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The Full Spoiler Review of Brandon Sanderson’s Oathbringer (Stormlight Archive #3)

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OATHBRINGER IS HERE!

Okay, forgive the shouting, but this day has been long awaited! Actually, that should probably say “this month,” since we hope you all got your copy last week and have had plenty of time to read it by now. Because we have Things To Discuss! Settle in with your spren and your libation of choice, and let’s get to it.

First, we need to note up front that if you have not yet finished reading Oathbringer, you really shouldn’t be here. This post is basically ALL THE SPOILERS, and you just don’t want to learn things that way. Read the book, then come back.

So. After all the hype and the excitement leading up to this release, we are reasonably confident that the vast majority of readers reached the end of the book in a whirl of excitement, somewhat dazzled and bewilderedand maybe a little bit miffed?by everything that happened, but flying high on adrenaline. Right?

Now we could talk about it all … but with a book this size, a spoiler review could easily get out of hand. Paige and Alice are working in concert here, and we’re going to attempt to focus on just a few aspects: expectations unfulfilled, expectations fulfilled, and surprises. Let’s go!

Expectations Unfulfilled

It’s natural that we went into this third book with a lot of expectations for what would happenmore so than the second book, perhaps, because we felt we had a better idea of where the story ought to go. Which of those expectations were left unfulfilled? Note that this is not the same thing as ‘disappointing’ or ‘bad’ in any wayit’s mostly just things that didn’t happen. Yet.

Oh My Honor, Is That … Shardplate?!

One of the most obvious of the unmet expectations is that not a single one of our Radiants clearly gained their Shardplate. There are hints that Kaladin, Dalinar, and Jasnah all manifestedor began to manifesttheir Shardplate, but we don’t get to actually see it.

What we do see is windspren forming around Kaladin as he falls through the sky, and windspren coming together for him to create a windbreak, enabling a bunch of people to reach shelter. Dalinar appears to gain some kind of linear-shaped protection around his arm during the vision in which he meets Venli. And finally, Adolin sees Jasnah with geometric shapes fading around her, just after a soldier is hurled away from her general direction during the Battle of Thaylen City. (Note that we have seen none of Jasnah’s Ideals spoken, so it’s entirely possible that she’s already spoken her Fourth Ideal and attained her Plate…)

We saw a lot of hints at Shardplate, several tantalizing suggestions…but no full-on, ‘Knight Radiant encased in living Shardplate’ scene that we were frothing at the mouth to see. Oh, you weren’t frothing, you say? Must have been someone else. (It was totally me.—Paige)

Fourth Windrunner Ideal… Not

Another thing most of us expected to see was Kaladin gaining the Fourth Windrunner Ideal…and he was this close, but it didn’t happen. We were pretty stunned by that…what did you guys think?

FWIW, after much thought, we came to the conclusion that subverting this particular trope was a good choice on Sanderson’s part; it’s too formulaic to have the same character level up in every book. (I’m still sad, though.Paige)

All at the same time, it was agonizing to watch him struggle, fun to speculate on the content of the oath, frustrating to see him continually pull back, and really quite glorious to watch the moment when it didn’t matter any more:

“Syl?”

She pulled him tight. “Maybe you don’t have to save anyone, Kaladin. Maybe it’s time for someone to save you.”

(I might or might not have cried here… Alice)

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Windrunner glyph, by Isaac Stewart

Shallan, Fragmented

Along the same lines, many of us expected to see Shallan moving on and being more awesome, since she’d clearly faced her nightmare-worthy memories at the end of Words of Radiance. Instead, she went into an even worse downward spiral, which truth be told, was somewhat disturbing.

Her confrontation with Re-Shephir was amazing, but it reflected a truth she didn’t entirely acknowledge: that she didn’t really know who she was, or who she wanted to be. It’s like she knew she was a Lightweaver, but that’s the only part of her identity she had a firm grasp on.

And that was only Part 1: from there, through almost the end of the book, she was deliberately fragmenting herself, creating different personalities to suit different needs, but none of them could suit all of her situations. Instead of the nicely maturing adult we thought we might get, we saw a regression into multiple personalities; some of them show a certain maturity, but some are extremely childish.

If, like us, you found this behavior disturbing and worrisome, then you might have also been moved by this Part 3 scene with Hoid.

Wit stepped over to Shallan, then quietly folded his arms around her. She trembled, then twisted, burying her face in his shirt.

“You’re not a monster, Shallan,” Wit whispered. “Oh, child. The world is monstrous at times, and there are those who would have you believe that you are terrible by association.”

“I am.”

“No. For you see, it flows the other direction. You are not worse for your association with the world, but it is better for its association with you.”

Hoid would let the world burn to accomplish his goals, but we still love him for this kind of thing.

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Lightweaver glyph, by Isaac Stewart

Who Stabbed Sadeas? Who Cares?

One more major expectation that…well, maybe wasn’t exactly unmet, but turned out to be oddly anti-climactic, was the fallout from Adolin killing Sadeas. Standard speculation was that there would be major damage to his psyche, his relationship with Dalinar, Dalinar’s leadership, his relationship with Shallan, or…something.

It certainly seemed that there ought to be massive repercussions of some sort, anyway. And then, there weren’t. He occasionally reflected on it throughout the book, mostly in terms of whether he should be proud or ashamed, but he didn’t regret it for a skinny minute.

When he finally told Shallan, she thought about it and decided that it was fine because the world was a better place without Torol Sadeas in it. (FTR, we tend to agree with her on this one.) Also, she killed her own parents in self-defense, and in defense of her family, so what grounds does she have for thinking Adolin should have done any different?

When he finally told Dalinar, it was more as a supporting argument against being made king than confession of a crimeand Dalinar just sighed and said, “Well, let’s figure out how to spin this.” Of course, by that time House Sadeas had been completely disgraced, their acting Highprince dead, and Ialai slunk off home. There wasn’t anyone left to care much, so it wasn’t nearly as big an issue as it would have been earlier in the book. But that was certainly not what most of us expected to see.

We’re reasonably sure there are other things you thought you’d see in Oathbringer that weren’t there. Share them in the comments!

 

Expectations Fulfilled

With that out of the way, which of our expectations actually were fulfilled? And how did they play out in the book as compared to how we thought they might? In that regard, we have a great deal of wonderfulness to discuss. We’ll start with our favorite darkeyed Captain’s homecoming.

Kaladin Goes Home

After the Everstorm hit Roshar at the end of Words of Radiance, we all worried for Hesina and Lirin, Kaladin’s mother and father back in Hearthstone, in northwestern Alethkar. No sooner had our plucky band of Radiants arrived at Urithiru than Kaladin left, determined to fall all the way home to check on and/or protect them. Dalinar allowed him to go because, well, you give allowances to people who save you from certain, splattery death. Also, scouting mission! We didn’t quite know what to expect out there, what with the Everstorm and rabid bands of Voidbringers running amok.

When Kaladin finally arrived in Hearthstone, later than expected due to exhausting his stormlight (express flights ain’t cheap), he found the town empty and razed by the Everstorm. However, he found the citylord’s manor house quite full.

There, he reunited with his parents, who were blessedly alive and well, and largely unchanged since he and Tien had left to join Amaram’s army. Their reunion was incredibly emotional; so much so that it wouldn’t have been unusual for a reader to, say, bawl their storming head off. (Yeah, that was totally me.Paige)

Kaladin discovered that Roshone was still citylord and had married Laral, the young lighteyed girl who had once caught Kaladin’s interest. We’ll let you discuss the wonderfulness that was Kaladin greeting Roshone in the comments.

One other tear-jerker of a moment was the discovery of a baby brother. Kaladin met little Oroden and… who turned on the waterworks again? Yeesh.

The Blackthorn

Dalinar’s flashbacks have been highly anticipated; readers have been speculating for years about his visit to the Nightwatcher and the story behind the missing memories of his wife. What was his boon? What was his curse? Well, despite our hunger to know all the things, we didn’t get the information just dropped in our laps. #NOINFODUMPING

Rather, we got a slow reveal, witnessing memories as they began to return to Dalinar. We saw how utterly distasteful he was in his youth, as he and Torol helped Gavilar conquer the Alethi princedoms. We saw the sway that the Thrill held over him, the way it altered him, the way he seemed…addicted to it. We saw what he did to secure Kholin rule and we were surprised, intrigued, disgusted, revolted. Maybe even a little angry. Angry that our beloved, honorable Dalinar, he who traded his priceless Shardblade for a thousand slaves, had been nothing but a bloodthirsty monster.

Part of what made young Dalinar so revolting was how much he enjoyed the slaughter. The way he unknowingly took out his own men under the influence of the Thrill; and the fact that he almost attacked his own brother. We get a different taste of what The Thrill does to people than we saw in the first two books. It is far from pleasant.

We expect we weren’t the only ones disappointed at Dalinar’s indifference toward his wife and his shoddy parenting, as he repeatedly failed to be a good husband and father. Well, to at least be an adequate husband and father. *sigh* Okay, okay…to not be a terrible husband and father.

We came to adore Evi, who through the flashback chapters, was revealed to be quirky, yet gentle and caring. The polar opposite of Dalinar, she supported him while trying to act as his moral compass. Sweet Evi, who instilled such adoration for their warlord father into her sons’ hearts and minds, that they forgave him everything.

Well, everything they knew about.

Finally, Dalinar’s vengeance on the people of The Rift was…utterly horrific. The fact that he roasted his own wife along with the residents of Rathalas was almost not even a shock anymore, after all we’d learned about him up to that point, but it was still despicable. How do you even express that feeling, when you aren’t even surprised, but you’re absolutely outraged? “You are the worst, Dalinar! The absolute worst.” Some of us used a lot of swears, as well. (And they weren’t all in-world swears like Stormfather! either. Trust.Alice & Paige)

The Nightwatcher & Cultivation

Dalinar drowned his guilt in drink in the years after Evi’s death, eventually seeking relief through the Old Magic after Gavilar’s assassination. He visited the Nightwatcher to ask a boon of her, at any cost. Fans have been waiting for this tidbit since the first hints, earlier in the series. What had he asked for? Was forgetting Evi his boon or his curse?

The way memories of Evi returned to him, a bit at a time, sparked much speculation about why they were returning to him in snippets. What were your theories early on?

As it turned out, the boon Dalinar sought, to both his surprise and ours, was forgiveness. (Sorry, crying again.Paige) (Hey, share the tissues!!Alice) ::much passing of tissues::

Possibly due to the unique nature of his request and the fact that the Nightwatcher wasn’t up to the task, Cultivation herself showed up to handle Dalinar’s boon. And what she granted to him was far more intricate than simply forgetting (emphasis ours):

This will be your boon. I will not make of you the man you can become. I will not give you the aptitude, or the strength, nor will I take from you your compulsions.

But I will give you . . . a pruning. A careful excision to let you grow. The cost will be high.

In doing this, I provide for him a weapon. Dangerous, very dangerous. Yet, all things must be cultivated. What I take from you will grow back eventually. This is part of the cost.

It will do me well to have a part of you, even if you ultimately become his. You were always bound to come to me. I control all things that can be grown, nurtured.

That includes the thorns.

So… Cultivation didn’t take away his memories to spare him pain, but to allow him to grow (and hopefully not go Dark Side and join Odium). Then she fed them back to him, a bit at a time.

Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.

(Especially since her approach totally circumvented what Odium thought he was going to pull at the end… HAH! Take that, you foul monster!Alice) (+1)

The Bermuda (Akinah?) Triangle

While the shipping fans were dramatically divided between the Shalladin and the Shadolin, and a large number were just happy to munch popcorn and watch, it has at last been resolved…but not before things became even more complicated.

Instead of Shallan merely being torn between the differing attractions of Adolin and Kaladin, we ended up with different versions of Shallan fighting over which one was better. We didn’t see this angle in Words of Radiance; just a few hints that she found Kaladin more interesting than she wanted to admit. As Oathbringer developed and Shallan’s personalities became more and more distinct individuals, we started to see that Veil had a serious case of the hots for Kaladin, Original!Shallan (if there is such a thing) was still very much in love with Adolin, and Radiant would only register an opinion of what might be more expedient.

There are a couple of high-impact scenes near the end that bring it out in the open and wrap it up.

One: Shallan and Adolin are on the wall after the big battle, and she’s exhausted. It starts out looking like a nice loving moment between the two, but then Shallan’s personalities start flickering and Adolin can see that something is wrong… and then out of the flutter he identifies Shallan herself. And it is a Beautiful Thing.

Moments later, though, Kaladin comes up on the wall and Veil takes over, sending Adolin off to get a palanquin she doesn’t even want, and it’s terrifying (unless you’re on Team Shalladin). Then, just before she can do something irrevocable, she remembers: Adolin knows me. And it is Beautiful again. (Seriously, that line absolutely melted me into a puddle of happy tears.Alice)

Two: Later, near the top of the city, we learn that Adolin was aware of at least some of what happened. He comes upon Shallan (who was looking for him) gazing up at Kaladin on a roof nearby. He declares that he’s going to step aside and let Kaladin have Shallanwhich got roughly the same reaction from Shallan as it did from the beta readers, and, most likely, a lot of the fans:

“First off, you don’t get to treat me like some kind of prize. You don’t decide who gets me.”

Poor, self-sacrificing Adolin … he was just trying to do what he thought she wanted most.  It’s a funny, touching, and ultimately satisfying scene. Shallan admits that she’s got a problem with her multiple personalities, and when she tries to joke about it, his response still brings tears to some people’s eyes (naming no names, of course). ::sniffles, hands Paige a tissue::

“How do you like that, though? Three betrotheds instead of one. Some men drool over the idea of such debauchery. If you wanted, I could be practically anyone.”

“But that’s the thing, Shallan. I don’t want anyone. I want you.”

And they get married and live happily ever after. Right? Right?

… Except that this is Roshar, and the world is a mess, and the Desolation is not over. But they’ll be as happy as anyone can be, given the circs, right?

Renarin: Anti-Radiant

Many fans were convinced that Renarin was not a Radiant, though some readers refused to entertain such a thought. He named himself a Truthwatcher, but Ivory outs him.

That is a spren of Odium, Ivory said. Corrupted spren. But… a human, bonded to one? This thing is not.

“It is,” Jasnah whispered. “Somehow.”

Despite Renarin seeming to welcome her strike, she did not let it fall. Instead, she embraced her cousin and reassured him that they would figure things out. This scene gives us hope that despite bonding whatever it was that he bonded, Renarin will still fit in on Team Radiant.

But it makes one wonder: if he bonded a voidspren and can be a good guy, could someone bond an honorspren and be a bad guy? It makes one wonder more to recall Renarin’s thoughts on how Glys was corrupted before the bond, which corroborates Ivory’s comment above. Was Sja-Anat responsible for said corruption, since that’s kind of what she does? It’s likely, and could prove interesting if by corrupting voidspren, they are tamed, for lack of a better word.

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Truthwatcher glyph, by Isaac Stewart

Squires and Bridge 4

There is so much fist-pumping wonderfulness involved in this story line, we just can’t include it all here. Bottom line, squires can share a Radiant’s powers when in close proximity to said Radiant. And attract the interest of spren. So…a few highlights.

Teft: Oh, our poor, damaged Teft. His addiction, his rejection of his spren, and finally…his emergence as a Radiant of the Third Ideal! What a heart-wrenching oath. Whoa. What a story arc. Typing that sentence and remembering his arrival at the Battle of Thaylen City elicited goosebumps.

Sigzil: Sig is as organized as ever, seeing to the needs of the crew and keeping Kaladin busy. (Personally, I loved that Sanderson addressed logistics by having Sig worry about it. That was cool. –Alice)

Rock: La familia! Oh, our poor hearts. So much happy for our favorite Unkalaki. And heartbreak at the same time, because he still has to cope with what he sees as a broken vow in using a weapon to save Kaladin’s life.

Lopen: Because they’ll lynch us if we don’t highlight the Lopen…and his little naco. Oh, yeah, Lopen does get the award for Most Ridiculous First Ideal. Congrats, gancho.

Skar: He helps everyone, and finally decides that he’s okay with being the helper instead of becoming a squire…and then discovers he’s glowing.

Rlain: Oddly, given the conflict arising in Oathbringer, we get very little of Rlain’s development. He’s still part of Bridge Four, but clearly feeling out as the only one who doesn’t develop squire abilities…and painfully aware that people can’t help feeling it might be just as well he can’t draw Stormlight.

So many more fulfilled expectations, but we can’t deal with them ALL here. Again, use the comments to add on to the list!

 

Surprises

In no particular order, here are a few things that maybe caught us off guard. If you saw any of these coming, bragging rights go in the comments. Some first-read reactions to these happenings might have elicited the following:

  • feelings of delight or anger
  • WOOWWW!!
  • What the crem?
  • Face-Clutching Moment (very often)
  • NOOO! NONONONO!
  • ::inconsolable sobbing::
  • WHAT JUST HAPPENED?
  • ::things breaking::
  • WHAT DID YOU DO BRANDON?
  • whooping and hollering and laughing
  • and so on

Venli’s Transformation

We won’t lie, we loathed Venli when we she showed up in the chasms, searching for Eshonai. Our shock at Venli finding her sister dead was the first of many emotional hits to the feels of readers everywhere. Seriously, some betas still aren’t over that and we’ve known for quite some time, now. (Is me.—Paige)

We had hoped to see Eshonai form a Nahel bond and become Radiant. That dream abruptly died and we spent several interludes angry with Venli for her part in the whole mess. But then…Venli began to change. A spren was following her about (the same one which had been flirting with Eshonai, if you recall), much as Sylphrena had done to Kaladin once upon a highstorm. And we began to hope again.

And we can’t lie, when she spoke the First Ideal of the Knights Radiant and bonded Timbre, there may have been some delighted, tearful laughing and hollers of fist-pumping triumph and joy. (Yeah. I cheered. So?—Paige) (Me too.—Alice)

How does Brandon do that? (Spoiler alert: it’s all of his awesome.—Paige)

Elhokar: Almost Radiant

Remember that time when we said betas weren’t over Eshonai’s death? Oh, to be that innocent again. Now, not all readers will be or have been much distressed at Elhokar’s death, but some of us were devastated.

He wanted to be a hero, like Kaladin. Think on that for a moment: a lighteyed king, aspiring to be more like a darkeyed bridgeman/soldier. That is rather huge, guys. What’s more heart-wrenching is that he was speaking the words. Guys… he was speaking the words and beginning to storming glow! And the absolute worst? He was holding his child in his arms.

#brbcryingforever (+1) (+)

Of course, we wondered about the fate of little Gavinor, and after the Battle of Thaylen City, Kaladin departs on a search and rescue mission. Gav wasn’t the only one left behind in the palace at Kholinar. This was another Face-Clutching Moment, when Kaladin found Skar and Drehy, and little Gav, alive.

(All The Feels. ALL of them.—Alice) (Overwhelming feels.—Paige)

Queen Fen

Can we take a moment to appreciate just how fantastic Fen was? We weren’t sure what to expect from her but she very nearly stole every scene in which she appeared, beginning with the one where she’s only present via spanreed. Love this character!

Kholinar Lost

Though it seemed inevitable, it was still a blow to lose the city. But hey…who else was thrilled yet horrified when the Thunderclast showed up? (And how many were convinced that this was going to be the scene from the cover art? And then it wasn’t!)

Honorblade Also Lost

We can’t say we didn’t see this coming, what with B4 walking about with a storming honorblade for all to see. This might be as good a place as any to comment on the fact that Shallan seriously needs to fess up about the Ghostbloods. These secret societies are wreaking all kinds of havoc and Shallan has knowledge that can help Team Radiant counter some of that.

