—if scientists can’t explain it in pretty standard terms, it ain’t showing up on a spectroscope, and ain’t a color by any definition. Although the effects are… a lot like radiation poisoning, actually. Huh.)

Join us next week for more small-town horror in “The Shadow Over Innsmouth.”


Ruthanna Emrys’s neo-Lovecraftian novelette “The Litany of Earth” is available on Tor.com, along with the more recent but distinctly non-Lovecraftian “Seven Commentaries on an Imperfect Land.” Her work has also appeared at Strange Horizons and Analog. She can frequently be found online on Twitter and Livejournal. Her alma mater’s water comes from the Quabbin Reservoir, and she now needs a new excuse for being so weird.

Anne M. Pillsworth’s short story “Geldman’s Pharmacy” received honorable mention in The Year’s Best Fantasy and Horror, Thirteenth Annual Collection.The Madonna of the Abattoir” is published on Tor.com, and her first novel, Summoned, is available from Tor Teen. She currently lives in a Victorian trolley car suburb of Providence, Rhode Island.

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Ruthanna Emrys is the author of A Half-Built Garden, Winter Tide, and Deep Roots, as well as co-writer of Reactor's Reading the Weird column with Anne M. Pillsworth. She writes radically hopeful short stories about religion and aliens and psycholinguistics. She lives in a mysterious manor house on the outskirts of Washington, DC with her wife and their large, strange family. There she creates real versions of imaginary foods, gives unsolicited advice, and occasionally attempts to save the world.
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wiredog
10 years ago

“Bioluminescence: not a symptom listed in the DSM.”
Actually…

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10 years ago

This! This was my first introduction to Lovecraft, at entirely too young an age. (Well, I think I actually read the story The Outsider somewhere else before this — maybe a Scholastic collection? — but didn’t make the connection. Or connexion.) To this day this story above all others creeps me out unmercifully.

This was the cover of the book I found on a library paperback spinner; how could I resist? (Yes, I know the cover is actually the Great Race of Yith. But still.)

Braid_Tug
10 years ago

Hope there were plans to cap and seal that well off before a town’s water supply got to be contaminated by touching it.

Anne you are right. That story could not be placed today. Even if the meteorite fell in the middle of Amish country, word would get out and the isolation could not be as complete.
Or would the greyness just spread faster?

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10 years ago

The story doesn’t quite work for me because, as a scientist, I can’t quite wrap my head around the idea of a color that can’t be seen, and that doesn’t show up on a spectroscope. It’s still an excellent effort at portraying an alien life form that is not even life as we understand it, and that is apparently not so much malevolent as indifferent, yet still has a terrible effect on those nearby.

Ruthanna and Anne, the Yankee stolidness, refusal to ask for outside help except in they haying, rings very true to me.

@3, they don’t cap the well, the narrator says that he can only hope that the quantity of water will be enough to keep the remant dormant, but that he won’t drink the water from the new reservoir.

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Athreeren
10 years ago

The narration doesn’t work in this one. At one point, we have an account of what Ammi told the narrator about what the scientists told him about their discoveries on the meteor – and yet at no point is there a loss of information? It is handwaved by claiming that Ammi is interested in science, but there’s no way everyone involved would have remembered all the details. Same thing for Nahum’s rambling just before his death: it may have made a deep enough impression on Ammi for him to remember it perfectly, but the narrator only had a second hand account, same as we did: can anyone repeat it by heart after only one read? I certainly can’t, I just remember the ellipses.

I guess Lovecraft wanted to have a third person narration, and still use his iconic first-person-account-of-the-events, but the result is really weird. For instance, when it is said that Ammi didn’t got mad because of his farmer common sense, who said that? Was it Ammi who told the surveyor “had I not been a stupid peasant, that sight would have turned me mad!” or is it the surveyor who decides, without having seen the creature, that its sight would have turned anyone mad, even though the only example he knows of took it pretty well?

It’s getting really ridiculous when it comes to free indirect speech (for instance: “God! how old the house was!”). That would make sense in a first person narrative (Ammi recalls his reaction), or with a third person subjective point of view, but not with this weird mix. Because once again, who said that? The only way I can explain it is if Ammi mimed the scene in a really convincing way, which would be too funny to properly convey horror.

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AMPillsworth
10 years ago

hoopmanjh @@@@@ 2: Heh, I read all of Lovecraft at way too early an age, but as in the Robin Williams quote I saw the other day, we all get one spark of madness and must hold on to it.

Great representation of a Yith on that cover, plus I spy a Yuggothite in the background!

Braid_Tug @@@@@ 3: I thought the same thing about the well, but the narrator-surveyor doesn’t mention seeing to this little detail….

Maybe if a whole bunch of the globule-bearing meteorites fell at once, all over the world, because Color Number One has returned home to tell the other Colors about a certain planet packed with tasty morsels.

Somebody catch that plot bunny!

DemetriosX
10 years ago

This was my very first Lovecraft story. I got the Scholastic Shadow over Innsmouth collection when I was 10 or 11 and thought I could handle scary stories. A couple of the stories scared me so badly that I wouldn’t reread the book and didn’t even like touching it for several years. This was not one of those stories. (Next week, though? Hooo, boy.)

It’s hard to see this as much other than radiation poisoning by today’s standards, but that’s not what HPL had in mind, I’m sure. All the genetic defects in the plants and animals sure sounds like it.

The third hand narration really weakens things, but the only other possibility would have been for the narrator to find Ammi’s diary from the time or something. Which really points out the similar narrative structures between this and “The Mound”.

The other problem, of course, is the unearthly color (or colour as HPL would have it). He waffles a bit. Sometimes it’s the color itself, other times it’s the spectrographic signature (remember looking through those tubes in high school chemistry?). There is such a thing as impossible colors, but I don’t really understand the explanation. All in all, the story is vaguely unsettling, but not much more. Unless you think about the future water supply.

Speaking of which, Michael Shea wrote a sequel of sorts, called The Color out of Time. I’ve read it, but I don’t remember much about it.

Safety net: Yeah, Yankee stubbornness. There is a throwaway line about the family not attending church as regularly as they once did. I’s think the parson might have at least dropped around once or twice.

Along with Fuseli, we also get Salvator Rosa. HPL was showing off his homeschooling.

And Athreeren @5, the science stuff is a little handwavy, but the narrator mentions going through the names of some of the standard lab tests and Ammi recognizing a few of them. Seems unlikely after 50 years.

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Russell H
10 years ago

@7 Re “radiation poisoning,” I remember a few years ago seeing a documentary about what Chernobyl looks like today. The profusion of overgrown, twisted plantlife and the deformed animals sighted reminded me uncannily of the descriptions of the Gardner farm.

Even in 1945, John Hersey noted in HIROSHIMA how one of the aftereffects of the bomb was the remarkably rapid and lush growth of weeds throughout the ruins of the city.

stevenhalter
10 years ago

I took the color to not be part of the spectrum but rather a twisting of the perception of color. It is a something that is outside of human experience that the brain tries to translate into a color but fails in a truely disconcerting fashion.
A kind of horrific synesthesia.

stevenhalter
10 years ago

R.Emrys@11:Yeah, he should have left that detail out.

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JeanTheSquare
10 years ago

“As it was he thought only of the blasphemous monstrosity which confronted him, and which all too clearly had shared the nameless fate of young Thaddeus and the livestock. But the terrible thing about the horror was that it very slowly and perceptibly moved as it continued to crumble.

Ammi would give me no added particulars of this scene, but the shape in the corner does not reappear in his tale as a moving object.”

Brrrrr. Best part of the story.

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10 years ago

@7: I’m a huge Michael Shea fan, but I recall being somewhat disappointed by Color Out of Time — there was so much potential, but he kind of turned it from this unearthly, malevolent luminescence into a giant spider. Kind of like the final chapter of It.

DemetriosX
10 years ago

@10/11 Ruthanna
Lovecraft experiencing the world through books and letters is a terrific explanation for a lot of his authorial tics. It’s always been easy to use as a reason so many of his protagonists are scholars and antiquarians, but you just took it a big step farther.