Traitorous, Treacherous Moash

Many beta readers speculated on what appeared to be a redemption arc happening with Moash while he was a prisoner of the Fused. Not all of us felt this way; some, in fact, were inclined to doubt anything Moash said or did, because, hello…traitor. So it was less surprising to the doubters when he allied with the Fused and joined their ranks to teach the transformed Parshmen how to fight.

Less surprising, but no less disappointing.

And, of course, we knew that if the opportunity presented itself, he would try to kill Elhokar. We just had faith that Kaladin wouldn’t allow that to happen. *ahem*

But the poison cherry on top of the spoiled and sour crem-drizzled sundae that was Moash’s story arc, was Jezrien. He murdered Jezrien. We hates it, precious. We. Hates. It.

(Alice worries that Sanderson will give Moash a redemption arc eventually. He keeps taking characters she despises and making them sympathetic before he kills them. She does not want to be made to feel pity for Moash. NOT.) (Never. Never, ever.—Paige)

Second Ideal Fail, Brightlord Brooding-Eyes

“I will protect those who cannot protect themselves.”Second Ideal of the Windrunners

So, Kaladin is sworn to protect…those who cannot protect themselves. Oh, right…except when his traitorous old friendwho he had once faced, sprenless and wounded, in defense of none other than the spoiled King of Alethkar, and leveled up as a Radiant in the processpops into the fray to murder the aforementioned king*. In such a situation, Kaladin will just watch the slaughter and fret.

*as he held his child in his armsGLOWINGand speaking the storming First Ideal. (I will never not be angry about this, FYI.—Paige)

If ever there was an opportune moment for Kaladin to protect those who could not protect themselves, that had been it. That was the one. It could have been more triumphant than when Syl had returned to him in Words of Radiance.

Much disappoint, Brandon … erm, Kaladin.

Jasnah: Brilliant, Yet Scary

We already knew that she was both, of course, but seeing her fight during the Battle of Thaylen City really kicked up her Radiant Awesome Factor™ (which is totally a thing that Paige just made up). She is quite well-practiced with her Radiant abilities and holy wow, we would not want to cross that woman.

Add to that the fact that she was 100% okay with striking down Renarin, and her scary factor increases. We propose that she would have dispatched Amaram in a Kharbranthian minute.

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Elsecaller glyph, by Isaac Stewart

Ohhh… You Meant Unite The REALMS’

We expected to see the old Blackthorn. We expected to see his visit to the Nightwatcher. We expected to see him display some super-cool Bondsmith abilities, as when he repaired Taln’s temple in Thaylen City.

We may even have expected to see him speak another Ideal. (Hello, Shardplate!)

What we did not expect to see was him uniting the three storming Realms in a column of swirling gloryspren. Just wow, the visual on that! We seriously need some art depicting this scene. Please, oh please.

But what made that scene so glorious was the lead-in: Dalinar, groomed by Odium and addicted to the Thrill. Dalinar, remembering all the horrible things he’d done under its influence. Dalinar, pushed to place the blame for it all on Odium, to accept Odium as his master. Dalinar, crumpled on the ground, hearing Evi weeping, knowing his abject failure.

Inside his fist, he somehow found a golden sphere. A solitary gloryspren.

The most important step a man can take. It’s not the first one, is it?

It’s the next one. Always the next step, Dalinar.

Trembling, bleeding, agonized, Dalinar forced air into his lungs and spoke a single ragged sentence.

“You cannot have my pain.”

Okay, just rereading this sequence elicits tears again. This was gorgeous.

::passes around the tissue box::

And then he goes on, fighting back against Odium’s continued attempts. He takes the responsibility for his own actions and receives Evi’s forgiveness; he brings the Realms together (“I am Unity.”) and forms Honor’s Perpendicularity, which both provided a way home for the Shadesmar wanderers, and supplied enough Stormlight to do what needed to be done next.

For a few minutes, at least, Dalinar seems to Ascend, and Odium’s reaction is quite interesting:

“No!” Odium screamed. He stepped forward. “No, we killed you. WE KILLED YOU!”

Wait… who’s ‘we’? And who’s ‘you’? Did Dalinar desplinter Honor? Or is it bigger than that? Tell us your thoughts!

What’s truly surprising about Dalinar’s Unity is that the Stormfather is stunned by what Dalinar has done, and by the fact that he has infused spheres with Stormlight. It probably goes without saying that anything that wows the Stormfather should probably wow us, too.

And, of course, Dalinar begins writing the in-world book, Oathbringer. Who called it?

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Bondsmith glyph, by Isaac Stewart

Oh Hai, Vivenna

Many beta readers celebrated when we discovered Highmarshal Azure commanding the Wall Guard in Kholinar. To be brief, because that’s how we roll, she is hunting someone who brought a black sword that bleeds smoke to this world. Sounds familiar…we’re sure we’ve seen something like that before. Azure carries a sprenless Shardblade, which is very interesting. She also gets stuck with Kaladin, Shallan, and Adolin in Shadesmar. (Must… not… fangirl… —Alice)

Tiny, But Awesome

Oh, our little Lift. She is something. From her comment about not trusting old guys with tight butts to her unquestioning alliance with Dalinar at the Battle of Thaylen City, this little Radiant continues to surprise and delight. We know we weren’t the only ones who rejoiced when she stepped up beside Dalinar and said, “So…what’s the plan?”

Please to wax poetic on her unwavering awesome in the comments.

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Edgedancer glyph, by Isaac Stewart

A Scout Becomes a Squire

As some of you are aware, Lyn is the tuckerization of author, beta reader, and Tor.com blogger Lyndsey Luther. Introduced as a Kholin scout in Words of Radiance, it was a delight to the beta readers to see her return. Her disappointment at Shallan’s reassurance that a Knight Radiant could still be a proper Vorin lady elicited gales of laughter; Kaladin’s invitation to join Bridge Four WHOOPas a scribe BOOOturned down ::sniffle::but then changed to a genuine tryout WHOOOOOOP!!got all the reactions. That moment when she decided to keep trying instead of giving up, because she wanted to help instead of waiting for things to happen…and then she finally drew in the Stormlight? Yeah, there was so much fist-pumping and hollering all across the continent. It was pretty cool, y’all. And so very suitable to both the RL Lyn and the in-book Lyn.

Truthless No Longer

We knew that Szeth and his mostly reattached soul had taken up with Nale, whose Skybreakers appear to be an intact order of Radiants, despite the fact that Nale is nutty as a fruitcake. We expected him to bond a spren and some of us were tickled that he landed a spren to grant him Gravitation (Kaladin will just have to play nice and share the sky), but Szeth surprised us enough to warrant mention here.

When given the choice of how to swear his vow, he did not choose to swear to Nale or to the order, not to justice or vengeance. No…he chose to swear to Dalinar.

Aaand he made such an entrance in a scene that he dethroned Kaladin as the previous holder of the coveted Best Scene-Crasher award. EPIC.

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Skybreaker glyph, by Isaac Stewart

To Eat The Unmade

Amaram, guys. Just wow. Discuss, if you please; there is just too much!

Shadesmar

Part 4 saw our refugees from the Battle of Kholinar stuck in Shadesmar, unable to return through the corrupted Oathgate. Time to walk, guys.

Okay, you’ve got to admit that Shadesmar is cool. And for our characters to spend the entirety of Part 4 there, looking for a way back, was definitely surprising. But it was sorta fun, in a ‘mad dash to avoid the Fused, escape, and save the world’ kind of way, to get a taste of that Realm: to see the spren as they truly are; to learn about their culture; to meet the dead spren of Adolin’s sword (fangirl flailing over Maya! It’s a right dance party up in here!); to find out that Syl, The Ancient Daughter, has a bounty on her head…wut?

A lot…like, a LOT happened here but we’ll let you talk about it in the comments.

Shadesmar, by Isaac Stewart

The Heralds

Thus  far in the series, all we’ve seen of Shalash, Herald of Beauty and patron of Lightweavers, is her obsession to destroy her likeness all over Roshar. But Oathbringer I-8, Mem, features Mraize telling her where she can find Taln. We don’t see her again until the Battle of Thaylen City when she busts Taln out of Amaram’s war camp.

He regains his wits and asks her how long it’s been. She tells him that it’s been four millennia and he reacts in a completely unexpected way.

“Ash.” he took her hand again. “What a wonderful thing.”

Wonderful? “We left you, Taln.”

“What a gift you gave them! Time to recover, for once, between Desolations. Time to progress. They never had a chance before. But this time … yes, maybe they do.”

“No, Taln. You can’t be like this.”

“A wonderful thing indeed, Ash.”

“You can’t be like this Taln. You have to hate me! Hate me, please.

And with that short exchange, we instantly loved these characters. (How does he do that?—Alice) (Definitely all the awesome.—Paige)

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The Heralds, by Isaac Stewart

Oathpact

Speaking of Heralds, did we ever get a surprising amount of information about the Oathpact! That was…painful, actually. They volunteered—went to Honor to offer themselves to stand between humanity and the angry spirits of the Singers. They failed, but…it’s hard to imagine not failing that kind of a bargain. And they did it, anyway.

Until they couldn’t bear to do it any longer and abandoned Taln to carry the burden alone. Which was also both heartbreaking and awesome, because Taln was the only one, in all those centuries, who had never been the one to break. How agonizingly perfect.

The Recreance Revelation

Beware the otherworlders. The traitors. Those with tongues of sweetness, but with minds that lust for blood. Do not take them in. Do not give them succor. Well were they named Voidbringers, for they brought the void. The empty pit that sucks in emotion. A new god. Their god. —From the Eila Stele

So, as it turns out…humans are the storming Voidbringers.

Some of you may have seen this coming, but not everybody did, and it was a Stormfather-sized fist to the gut. It was no wonder that, once they learned they were slaughtering a people who only wanted to preserve their world and their freedom, the Knights Radiant all said, “Umm, nope,” and gave up their blades.

Of course, they killed a ton of spren in the process, which is very not cool. But think on how distraught and horrified they must have been at learning the truth: that they themselves were the abomination they thought they’d been battling.

Were you surprised by this revelation, readers, or did you see it coming? We were so torn about how to reference the reveal that we had to discuss it.

Alice: I’ve seen a lot of responses that matched my initial thought on this: Wow, that’s bad. But…it’s not that bad, is it? Really? To destroy their spren and everything?

Paige: If the Radiants knew that they would kill their spren—and they had to have known—then yeah, kinda bad.

Alice: It seems like an overreaction to something that had happened millennia ago.

Paige: Maybe…but MY horror stemmed from the fact that they’ve demonized the ‘Voidbringers’ so much, and then attached the ugliness of their legends to the listeners/Parshendi. When in actuality, THEY were the monsters who invaded and tried to destroy an entire people. I thought of it in that respect: what if I learned that I was the awful murderous boogeyman I’d feared for so long? What would that do to me? What did it do to them, to learn that THEY were the bad guys?

Alice: That’s a good point. And if they decided that the spren were complicit in the whole thing by their choice to abandon the Singers and bond to the humans, there’s a certain justification to say that the spren deserved it, too.

Paige: That’s…thought-provoking.

Alice: By now, though, I’m beginning to wonder if there isn’t more to the story than we know yet. Did the humans intentionally bring their god Odium along, or were they fleeing him, and in their flight, opened the way for him to follow? Does it have to be humans against Singers? Could it ever be all-the-sapient-peoples against Odium?

Paige: From your mouth to Honor’s ear. Let’s hope they can get there.

Okay, We’re Done (for now)

If you stuck around, wow…we’re impressed. (Truly.—Paige)

So, was there something you wanted or expected to happen that wasn’t listed here? What surprised you during the course of this book, and what did not?

Would you like to talk about: Shallan’s brothers; the wedding (either); no scores of Radiants entering stage right; the fact that Taravangian is still alive (growl) and now actively allied with Odium; Interludes; Navani’s wonderfulness; anything else?

Are you geeking out over the epigraphs? Because we didn’t even mention the epigraphs. Ain’t nobody got time for that, did you SEE how huge this article was?

Let us know your spoilerific thoughts in the comments!

And keep an eye out for a future discussion, wherein we will muse on the questions left by—or posed by—Oathbringer, speculate on the answers, and consider our expectations for Book 4.

Alice Arneson is a beta reader and re-reader of any Sanderson work she can get her hands on. She is delighted to have these opportunities to share her excitement and her love of all things Cosmere with you, and hopes you’ll stay for the discussion. She lives in Brier, WA, which is a very small town north of Seattle.

Paige Vest spends her ~41 minutes of leisure time a day writing for flash fiction competitions and working on several trunk novels. She’s equally fanatical about reading fantasy and watching Yankees baseball. She lives in Truth or Consequences, NM, which is a real, weird place.

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7 years ago

Haha there really was so much to digest! I’m dying you know more about Dalinar’s Ascendance. How much understanding did he acquire, like the Lord Ruler did, during his moment I can he summon it fully any time, it must it accumulate like the millennial power of the well? 

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7 years ago

Thanks for the review.

Definitely need to reread this to process all that has happened (still catching up on sleep after a weekend binge), and really makes me wonder where SA is going after this, but I definitely think what we know so far are only the outer layers on an onion and there is a lot under there we don’t know.

 

 

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taisharandor
7 years ago

I just want to state for the record that Huio literally means a male organ, ahem, in Bulgarian. We use that as an offense, just like we would in English.Still giggling immaturely. Was that on purpose, Mr. Sanderson? 

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7 years ago

All the swearing. Repeatedly.

Venli. Fortunately, I was home alone at the time so I didn’t startle anyone when I started yelling. Stick that in your pipe and smoke it Odium! The Listeners are stronger than you! [/Garnet]

Between her and Szeth, we have all the redemption we need, kthxbye. Moash and Taravangian can die in a fire. Slowly. For eternity.

Cultivation playing the long game better than Odium. Life before death, ****head.

Aaaand I shouldn’t have read this article at work.

ETA: Grieve later works when reading, too. Though I seemed to have missed a fair number of details about the end of part 3.

Werechull
7 years ago

I’m only 3/5ths of the way through (busy time at work) so I’m bookmarking the discussion for later this week. I have two comments I can make now though:

* The end of the world is less dramatic than anticipated

* In the audiobook, Adolin now sounds like a dumb version of Dalinar. I liked his old voice much better.

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7 years ago

Just too much! The entire theme of this book was redemption, forgiveness, and acceptance. I almost feel like Brandon went a bit overboard with it, but considering it is one of my all time favorite themes, I adore him for it. I think it’s acceptable to see that not everyone can be redeemed though, like Sadeas. I don’t expect much of a redemtion arc for Taravangian and Moash, though I do think the latter is more likely than the former.

All the love for Azure! I hope to see more of her and was disappointed there wasn’t a peep from Vasher this book. 

I’m disappointed that he had to trim the book down for publishing. I feel he must have cut out Shallan and Kaladin doing their first flight together because that would have likely been interesting. Also, Dalinar’s quick acceptance of Szeth, his brother’s murderer, was… Well, quick. He had just admitted that people can change, but everyone else? Just, yeah okay, he’s cool? Not even a question of him turning on them later? So much to process. So much more to say. I like what you’ve said though! 

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7 years ago

I’m still not sure how I feel about the entire book, but my favorite moments were:

1) Elkohar death scene 

2) Teft’s third Ideal 

3) Hoid’s compassion 

Is there supposed to be a time skip between Book 3 and Book 4? 

 

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7 years ago

I was at work when I read Moash’s evisceration of any type of redemption arc. Elkohar wasn’t my favorite character by a long shot, but to see him be oh so close to Radiency only to be cut down by Mo had me cursing like a sailor, out loud. And the kicker, the snarky Bridge4 salute after finishing the job. I think I was as stunned as Kal was in that moment. Easily a top 3 moment in the book for all its sadness and missed opportunities. But yeah, screw Moash and please no redemption arc for him. I hope Kal crushes him when they next meet but I think think Moash levels up to the point of mini-Boss of the front half of SA. A fight is inevitable but he’s gonna be significantly harder to kill than he used to be.

Question. A bit off topic but riddle me this. If Odium used to be the God of humanity (at least the Rosharan variant) then it would make sense for him to be able to use human vessels more easily than Listeners, right? In my experience anybody who creates something builds in a backdoor to fix something broken. So why is it that Odium is only now able to tinker with the souls of humans? Why was it so much easier for him to touch the Listeners? There’s always another secret.

Braid_Tug
7 years ago

@7: there will be a 1 year time hop between 3 & 4. 

@6:  Sorry to disappoint,  but there was never a scene of Kaladin and Shallan flying to TC. At least, there was never one the Beta readers got to read.  

Most of his 10% cuts are to tighten up language. 

I was sad that Adolin didn’t enjoy flying more.

Re. Plate: There are hints that Shallan might have plate too, but not confirmed.  

goldeyeliner
7 years ago

My thoughts in no particular order:

1. Kaladin’s 4th ideal – I think has to do with forgiveness.. “I will forgive myself for those I cannot save.” My reasoning is that when he is so close to ‘leveling up’ in Shadesmar, he thinks about all of those he hasn’t saved, that he can’t let them go.

2. VIVI! she was not my favorite character in Warbreaker, but she grew on me. Why the heck is she hunting down Vasher & Nightblood? It didn’t sound like she was just trying to find them but was a BOUNTY HUNTER looking for them! What the heck happened? AND could this story be the “secret project” that Mr. Sanderson is working on?

3. Wit with Shallan, goodness gracious this made me weep. And again when he said, ok, just one more and saved the orphan and the grief stricken mother.  So… the spren that he went to the palace to find/bond, was that Elhokar’s spren? of all the orders, I’d have to say that cryptics would fit with Wit the best. Why were the Parshendi trying to find that spren? Is that what they were knocking down walls for? 

4. Renarin.. I definitely think that Glys is a Truthspren corrupted by uh…mirror lady unmade (can’t remember her name), NOT a voidspren. Speaking of which

5. Mirror lady Unmade.. does she really want to break from Odium? She says they were Made, then Unmade, what is the deal??

Done for now… maybe more later :)

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7 years ago

I loved the book, Dalinar’s arc was brilliant and we now have finally gotten a glimpse of Cultivation’s game plan and some of her carefully prepared game-pieces. Dalinar, Lift and IMHO also Taravangian and possibly even Renarin with his corrupted, but still well-meaning spren (and by association Sja-Anat?). Even Nale seems to have visited the Nightwatcher at some point – and may have been tweaked by Cultivation, because didn’t NW offer Dalinar Nightblood when _he_ came to visit? So, she must have had it at the point, right? Anyway, the whole book was very much under the sign of Growth and Transformation. And also healing and love, which explains prominent featuring of Vedel on the endpapers – though Adolin is well on the path of reviving Mayalaran too, of course, and has been consistently displaying Edgedancerish behavior by taking care of overlooked people, etc. Lift was great and, thankfully, more present than I expected, but still if it had been just her, it wouldn’t have been enough.