Also, the spectrometer doesn’t necessarily invalidate Stevenhalter’s theory @9. That showed that the globules and the meteorite were made of some material not known to the scientists of the 1880s. That’s plausible: spongy, sublimates very slowly at room temperature, a few other odd properties. But the contents of the globule, the colour itself, could then twist perceptions. It does seem to exert some sort of mental control.

I was also wondering about possible influences that might have suggested an unearthly color to HPL. Using Wikipedia’s handy List of Fictional Colors, I came up with a couple of candidates. Victor Emanuel was a big pulp author and had a novel The Messiah of the Cylinder with the colors mull and glow. George MacDonald has an unnamed color in The Golden Key and ERB has two unnamed colors in the Barsoom stories. Finally, A Voyage to Arcturus by David Lindsay includes the colors jale and ulfire. All of those were written before this story and it’s not out of the question for HPL to have read any or all of them.

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10 years ago

Not my first Lovecraft story but pretty close to it: I’ve always liked this early attempt to mix SF and horror but I’ve never quite been able to believe in the alien, though the blasted heath is one of those great Lovecraft images.

The story was first published in the September 1927 issue of Amazing Stories, which has a Frank R. Paul cover of a man being eaten by a giant plant. There are contributions from Kline, Gernsback and Breuer but the highlight of this issue is surely the second part of the serialisation of The War of the Worlds.

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10 years ago

There’s absolutely nothing improbable or unscientific about “Impossible Colors” :)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Impossible_colors

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(still) Steve Morrison
10 years ago

Re fictional colors: evidently a 1638 book called The Man in the Moone by Francis Godwin has a man go to the moon and find a beautiful color there which has never been seen on earth. I haven’t read it, though; my information comes from this old blog post by John D. Rateliff:
http://sacnoths.blogspot.com/2011/08/stone-of-invisibility.html
So this one may be the granddaddy of them all.

DemetriosX
10 years ago

@16 Ruthanna
A color spectrometer could easily show that the material of the globule or the meteorite was of some unknown substance. The light from the burning of a material is converted into a spectrum and the intensity, width, and gaps in the spectrum is unique to the material. A really bizarre spectrum pattern would indicate an unknown, dare I say alien material.

Now, Lovecraft is rather fuzzy about all this and does compare the spectrum lines to the unusual color of the material. Maybe some of the lines are so intense they produce impossible colors? I think there’s also a difference between what the scientists at the university study and the thing in the well/possessing Nabby.

It should also be noted that this is one of HPL’s more frequently adapted works. It was the basis for Die, Monster, Die! and a less known film called The Curse. I’d guess it also strongly influenced Steven King’s short story “Weeds” and the film adaptation of that, “The Lonesome Death of Jordy Verrill” in Creepshow.

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10 years ago

Lovecraft’s use of dialect: he’s actually familiar with the one in question, rural eastern Massachusetts, and depicts it fairly well given the conventions of the 1920’s.

Farmers in Massachusetts in the 1880’s -would- be speaking a rather pronounced dialect, probably at or just after its maximum degree of local peculiarity.

Even the New England professors at Arkham would have had a definite regional accent then, of the “paak the caa in the doah yaad” type, though their syntax would be much closer to the written standard than the rural working-class speech of the area. That would have been the way Lovecraft grew up speaking in the 1890-1910 period, tho’ in his case heavily Anglicized.

Speech patterns were much more regional then than they are now, and the situation had only begun to change in the 1920’s when Lovecraft was writing this story. For example, if you listen to recorded political speeches from the 1920’s and 30’s you can usually peg where the pol in question came from right away, from New England swallowed ‘r’ and long ‘a’ to Cornhusker rasp to Deep South gumbo, often with social class peculiarities thrown in. FDR talks pelucid Hudson Valley patrician — check the way he sticks an extra ‘r’ in words sometimes.

Radio and (talking) movies were what made General American so widespread, followed by TV, of course, with everyone sounding as if they’d been raised in Illinois and then moved to LA.

Lovecraft got it about as right as you can without going into a lot of detail or using the International Phonetic Alphabet.

This dialect is going to sound obtrusively odd to a 21st century speaker of General American — which was sort of taking form in the Midwest around the time of this story, and derives from Pennsylvanian originals, which in turn were based on early-18th century Midland English influenced by other regional dialects and by German.

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AMPillsworth
10 years ago

stevenhalter @@@@@ 9: I like the synaesthesia angle, for sure.

JeanTheSquare @@@@@ 13: Oh yes, the scene in the attic is prime contamination/disintegration horror, with a special nastiness in the deliberate movement of the crumbling thing.

The gray death would have to be one of my top ten Worse Fictive Ways to Go.

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Angiportus
10 years ago

“…the leaps of that rabbit were longer than either Ammi or his horse liked.”
“…there came from poor tethered Hero such a sound as no man before or since ever heard from a horse.”
“..an odd timidity about the deep skyey voids above had crept into my soul.” The details are so key.
I discovered this in my teens, living in a place where my (dysfunctional) family was almost as isolated as the Gardners, and recall reading it while listening to the “Winter” section of Wendy Carlos’ “Sonic Seasonings.” Quite a pairing, that.
Nowadays in my city they string little white lights on street trees, and on windy nights it is indeed kind of like “a glutted swarm of corpse-fed fireflies dancing hellish sarabands over an accursed marsh”. But that is just kind of cool…
Your analyses of the story are good, as usual. Keep it up. You might take on Machen some day too…

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Angiportus
10 years ago

…I forgot to add that for me one of the neat things about Shea’s “Color out of Time” was that the 2 heroes were old men, and it seemed that old people were/are underrepresented as protagonists in sf/weird fiction, some of HPL’s scholars notwithstanding [I forget how old those were.]
As for the remnant that fell back into the well, in the HPL story, I figured that might be a “seed” for the next launch, or something.

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10 years ago

@9 stevenhalter

That’s how I read it too. It’s the brain trying and failing to translate a sensation into something comprehensible.

re: dialect

It may be an accurate representation of this dialect, but it’s still tedious to read. I’d have preferred HPL to skip that.

re: the story

To me, The Coulour out of Space is probably HPL’s most effective story. It’s not perfect and he has written better prose but I think it might be his only work that had an impact on me as a horror story. The effects the alien entity has (aside from unnatural growth and mutation)… *shudders*

Then something struck the cows. Certain areas or sometimes the whole body would be uncannily shrivelled and compressed, and atrocious collapses or disintegrations were common. In the last stages – and death was always the result – there would be a greying and turning brittle like that which beset the hogs.

(…)

When he did enter he saw something dark in the corner, and upon seeing it more clearly he screamed outright. While he screamed he thought a momentary cloud eclipsed the window, and a second later he felt himself brushed as if by some hateful current of vapour. Strange colours danced before his eyes; and had not a present horror numbed him he would have thought of the globule in the meteor that the geologist’s hammer had shattered, and of the morbid vegetation that had sprouted in the spring. As it was was he only thought of the blasphemous monstrosity which confronted him, and which all too clearly had shared the nameless fate of young Thaddeus and the livestock. But the terrible thing about the horror was that it very slowly and perceptibly moved as it continued to crumble.

THAT is fucking creepy.

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10 years ago

Some random things:

The 1965 Brian Aldiss story “The Saliva Tree” is inspired by H. G. Wells and “The Colour Out of Space”, the latter being one of the few Lovecraft stories that Aldiss liked. It won the Nebula but it’s far from my favorite Aldiss.

The Delta Green scenario “The Killer Out of Space”, which includes the space shuttle Atlantis, EMPs and flying saucers.

This CNET headine from an unwary writer: “How the Hubble telescope captures the colour out of space.”

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10 years ago

If a photon falls in the spectrometer, and no one is around to see it, does it make a color?

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10 years ago

That depends. Does it taste triangular?

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AMPillsworth
10 years ago

Angiportus @@@@@ 23: Re Machen, it could be fun to take on some of the stories Lovecraft mentions with relish in his “Supernatural Horror in Literature,” an essay that led me to many new favorites when I first read it. That would definitely bring in Machen, as well as Lovecraft’s other “modern masters,” Lord Dunsany and Algernon Blackwood and M. R. James.