I do have certain reservations about how some things were handled – and while I understand that many of them are being held back for later books, I felt that avoidance of certain issues seemed very contrived. Also, I don’t like how Sanderson tends to skirt emotional pay-offs of some of his improbable survivals and real deaths. I mean, how much more impact would Elokhar’s death have had if we had seen the Kholin family reacting to Jasnah’s reappearance? If we had seen them together, as a family, for a brief moment? And also, the “happy” ending with a wedding and Dalinar contendedly writing his book, while Navani (who has just been through an emotional wringer of getting back her daughter, who was believed dead, only to lose her son) doted on him seemed a bit incongrous when Kholins should be mourning so much…

I have to say that I am not sure why everybody is so flabbergasted when they get confirmation that humans were not originally from Roshar. Didn’t all their religions and myths claim exactly the same thing? As to being Voidbringers – well maybe some of the early humans were followers of Odium, but it flipped pretty fast, didn’t it? The Fused and the voidforms are undoubtedly the voidbringers _now_ and have been since before  the time of the Oathpact, with some opportunistic humans along for the ride.

Also, I very much doubt that Shards need _people_ to “bring” them places. IMHO, Odium came to the system on his own, bent on killing Honor and Cultivation. Yes, he did gain some human followers and probably used them in his struggle, just as he used the singers/parsh later, but as he says himself, he doesn’t really _need_ anybody.

And also, unless Cultivation decided to play around a bit, it seems pretty clear that there were several different migrations of humans to Roshar, which originated in different places. I mean, if _all_ humans were supposed to live in Shinovar originally, then why are the Shin so homogenous and the only ones strereotypically European, while everybody else is pretty much mixed to varying degrees? And blue people? They clearly come from elsewhere.

Finally, given how Honor mentioned the Dawnshards in his Kholinar vision in WoR, it seems very likely to me that Ashyn – the world allegedly destroyed by surge-bindings, was the field of battle between the Shards where Honor and Cultivation shackled Odium and _that_ battle led to destruction.

InhumanByte
7 years ago

Ok, so I bet Unity is a shard that Odium (and buddies? “we”) shattered. And Dalinar, at least momentarily, Ascended to take up the mantle of Unity.

Also, Braize (which is the third planet in the Rosharan system, Roshar being the second, Ashyn being the first (what even is Ashyn?)) is Damnation. Damnation is literally a different planet. So what if the listeners are native to Roshar, and the humans came from Braize. On Braize, the humans maybe worshipped their god Odium, but then realized Odium was a bad guy or something, and perpendicularitized over to Roshar as Voidbringers. The listeners were pissed, cause humans brought Odium. The humans eventually came to think of their old home as Damnation. And maybe when the Heralds died each time, they activated the perpendicularity and traveled over to Braize (aka Damnation?)

InhumanByte
7 years ago

As awesome as it would be for Adolin to resurrect Maya, I think it’s good to have a character who isn’t a Radiant. Just, y’know, for perspective. Also, thanks @11 for info on Ashyn. I hadn’t realized that before.

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7 years ago

@12 I bet Unity is a new shard, like Harmony, that Dalinar tapped into when he used Connection and his bond with the Stormfather to de-splinter Honor for a moment. Since we get Dalinar POV after the event, it seems clear he didn’t take up a shard as the Lord Ruler and Vin did.

ETA: I think rather the Heralds had a perpendicularity activated on them. So long as they held to the Oathpact they didn’t have a choice about where to go.

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tommy
7 years ago

The first thing Sja-Anat said to Shallan was “ask my son.” So, with a certain allowance for BS head-faking, I think she is responsible for Glys corruption prior to Renarin bonding.

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7 years ago

I love it! Pretty much everything. This book was very long (not a complaint) and it took me three days to read! I still haven’t processed it all. I am going to read it again in a few days.

Shallan: Disturbing! She needs to find out who she is. I felt so sorry for her when the kid got killed. And then Wit came and hugged her. So sweet!

Adolin: Great, as always. How can anyone not like Adolin? Maya!!! I hope he can revive her somehow.

Kaladin: Not able to save everyone… He needs a hug too! But it was actually a good thing that he didn’t speak another ideal, he can’t always be the hero.

Dalinar: The hero! I still don’t know what he did to get through the Oathgate. Did he summon the Stormfather as a blade or was it something else? I was so scared he would doom them all, but then he stood up and became awesome!

Moash: Gaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

Amaram: I actually thought he would redeem himself and fight for the good guys. Nope…

Szeth: I like him better and better!

Lift: One of the best/funniest scenes in this book was when she stepped up to Dalinar (who only had a book to “fight with”) in front of the army. “So, what’s the plan?”. And Dalinar asked if she had a weapon, and she said “Nope, can’t read”.

Syl: We learn more about her in Shadesmar. A princess with a bounty on her head :-)

Pattern: Funny in a Vulcan way! “Control your emotions”.

Humans being the Voidbringers: What???!!! This was a surprise to me. But it makes perfect sense. It’s what humans do. Destroy their own world, move on to a new world and destroy that world too….. Very sad. But I still have some hope for humanity, there are some good people somewhere. I think… maybe?

I liked the plan about uniting Roshar against Odium in the review. We still don’t know what Dalinar should unite. The realms? Humans? The people of Roshar? The hole Cosmere?

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7 years ago

If I may borrow one of the reactions from the Surprises section above, “WOOOWWW” sums up my reaction to the book. I remember being very hesitant to read TWoK way back when, and now I can’t imagine not having read any part of The Stormlight Archives. I don’t know that I’ve ever read any other series of books that takes me on this much of an emotional roller coaster. A few random musings and some conjecture/speculation:

LIFT!!! I didn’t have any expectations that she would appear as more than an Interlude character. Boy was I glad my expectations were exceeded. Hopefully, one day she gets the hang of actually being Awesome while standing.

Rysn was also a welcome character to read again. I would have been disappointed had we not learned more of her story. Besides, she has a larkin so she must be Important.

Seeing the higher spren in their true form (and the lesser spren too of course). Which also let us meet Lightspren which can bond. I’m thinking that they are the spren for Willshapers.

Wit’s main purpose in the book was to providee The Feels. All of them. With him saving the young Cryptic one would assume that he will become a Radiant. An interesting though occurs to me though. Doesn’t Hoid have access to Lightweaving, not the Rosharan kind, already? I would like to see how he could manipulate both varieties in concert.

I’m still not sure I’m recovered from Moash killing Jezrien. I had a feeling that the drunk was a Herald from the flashback sequence. I didn’t peg him down as Jezrien though, much less that his soul would be trapped in a gem like a spren.

Jasnah. Queen of Alethkar. Storming brilliant!

Glys inhabits Renarin’s heart. Is this because he is a voidspren and that’s their MO for bonding with humans and listeners/singers? Or does Renarin have a gemheart (very far-fetched)?

How did Life ever make it to visit the NW? The journey to reach the valley was long and maybe a bit arduous for Dalinar and his soldiers. I can’t fathom how a child could have made the journey.

 Could Urithiru be the third Sibling?

It makes me sad how broken the Heralds are.

 

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7 years ago

Renarin’s spren was corrupted by Sja-Anat, the Unmade who left team Odium and sent the heroes to Shadesmar instead of killing them as it was supposed to. Can he convince her to join the good team instead of imprisoning her in a gem?
Renarin’s spren is no corrupted voidspren, it is a corrupted Truthwatcher spren.

The Oathgate spren are probably inspired by the Argonath in LotR.

Is the spren Venli found at Eshonai’s corpse and later bonded her spirit? That would make Venli a kind of good Fused.

Will some of the people who practised drawing Stormlight with Bridge Four become Knights of other orders? The first oath is the same for all, and all need to use Stormlight. The other orders just weren’t offering training.

Did Vivenna and Vasher make the second Nightblood? Or did they get it from Arsteel? What Command was used for it? Are larkin related to Nightblood and Vivenna’s sword?

The third letter to Hoid was obviously from Sazed, but who were the others from?

The Thrill-possessed Sadeas soldiers with the red eyes reminded me of anime. Why else should the eyes be red when Odium’s color seems to be golden?

The Passions is a religion inspired by Odium, but it’s followers have forgotten that. Is it the original religion of humans on Roshar?

The story that Shallan tells in the theater and that Wit later tells again is a coded version of the reason for the Recreance.

Maybe the humans originally weren’t all Odium worshippers, but they imprisoned Odium in the Roshar system. At least one of the people writing letters to Hoid clearly says that they don’t care what happens to Odium’s prison (including the natives of that place, who obviously didn’t agree to let strangers use their home as a prison for an evil god).

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7 years ago

Ah I am so pleased I managed to reach the end of the book before the spoiler reviews.

So here are my thoughts on the elements brought forward into the post. Of course, if I were to write my full review, it would take much more than huh whatever number of characters I am allowed in here.

#1 Shardplate

This wasn’t a disappointment to me. I’ll admit I did not get into the book necessarily expecting it: if it happens, it happens, if it doesn’t, then it doesn’t. There were a few hints here and there, nothing concrete, I was fine with it. Let’s not make our knights too over-powered just yet. I like where they are now.

#2 Windrunners 4th Ideal

I am 100% on board with Kaladin not progressing. Being one of the most vocal individual stating how the pattern from the previous books had to be changed, how Kaladin can’t keep on finding oaths when it is convenient and he can’t be saving the day endlessly, I was VERY pleased with how Brandon choose to handle this. He is close, but he is not there yet. I am fine with this and huh the information kind of slip out before the book was released. I sort of knew…. so not big surprises for me here.

#3 Shallan’s downward spiral

This is not something I expected: I expected Adolin would go down a downward, not Shallan so it was somewhat disturbing. I’ll admit I felt some part of it was a tad long, I did not like the over-use of Veil, though the story made a lot of sense once I got to the one, but while I was reading it, I recalled hoping for a change of focus. Not a disappointment then, just something I did not expect nor foreseen. My thoughts are Shallan got the biggest focus into this book, it definitely feels this way to me.

I do felt she was being irresponsible and childish on many instances, but chapter 80 reconcile me with the entire plot. And chapter 108. And the latest denouement. I thought it concluded beautifully, but it wasn’t a walk in the park to get there both for the character and the reader.

#4 Sadeas

Yeah well this was one major disappointment for me as a reader. I felt the cliff-hanger from WoR was badly handled when it could have been used into so many more productive ways. There were good glimpses into this book, but as always, everything to do with Adolin feels rushed and not deep enough. Sadeas was an opportunity to better use Adolin’s character and it was skipped over. For me, it remains one of the greatest flaw within this book: Brandon did not deliver there. Tied with this flaw is the fact I felt some of the character interactions were badly handled, most notably the Dalinar/Adolin relationship. The flashbacks were great, but they contradicted some of the canon information and they many open holes unexplained with little hope to see them explained.

So all in all, Sadeas was a missed opportunity. I’ll be more wary of hoping Brandon will tie in the cliff-hangers satisfactorily in the future. He didn’t tie this one down. Dim hope, it is not over yet, but with the time skip he plans, it probably is.

#5 Kaladin goes back home

I loved those chapters. These were absolutely perfect, I couldn’t hope for a better denouement.

#6 The Blackthorn

He was awful. Dalinar was a terrible husband to Evi, he wished her gone, but when he caused her death, he wouldn’t stop feeling guilty. He was an awful father: he ignored Renarin, paid him no attention and if he did pay attention to Adolin growing up, he ended up literally hating him for years for reminding him of Evi… How come those two boys didn’t turn on their father? This is a mystery yet to be explored, one of those lose ends which weren’t tied.

Evi was a sweetheart. She died trying to prevent a slaughter. Her life was a sad story: she was miserable. Still, it can’t be over, we still do not know why she flee Rira and Toh is still out there. No way this is over.

I personally expected the boys to find out about Dalinar killing Evi or, at least, about forgetting her. They didn’t. I expected Evi to come in between Dalinar and Adolin, she didn’t. Dare I hope Brandon will tackle those in book 4? Now Adolin is embracing his Westerner heritage, can their story be finally wrap up in a better way?

Still, those few flashbacks of little Adolin were among my favorite. We get to see how Dalinar came to expect so much out of one boy, how he got to be so hard with him out of a flaw (Adolin resembles Evi) and how when talked down, Adolin just tries harder. Brandon decides to wrap it up by having Adolin renounce the throne. Then Dalinar has a one line comment on how Adolin is not the man he thought he was. That’s it????

You can do better than that Brandon. Tie this up better for the next book.

#7 The Nightwatcher

Yeah we didn’t predict this one didn’t we? It fit and I liked it. No more comments.

#8 Romance

I thought Brandon could have pulled on a few strings more strongly in order to increase the drama here. I felt part of the book was low on it and this would have spiced it up, but the conclusion left me very satisfied…

People have argued Kaladin was the better match because he knew of Shallan’s secrets (some). Brandon showed us something more meaningful: knowing someone’s past is not the same as knowing this person. Shallan isn’t her past, she isn’t defined by those events and, in the end, she needed someone to see past those, to see her and this man was Adolin. All Kaladin ever is how Shallan is taking up so well to being broken, but Adolin he saw Shallan, the person and this was beautiful.

Ah yeah, self-sacrificing Adolin was sad to read. He step down because he thought Shallan loved Kaladin better: he cannot compete. He knows when he is outmatched, but Shallan puts him back to this place quite solidly.

So huh it could have used a bit more drama, the wedding was a tad too quick, but the conclusion was satisfying. Having Adolin become Shallan’s anchor was great.

Now it is time to start developing Adolin more.

#9 Renarin

I was surprised when I read this. Without getting too far into the commentaries, it seems he now is Taravangian’s target. Obviously, something corrupted Glys, but I think Glys was a legit spren, at the beginning.

I also think we all owe kudos to Kimaniak for having shed high doubts to the nature of Renarin’s “Nahel Bond” a long time before it started being suspicious which I think is about when Jasnah starts to ask what Glys looks like.

#10 Bridge 4

I liked some of the added perspectives, I thought others were a tad long. I was average on Teft becoming a Radiant and Lopen felt like fan service more than real development.

Skar remains my favorite bridgeman. More Skar, Brandon, less Teft. Less Lopen. And please more Rlain too: I thought his perspective was very touching.

#11 Venli

I liked how it was developed, it felt natural and organic. I was also glad Eshonai stayed… dead.

#12 Elhokar

Ah this was beautiful. Finally he does the right thing, finally he sees only to get slayed. Brutal. A perfect touch of drama.

Anyone else think Adolin and Shallan will now adopt little Gavinor Kholin?

I will skip a few to go to #17 Moash. I’ll admit right here I was really not convinced over reading Moash early in the book. I didn’t get why I was reading him and it seemed superfluous. I also realized I really did not want a redemption arc for him, so him falling instead, yeah, I liked that. Anything else would have felt pointless within the existing story.

And I will skip some more because I feel you have skipped over what was IMHO my favorite story arc in the book… I mean, can we talk about Maya??? Can we talk over Adolin finally learning his Blade’s name and her running to his help twice? Saving his life? Twice? Can we talk about it? Can we talk over the fact Adolin is really starting to revive his Blade even if he is not there yet? Because in a book where I had to wait until chapter 80 to get one proper Adolin viewpoint, where I felt his development was almost skipped and dropped down, Maya was the small baum which made things a bit better. Just a bit. Now I wish for Brandon to make me believe Adolin CAN be an Edgedancer (the jumping around one structure to the next while fighting the thunderclast was just amazing and very Edgedancer-y), to make me believe he is broken enough (no he doesn’t look anywhere near broken).

Can I hope for this in book 4? I hoped for so much in book 3, so much was amazing, but Adolin huh apart from Maya, he was average in this book. He had moments, but I felt his characterization was shallow, not deep enough.

@9: I laughed at Adolin being flight sick. This didn’t get the focus it deserved.

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Telemhutar
7 years ago

Taln is pure awesome!

 

that is all

Joyspren
7 years ago

So much good to talk about. I love just about everything that was in the book, and really wanted more. So I’ll start with what I didn’t get. Shallan: I loved her character in the first two books but her multiple personalities really got to me. While I don’t trust Wit I am glad he helped put her back together a bit, and hopefully Adolin can help with the rest. Speaking of which, shouldn’t Adolin have been in more trouble for killing Sadeas? There wasn’t even a hand slap there. 

 

What I loved: Kaladin going home and meeting his brother and parents. I also loved that he didn’t just get to be the hero and ‘level up’ again. He spent like half the book flying people places, I don’t think that counts towards character development as much as running bridges did. Also loved the Dalinar backstory. He was so crazy and evil at parts that his repentance journey was so strong. And he was ‘pruned’ by Cultivation so he could grow back to a better person. I LOVED that he learned to read for himself. And wrote the Oathbringer book, I had thought that would be by Jasnah. And the Ascending. That was wonderful and unexpected. I hope he does it again sometime. 😀

I was so happy to see Renarin doing real things. I hope Glys doesn’t turn out to make him super evil by the end. His ‘I got smashed 20 times’ must be the Wile E Coyote bit from the beta reactions post. 

Jasnah has so much control over her soul casting that it’s almost scary, in an awesome way. And now Queen is Alethkar… that’ll be interesting. Almost as interesting as Venli’s future as a Radient in Odium’s camp. And I almost like Venli too, after deciding to not like her ever again. Dang Sanderson. 

I just want Elhokar back. He wanted so much to be the good guy. Then lost it all. So many tears. Wishing Kaladin was ready for his next ideal so maybe he could save him instead of freezing. 

I hope Moash and Taravangian both get stuck in Damnation for a really long time. After what we’ve seen so far, they should know better than to make deals with the devil. Taravangian at least should know what happened to both Amaram and Elhokar’s wife (Aesudan?). 

Lift and Bridge Four were fun. I finally like Lift. And seeing Kaladin through other characters was fun. I think Rock was supposed to be king of the Horneaters before he won shards, and now he really should be. But he has to make the choice I guess.  Also Lyn was great. 

Most unexpexted-though I guessed it partway through but thought I must be wrong- was the truths about the Recreance and original Voidbringers. Talk about turning your worldview upside down, I’m not surprised they walked away. But it’s too late now, gotta save the world anyway. I hope we get more answers about what the Shin know in the next book-maybe as Szeth goes to ‘cleanse’ them. 

K, this is super long and I could go on but I won’t. Writing down my questions now so that I remember them for later. Thanks Alice and Paige! Now to try and get my mind on something else..

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TheEdgedancer
7 years ago

This was amazing, thank you for writing this! This helped me understand and verify many things I noticed as well as show some theories and things that I didn’t notice and mention some of the same things I was thinking. 

However there is one place where I disagree with you and one part I’m a bit disappointed you didn’t mention here.

First, Second Ideal Fail. I actually think that it isn’t a fail of upholding it, but a fail of figuring out how to uphold it. The thing is, Kaladin didn’t know who to protect, what side to choose as he had been in the shoes of all of them, could see al their points-of-view, and wanted to protect all of them, but couldn’t as they were all trying to kill each other. He froze because he didn’t know how to uphold the Ideal, he didn’t fail at upholding it, he didn’t know how to uphold it as all of them needed protection, and he couldn”t protect one without not protecting another. Elhokar and the Wall Guard needed protection from the parshmen and vice versa.

Besides if he truly failed it, his bond with Syl would have started to grow weaker.

 

 

I am disapoointed only by how you didn’t mention everything new about all the orders of radiants and spren. The descriptions of the appearance and societies of the cultivationspren, honorspren, ashspren, inkspren, and Cryptics in Shadesmar. The Reachers/lightspren, the appearance of highspren in the Physical Realm. The fact that one time, the honorspren tried to conquer Shadesmar. ALso the fact that most of the Skybreakers and Releasers have sided with Odium.

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7 years ago

Dalinar’s request and it’s reason was exactly what I expected it to be.    Oh, not the specific nature of it, but I fully expected that we’d find that he’d killed his wife.   Cultivation’s long game was a surprise.