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DGDavis
10 years ago

Most memorable quotation from “The Colour Out of Space”: “…it come
from some place whar things ain’t as they is here…”

Biggest strain on suspension of disbelief: that people could keep
crawling around, and even talking, after they’d turned brittle and were
literally crumbling apart. Talk about hardening of the arteries…

I’d bet that Preston & Childs’ thriller “The Ice Limit” was inspired by
“The Colour Out of Space.” “The Ice Limit,” too, centers on a meteorite of
bizarre color and ominous import. It goes one up on Lovecraft by providing a
more specific scientific rationale: a transuranic element. Letting it get
underwater, a la “Colour,” wasn’t a good idea, and as the novel ends, the
meteorite is engaged in gobbling up the earth.

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Cybersnark
10 years ago

For those saying that this secluded setting wouldn’t work today, I think you’re overestimating technological saturation; I come from small-town Ontario, and I actually know people alive today who have neither cellphones nor computers (nor a high school diploma, for that matter).

I can totally imagine something like this happening out in the boonies somewhere and nobody hearing about it. It’d be an article in the local town’s newspaper (which has no website), and maybe an offhand mention in a rambling email about someone’s third cousin twice-removed passing away a few months back, but that’s it.

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10 years ago

@31 — I just got back from taking the train to Churchill, MB, and back, and I think this story could happen in large parts of that area. Or up in Nunavut, for that matter.

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Billionyear
10 years ago

Considering that the top story in the Boston papers for the past week has been a house in Blackstone, MA so unimaginably filthy it had to be cleaned by workers in biohazard suits–workers who found three dead infants in the debris–and the neighbors knew nothing–the isolation depicted in “Colour” is perfectly believeable.

Braid_Tug
10 years ago

@33: Have you seen the show Hoarders: Buried Alive?
That type of dirty is not as un-common as we would wish. The show is the best motivator I have ever encountered to make me do the deep cleaning houses need.

The dead babies however are a tragic twist in that story however. Woman needs mental help, father needs a beating. Remaining children need help.

The isolation I can see being possible. But if a large enough meteor falls, don’t the various sky watch groups track them? But then if it melts and spreads it poison before anyone gets there, too late – damage done.

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AMPillsworth
10 years ago

Re the isolation thing, the Gardners were actually less isolated, geographically, than many people today might be, just a hop-skip-buggy ride from a university town.

But I maintain that today, once scientists got a whiff of a meteorite with unprecedented qualities, it would be all over for that isolation. I expect news of the phenomenon would have spread among scientists in the 1880s, too.

DGDavis @@@@@ 30: I love The Ice Limit and agree about the possible “Color” inspiration. And did you notice that the private museum in Pendergast’s Riverside Drive mansion has a meteorite suspiciously similar to the Ice Limit one? There’s mention of it in The Cabinet of Curiosities.

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jmsaunders
10 years ago

As for there being no social safety net, many rural New England communities in the 1880s were incredibly fragile. Just read about the Mercy Brown vampire incident. It took a lot less than a meteor and an incomprehensible alien horror for everything to go completely off the rails.

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Tim W
10 years ago

I still remember the first time I read this and being surprised by how prescient it is. Except for the colour itself, everything that happens could have been a nuclear incident. In fact I had just seen a documentary on Chernobyl when I started this story.

And as for the local dialog that he uses, I guess I’m in the minority but I like it. I think it adds another layer of realism to the story when you can read something the way a local actually would have spoken it.

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10 years ago

I love the way the first paragraph of this story is written. I think it’s beautiful, especially these parts:

West of Arkham the hills rise wild, and there are valleys with deep woods that no axe has ever cut. There are dark narrow glens where the trees slope fantastically, and where thin brooklets trickle without ever having caught the glint of sunlight. On the gentler slopes there are farms, ancient and rocky, with squat, moss-coated cottages brooding eternally over old New England secrets in the lee of great ledges; but these are all vacant now, the wide chimneys crumbling and the shingled sides bulging perilously beneath low gambrel roofs.

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Billionyear
10 years ago

“I love the way the first paragraph of this story is written. I think it’s beautiful”

It’s one of the handful of Lovecraft stories where his style works 100% for him and not against him.

DemetriosX
10 years ago

Just a final thought on the spectroscope issue. We’re getting this third-hand through Ammi and he may not have understood exactly what the scientists were talking about. They talked about the strange spectrum lines they were getting and he conflated that with the weird color. I admit that’s something of a retcon.

Add me to the list of those the like the dialect. For me, it adds to the verisimilitude. I didn’t find it too intrusive or difficult to parse. And the university men might have had what we would consider a strong accent as joatsbuddy mentions @21, Lovecraft could be seen as prefiguring Faulkner a bit, with the upper, educated class speaking standard and the lower, uneducated class speaking strong dialect.

@36 jmsaunders
I had never heard of the New England vampire scare. Hard to imagine that happening so late. Apparently, Lovecraft was aware of it. He alludes to it in “The Shunned House”.

Braid_Tug
10 years ago

@41: I think my head would explode with a book / story like that. But I have hearing loss, so many vowel sounds that really make an accent distinct are lost on me.
The extra “r”s thrown in by other accents, however stand out.

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AMPillsworth
10 years ago

I’m considering adding an extra layer of horror to my stories by trying to capture all the Rhode Island accents and dialects, which vary from city to city. It would be a horror for me, anyhow, to struggle with so Herculean a task!

We have a local actress famous for teaching actors the real Rhody speak. Jason Isaacs did pretty well in “Brotherhood,” I thought. Others not so much. WhaddayagonnaDO?

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10 years ago

Herculean? or Cyclopean?

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a-j
10 years ago

DGDavis@30

It goes one up on Lovecraft by providing a more specific scientific rationale: a transuranic element.

And as we all know, transuranic heavy elements may not be used where there is life.

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AMPillsworth
10 years ago

Tabbyfl55 @@@@@ 44: Both Herculean and Cyclopean, as well as titanic and unspeakable! Maybe even a little squamous, if we’re talking about the Cranstonian subdialect.

Excuse me, the Cvaanstinyin.

Hmm, I’m starting to see where Lovecraft’s invented names come from!

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Ellynne
10 years ago

What I remember from first reading it are the creepy hints that the people can’t leave, as if they’re bespelled once they’re infected. There are hints Ammi knows it’s spreading and that he should get out of there, too, but he can never quite bring himself to do it–and maybe the people who avoid him avoid him partly because they sense the infection that is already changing him.

Yes, a-j, transuranics can’t be used where there is life. That may not be a problem, soon. But, Sapphire and Steel might still have time to show up.

As for the science tests, I think we can count on Miskatonic professors to have had one or two devices that Edison and Tesla wouldn’t have heard of, the sort of things they lie about to laymen even if they can’t quite figure out what the results mean later–or maybe Ammi just misidenitified the test, either because he remembered the name wrong or had never known what it was. Some helpful soul later told him it sounded like a spectroscope.

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Tobias E. Queen
10 years ago

If you’d like to have a LISTEN to this particular tale, the Drabblecast did a bang up job of making an audio production. Check it out HERE or just download the audio HERE

Enjoy!

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jgtheok
10 years ago

Classic HPL. Including the tendency to nail some story elements perfectly while badly flubbing others… That frustrating quality might actually explain the influence of the decidedly non-mainstream Mythos; not many writers manage to simultaneously inspire ‘wow, this is great!’ and ‘but couldn’t I do it better?’

Tone, locale, description: great. Characters: maybe a bit shaky, but within poetic license. Dialect: mixed response. Story-within-story-within-story narrative framework: best left to Scheherazade. Science: dear God, make him stop…

I tend not to read critically, but I do wonder how a writer would explain:
“… And still the pale phosphorescence glowed in that detestably ancient woodwork. God! how old the house was! Most of it built before 1670, and the gambrel roof not later than 1730.”
I mean, presumably HPL wasn’t trying for the reaction that got from me…

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AMPillsworth
10 years ago

jgtheok @@@@@ 49: That bit about the house sounds like antiquarian HPL bursting forth, as he always does whenever there’s a gambrel roof within a twenty mile radius.