 

Was….surprised to find that humanity were the original Voidbringers, but not not surprised?  It was the kind of revelation that fit, though I’m still trying to figure out why the Listeners would have defected.  While the Fused seem to be a good mix of jerks and truly concerned people, I suspect that there is stuff we just don’t know about how long term life under them works out for those who aren’t in power.  

I wonder if the Unite them…is a reference to the Shards.    Unite the Shards.  Restore Adonalsium.  

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7 years ago

I just wanted to mention that Honor had a hand in the Recreance. He was kind of losing his marbles…

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7 years ago

@18, birgit

I snooped on the 17th shard for a bit and one of the theories there – and makes the most sense to me – is that they are all from other shards. The first is from Endowment (not sure who else would fit that we know of). The second is from Autonomy (he/she has different personas by WOB). 

As for Unity – I don’t think it’s a shard, maybe just a simple level-up. Dalinar Ascended, but we don’t know how or if Shards can be put back together. If anything, through his bond with the Stormfather, he’s more like a Splinter. Maybe eventually he will become Honor?   

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7 years ago

OMG I’ve been dying for this spoiler discussion since I finished. There’s so much, I don’t think I can put even a quarter of my thoughts into any semblance of order but I will try for the highlights:

Re: Dalinar’s past. Were people really that surprised by it? I mean, the Alethi people see him as a unstoppable war machine. The Alethi. In all honesty, I thought his back story was pretty tame in that regard. He fed off the Thrill and was a typical “sword” of the king. And his retribution against the city, burning it to the ground, was brutal but pretty tame to what I expected.

As for Evi, I knew she was going to be killed by Dalinar, I mean this was my guess since we found out his memories of her were gone. I just expected he would have killed her with his own hands. Accidently burning her to death while she was locked in the prisons was definitely a horrible way to go, but still not as bad as I thought it was going to be.

So yes, Dalinar was a ruthless bastard, but I expected worse lol.

And don’t hate on Jasnah. She is my spirit animal. I actually really empathize with her logical-ness. And she’s a perfectly written example of how logical =/= heartless, as is so often portrayed.

Oh, and yay Shallan + Adolin! So glad that ship made it. And also glad Sanderson managed the love triangle with a bit more deftness than most. It being mostly her other personas made it more believable rather that just forced tension.

However I’m on board with most that Shallan’s identity crisis this book was a bit on the tedious side. There were many times where I was rushing through reading her chapters because it’s just like, okay enough is enough. Want to be done with this. It also doesn’t help that Shallan’s own personas are so childish and unlikable because of her own childishness… it’s like a vicious cycle of immaturity.  Is it bad that I actually felt kind of happy when Veil finds out that all her do-goodery was causing nothing but problems for the people she thought she was saving?  I would say my one weakness to schadenfreude is when people are being confronted with their own naivete.

And finally, WTF was that ending with Wit?? Am I the only one who thinks that “Pattern” (note it was written with a capital ‘P’) is THE Pattern, ie, Shallan’s ? I interpreted this scene to mean that Pattern was split from Shallan, and her current “Pattern” is actually an impostor, possibly from the Unmade? After all, this place was where she “died”, and she had that scene where she cried out internally for Pattern to “don’t go” etc. 

Or am I reading way too much into this and it’s a different cryptic? Yikes, I really don’t know what to think.

ImpatientKensai
7 years ago

I LOVED this book. Really solid writing. Some highlights for me:

1. “Feels” all over this book. From Kaladin’s visit home, to Bridge 4’s progression, to Elhokar trying to protect his son then his death, to Wit and Shallan, Adolin and Shallan, Adolin and Maya, Dalinar and Navani, Kaladin and Syl…so many. That’s what makes me love those books. 

2. Balancing our feelings of sickness with what the Blackthorn was, to what we know of Dalinar now, and then the moment when those two combine and Dalinar’s choice to kept taking that one more step. Love it.

3. The fighting was great. Epic fights which our hero’s had to all earn. 

4. Life lesson’s learned through emotionally attachable characters. This formula for me is what makes these stories so believable and impactful.

5. Adolin. He is quickly becoming my favorite character. I would disagree that he doesn’t have the elements to be broken: 1) The way Dalinar treated him for most of his youth, 2) Losing his mother; 3) The loss of his friends at the battle of the Tower at the hands of Sadeas, 4) The betrayal of Jakamav; 5) Killing Sadeas, 6) the loss of Sureblood; 7)Being a normal person in a time of gods; 8) watching Elhokar die. The thing I love about Adolin is that despite all he has been through, he approaches it with positivity and a “no excuses” mindset. Each of our radiants handles their bad experiences differently. I get that it is easier to show struggle with a character when challenges hit them hard. Like the way it does with Kaladin. But I feel it is just as valid a struggle to see a character go through bad things but stay positive, to overcome challenges by focusing on and serving other people. That is Adolin to a T and because of that he is one of my favorite characters. He has sufficient loss to be a broken person, he just handles it differently.

6. Finally bad guys you love to hate. Freaking Moash, King T, Odium, Amaram…Looking forward to how that all plays out. 

Nothing’s perfect, there were a couple of parts that took me out of the story. But all in all Oathbringer is right up there with WOK, my favorite piece of fiction. A one year jump is really interesting. I can’t wait to see what the world looks like and to get back to Roshar. Thanks Brandon.  

 

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illrede
7 years ago

The joy unlooked for in this book for me was definitely Maya throwing herself at the Voidbringers to defend Adolin.

 

What made me smile was Lift and Nightblood’s reconciliation. Being “Very Hungry” is a legitimate cause, water under the bridge.

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7 years ago

M and T can go to H. Bah on them.

I didn’t like how the love triangle was done. I liked the outcome but Veil and her ‘leering’ just felt wrong. Lust is of Odium, isn’t it?  The wedding seemed too soon but the book just didn’t have room for all the stories.

I thought there should have been a scene with Navani accepting Gavinar into her arms. She lost her son and he is all she has left of him. Only Dalinar and Kaladin seemed to get a chance to really grieve over deaths.

Likewise, I’d like to know just what kind of man Dalinar thinks Adolin is supposed to be.  Adolin’s breaking and maybe fully bonding to Maya might come when he learns the truth about the Rift.

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7 years ago

The people of Shinovar are basically the only people that remained true to the original agreement with the Parshmen when they came from the other world as refugees.  Maybe their reluctance to travel upon stone is a result of their wanting to remain to the place that they had been allocated by the original people of this land.  They also might look down on fighting because they believe it was from Odium and had caused the world that they came from to be destroyed.

This also brings up an interesting theory that the Shin Wars which almost conquered all the world, might actually be when the humans first left Shinovar and began to take other lands for their own.

Just some random thoughts.

Anthony Pero
7 years ago

I am only 76% of the way through. So, See you in a few days.

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Wanda Li En
7 years ago

Thank you for this awesome review.

And since you asked for Fanart of that particular Scene, it was the first thing I did after finishing the book XD

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I am Unity

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Tommy
7 years ago

Where does Adolin go from here?

I think that the events in OB show that there is no way that Adolin does not restore Maya in some fashion. I would like to see something outside the boundaries of the 10 orders. We have already seen subversion of the old order with a radiant bonding a corrupted spren, a listener bonding a spren. I expect this to go to places we never dreamed of.

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7 years ago

I utterly loved Shallan’s arc. For me it had more emotional oomph than Dalinar’s (Not that that didn’t have emotional oomph, but I just feel that Shallan’s personality was more conducive to empathetic feelings). Pretty much the only bit I wasn’t so keen on was the fact that she was so vital to the Alethkar mission when she had joined it to escape Jasnah more than anything. It gave the moment when she promised not to run away from her responsibilities anymore to Jasnah a little less power to me. That said, without it we wouldn’t have had the scenes in Alethkar/Shadesmar so I’m more than happy for the trade off!

Her scenes with Wit made me blubber – all the more so because they came after the word play of their initial meeting. It just seemed to be Shallan in microcosm.

Dalinar’s arc really surprised me, for a few reasons.

One, I actually got some of my theories proven right about his purported boon and curse – although I didn’t think Cultivation herself was going to take a hand, I did think that the boon/curse dynamic was more of a convention than a rule, and when I read Dalinar start to get his memories back in the preview chapters my guess was that it was because he now had the strength to deal with them. When I actually get something right I take it as a victory, even if not all the details were exact! 

Two, I didn’t expect to like past-Dalinar so much. Yes, he was a brute, and yes he committed atrocities, but I found myself laughing as he was doing them. Really weird sets of emotions that provoked in me. The scene where he first met Evi was absolute gold. Even whilst he was doing the things he did, his way of thinking was utterly alien to the other light-eyes, a bit like Renarin, although in a completely different manner, obviously. 

And thirdly, it struck me that Dalinar was in many ways always the powerful one of the two brothers. Maybe Gavilar and Sadeas did all the politicking, but Dalinar was the one of the trio that was most irreplaceable. I was also struck as never before that Navani’s words in the WoK to Dalinar – that he was becoming the person the other light-eyes claimed to be – could be more accurately read as he was becoming the person that Gavilar always claimed to be.

I was surprised by how much Adolin shone in this book. His character is in an unenviable position being under the shadows of Dalinar and Kaladin – one out of expectations, and the other as a love rival. Kaladin inspires, but Adolin leads. He does himself a disservice when he thinks he’d not be a good king. Not only does he have a skill for leading, but he has an instinctive gift of empathy that Dalinar has had to try to teach himself to attain. Also: Maya. Enough said. 

A large part of me hopes that Adolin doesn’t become a KR though – or at least, not for a while. Reawakening Maya and then not becoming a KR would, for me, have an even greater payoff than if he did.

I was someone who expected Adolin to become King of Alethkar at some point in the series, but Jasnah becoming Queen was just perfect. I suspect she won’t have any progeny, though, so it will be interesting to see how the whole situation plays out. I really hope that that, combined with Shallan’s promise to her, will see the Ghostblood situation become more than just Shallan’s secret. Now that that character growth has been accomplished it strikes me as being time.

Speaking of Jasnah, her moment with Renarin was heart-wrenching. I was always suspicious of Renarin being a KR, but the fact that he could work the Oathgates had persuaded me I was wrong. The truth behind Glys was just so fitting, somehow. Both he and Renarin are somehow outsiders and yet also part of the group. (Incidentally, as others have mentioned, I think Glys was initially a Truthwatcher Spren, but has been corrupted by Sja-Anat’s influence.) And both of them are a soaring reminder that however you are regarded, you still have the strength to decide who you will be. Renarin, the kid with ‘blood weakness’, who can’t fight, can still be the hero who saved their capable big brother from the Thunderclast; and Glys, a spren corrupted by Odium’s influence, can still choose to fight Odium.

Speaking of which, Sja-Anat was a fascinating glimpse into the Unmade. We were given hints as never before that rather than being made by Odium they were ‘unmade’ so as to serve him. And how fitting is it that a spren whose role was to corrupt should find herself wanting to fight her ‘purpose’? I really hope this is the direction that the series is going, because it opens up so many possibilities both magical and story-wise. It seems at this stage at least possible that it is possible that the ‘compounding’ that happens with different surges can have an extra compound to add. Whether that’s the possibility of Odium’s powers being mixed with one or other of Honour and Cultivation’s powers or both of them, the possibilities are so vast it’s almost daunting. Also, given that it seems Odium will have an array of forces made up of humans, listeners, KR orders, and the unmade, I love the idea that the forces of ‘good’ will be similarly eclectic. It really speaks to the truth that it is what a person chooses to be that matters, as opposed to what they are born into.

And I should probably stop building up this wall of text for now. So much more I could talk about.

 

So…

 

Um…

 

Anyone know when Book 4 is coming out?! (:Gives cross handed salute: “Book Four”)

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7 years ago

So . . . The reveal about the Recreance made me remember a quote from another book: “Whether or not what you do has the effect you want, it will have three at least you never expected, and one of those usually unpleasant.”

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7 years ago

@26: Yeah, I too felt Shallan’s crisis was a tad too heavy and took a tad too much place within the narrative. I was really looking forward to Adolin and all I had was Veil. While I did feel this story wrap around itself nicely and was satisfying, the chapters with Wit was really gorgeous and this comes from a reader not really liking Wit, I also felt this part of the story missed the inputs from the other characters. I also felt it was a very internal story arc combined to Dalinar’s very internal story arc and the lack of Adolin having shrunk back to a mere comical relief, so yeah, part of part 3 was hard to read for me.

@27: I suspect whether or not Adolin is broken enough for a Nahel Bond will be the topic of heated discussions within the next four years. The question as to whether or not Adolin will eventually finalized Maya’s revival and the question as to whether or not he can will be debated. 

This being said, are they enough elements within the story which would support Adolin having mental cracks? Yes. We also must take into consideration the vision Renarin sends him early on, a view of him, whole, perfected. This seems a sign Adolin’s mind is not entirely intact. Of course, as you say, there is the fact Dalinar gave him a grand name and placed expectations on his head the second he was born, the fact his father literally hated him for years because he reminded him of Evi, there is the tower an event which shook Adolin, the Radiants and well we could say he was physically mistreated a lot within this book. The thunderclast scene was just amazing, one of my favorites, but my little heart lurched to read Adolin hurting so much and still trying to stand up. I mean, did he break his leg? Was he standing on a broken leg? So yeah, lots of physical abuse for him. 

The problem is, while you are right in saying Adolin is the kind of person who never lets anything stop him, who always look to the bright side, who always focus on what he can do, it sort of make it hard to believe, for the readers, he actually is broken. I love Adolin, but his character needs more tension, more fleshing out and I think while OB made a good step into the right direction, with Maya, we are not there yet.

@29: I really hope this is not the end of the Dalinar/Adolin/Evi story arc as I felt things were left unsaid. Adolin still doesn’t know about Dalinar having killed/forgotten Evi, but I somewhat doubt it will be a plot point. Brandon had the opportunity to write a real-time father/son conflict, but Adolin’s lack of reactivity combined to Dalinar being very focused onto… himself led to a different narrative. It however remains something I believe would be great to explore. Will it?

I also feel something more dramatic needs to happen to Adolin to make readers believe he is broken enough for Maya.

@31: Not all readers will embark into a book with the same set of expectations and sometimes a given narrative creates expectations. When the author chooses, for reasons which are personal to him and his story, not to explore those, then yeah some readers will be disappointed. Adolin getting away with murdering Sadeas without any consequences, not even a psychological one, was an anti-climatic turn of events. I doubt many readers were satisfied with this one except perhaps for those who hated the story arc to begin with and were glad it didn’t happen. 

On the other hand, I read many readers being disappointed with the love triangle and the romance while I was relatively fine with it. It could have been brought up in a stronger way, but it left me satisfied in the end. 

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7 years ago

BWS is good at foreshadowing–remember the gloryspren popping up around Dalinar back in WoR? I wonder if Gloryspren are the Bondsmith equivalent of Windspren to Windrunners–notice that Gloryspren gather around Dalinar much the way Windspren circle around Kaladin.

“We” killed you, Odium? Slip up? Who is “We”? Is that Odium’s secret to splintering other Shards–that it actually takes two Shards to do it? If so he’s probably terrified of Harmony!

“Hoid would let the world burn to accomplish his goals, but we still love him for this kind of thing.” He says that, but he wouldn’t. In this very story he gives up irreplaceable Breaths because he can’t bear the thought of a damaged little girl getting hurt even more. (He’d have to go back to Nalthis to get more Breaths.)

Part of me thinks that Moash will be redeemed because he’s a tip-of-the-hat to Stormlight Archive editor Moshe Feder. I mean, Brandon Sanderson is an MFA specializing in writing–I can’t imagine that names in his books are anything but carefully-chosen.

To Alice and Paige: so you don’t think Moash is dead, as the Fused said he would be? And his body inhabited by a dead Singer?

Actually I can see him getting a redemption arc by pulling a near-Marsh. At the last moment, about to kill Kaladin, he seizes control of his own body back long enough to be killed by Nightblood instead.

Finally: Adolin is not stupid. He has to be at least half-consciously avoiding saying the First Oath. He’s watched dozens of others become Surgebinders and many become Radiants by now. He has some actual reason not to do so, even if he isn’t himself aware of it.

Edit: fixed thinko in discussion of gloryspren.

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7 years ago

I’m really really really interested by “Unity”.  It’s capitalized, so it’s important.  And the book outright says Dalinar Ascends.  

So…is Dalinar now a conduit to a reinterpreted Honor – now Unity?  Who would be by definition the opposite of Odium, who goes around Splintering everything?

FROTHING, I tell you.

Also, Jasnah is the best and no one can convince me otherwise.

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7 years ago

I expected the humans to have come from another planet in the system, but didn’t expect them to be the original Voidbringers. The Dawnchant being the language of the Parshendi/Parshmen ancestors was also a surprise, though obvious after it was revealed, Chant-Rhythms-Listeners duh! (Seriously, how does he do that?!)

It’s looking increasingly like Braize is where the humans originally came from.

@13, I’m not sure if resurrecting Maya would make Adolin a KR (though it does look like the resurrection might happen), Maya, if I’m remembering correctly, is the same type of spren as Wyndle, I’m not sure if Adolin would fit the Ideals/temperament Edgedancers require. I wouldn’t rule out something new coming from resurrecting a dead Shardblade, making Adolin not a KR but something else that’s more than conventional Shardbearer.

Re: Renarin, My theory is that he’s doing Voidbinding. Glys doesn’t sound like a corrupted Truthwatcher spren, mainly because a corrupted spren still has some commonalities shared with the uncorrupted version, but Truthwatcher’s sprens are described as light through a prism, and a red snowflake just doesn’t sound anything like that. If it were a corrupted Cryptic, I might believe because of the fractal nature, but Renarin doesn’t seem to share any powers with Lightweavers either. I think I’ve read somewhere there’s ten levels of Surgebinding and ten levels of Voidbinding. So far all the Fused have been using Surgebinding powers–the how (i.e. no honorspren for Fused Windrunner powers) may be different from the KR’s but the what is definitely the same. My guess is that Renarin is doing stuff that belongs on the other double-eye, the one on the back endpapers of The Way of Kings hardcover.

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7 years ago

@38 Carl, Isn’t breath just another form of Investiture? Hoid seems able to use Allomancy on Roshar, maybe it’s possible to substitute Breath with Stormlight. Also, I had to check back to see what you were talking about re: Moash. I didn’t read that whole death thing literally at all (I know you’re not asking me, but still). Moash killing Elhokar hurt, but he wasn’t irredeemable in my eyes until he killed Jezrien and then took his Honorblade. I would hope Brandon wouldn’t make a character decision just because the character is named after a friend of his, but also I think Moash is a foil for Kaladin–similar beginnings, travelling down different paths–it wouldn’t make sense if they ended up on the same side after all.

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7 years ago

Hoid can probably Awaken with Stormlight. Just because Zahel can’t do it doesn’t mean nobody else can. Hoid has a lot of experience using different forms of Investiture and magic together.

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7 years ago

@41, tkThompson:

@38 Carl, Isn’t breath just another form of Investiture? Hoid seems able to use Allomancy on Roshar, maybe it’s possible to substitute Breath with Stormlight.

WoB says it is possible, but very difficult. I just don’t think it’s happening. I could certainly be wrong.

… I think Moash is a foil for Kaladin–similar beginnings, travelling down different paths–it wouldn’t make sense if they ended up on the same side after all.

Moash is clearly the anti-Kaladin. Similar origins (darkeyed soldiers with big grudge against lighteyes, former slaves, both  help [the same!] escaped Parshmen slaves, both teach the downtrodden to fight with spears, etc. Note that in my scenario, Moash doesn’t end up on Kaladin’s side for more than a second–he just ends up dead instead of helping Odium triumph. (Also note how much Moash sounds like Marsh, just as Kaladin sounds like Kelsier. I say again, I doubt names in Brandon Sanderson’s work are ever accidental. The man thinks too hard.)

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7 years ago

So just a couple of random thoughts about the world of Roshar in general that occurred to me while listening to the audiobook on the way home from work (after reading it first of course!):

1) Using Alethi glyphs as a form of written communication has to be like trying to communicate by emoji. Definitely open to interpretation.

2) With all the new gemhearts gained from the Chasmfiends, this has to have greatly inreased the money supply of the Alethi economy. Did it cause a surge in inflation?

3) Kaladin rhymes with Paladin. Coincidence?

 

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7 years ago

If Adolin awakens Maya, becomes an Edgedancer, and swears his fourth oath, then I fear for the spren who will form his shardplate. Here’s hoping that they are even braver than he is.

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7 years ago

I was really really pleased that the killing of Sadeas did not lead to a major plot of anguish and remorse for Adolin. It was neither a tactical nor a strategic or even a moral mistake to kill Sadeas and I am glad the book treated it that way. Personally I think that Brandon included the killing of Sadeas to break with the trope that the good guys are always beeing to stupid to just go ahead and kill a mortal enemy when they have the oppurtunity.

What I also liked was how the conflict of the book turns out to have very different and much more complex sides as one could have expected. It is not Humans against Parshmen and not even followers of Odium against everyone else. A lot of fractions with very different goals are involved, which is much more interesting than a simple black and white narrative.

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7 years ago

@38: Why would Adolin think he needs to say the first oath? When Shallan makes her illusions, she makes Adolin into a Radiant, a Windrunner, Adolin scurries away saying he can’t be this man. I am thus really not sure Adolin thinks he is reviving Maya nor he is forming a Nahel Bond. I think he just genuinely believes she is his friend and she helped him.

My thoughts are Adolin is still leagues away from the first oath: you have to want it, we saw it with the squires and Adolin doesn’t seem to think he can be this man.

Also we have to remember that while Maya did save Adolin’s life, she did manifest under 10 seconds, she glowed, she did whisper her name and she is managing to brush Adolin’s thoughts, even if not clearly, she is not able to grant him surgebinding. What Adolin has, it seems, is a broken Nahel Bond, it is something we never saw before, but I do believe he will revive Maya, it just won’t happen in a fortnight.

@40: Brandon definitely needs to make it more convincing. I have no doubt Adolin could become an Edgedancer, but the textual isn’t highlighting it well enough. This being said, I also thought the text didn’t highlight well enough why Teft and Lopen were chosen by sprens, while huh Adolin still got a lot of Edgedancerness written into him.

@47: It could have been used to increase the drama during some parts of the book. I personally felt, while the characters were mostly evolving together, they still had very internal and independent story arcs. After a while, I thought it was getting heavy to read, so externalizing some of those conflicts would have been better, IMHO. Adolin murdering Sadeas was an opportunity to have an external conflict, one involving more than one faction and in a story running low on external conflicts, it seems like an odd choice to have skipped on it. That and the fact readers definitely expected more than what we’ve got, so it read like a let down, for some.

All in all, if I look back, I would say Brandon skip on every opportunity he created for external conflicts, instead focusing on very internal ones. He skipped on the love triangle, he skipped on Sadeas, he skipped on Helaran, he skipped on Kaladin’s involvement with Moash and Elhokar, many external conflicts just didn’t happen.

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7 years ago

@26 naupathia: I paused at the capitalized “Pattern” too but decided that I don’t think it is Shallan’s.  My guess is that it was there for Elhokar, like @10 goldeyeliner suggested.  We know that in previous books Elhokar was seeing something that looked like Cryptics, and he was killed in the palace as he was saying the oaths.  That plus Wit’s statements “I know you’d rather have someone else,” and “I honestly don’t even know if you’ve the mind to listen,” make me think that this Pattern was almost bonded to Elhokar and possibly a little traumatized when he was murdered. 

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7 years ago

@40 Renarin and Glys can operate the Oathgates. Given Odium has to corrupt the spren of the Oathgates in order to use them, it seems safe to say that Renarin is not a Voidbringer.

ImpatientKensai
7 years ago

@37 Gepeto I definitely see your point. I can see how readers would have a hard time believing he is broken because of the way he handles bad experiences.  What do you think that moment would look like, when he really seems broken but still within character? I think a perfect example is him spending time with Gallant after the loss of Sureblood. He was still himself, positive action oriented, focuses on Renarin’s challenges rather than his, but you can tell he’s mourning and trying to cope with the loss. “Move now, grieve later.” 

You may be right, the problem isn’t necessarily that Adolin isn’t broken, but that the story calls for very little “on screen” down time for him to mourn. After Elhokar’s death Adolin is constantly on the move with task after task. Perhaps another scene, like with Gallant, will help resolve the issues readers may be having with whether he is broken or not.

I LOVE that Maya appears to be on the path to resurrection. Many of us have long speculated this. Although Brandon may throw a wrench into where it seems to be going (I actually like the theory above that he resurrects Maya but doesn’t bond with her.) I do think that it will go that way. There were several bits of speculation I thought Brandon may throw a wrench into but they turned out as I thought they would. And I was great with that. I think Adolin will eventually become a Radiant, but it will be down the road in a amazingly epic moment these books are so great at. Can’t wait. 

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7 years ago

Thanks so much for the review! I found the story met my expectations and then some!

Specifically, I enjoyed the team’s time in Kholinar. Very intense and I think revealed so much about the Voidbringers. The way Shallan coped was very well written. Subsequently, the time in Shadesmar was fascinating. I loved it!

Dalinar. Wow. What a contrast between The Blackthorn and The Bondsmith. If I had a complaint about Dalinar’s arc, and I had to look hard to come up with this, is we didn’t get to see Gallant “select” and bond him. We know now that the bond must have come after he gets to the Shattered Plains. Good thing. I think I would have a totally different opinion of the Ryshadium if they had bonded before Dalinar’s pruning by Cultivation. 

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7 years ago

@51: I am not disputing there aren’t “moments” where Adolin reads as if he was more vulnerable, but his motto of “try harder” each time he is pushed hard is making him a very tough cookie to break. So, in the end, while we do see Adolin mourn Sureblood and Elhokar, I do not feel the story is allowing us to conclude Adolin is cracked enough for a Nahel Bond. The reasons for it aren’t nothing bad ever happened to him, his father hating him for years because he took too much after Evi ought to have been bad by itself, but his behavior defies all prognostic of brokenness.

Having snoop around on other discussions, it also is a topic of debate. Readers do not universally agree Adolin CAN form a Nahel Bond, not unless he really breaks down which hasn’t happened in OB.

What I think Adolin needs is just more screen time. He needs what Brandon did with Shallan, Kaladin and Dalinar, to plunge into him and give the readers a better sight of all his various layers. Adolin moment of decision where he decides he can no longer pretend he is Born Into Light for Dalinar was sweet, but came a tad out of nowhere. There was little built up before it happened. How do you toss away 23 years of trying to be this image your father has of you within 2 minutes?

The character thus needs more built up. For other characters, such as Teft, Brandon was able to built it up with little page time and it was plausible. With Renarin, very little built up is also required, but with Adolin we just do not get the same sense of brokenness from him as we do from the other Radiants. If he is to revive Maya, then it needs to be addressed.

I also think Adolin already bonded Maya, in a way or another. I thus do not think he will “revive her” only to see her wander away to bond another. Maya also made her choice. It is him she protected, it is him she refused to see die, not another. Unfortunately, many readers still do not see Adolin as an Edgedancer nor find this growth plausible which means Brandon also needs to work on this for book 4.

On the side note, two moments which made me feel fuzzy inside:

1) Shallan’s brothers finally making it to Urithiru. Ah this was sweet. And Shallan asking Navani to please find honor seats for her family to sit on.

2) Wit taking the little girl standing next to her mother’s corpse and giving her to another mother having lost her child. This was really sweet.

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7 years ago

just posting to be part of my conversations. 

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Melissa
7 years ago

OK so I have some thoughts and questions.

1 question:  Is the revelation that the parshendi/fused/etc. have gemhearts really surprising?? They’ve been killing them for SIX YEARS. Did they really not notice that they had gemhearts this entire time? Because if they *did* know, why weren’t they harvesting the THOUSANDS of parshendi they killed over the years for more gemhearts?

Thoughts:

Dalinar; LOVED his arc. Hated his guts when he was younger but it was interesting to see the glimmers of the Dalinar we know and love woven throughout his whole backstory and how Evi seemed to be able to see them. Wanted to scream at him every time he was a jerk to her and his sons (esp. Renarin) though. Did NOT see the unite the realms thing and it kinda blew my mind. Interested to see how these new powers will manifest in the future – is that a one time thing or will we see him unite the realms again in the future? If so, will we see some of our characters world hop? 

Shallan: GOD SHE PISSED ME OFF THIS BOOK! I love Shallan so much but STOP IT! YOU ARE YOU! VEIL IS NOT YOU!!! Also, I HATED the love triangle. Hated hated hated it. I was SO happy how it was resolved though. Watching Shallan fragment throughout the book was SUPER painful and frustrating but her moments with Wit were really well done and very moving. I confess that I was disappointed that she was still somewhat fragmented by the end but I was glad she seemed to be finding her way. Also – brothers!!

Kaladin: Really liked a lot of his arc – his discussions about the nature of what is right/wrong with Syl were foreshadowing the voidbringer reveal I think because those are the questions everyone has to ask now. Sad to see him fail the 4th ideal, but it was fitting. I agree with a lot of others that his 4th ideal will have to be something about forgiving himself if he fails as long as he TRIES 

Adolin: I LOVE ADOLIN. Also, can we discuss how ADORABLE baby Adolin is?? I loved seeing him in Shadesmar – he was so completely out of his element and it was fun to watch him try to make sense of his situation and to see him help others, especially Kaladin. And MAYA!!! I understand why a lot of people don’t want Adolin to become radiant, but I really hope he bonds Maya. That “relationship” was really interesting, especially once OUT of Shadesmar and he continued to talk to her and asked her permission to summon her. Love love love.

Jasnah: JASNAH IS BACK! THE QUEEN IS BACK OH MY GOD. Watching her kick BUTT during the final battle was awesome and scary. The complete nonchalance she had while straight up eviscerating people was fantastic. VERY interesting to get viewpoints from her and cool to see Ivory finally. Want to see more. SUPER glad they finally thought to make her queen. Bet the ardents are losing their minds though.

Renarin: I want to learn more about him. I definitely did NOT see the corrupted spren thing coming. It seemed to me though that Glys was somewhat well meaning, which I thought was interesting. And it seems like Renarin WANTS to continue to be a good guy, BUT – what is Taravangian’s interest in him? And Odium’s. Is Renarin going to be Odium’s champion? Is that their plan?

Moash: F. THIS. GUY. EFF HIM. EFF HIM SO MUCH. Toward the beginning of his arc I thought it was going to be him trying to find his way back to bridge 4 and re-earning his place but NOOOOOO. EFF THIS GUY. I hope he dies slowly and painfully. NO redemption for this selfish POS. ALSO that little bridge 4 salute he gave Kaladin after KILLING the king? NO. Screw you! You are not WORTHY to do that salute. HOW insulting. /end rant/

Elhokar: *sobbing* he was so close! He deserved to be radiant! He wanted so BADLY to be a good king and a good person. And he got killed with his tiny little SON there – who had been being tortured for like a year. STORMS. SCREW YOU MOASH I HATE YOU.

Bridge 4: TEEEEEEEEFT!!!!! I sobbed so hard when he finally said his oath. Such a beautiful moment. “we fill the cracks with something stronger”. OH so beautiful. ROCK’S FAMILY! SKAR! LYN! ALL OF THEM! Love love love! 

Lift: you know, I didn’t like her at first but she is definitely growing on me. Loved her by the end of this

Szeth/Nightblood: So glad to see Nightblood but was upset that he’s with Szeth but uh…how am I liking Szeth now? His arc was super cool and it was nice to see into his mind a bit more. Nightblood is hilarious as ever. Though it was SCREWED UP when Szeth left that guy to drown. Also…are we not going to talk about how easily Dalinar just…let Szeth become his bodyguard? Is Adolin not upset by this? The last time he saw Szeth he got completely curb stomped by him. Everyone just…ok with that? Not to mention like…Gavilar? 

Speaking of Gavilar – WTF MAN??? Rereading the opening scene with him and Eshonai is kind of creepy. The more I learn of Gavilar the less I like him.

Amaram – Crem. Slime. Was fun to watch Jasnah OWN him and was glad to see her call herself out for insulting his mother instead of him. Would have been better and easier for everyone if she’d have just killed him right there.

Taravangian: HARD TO SAY if I hate him or Moash more. SCREW this guy. He can NOT pretend any longer that he’s trying to save the world or that he’s working for some kind of greater good. Manipulative little……..will be interesting to see though if the Night Watcher has been playing a long game with him too – wonder if cultivation intervened in his boon/curse too? Will be interesting.

Venli: Couldn’t believe Eshonai was dead. Heartbroken. Couldn’t believe even MORE that I’d be cheering VENLI of all people by the end of the book. Thought she’d leave for team Dalinar but was glad she didn’t. 

Unmade: are there 9 or 10?? Does Odium’s champion have 9 shadows because it represents the 9 unmade on Odium’s side? Is Sja-anat included with them or not?

What’s going to happen with the heralds now? Are Ash and Taln headed over to team Dalinar? That would certainly be useful. Let’s just hope Moash doesn’t get to them first. (Jerk).

What in the heck was up with that one interlude with the island and that weird soulcaster that soulcast herself into smoke? I can’t even express specific questions because they all kind of coalesce into “WTF???”

What is Hoid doing with Elhokar’s spren at the end? (Poor thing!)

Azure: SO GLAD TO SEE VIV!!!!!!!! AHHH! Very disappointed I didn’t see more Vasher though. Ok but here’s the thing…maybe audiobook people can answer this because it was hard to tell from the book: is she HUNTING Vasher? She says something like “I’m coming for him” but that could be taken as “screw that guy I AM COMING FOR YOU BE AFRAID” or it could be taken as “I love you! I’m coming for you! We’ll get Nightblood back together!!!” 

 

Thoughts?

 

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7 years ago

“I do not feel the story is allowing us to conclude Adolin is cracked enough for a Nahel Bond.”

How exactly do you measure “brokenness”? Jasnah Kholin does not seem to be “broken” at all while Shallan is actually shattered into different personalities. I think that it is not reasonable to expect to be able to predict future events based on this. Generally, you tend to over-interpret basically everything that happens in these books to an absurd degree.

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7 years ago

@56 – Jasnah’s brokenness comes from the illness she had as a child, the one that apparently drove her mad.  I’m guessing that broke her at a young age, and allowed Ivory to bond with her.  It would have been nice to have some indication of that in a prior book, but there you go….

 

 

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7 years ago

56: How much brokenness is required to form a Nahel Bond has been an on-going topic of discussion for the last 4 years. As such, it isn’t just myself “over-interpreting things to an absurd degree” (honestly who isn’t guilty of that?), it is a great deal many readers wondering what it takes to be Radiant and whether or not characters such as Adolin has it or not. My own person is relatively insignificant within the greater course of the SA discussions, everyone would do great not to forget this.

This being said, the difference in between Jasnah and Adolin is we have seen Adolin’s hardships, we have seen his past, we know everything and, more importantly, we know how he dealt with it. Jasnah, we are still in the dark: her thoughts of a strange illness, a dark room and being betrayed by the ones she loved the most are sufficient, IMO, to get a sense of her brokenness even if it isn’t appearent to the other characters. Adolin however is different because we do know. There are no unsaids and we know those hardships did not break him or if they did, the narrative did not highlight it well enough.

As such, are readers currently right now as I am writing arguing as to whether or not Adolin is broken enough? Yes. They are. Why? Because it is not obvious he is. We know too much about him to blame it on us just “not knowing” and what we do know is not enough to definitely conclude about it. Lots of readers are split up as to whether or not Adolin ought to become a Radiant: it’d be best, if Brandon finalize Maya’s revival, to make the readers firmly believe it is the right path.

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7 years ago

I’ll have a much longer comment later on today, but there’s something I want to get out into the discussion sooner than that.

Per WoB, there is going to be a 1-year timeskip between Oathbringer and Book 4. During this year, Dalinar is going to write and release the in-world text of Oathbringer. Some people will be amazed, some will be horrifed, some (most?) will be scandalized, but I think it’s safe to assume that EVERYBODY is either going to read it or have it read to them.

This means that any angst over Adolin and Renarin not knowing their Dad killed their Mom, or other people who have been victims of Dalinar’s crimes, or witness to those crimes is going to be directly addressed in-world. I expect that the various reactions to Dalinar’s confessions are going to be a prime driving force for character interactions for at least the next book, and perhaps for the remainder of the series.

That’s all for now. Much more coming later.

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Antonella
7 years ago

About that scene in Kholinar´s Palace and Kaladin blocking out: ALICE YOU ARE JUST MEAN. Give him a break! 

Otherwise, great review. When are you going todo the re-read?

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Squeewockle
7 years ago

I finished the book, and I mostly agree with all the statements here.

Things I found the worse:

Realizing Eshonai was dead. I still actually held some vain hope, EVEN THOUGH we saw her body, that she might come back. :_: Eshonnaaaaaaii, whyyy….

Not knowing for ages if Drehy, Skar, Vathah, Red and Ish had managed to survive at ALL. Just knowing they left behind a routed city.

Watching the Parshmen that Kaladin made friends with end up killing the Wall Guards he made friends with. That was horrible. 

Moash’s betrayal. There’s a special place in Damnation for that one…

The utter confusion of not knowing what is right or wrong, because this is the Dawnsinger’s planet, they evolved especially for it, and the humans took it over and began the cycle of Desolations that followed. Then Odium (I’m assuming Odium chased them, and they tried to escape him) started to subvert the Dawnsingers for his purpose instead, feeding on their injustice and rage. After all, if the humans were fleeing their world, begging for the Dawnsingers to take them in, I have a strong feeling they were trying to flee Odium. But he followed. And of course, some humans would have been corrupted by him, by things like the Thrill, since their “Lust for Conquest” could have easily been driven by Odium as well.

But over time, the humans turned to the Gods of Roshar instead. (Honor and Cultivation.) I don’t think the humans are inherently evil, and it’s not mentioned here — but they’re as much a victim of Odium as the Parshendi now are. Stirring that same sense of conflict, they destroyed their planet. Torn by divisions, suffering, enhanced by hatred. Odium chased them through that portal, and found the vengeful Dawnsingers to be perfect for his purpose. Of course, unless the Parshendi and Humans learn to accept the suffering that happened in the past (LIKE DALINAR HINT HINT), they will always be in conflict. Because yes, they might be justified… but they’re corrupt.

TARAVANGIAN: I HATE HIM I HATE HIM I HATE HIM

Well, I get what he’s trying to do, he’s basically thinking: “We can’t beat Odium, but maybe we can preserve some of humanity.” His original plan was to make a deal with Odium, to protect the people he ruled over, and then he intended to become the ruler of Roshar and then save the world that way. Of course, Odium approached him on one of his “stupid” days and coerced him into a bargain to only save those of Kharbranth, born there. Which is still an impressive amount of people, just not quite the world. and then Dalinar still thinking it can’t be this dude who betrayed him. AHHHHHHHHH.