He would have made a great tour guide for the Providence Preservation Society.

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10 years ago

I first read the tale when I was seven years old and found it intensely disturbing. Has anyone else noticed the repeated sentence in it?

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10 years ago

@52: “I vaguely wished some clouds would gather, for an odd timidity about the deep skyey voids above had crept into my soul.” One of the best lines in all of Lovecraft’s work.

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a-j
10 years ago

Ramsey Campbell@52
‘fraid not. Where?

This was the first HPL I read which made me think he might be something special. I had been biased against him by an academic work on ghost stories I had used for my dissertation on MR James which was very down on him and Arthur Machen. I then borrowed from the library volume 3 of the 1980s Grafton omnibus paperbacks and had enjoyed the stories so far but this was the one which made me sit up and wonder there might actually be something to this Howard chap after all.

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10 years ago

54 – see 53!

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Random22
10 years ago

@51 I mentioned that to an English friend, and they said there had never been a better description of the M40 motorway.

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MTCarpenter
10 years ago

So you know my bias, I think The Colour Out of Space is a brilliant masterpiece.

The Colour Out of Space has not fared well in comic books, I guess not surprising when you can’t really visualize and unknown color. In Selfmadehero’s Loevcraft Anthology #1 there is one from 2011 writer David Hine, artist Mark Stafford . I don’t know of any other comic book adaptations of this story. Alas I did not like Mr. Stafford’s art at all.

In film there is the 1965 Boris Karloff movie Monster of Terror (better known as Die Monster Die), which is of course lame. But a more modern movie in German, Die Farbe is a brilliant adaptation. They get around the issue of color by filming in black and white, and then having the color be an eerie purple radiance. Director Huan Vu is now ears deep in a project to bring the Dreamlands to film.

Many authors have taken the bit at the end of the story where some radiance was left behind as a springboard for sequels. Michael Shea wrote a novella length sequel The Colour Out of Time, originally published by DAW I think. It is derivative and not on a par with Mr. Shea’s later masterworks. The Color Over Occam is perhaps the latest such sequel, by Jonathan Thomas. I found it to be fair. “A Little Color in Your Cheeks” is a very agreeable short story by Mike Minnis in the anthology Horrors Beyond. Two other short stories are Brian Lumley’s “The Thing From the Blasted Heath” and David Morrell’s “Orange is for Anguish, Blue is for the Color of Insanity” from Prime Evil. I haven’t read these. John Pelan’s novella, The Colour out of Darkness really has nothing to do with HPL’s story.

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MTCarpenter
10 years ago

BTW, the artwork shown is taken from an old Lancer paperback and it makes me very nostalgic for when I was a young teen first discovering Lovecraft. The work by the same artist on The Dunwich Horror is similarly brilliant.

Unfortunately, no one seems to know the identity of the artist. Even in the huge compendium of Lovecraftian art from Centipede Press in 2008 they could not track down the identity, so if anyone knows I’d appreciate the information.

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MTCarpenter
10 years ago

Also, if anyone wants to read a different take on these stories in terms of analysis or annotation done by Lovecraftian experts there are a couple of choices.

Kenneth Hite is always a lively commentator and you can check out his book Tour de Lovecraft, adapted from his blog in ~2007, where he discusses all the major works. Be advised his book does not contain the stories themselves!

Leslie Klinger is releasing a new annotated collection of Lovecraft tales in October from Liveright. Mr. Klinger gave us superb annotations of Sherlock Holmes so this should be good.

ST Joshi’s anntated versions are available from Dell.

Melendwyr
Melendwyr
10 years ago

The meterorite gives strange spectroscopic results for the same reason the parasites in the ST:TOS episode “Operation: Annihilate!” are hard to eliminate: they’re from locales where the laws of physics aren’t terrestrial. It’s only relatively recently that astronomers have become convinced that chemical and physical properties of matter are basically universal.

It’s not that the science is wrong… it’s that the science is eldritch. What the spectroscope is picking up isn’t light in the sense we understand it. The text of the story makes clear that the ‘colour’ is a metaphor for something, but what that is we can’t know or comprehend.