Venli: I hated her at first. But now I’m not so sure. She doesn’t like humans. But she doesn’t like Odium either. Her main purpose I think will be to contest Odium and reclaim the planet for the Parshendi/Dawnsingers, but she’ll likely at some point learn to interact with other humans with this same ideal. Defeat Odium. He’s twisted her kind to become puppets to serve his will. They may think they’re reclaiming their lands, but it won’t stop there. It’s entirely likely that once the Parsheni/Dawnsingers throw off the humans, they’ll start invading other worlds through Shadesmar. Spreading his influence until he becomes as powerful as Adonalsium. 

Disappointed with Rlain: Not much on him, he was just kind of cast aside in a way that makes you think he might want to return to his people. I wanted to see him become a squire if I’m honest with you. I’m still rooting for some of the Parshendi and humans grouping together to fight Odium. Since the odds against the humans is ridiculously high. humans fighting for Odium, Parshmen fighting for Odium, his powers, his Unmade, his plans, alliances shattered, cities falling, most of the Skybreakers siding with the Dawnsingers, Dustbringer spren hating humans… seems like a LOT more things are working against the humans than with.

Things I found Awesome:

Sja-Anat.

I’m sorry, but I actually found the fact that a flippin’ UNMADE of all creatures, possibly willing to defect from Odium was like HOLY SMOKES WHAT! I absolutely love the idea that the heroes we expect, the Heralds of old, can’t be considered allies. And a creature directly formed by Odium for the express purpose of screwing up humanity, after thousands and thousands of years, has grown enough to want to defect. Even Re-Shepir was interesting, because you could see that eagerness in them. Even the Thrill was interesting. Because they’re not creatures that love Odium. They work that way because they were unmade that way, but they still influence beyond what is expected of them. The Thrill influenced humans, despite originally being for the Dawnsingers. It “loved” Dalinar, hence why he could trap it. 

Something like that happened with Re-Shepir as well. Someone used her desperation to understand and mimic humans in that dark, destructive way to trap her. At the end of the day, the Unmade were likely formerly something else. A human, a dawnsinger, a spren. Something that was corrupted. 

Sja-Anat corrupted Glys in order to give Renarin a sense of the future, to help aid him against Odium. Except, Renarin didn’t realize until Jasnah’s love won over, that the future could be changed. She’s like one of those dogs that goes I HALP and tries, even though the humans have every right to not trust well, an Unmade.

Guys, Sja-Anat is awesome. 

I LOVED the fact that supposed enemies could be the unexpected allies. And I LOVE that Brandon Sanderson makes everything have character. So even the bad guys feel justified in their own way. GAH!

Did I mention I like Sja-Anat?

Okay, next: Jasnah Kholin. DHJSFBSERJKLFBSKLFBSERILFNWEHJL SHE’S SO AWESOME. She’s a force of nature, and when she became the Queen of Urithiru and Alethkar, I cackled. Leave the world to Jasnah Kholin, and she’ll save it in a couple of books. <.< Of course it won’t be that easy, but you know.

Dalinar backstory. Oh yes. What a grotesque, awful backstory, and what a chance for redemption. Them Bondsmiths are pretty strong, right? Bonding stone… bonding realms… bonding things like it’s going out of fashion…

Ash and Taln. Taln’s reaction to when Ash expected him to hate her was brilliant. I think everyone expected him to feel betrayed, but instead, he’s like, “What a gift you gave them.” And in a way, he’s right. The humans have advanced. They’re more prepared for a Desolation in some parts, and less in others, but the gift of advancement is something that they were blessed with by his resistance for four and a half thousand stomping years. Taln. You da man.

Lopen’s Spren, Rua, is so adorable. He’s taught it insults. It gestures rudely at people who fly away with multiple hands. xD

WHY DID NO ONE IN THIS REVIEW EITHER MENTION ADOLIN AND HIS DEADEYE SPREN? WASN’T THAT AMAZING TOO? IT’S DEAD AND CREEPY, BUT IT REACTED AND SAVED HIM WHEN THE FUSED WERE ATTACKING. THEN HE CAUGHT THE NAME OF IT BACK WHEN FIGHTING THE THUNDERCLAST. MAYA.

MAYBE MAYA’S COMING BACK TO LIFE. I CAN’T WAIT TO SEE IF THAT HAPPENS OR NOT. I also found the concept of the deadeye spren fascinating, too. 

Since if Maya can come back to life, that suggests… ALL the spren might be able to come back. All the betrayed ones. 

Lift and Dalinar’s tight butt comment. Oh, Lift. the way she just disobeys the laws of their realm like it’s no big deal, sending the Stormfather to near apoplexy, Odium not even being able to detect her there… if you want a wild card on your team, there’s one.

Renarin coming into his own, learning about how he was discarded his whole life really, but Jasnah helped comfort him, then Adolin, then Dalinar was helping him, then Bridge Four accepted him… and then accepting him at the end, even though he saw visions of the future. I was like YEAH RENARIN YOU GO!

Szeth. He’s insane, and his sword is even more insane. It actually, if I’m honest, sounds like his sword is an Unmade. That’s my theory going on there, and it’s also defected to human side. After all, in Mythica, it’s mentioned that an Unmade had the ability to consume souls, and oh look, here’s an insane sword that really likes eating souls! WHAT A COINCIDENCE. 

But, you know, dude decided to work with Dalinar in the end. And I like that even though he’s working against the interest of the other Skybreakers, they’ll still train him, because they see nothing inherently wrong with what he did. Szeth’s entrance… yeah. We know he’s dangerous. Just point him the enemy’s way, say SIC THEM — and we have the power of Szeth utterly obeying his master, to a sword that drinks up people’s souls like a bottomless well… yeah. 

Wonder why Nale let him have that weapon, though. That Herald is a bit bonkers if you ask me.

Anyway. Now I await eagerly for the other novels…

And feel sad for Eshonai. :(

 

 

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7 years ago


We have seen everything Adolin did and everything that happened to him, with the exception of all the things we did not see, which could theoretically be anything at all. Personally I just dont see how you conclude that ” Lots of readers are split up as to whether or not Adolin ought to become a Radiant”. Did you make a survey? Posts in internet discussion are not a representative sample for all readers. Also: Writing a book is not a democratic process. Brandon will write the book in the way he thinks is best and I have much more trust in him than in the “many readers” you often cite as a source of great authority.

goldeyeliner
7 years ago

Mr. T’s “vision” with Odium… Odium can see all the possible futures from what T wrote spinning out into infinity.. EXCEPT for Renarin, his name is dark.. I think that Ren will be the dark horse, the hidden weapon, maybe even the champion they need at the end.. and I think it is because he bonded a corrupt spren..

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7 years ago

@@@@@ many: Why are so many expecting plot lines to be resolved in the 3rd book of a projected 10book series? As I’ve stated before, and granted my words don’t hold much weight, I’m perfectly content to let Brandon write the book the way he wants, resolving conflict and plot lines the way he wants, etc. I may be disappointed (I’m not) regarding certain ships, but who’s to say final resolution has even been reached?

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radiant_hawk
7 years ago

So, Dalinar and his “Unity” powers at the end of the book. Does that mean that he can bring stormlight to the core thing at the core of Urithiru? With this power, does he attract much more spren to come back and start bonding in larger numbers?

Jah kavedh has some seriously broken people, who could then dethrone and denounce mr.T. 

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Guncici
7 years ago

@@@@@Wetlandernw When are we starting the Re-Read for Oathbringer?

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7 years ago

@63 I think the four millennia is going to be as significant for the spren as it was for the human. Odium is expecting his spren, the Unmade, and the Singers/listeners to be good little orcs to destroy whatever it is holding him on Braize. He’s going to be very disappointed.

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7 years ago

@62: A real survey among every single individual having read the book is just not possible, but among those who care enough about it to discuss it, then yes I would definitely think the fandom is rather split as to whether or not Adolin ought to be a KR. All post-OB discussions I have seen also roam towards this direction: readers remain split. Heck, readers are still split about the romance!

I personally think, and seeing some of the on-going discussion I am far from being the only one, if Brandon wants to make us believe Adolin is broken enough to form a Nahel Bond with Maya, then he has more writing to do because OB is not convincing enough people. This isn’t a critic, it is a statement saying: “Hey a lot of readers are not getting how Adolin can possibly be broken enough to form a Nahel Bond, not because he never had hardships, but because it doesn’t seem like they broke him. It would be nice if this was explored a bit more so we’d get a clearer idea, it would make the story arc more powerful.”.

So again, I absolutely LOVED the Maya story arc, but I think to go further, we need to get a stronger sense of how Adolin is broken in whichever way Brandon finds is suitable.

@65: With Shallan’s brothers being back into the story, we might see more Jah Keved action.

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7 years ago

One of the things that have been conveyed very successfully in OB was that all these people who doubted Dalinar in the previous 2 volumes actually had very good reasons to do so, instead of just being obsteporous. Both because of the history and perception of Alethi in general and due to Dalinar’s personal history – which he previously didn’t wholly recall, and other people, such as his family tended to gloss over or to see through rose-colored glasses. Also explains why Navani chose Gavilar and was afraid of D’s “intensity” while young. Evi was a very brave woman, who sacrificed much to nudge Dalinar towards better side of his nature and who managed to instill goodness in her sons despite them growing up in a very violent culture.

I have totally called that Dalinar massacred and destroyed Rathalas and killed Evi, who tried to protect the civilians/mediate – though I expected it to happen in a more “hands-on” way. Also, that Nergaoul can bond to people and had bonded to Dalinar – though it seems to be a more temporary thing than I have envisioned. I _was_ wrong about him sparing the boy – so good for those who have foreseen it.

I also expected Elokhar to die since WoK and was also convinced that the Cryptics were investigating him for the purposes of bonding – hence his seeing “twisted, inhuman” heads in mirrors and freaking out. He got a very good, satisfying death that highlighted the dangers that they were facing and that not everybody could overcome and survive, even if they were coming close. The one thing that I am somewhat disappointed about is that we have gotten no hint of any suppressed artistic inclinations from Elokhar. A decently drawn map isn’t it. Ditto with Vathah, who is becoming Shallan’s squire. And it turns out that Sigzil, who I was also eyeing for a possible Lighweaver, is a sorry excuse for a Worldsinger, who may have been manipulated into Bridge 4 by Hoid. “Be wary of anybody claiming to know the future”, indeed! 

Was Tien one? In view of what we have learned about how Nale and the Skybreakers operated, it may very well be that they engineered his death. He didn’t glow and he died easily – but then, perhaps they took care to ensure that he didn’t have any spheres on him. Could Tukku, Kal’s sympathetic seargeant have been a Skybreaker operative? Oh, and it seems that Kal, despite his relative prominence in Amaram’s army, was saved by unanimous conviction of the sapient spren that honorspren would never ever bond again and by Syl’s mindless state.

I was also positively surprised by the roles Nale and Szeth played. I even started to sympathise with Nale because it is clear that he tried very hard to counter-act his deteretoriation in order to prevent a Desolation and had reasons to think that he had succeeded. Isn’t spren bond supposed to shore up a broken soul? I wonder why his didn’t help as much as he expected. And what highspren are thinking in general – because aren’t they going to be destroyed if Odium wins? And also, it appears that Nale has visited the Nightwatcher sometime after Dalinar – because she offered Nightblood to Dalinar first and the Herald somehow ended up with it.

Anyway, despite his obvious madness – I mean, his argument as to why he should now follow Odium (!) because “right of conquest” should somehow apply to him – despite Cultivation still fighting, but not to the humans versus singers is full of huge holes. Not to mention that it leaves out the Aimians, who are also native to Roshar and hybrid descendants of Dawnsingers, such as Horneaters and Herdazians, – Nale proved to be a surprisingly honest and effective  mentor to Szeth. And Skybreakers in general appear to be… much less dogmatic and more reasonable than I expected, though also rather hypocritical – which could be due to their Herald’s leadership. OTOH, I see a glimmer of hope that many of them might reason their way out of following Odium if Nale is as honest with them about his problems with sanity and not being the man they thought he was, as he was with Szeth. We have also heard from the honorspren that even 4-th level bonds can be dissolved without killing either the human or the spren, so there is hope that some of the Skybreakers may have moral courage to do it, if they disagree with the direction of the Order. Or, maybe, Nale will get stabbed with a smokestone-topped raysium dagger and it will free his followers, somehow.

But I hope beyond hope that he’ll bump into Venli, somehow, and that she’d make him understand that restoring the rights of natives has nothing to do with serving Odium and that actually both goals are in direct contradiction.

I loved Lift – Szeth – Nightblood shenangians, of course – but then I have always liked Lift and come to love her after “Edgedancer”. Szeth was another fledgling Radiant, by the way, only he seems to have well and truly lost his original spren – I wonder what it was. Oh, and I was right about him having been custodian of the Honorblade _before_ he became Truthless. I mean, the notion that the Shamans would have given him Jezrien’s Blade and trained him in using it _after_ he was made Truthless never made any sense. And, he is trained in the use of all other Blades – i.e. all other surges. Which makes it all the more likely that he’ll be Dalinar’s champion, IMHO. They’d better fetch the other Blades ASAP, though, or Odiumites will get there first. Also, everybody accepting him as an ally in the heat of battle was OK, but there should have been a huge deal about it afterwards. In fact, it should have shaken the coalition, because didn’t he kill many of their leaders? And if he admitted that it was on Taravangian’s orders, shouldn’t it have pretty much shattered the alliance? All that easy acceptance seemed very contrived, even though I know that Sanderson is probably saving it for the Szeth book.

In fact, so much seems to be in the air that I wonder how he’ll manage a year.

 

 

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7 years ago

My most nagging takeaway from the book – does “nonplussed” mean something different in the US from the usage I’m familiar with? Of all characters in the Stormlight Archive to be described as appearing “nonplussed”, ever, Jasnah would for me be fairly near the bottom of the list, but she is so described just after she’s sent an enemy soldier flying through the air.

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Ash
7 years ago

Loved the book, thanks for this great review, have been waiting to see what other people think of all the things that blew my mind or made me cry! 

Just wanted to add one other awesome thing I loved about Kaladin’s trip home – Laras.  A mature woman, her own person, running her home well, loved her whole don’t-you-come-into-my-house-and-insult-my-husband attitude.  Yes, her husband could be a jerk, but, I don’t know, I just loved that she had made something of her situation and wasn’t pining for Kaladin or any other disappointments in her life.

But I really wanted to comment to tell how after finishing Oathbringer I immediately wanted to start a re-read of all 3 books in light of all the new “surprises,” how many hints and how much foreshadowing could I now find?  And in the very beginning of TWOK, Szeth in Kholinar on his way to kill Galivar, passes the Beggar’s Feast, and an old man, smiling foolishly, says “Have you seen me?”  Similar description, exact same words Jezrien says to Moash.  Oof.  Love stuff like that :).

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Ash
7 years ago

Muswell @71 That “nonplussed” really bothered me as well, I had to look it up, I was so confused – apparently it is an informal, American usage where it means, well, the opposite of what “nonplussed” means.  Really bothered this American, though.

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7 years ago

I haven’t read the comments, so apologies if I repeat anything.

I’m curious about the whole spren thing. Previously it’s been stated that the spren abandoned the singers and started bonding with humans instead. In Oathbringer they say that humans destroyed their world with forbidden dangerous powers of spren. So which is the truth? Either they already had the spren bond and it destroyed their world, or they didn’t and the spren abandoned the parsh to serve humans. So i’m a little puzzled.

Moash does not deserve a redemption arc. At all.

I do wonder if ‘Unite them’ could have multiple meanings. To me, it seems as though Dalinar needs to unite the humans and the singers who aren’t consumed by Odium. The singers will lose just as much as the humans will if Odium wins.

I was gutted at Elhokar’s death. I’d hoped since the first book that he would become a lightweaver like Shallan. Speaking of which, was that his spren that Wit rescued at the end? I’m guessing yes.

Another thing I noticed was that during the Battle of Thaylen City, Lift’s POV mentions the nightwatcher promising that she wouldn’t get older. I wonder if that ties in to her assertion that she’s been ten three times back in WoR.

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7 years ago

Ash @@@@@ 73 – So he was actually going for something like “nonchalant” or “unperturbed”? For which there are perfectly good non-jarring words in existence, including “nonchalant” and “unperturbed”? That was an utterly needless shattering of my suspension of disbelief, then. Shame.

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Austin
7 years ago

Moash was never a squire, right? So how can he grab the Honorblade, suck in Stormlight, and Lash himself into the air like he’s been practicing forever?

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tommy
7 years ago

I don’t have the book at work so I need help if you can. I must have missed some details on the dustbringer radiant that Mr T had. Was she really a dustbringer or did he manage  to get a hold of the honor blade that granted those surges?

I feel like I must have drifted off over any explanation of what her deal was. I can’t remember any mention of her past her comments to Shallan in part one and Mr T saying something about finding some one to fill that role in his entourage. Does anyone have the time and memory to remind me?

 

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Ash
7 years ago

Muswell @75 I feel the same way, really.  My Kindle dictionary gave this nice explanation when I highlighted the word, “In standard use, nonplussed means ‘surprised and confused’…In North American English, a new use has developed in recent years, meaning ‘unperturbed’ – more or less the opposite of its traditional meaning…This new use probably arose on the assumption that non- was the normal negative prefix, and must therefore have a negative meaning.  Although the use is common, it is not yet considered standard.”  I don’t know how “recent” this “new use” is, but I’ve never seen it and it really pulled me out of the story.  I mean, I’m kind of old, at least a generation older than Sanderson, but I’m American and I read a ton and I’m pretty sure I’ve never read or heard this ‘unperturbed’ use of nonplussed.

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7 years ago

Oh, yeah, Lopen does get the award for Most Ridiculous First Ideal. Congrats, gancho.

“Journey before pancakes.” Don’t think I didn’t see what you did there, Alice.

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7 years ago

Also, with regards to “nonplussed”- I took it literally. As the review says, she may have just manifested her first Shardplate, in which case she would have been surprised at her sudden ability to throw Fused around.

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7 years ago

@70: Oh but I definitely agree with you and I do love this quote. Those were among my favorite scenes in the book.

My impressions, after reading the book, were a plenty. For instance, I got the impression to become a squire the first step was to… desire becoming a squire and to try. My other impression was to have a cracked spirit web you need not only to have lived through something susceptible to create them, you have to allow them to happen, in a way. As such, it isn’t Adolin has no reaction, but he is not allowing himself to break down under the pressure. He is not allowing whichever hardships life threw at him to crack him: he always bounces back, he tries harder, he refuses to let stress nor pressure make him back down. He does not crumble. He made me think of the Energizer Rabbit: nothing can stop him. Even when he is legitimately afraid, he takes charge, he takes over the leadership: he just meets up to all challenges to the best of his ability.

It has thus make me doubt he has the required spirit cracks needed to form a complete Nahel Bond with Maya (I have no idea if what he has forms a legit Nahel Bond as it is something we haven’t seen before). Every other examples of Radiants and brokenness we have seen were very… obvious except for Lopen, but Lopen is a special case so I think we can gloss over him.

With Adolin, it is not obvious. Is he cracked or not? As I have said earlier, unless Brandon gives us the answer via WoB, we are likely to still be debating this one on the eve of book 4’s release.

ChocolateRob
7 years ago

Sorry if it already came up but we ‘knew’ that we would be getting a book dealing with Eshonai’s flashbacks. Was that perhaps just a red herring and we’ll actually be getting them from Venli instead?

I don’t see how Eshonai’s backstory could be relevant anymore but Venli’s certainly would be.