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10 years ago

I’ve always taken this story as a sort of parallel to The Fall.
Nahum Gardner – Nahum is an anagram of Human, so you get “Human Gardener,” like Adam & Eve. And then they eat the forbidden fruit (quite literally), and are then forcibly expelled from the garden (in this case, through horrible death and meltiness).

Melendwyr
Melendwyr
10 years ago

“What I’m trying to figure out is how the spectroscope *picks up* something that isn’t light as we understand it.”

You’re assuming that because the radiation isn’t light as we know it, it should have no properties in common with light. That’s the problem – it DOES. It wouldn’t be nearly so horrifying if it didn’t.

If the Colour were merely a psychic impression, we could categorize it neatly and be comforted in our understanding. But it breaks our categories, registering on our familiar instruments but in ways that should be impossible.

Melendwyr
Melendwyr
10 years ago

Addendum: it would actually be possible for a radiation to have an ‘impossible’ color if we assume it triggers our color receptors in a way normal light does not. For example, any frequency of light with sufficient intensity will trigger all three of our color receptor types to some degree. If only one were activated, but the others weren’t, the brain wouldn’t know how to process the input it was receiving, as that sort of signal never naturally arises.

How could only one receptor type register the Colour? I have no idea. It’s impossible… and utterly delicious. Bwa ha ha!

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Gary
9 years ago

Over 50 years ago, Jack Kirby drew a page for Fantastic Four #20 that seemed inspired by The Colour out of Space.  See page 1 of “The Mysterious Molecule Man”. 

Denise L.
Denise L.
8 years ago

I always imagine the Color as a kind of luminescent purple, or ultraviolet, kind of like what you get from a black light.  It’s hard to describe and it doesn’t look natural.

This is one of my favorite Lovecraft stories, and one of his best in my opinion.  I recently tried to get my mom to read some Lovecraft.  She wasn’t really into it, so I suggested that I read the first few paragraphs of “Color” to her, and then she could decide if she wanted to read the rest.  Well, I started reading, and kept reading, and reading… She never told me to stop.  I ended up reading the whole thing to her.  She said she kind of got hooked after the first page.

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7 years ago

Has anyone else seen the recent German film adaptation of this story?

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1756479/?ref_=nv_sr_8

Moved it from New England to rural Germany but otherwise a reasonably faithful adaptation.  They handled the “color” itself by filming in black & white, and showing the color as kind of a fluorescent pink.

I’m currently about 2/3 of the way through a Lovecraft reread (with the variorum editions from Hippocampus Press) and this story still holds up and remains one of my favorites.

DemetriosX
6 years ago

Looks like this is coming to the screen again. They’ve got Nic Cage (as the lead, but character name not given; my guess would be either Nahum or the investigator) along with Joely Richardson, Tommy Chong, Julian Hilliard and Q’Orianka Kilcher. Chong seems like a good bet for Ammi. Directed by Richard Stanley, his first in 20 years.

Biswapriya Purkayastha
Biswapriya Purkayastha
6 years ago

 Have you read The Saliva Tree by Brian W Aldiss? It’s set in Victorian Britain and is a rewriting of The Colour Out Of Space. Not an improvement in my opinion. But it does explain the reason the farm dwellers don’t leave: after the initial disgust at the taste of the fruit and vegetables that grow in the affected farm, they grow to like it and by the end of the tale are incapable of eating anything not grown on the farm.  In every other way the story is poorer; the aliens are no colour, but tentacle headed invisible giant vampiric space geese on holiday. Seriously!

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Sidney Anderson
5 years ago

I personally don’t have a problem with the spectroscopy thing. Yes it is true with the electromagnetic spectrum that any light not part of the visible spectrum would not make it through the slits, and that even if it did it would not be seen. However, there could be some unknown particle similar to the photon that isn’t a photon that interacts with electromagnetism to produce color by interacting with the retina just like visible light photons.
Many scientists think there is a particle called the “dark photon” which is like the photon for dark matter.

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SunlessNick
5 years ago

“It is, in fact, so alien that at least for me, its differences cease to have power.”

It’s not even definitively an entity at all.  It might just be the Mythos equivalent of a temporary river flood.

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