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7 years ago

 I don’t have time to write a full review but I wanted to say. 

QUEEN JASNAH KOHLIN!

She should have been running things from the start. 

It might have been two small scenes near the end but I love the line where Shallan’s points what should be obvious to everyone. Then Jasnah’s entrance as told by Palona, it was perfect in my opinion.

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7 years ago

necessary_eagle @@@@@ 81 – I wondered if he was trying for that, but Adolin’s reaction along the lines of “Oh, it’s Jasnah, she can handle herself” doesn’t fit with that – if Adolin saw Jasnah looking surprised or confused, surely his response would be concern at what could possibly get that reaction from Jasnah. I’ve re-read that section several times trying to get a reading that makes sense to me, and the only way I can make it work is for “nonplussed” to have the intended meaning Ash’s Kindle offers as an uncommon alternative.

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Ash
7 years ago

necessary-eagle @81  I guess I can see that, I mean, I guess even Jasnah would be surprised at this new manifestation of shardplate.  But I still see that scene as Adolin seeing her ‘unperturbed’ and deciding she didn’t need help, not surprised at anything going on around her, but I could be wrong.

ChocolateRob
7 years ago

Well now we know why the Shin consider standing on stone to be a sin – Because the stones belong to the Parsh, not to the Humans. Humans were supposed to stay in Shinovar where there is soil.

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7 years ago

It’s Tuesday and there are no new chapters. How long would it have taken to read the whole book that way? At least we don’t have to read the Brandon avalanche at such a slow pace.

Of course Adolin is bonded to Maya. She is his bonded Shardblade. It just might not be the same kind of bond the Radiants have.

Vivenna is looking for Nightblood. She probably thinks that Vasher might know where it is. Where was Vasher during the battles? Has he seen Szeth and Nightblood?

And where was Rlain during the battle? Did he also practice with the Honorblade?

Shallan’s brothers are obviously broken. Will they become her squires?

Malata does seem to have a spren. She says it loves destroying things when Taravangian wonders if it will cooperate with their treason.

Brandon always said that just because a characters has a flashback book they don’t have to be still alive. Eshonai was the one who went exploring and first met humans, not Venli.

I always thought the Shin originally mistrusted stone because it could be turned into thunderclasts, but it makes sense that they remember having to stay in their part of Roshar.

Since I’m not reading the book in my native language a single word used in an unfamiliar sense is hardly an uncommon thing. This comment contains a lot of words the spellcheck doesn’t know, but nobody complains about those (of course most are names).

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7 years ago

For what it’s worth, the only usage I’ve ever seen of “nonplussed” is to indicate that one is unruffled, or unperturbed. I’m shocked to hear from all of you that it meant something different once, Brandon’s usage is exactly the way I’ve always seen it. 

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Whitespine
7 years ago

Tommy,

 There was a scene with the dustbringer and Mr. T where it is confirmed that she really does have a spren (seems like it might be the Ash spren we saw in Shadesmar) and she simply doesn’t side with the traditional knights radiant. Her spren (and its kind) are still distrusting/angry at the humans for the betrayal and death they caused to the spren. So they are willing to side with Odium along with the rest of the Diagram.

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7 years ago

Thanks for the review, Alice and Paige!

I enjoyed this book.  The review hits on a lot of topics that I could expand upon, but I guess I’ll just touch on a few.

We got so much more information then I ever expected for book 3 of a 10 book series (or book 3 of the first 5, if you prefer)!  We meet Odium!  We explore Shadesmar!  We find out what caused the Recreance!  I expected some of this to be drawn out to later books.

I really liked the development of Adolin and Shallan’s relationship here.  I had faith that Brandon would subvert the trope that the main male protagonist (Kaaladin) and female protagonist (Shallan) would meet and fall in love, just because they’re the main characters.  And Brandon did, in a wild and different way (I appreciated that an aspect of Shallan would be attracted to Kaladin, but that the core portion of her character realized that Adolin was the right fit for her.

I like that Adolin started the slow process of reconnecting with his sword.  And Lift being able to infiltrate Dalinar’s visions (and hide from Odium).  And the fight with Re-Shephnir!  And Lopen saying the Second Ideal in a non-dramatic moment!  And Lyn and the female squires of Bridge Four!  And…

There are so many “favorite parts,” but the scene I enjoy rereading the most is when Kaladin flies back to retrieve Skar and Drehy, and we see that they also saved Gavinor.  “We protect those who cannot protect themselves” indeed.  Brought chills and tears to my eyes the first time I read it, and it brings a smile (and possibly tears) every other time I read that part.  They saved Gavinor!

This leads to the parts of the book that hurt to read.  Elhokar’s death was a freaking gut punch to the stomach.  I was never a big Elhokar fan, but I also didn’t dislike him.  He tried.  He knew he had flaws, but he tried.  In the early parts of Oathbringer he starts to take charge, grow a backbone.  He even  (sadly) allows for the likelihood that he might not be enough to rescue his city and family, so he invites Kaladin to the party.  He was becoming the hero that he aspired to be.  And right at that moment, freaking Brandon has Moash kill him?!?!  With Gavinor in his arms!?!?  Yeah, that hurt to read.  (Also, the casual dismissal of Eshonai, and how Evi died, and the demise of Kholinar, and…)

Moash and Taravangian are villians that I now love to hate (even moreso than after WoR), and I look forward to their demise in future books almost as much as I enjoyed seeing Rock end Amaram, or Adolin end Sadeas. 

I can’t wait until the reread.  And I plan to reread the comments from the preview chapters when I get a chance, and I will probably be as amused at our comments and speculation as the beta readers were when we first made them…

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Melissa
7 years ago

@61 – Nightblood is from Warbreaker. It was made by Vasher (Zahel) and Shashara. We still don’t know how Nightblood got onto Roshar but we know that Zahel (Vasher) is there and Vivenna (Azure) is also there looking for it. It is unlikely that Nightblood is an unmade. 

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7 years ago

Well, I finished Oathbringer. There was honestly so much to read and now I have no idea what to say about it, but I think many of the other commentators are making a good start. :)

@55 Melissa
In WoK Dalinar is surprised half of the Parshendi they fight are apparently female. Because the battles are so far away, none of the scholars (women and ardents) have probably ever seen the Parshendi up close. Thus in all the years of fighting they’ve basically done no research in the Parshendi as a people.

They were also super interested in the Chasmfiends, specifically because their gemhearts were emerald, and capable of making food.

@59 mai_
Ooh, that’s going to be painful.

@68 Gepeto
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Well Lopen was broken enough to attract a spren, so I think the readers who pointed out the problems of our main characters are probably much more extreme than most old Knights are correct. Adolin is probably broken enough to ‘qualify’ for Radianthood, especially since, based on the Starfalls vision I think the hard part might be actually attracting a spren, and he has one in Maya.

@70, 78 Wetlandernw
I agree with you about Adolin. I wonder if this is also part of Alethi culture. The books have referenced a few times that their culture itself is rather reserved, and expressive emotions are frowned upon. So as the son of a Highprince, he simply doesn’t have the luxury of expressing these emotions during battle.

I thought Kaladin was physically exhausted due to his stormlight running out, as well as mentally frozen during that scene, so combined with the shock of seeing Moash again for the first time after ignoring his betrayal until know, he might simply not have been able to do something quickly enough. He clearly wasn’t reacting at 100% there.  

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Axcellence
7 years ago

I hope someone reads it, because 94 comments in already!

Loved the book BUT PLOTHOLES GALORE!

1. Kal’s failed ideal per the article

2. Szeth’s easy integration with the rest of the radiants.  The dude has killed monarchs all over the world and caused the oathpact by killing Gavilar. But, hey come in.  Join the party and be the bodyguard to the dude who you tried to kill at the end of book 2!  While he writes a book and attends a wedding. Nobody else objects and hey, honorblades with Shin and Taravangian’s oathstone driven orders… let’s forget anout that shall we?

3. Nale realises he has to side with Parshmen now?  He’s known the secret of the recreance for 500 years! And now apparently he’s following the law of the land…. riight.  Where was he during Gavilar’s death? Telling Kelek it’s all ok?  What about the fight for the parshendi fight at the shattered plains?

I can go on, but yeah… it’ll be tricky to right the ship past book 4 at this rate.

 

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7 years ago

I finished reading my book round close to 3am on Saturday morning, so my memory of the end is pretty unreliable.

Saying that, I do wonder if the reason people trust Szeth is because Dalinar being a bondsmith knows all about oaths and therefore knows that the oath is genuine? And has told people so offscreen.

Probably not though, I missed the whole “Dalinar ascends” bit at the end so my memory is really patchy.

 

 

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Austin
7 years ago

Anybody else bummed that we got zero reaction to Jasnah being alive? She makes a dramatic entrance at the end of Part 1 and then the next part time skips a little and it’s like, oh hey, she’s alive. Moving on. 

Steve-son-son-Charles
7 years ago

Before reading all the comments, I thought I would just jot down a few initial thoughts after finishing the book.

First off, this book is much different than SA1 & SA2 in the sense of the intimacy of the characters. We went from a few headspaces to many many many headspaces. The scope of the series took a major step forward… the best I can think of is that it went from the Hobbit to Lord of the Rings (scope / world building, not thematic).

Also, I was really please that a lot of the question or theories we have been discussing in the (many) re-reads were addressed (not, evidently all 100% finalized and put to rest, which is great!), rather than just being ignored or given tiny frustrating hints. Doing so also opened up a lot more questions for us to have great discussions while we wait for SA4.

Other thoughts:

– I had theorized that the KR spren could be corrupted by Odium, but it turns out it was an Unmade that could do that… I thought that was well played. Throughout the book, we had hints dropped that Odium was getting info from team Good Guys somehow. BA used Renarin’s inherent weirdness to make it just seem like his regular weirdness, when he was actually up to something else entirely. Nicely done, really enjoyed this arc of the story – especially the bond between Renarin and Jasnah, who obviously have a really interesting (parallel?) past while growing up. That bond will be fascinating to go and visit in their back-story.

– Was not much of a fan of the whole Shadesmar stuff. I mean, it was cool and interesting, but I thought this was the weakest part of the book.  It felt too…. Malazan to me. Almost like… gonna put these guys here and get them when I need them for the big final arc.

– The bridgemen had a lot of interesting POVs, which was not expected… I though we would see a lot more from Rlain. That was probably the most shocking part of this book – his virtual absence. Also, Rock – the high of being reunited with his family, to being the true glue behind B4, and the heartbreak of having to break his personal vow when killing Araman. (Also, long game play on the bow skills from BS!)

– Glad the whole Shalan / Adolin / Kaladin stuff is done with. Finally… move on people, nothing to see here! 

– Lift: I believe she will end up being the most important character in the series. We further see that she is physically maturing (from Edgedancer), so what did the Nighwatcher or Cultivation do to the boon/curse wise? I had a theory that Dalinar and Lift were experiencing the diminishing of the influence of the curse/boon as they started accepting responsibility from which they were trying to to flee from, resulting in them getting back memories (Dalinar) and changes in physical (Lift). I was mostly wrong, but sort of right (for Dalinar) in a round about way. Will be interesting to see what is going on with Lift, as I am convinced she also dealt with Cultivation directly. Also, what is the deal with Lift just showing up in Dalinar’s visions as she wishes, and also, being able to hide from Odium! Gimme. Me. More. Already!

– Unlike many people, Szeth is my favourite character. I just think his arc / story is utterly fascinating. I also love the fact that Nightblood and Lift (my second fav character) interact so much. I  get a sense Lift not only physically heals people, but also somehow mentally / spiritually heals people.I hope to see Szeth – Lift – Nightblood interact a lot moving forward.

– Moash – did not see that coming, either the killing of Elhokar or Jezrien… I never expected any redemption arc from Moash, but I suspect (base don what happened in this book ) that he might play a much bigger part in this series going forward. I do like how BS showed the different path Kaladin and Moash took, in essentially doing the same thing in the early part of the book… helping the same group of Listeners. You got the initial impression Moash would be to the Listeners as Kaladin was to B4. But we once again saw how weak Moash is of character and easy to corrupt. I though that was really well done.

– The whole “voidbringers are the humans” was not really a shock, as I saw them as invaders to Roshar once it had been confirmed they had not originated on this planet. But there has to be something deeper to the KR abandoning their spren, as that seemed a weak excuse to me… I am convinced we have just seen the tip of the iceberg on this one.

– Finally, Dalinar. His backstory was not entirely surprising, although I did not expect to dislike younger Dalinar as much as I did, which was really well written. Also, I did not expect to be having an “Has he Ascended” discussion, or whether he is/remains a sliver of Honour or has passed along / returned that power (and to whom?) for the next few years, either. Part of me really hopes BS RAFOs every question on this topic.

 

 

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7 years ago

@95 That’s a very… odd definition of plothole you have there. Consider me nonplussed.

1) A character freezing in battle is hardly a plothole

2) We have no idea if Szeth has integrated easily. The denouement of a book, it surely need not be said, is not the place to talk about that kind of issue.

3) Nale’s character has changed drastically in just a few in world weeks. (See Edgedancer.) Of course he doesn’t have the same opinions now as he did 500 years ago.

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7 years ago

Wetlandernw @88:

Muswell @71 and others – Don’t get me started… In the USA, nonplussed has been so misused that the (online, anyway) dictionaries are starting to list this almost-totally-opposite meaning as one of the definitions. I find it deeply annoying, but there are those who insist that language drift is perfectly acceptable. So, yes, in the USA, many people will use nonplussed to mean “unfazed” or “confident” or “unaffected”. *sigh*  (Yes, we had this … discussion … in the gamma.)

We also had this discussion in the Edgedancer re-read.  I’m with you.

See also: “literally” in modern American usage.

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7 years ago

I’m currently reading this for the second time, because the first was overwhelming and JUST NOT ENOUGH.  A lot of my reactions have already been posted by others, but I figure it can’t hurt to share anyway.

I cried so much for these people.  Eshonai, Teft, Elhokar, Shallan, Dalinar, Renarin. . .  Hell, it would be easier to list the people I didn’t cry for.  I kept hoping, from the Kelek icons, that Eshonai had bonded to a Willshaper spren and was actually only playing dead when Venli saw her, but I seem to have hoped in vain.  I still hope there’s some echo of her left, though, and we’ll see it with Venli.  In every Moash chapter, I keep finding encouraging little notes telling him I believed in him that are absolutely enraging now.   And now that I know how Evi died, I can’t help but look at every instance where Dalinar wishes a room-heating fabrial was an actual fire and wince in sympathy for his eventual pain.  

Shallan both seriously annoyed me, and had my complete sympathy.  I think it’s sort of how people viewed Kaladin in Words of Radiance–I was never annoyed by his character arc myself, probably because I feel like he did a lot, but I can see how his foot-dragging and brooding annoyed some people.  (I think that’s going to continue to be a theme in these books:  just because the characters have realized their power, or accomplished something amazing, they aren’t miraculously “fixed” and may even become more damaged before they recover.  I love this!)  In Shallan’s case, I was so worried for her but I also wanted to shake her. . .kind of like my little sister, actually.  I knew things were going to come crashing down on her at some point, and I’m glad Wit was there to help her when she really needed it.  I also remember scolding her for even thinking about romance when she hadn’t sorted her own mind out yet.  I’m glad she didn’t end up with Kaladin, because so many of their interactions seemed sibling-like to me, and it would have squicked me right the heck out.

Adolin.  Adolin is amazing here.  I don’t think he’s going to break and and form a Nahel bond.  I think he is going to be the stable one in the bond with his Blade, and she the broken one. I love how he is so resilient, so understatedly competent and supportive, and insightful when the other characters least expect it.  I’m not saying he’s perfect or without vulnerabilities, but I don’t think he’ll be breaking anytime soon.  Maya, on the other hand, has been broken for a long time, and I think Adolin can revive her not by needing her to fill in the gaps in his soul, but by helping her repair herself.  No idea as to whether that will make him an Edgedancer or not, though.

Dalinar’s story was painful but rewarding to witness.  During one of Kaladin’s chapters, he muses about how he’s lived four different lives since leaving home:  Dalinar was like that.  He’s been warrior, general, drunkard, and Elhokar’s right-hand man–not to mention husband and father.  He wasn’t perfect as any of them, and he might not be perfect as a Bondsmith, either.  But he keeps on taking that next step, and I love him for it.

And Kaladin. . .well, he’s so much himself that he broke a Lightweaving.  :-D  I’m not glad he didn’t reach the Fourth Ideal, or that he froze when his friends were killing each other, but I’m thinking it was bound to happen at some point.  He keeps on getting impossible situations thrown at him, and so far he’s managed to rally every time, but not always immediately.  This seems to be like his early days in Bridge Four, when he just couldn’t deal (well, to me, anyway).  It’s bad that it happened, but I have faith that he’ll get past it eventually.  And the Fourth Ideal seems to be pretty hard to attain, from that one message left in sapphire.

Vivenna has truly become badass.  >:D

Szeth. . .I have to think about him some more, and reread his sections.

And now that the book is read, I have MORE QUESTIONS.  The Bondsmith spren–WHO IS YOUR THIRD SIBLING, STORMFATHER?!–what happened to Vivenna and Vasher that led to them worldhopping, and is Urithiru actually a spacecraft?

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7 years ago

@78: I couldn’t blame Kaladin in the Elhokar getting stab by Moash’s scene. All this book, he tried to figure out which group of people he ought to protect. He saw how the Parshmen weren’t necessarily his enemies and, during this one scene, he saw two groups of friends trying to kill each other: he was powerless to stop it. His “Please STOP” was heart-wrenching because I too wanted them to stop fighting, to shake hands and to realize they both want the same things. 

Thus while Kaladin, a veteran soldier should have protected Elhokar, he should not have frozen, he did. And Elhokar died. I thought it was a really good scene and the only individual I was angry at was Moash,,,

Speaking of which, count me in within the “I do not want Moash to redeem himself” team. I’ll admit I pestered in Part 2 over being forced to read him as he felt too much like Kaladin and I expected him to have exactly the same progression but no. I love what Brandon did here and I hope Moash will stay a villain because yeah, not everyone manages to overcome their flaws.

@88: Ah cool. Can’t wait to read the Maya discussion.

@94: The reason I do not really consider Lopen is I feel his character becoming a Radiant was more of a “give-away” to the fans then real, much like the shardfork. Nothing in the text highlights Lopen is 1) behaving like a Windrunner, 2) broken and yet he is one of our first Windrunners. I thus classified him as “friendly gift to the readers”. Whether or not Adolin qualifies remains to be better explained. If I think Brandon can easily get away with it by making Lopen a Radiant, Adolin is a too hot topic for him to skip on the “why he is broken”. Or just to make readers feel it. It’s OK we didn’t get it in OB, but to progress with Maya, I do think this is something Brandon will need to broach.

On the matter of expressing emotions during battles, Dalinar speaks of having seen soldiers getting the “chills” after fights and getting very emotional, so yeah, Alethi aren’t immune to it. Kadash lost it at the Rift. Kaladin froze. Adolin is just very resilient and he has an “I will not give up attitude” as shown by his fight against the thunderclast.

@98: I have seen readers argue this is not over… I have read arguments saying Shallan is not really Shallan, she doesn’t really love Adolin, she can’t love him as she doesn’t love herself and this marriage is doomed to fail… So huh, I wouldn’t say this is done, yet.

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7 years ago

@94 Elle

I’d caution in saying that Lopen is minimally broken because he jokes around a lot and generally seems like he’s happy. Sometime the more humorous people are also dealing dark demons. Remember why Lopen knew all the Herdazian and one-armed Herdazian jokes was to steal the power from those jokes by being the one to tell them. This means by inference those jokes did have the power to hurt Lopen. Also look at Shallan we get a lot of her inner dialog so we know exactly how broken she is but Kaladin is constantly amazed that she’s able to be normal and not hurt. (IRL consider Robin Williams.)

I just don’t like the idea of putting a minimum requirement on brokenness in any case. Pain is relative for the person feeling it. Even though Jasnah says that a person needs to be broken in someway for the power to enter them, I just get the feeling that it’s more important that the person try to personify an Ideal more than it is to be broken. I think it’s giving more importance then necessary to the idea of brokenness. 

As for Adolin, I could see him being someone who would make the Edgedancer oath to remember those who have been forgotten. But I think it would be cooler if he revived Maya and she kept fighting with him without having a Nahel bond. It’s a new era it could happen. 

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7 years ago

@97 Austin

I am right their with you. I had been looking forward to that interaction between Shallan and Jasnah. When it comes to Brandon I’m usually very happy to go along with the ride that he’s controlling but this is one place where I wanted to see that scene. 

That and I want to see Jasnah and Kaladin interact. They are my two favorite characters and just want to see that but other than Jasnah asking Shallan’s opinion on Kal, we got nothing.

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7 years ago

@104:  They did talk in a conference, and Jasnah seems to like Kaladin as a strong-willed dissenter, even if it’s her he’s dissenting against.  Could spell a good working relationship going forward, especially now that Jasnah is the Queen.

Did anyone else really want fanart of Kaladin being swarmed by mink kits and Jasnah surrounded by baby skyeels after that chapter?

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7 years ago

On Adolin and his level of “brokenness”:

1st, wasn’t there a WOB saying that there’s more than one way to open a soul to bonding than being broken? But even if being broken is the only way to go about getting a Nahel bond, outward expression does not necessarily imply internal conflict or brokenness. See Lopen. Not everyone who is broken will display it in the same way. Some people use other means to mask exactly how broken they are. Queen Jas buries herself in scholarship, Adolin in discipline, Lopen in jokes and fatalistic optimism. 

On unresolved plotlines:

One, Brandon has gotten the doctorate course in foreshadowing from the Master. Things we may have overlooked now will certainly become important, even vital later. We just don’t know enough yet. Two, everyone realizes that we aren’t even 1/3 through this series yet, right? Some of these issues will get addressed in the next book, some we won’t get resolution until maybe the end.  For the WOT readers, remember how long it took to get textual confirmation on who killed Asmodean?  The point is he’s gonna be working on this series for at least the next 10 years. He’s only now getting into the meat of SA. Stay for the ride; I’m sure the Stormcellar has plenty of room.

On Dalinar and Unity:

Did our Bondsmith become a larger fragment of Honor, a sub-Shard maybe? Or could he be the melding of Honor, Odium and Cultivation? He has been touched by all three. Odium’s Thrill, Cultivation and her pruning, Honor bonded to Stormfather. Like Sazed becoming Harmony, Dalinar holds 3 shards of Adoalasium*sp. Unlike Sazed, his hold on the three are uneven for now. He has more of Honor cause nobody’s holding that shattered shard. Rayse still holds Odium, Cultivation isn’t shattered either.

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7 years ago

 Don’t get where this claim that we’ve seen enough to know that Adolin isn’t broken comes from. We have no basis for that. We DO have some basis for the idea that his father’s rejection of him caused some kind of emotional damage though.Parental rejection is a major cause of emotional problems in the real world. He tried harder and harder to please his father, and that is his response always. Not good enough? Try harder. That’s actually not a healthy behaviour when it comes to being rejected by others and can push a person into some pretty dark places. I’m prepared to wait and see where this goes, as we just haven’t seen enough of Adolin’s reflections on his childhood to make any definitive pronouncements on that.

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7 years ago

I think Adolin will break when the in-world OB comes out and he learns how his mother died and how his father resented him for reminding him of her. Renarin maybe less so because he already thought Dalinar didn’t love him but Adolin has spent his life trying to emulate his father.

I believe in the next book that we have a good chance of seeing Rlain and Venli meeting. They will both find out they are not the last of the listeners, plus we still have that missing group that did not join the Everstorm. It was also interesting to find out that the patterns on their skin are at least a little like the dark eyes/light eyes with some being much more desirable than others.

 

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7 years ago

@106: It is my perspective readers readily accept Jasnah and Lopen as being broken in ways we have yet to see/explore. Adolin is another matter as his viewpoints have pictured him as someone really resilient: he is always pro-active, optimist, set on doing something is, etc. He doesn’t read like a broken person, I mean, let’s compare him to any other character. Lopen (or Jasnah or Renarin) we can always say that’s because we know nothing about him, we can fill the holes with our imagination, but Adolin? We do know and we do know how he reacted. Can we really say he is broken?

@107: Oh I agree with you here. If Brandon pushes it this way in book 4, I will be thoroughly satisfied. I have been saying, for a long time, how Adolin trying to please Dalinar was not healthy and while the book did show Adolin did work hard to please a father who actually hated him (this came as s surprise… Dalinar hating Adolin all through his teenage years and ignoring Renarin like all his life), I felt it skipped on the denouement. We know Adolin never gives up and always tries harder every time, so far he has always succeeded, is it because, like Shallan, Brandon is preparing to make him fail in book 4? It could be, but for now, the Dalinar/Adolin interaction didn’t feel right. They both just happily agree Adolin is not Born Into Light as Dalinar wanted him to be, but how can you shove 23 years of expectations away as if they never happened so casually? 

I really wish Brandon ties the loop on this one in book 4 and not gloss over it.

@108: I do hope Adolin will learn the truth and I do hope he will not react by… not really reacting as he had all through the book or by just “being fine with it”. I hope this story arc is not over yet, but seeing how little inter-character conflict Brandon was willing to write for OB, I have doubts this will ever be featured. Seems to me like such conflicts do not have their place anymore in SA: OB was a resolutely plot oriented book. I expect book 4 to be the same.

I agree it should be less of a deal to Renarin because he grew up thinking/knowing his father didn’t care much for him. If anything Dalinar’s behavior got better towards him as he aged whereas with Adolin, it got worst.

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MisterKerr
7 years ago

I wanted to like this more than I did. I’m not saying that means it wasn’t good, just that whatever expectations I was holding didn’t quite get met. Just a few examples below:

1) Dalinar’s flashbacks, for me, were pretty underwhelming. We already knew the Blackthorn was a tyrant, and the rest was easy to guess (Evi was nice, Dalinar killed her, he went crazy with grief, finally had it taken away). I think there were only two real surprises in this plotline. The first was that he only accidentally killed Evi. I thought her death would be him getting too much into the Thrill, like when he nearly murdered Gavilar, and striking her down directly when she got in the way of his revenge. I think this would’ve been a stronger choice, too, as it makes his acceptance of his pain mean more when the hardest part for him wasn’t accidental. The second was that he met Cultivation and became part of her long game, though that’s more interesting for the story as a whole and not Dalinar’s character arc in particular. It also didn’t help that “Dalinar without his pain” and “Dalinar accepting of his pain” are pretty much the same character, just with more superpowers in the latter case, so for me those chapters were a bit of a slog because I felt I didn’t learn much I couldn’t have already guessed.

Also not helpful: the fact that his character climax made me think of Star Trek V (“I don’t want my pain taken away! I need my pain!”)

It was almost worth it, though, to see little Adolin and understand his character that much better.

2) The reason for the Recreance: I ain’t buying it. Not the fact that the humans were originally invaders (which didn’t surprise me, as I thought I had read somewhere online that they weren’t native to Roshar, so it wasn’t that big of a reveal), but that learning this caused all the Knights (save the Skybreakers) to abandon their oaths and stop protecting the land. Seriously, if the US military somehow didn’t know that Christopher Columbus, or Cortez, or Andrew Jackson were terrible people when it came to the Native Americans, but then somehow found out, would they suddenly disband? I don’t think so! Wherever their ancestors are from or what they did, most people want to protect their current homeland from threats, and giving up their KR powers works against that. Maybe some of the more Honorbound felt that it was the right thing to do, but all of them? There’s *got* to be more to this.

3) I’m not onboard the “Taravangian Hate” train either. Sure, he’s done some terrible things, but it’s hard to tell how well he is in the head at any point. Plus, if his curse/boon comes from The Nightwatcher and probably Cultivation (who seems to have a good eye for the long game), then I think his actions will ultimately thwart Odium’s design, no matter what deal he seems to have struck. I’d like to see sometime in the future a “True Taravangian” freed of his fluctuating intelligence/morality who has to live with his actions, and judge him then. Moash, on the other hand, is pretty deserving of all the hate he gets thrown at him, though he’s another example in Brandon’s line of “villains who are perfectly justified, at least in their own brains” that he’s so good at. I wonder if, in the end, Odium himself will have some sort of sympathetic backstory, just to make his defeat at least slightly bittersweet.

4) Kaladin. At first I wasn’t buying his freezing-up moment and how nearly catatonic it left him for so long, as he’s a war veteran and should understand that wars are fought between nations, not soldiers, and good people are on both sides. But after reading comments here I think it’s more tied to his Radiance and perhaps the Fourth Ideal than it is his own sensibilities as a soldier, so I’m more OK with it now.

5) This isn’t an issue with the book, but just a question: have we seen at least one example of all of the ten orders of the Knights Radiant now? If not, which orders are we missing?

6) There’s probably more that I’ll think of later.

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7 years ago

@102 Gepeto
Hmm, I’m kind of hoping Lopen wasn’t just a ‘gift to the fans’, because we already had one ‘squire turning Radiant’ in Teft, and I also think Brandon Sanderson is very good at sticking to the rules he makes up for his magic systems, so Lopen must fit the Windrunner requirements somehow.

Of course humans aren’t stones (or spren), and will express emotions, but from what we’ve read Alethi society seems to discourage open expressions of emotion.
And Adolin seems to be quite experienced at pushing away emotions such as grief, nervousness, etc, at moments they’re not convenient. It might be his training as a future Highprince, it might be from the part of his personality that ‘tries harder when chastised’, I don’t know.

@103 kei_rin
You’re right, I worded that very awkwardly, and I edited my first comment to be more clear. Pain and trauma should never be a competition.
I was trying argue the same point you’re making now about Adolin. Just because he seems okay, and because he’s good at ‘grieving later’ as he says during both Sureblood’s and Elhokar’s death, doesn’t mean he isn’t terribly hurt by these losses.
But Lopen, overall, even from his own point of view, seems to have a much healthier coping system than our main Radiants do, regardless of how ‘broken’ he is. I was kind of basing this on how Kaladin says Lopen was never broken by the bridge crews, but like you said, Kaladin can be completely wrong about this, see: Shallan.

And I agree with you about Maya. :)

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Sarah
7 years ago

I’m thinking that Kaladin’s Fourth Windrunner Ideal will be something along the lines of “I will protect even though I may fail” – which would explain why he agonized over whether or not he could mean the words. It’s been something he’s struggled with since the very beginning.

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@110: I personally think the fact Dalinar accidentally killed Evi by going forward for a drastic town elimination plan she was firmly set against made for greater drama than him just losing it to the Thrill. Evi died for her conviction, she died because she was kind and she died because Dalinar didn’t deserve her. He wouldn’t listen to her. He killed all of Tanalan’s messengers. He wanted revenge because he was outwitted. He wanted revenge because he lost one battle and he was willing to let every living soul pay for his bruised ego. The fact it ended up in Evi dying just made for a more horrifying story then the alternative, IMHO.

Little Adolin was 100% adorable. A child’s love for a parent can have no limits.

@111: It may be you are right about Lopen, but I will admit, when I read it, I thought it was Brandon pleasing the fans with a small scene much like he pleased many with the shardfork. This being said, others above have pointed out Lopen might have an untold story and the fact his character is used for such comical relief is over-shadowing it. I am willing to buy it: it is true we know nothing of him, so let’s use our imagination.

Good point about Adolin. My point however remains, If Brandon pushes forward with the Maya revival story in book 4, I personally suspect, if readers are not getting how Adolin is broken, it will harm what ought to be a really amazing story arc. I guess I just want more exposure on Adolin so we get a stronger sense of how hardships are affecting him. I also want to know where are his limits.

For my part, I am within the “I want Adolin to revive Maya and him to be her new knight” bandwagon. 

 

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7 years ago

@76, Austin:

Moash was never a squire, right? So how can he grab the Honorblade, suck in Stormlight, and Lash himself into the air like he’s been practicing forever?

 

I had assumed that Moash’s  body was possessed by a power of Odium, presumably one of the Singer ancestors. However, rereading that passage now I see that this isn’t really justified by the text.

@83, ChocolateRob:

Sorry if it already came up but we ‘knew’ that we would be getting a book dealing with Eshonai’s flashbacks. Was that perhaps just a red herring and we’ll actually be getting them from Venli instead?

I don’t see how Eshonai’s backstory could be relevant anymore but Venli’s certainly would be.

 

They aren’t separate. Eshonai and Venli are sisters, after all.

@106, EvilMonkey:

The point is he’s gonna be working on this series for at least the next 10 years. He’s only now getting into the meat of SA. Stay for the ride; I’m sure the Stormcellar has plenty of room.

 

10 years? You really think BWS will finish 7 more books in 10 years? At this point (as I once said to him at a convention) I fully expect to be dead long before the Stormlight Archive is finished, much less the Cosmere origin and wrapup books. I’m older than he is, and at this point he’d have to be in his 80s by the time he gets there.

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Totoropaws
7 years ago

Oathbringer was so much fun! Can we also talk about how FUNNY it was?? There were definitely a few sections where I was laughing out loud (like when Shallan Lightwove a grotesque face for Kal and later on when Kal’s trying to ingratiate himself with Azure’s lighteyes troops and asking “But…how can you say that? He’s a lighteyes, like us!”)

Adolin is still my favorite character, not just because of his compassion and positivity, but also bc his chapters are the only ones where the same broody complaints aren’t being rehashed over and over again. His interludes with Maya were so sympathetic and wonderful. I can’t wait to see where it does. And I’m glad Shallan came to her senses and realize Broody McWindrunner wasn’t right for her, but the PDA afterwards was so gross I almost regretted #Shadolin (I feel u Brightness Teshav). And Dalinar’s comment “Adolin was not the man Dalinar thought he was–but then, couldn’t he forgive someone for that?” Okay, that one liner made me dislike Dalinar more than any of his backstory reveal. Who the hell are you to forgive Adolin for recognizing himself as not the best candidate for regency? And exactly what kind of man did you think your kind, brave, resilient son was?

I’m surprised this review didn’t talk more about evil mastermind Taravangian and his unnecessarily convoluted plot to save the world!

And S/O to my fave interlude-only characters Vstim and Rysn, really touching scene and such great character dev in just a short chapter.

What’s it gonna mean for Jasnah now that she’s King of Alethkar?? I’m actually surprised she would accept, I thought she would want to spend more time on scholarly pursuits than administer a country.

Okay, gonna go read the entire three books over again now.

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7 years ago

I found the book to be fabulous! I sucked it in like stormlight!

@@@@@ 44 Dholton – I liked the way you said “Using Alethi glyphs as a form of written communication has to be like trying to communicate by emoji”. It made me pause and reconsider the glyphs in that light.

@@@@@19 Gepeto – I think it would be really sweet of Adolin and Shallan to adopt a raise Gavinor.  I’m assuming he will be Jasnah’s heir?  I can’t see her getting married and having kids.

One thing that stuck out to me was when Dalinar visited Cultivation, and she said that she hadn’t come personally in a couple of centuries.  That made me think right away of Lift. I don’t think Brandon would have specifically mentioned a timeline unless it was important.  Otherwise, Cultivation could have said something like “I don’t come personally very often”, or similar.  I recall reading something in WoK that Lift smelled of Cultivation  to Wyndel.  So maybe that is because Lift actually saw Cultivation, not just Nightwatcher. Also, so far as we can see, all Nightwatcher boon/curses are permanent. The only one we see so far that isn’t is Dalinar, and in Edgedancer, Lift acknowledges that she is growing up now, which means her boon (as far as we know it) isn’t static. So I think that we now have our confirmation that Lift in centuries old. (It also explains the glimpses we get of wisdom and unexpected depth that she has for a little kid).

I would love to see more Ryshadium, and how Dalinar and Adolin partnered them. Will any of our new Radiants get chosen by one?

I can’t remember any mention of Vasher in the book, except indirectly of Vivi looking for him.  Where is he now?

I would have loved to see more Rlain.  I hope he also becomes a squire!  Poor guy.

I loved the Oathgate artwork in the book!

I hope we meet Kaladin’s baby brother again!

Keep up the comments and speculations!

 

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7 years ago

My prediction (based upon wishful thinking and nothing concrete) is that within the next 10 years Brandon will:

Finish the Front 5 SA

Complete Mistborn era 2

Be at least one book maybe 2 into Mistborn Era 3

Either do Elantris 2 or Warbreaker 2

And at least 3 other wonky projects, one of them Cosmere based. 

I don’t think that’s terribly too much to ask for.

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7 years ago

@114: How can he revive Maya and not bond her? Didn’t Brandon say to revive a dead-spren one would need to take the place of its former knight? I am not the best realmatic theorist (in fact I may be one of the worst), but I can’t see how he could revive her while not bonding her. If she is alive and not bonded to him (hypothetical scenario), then she won’t have any link to the Physical Realm, she’d be in Shadesmar, so how can she partner up with Adolin? Sprens only gain conscience of the Physical Realm with the Nahel Bond, without it, I am afraid Maya will remain, dead. 

Also, if whatever it is Adolin has with Maya is not a Nahel Bond, albeit a broken one, then how can she have awareness of him? How can she talk to him? We know from Oathbringer dead-Blades have some conscience of the physical realm, but being able to interact with their knight is a first.

@116: Dalinar: worst father ever. The man I think he believes Adolin was is this perfected image of himself: a great leader, of men, a man living by the codes of Honor: he kind of says it over his newborn son. This line showed how Adolin was never going to be good enough for Dalinar. I hope this story arc is not over, too many things have not been explored yet.

I want Gallant to ditch Dalinar and to bond Adolin.

Adolin and Shallan has Gavinor’s new family is plain awesome. The boy will need a family. It won’t be Dalinar who’ll provide it.

On Jasnah being Queen: I loved it. She realistically is the best one for the job and kudos to Adolin to do what Elhokar did not do. Give the crown to someone better.

FenrirMoridin
7 years ago

I dunno, with how Shallan and Adolin act, I feel like they may be too busy trying to make babies of their own to have time to raise Elhokar’s son.

Now, so-burned-by-love-he-just-accepts-every-woman-he-even-has-a-bit-of-affection-for-ends-up-with-someone-else Kaladin?  I want to see Adoptive Dad Brooding Eyes!

And while that seems unlikely, having Bridge 4 as your army of wacky uncles sounds like the awesome sitcom we were denied when Shallan’s fragmenting personality went the sobering and tragic route.

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7 years ago

@75, It’s probably a malapropism for “nonchalant”.

@61, re: Szeth’s sword, go read Warbreaker, you’ll see why.

@50, I wasn’t saying Renarin is a Voidbringer (whatever that even means anymore), just that his powers might belong to this other set. Not all Surgebinders are Knights Radiant, so too not all Voidbinders would be “evil”. The relationship between Surgebinding and Voidbinding might be similar to the relationship between Allomancy and Feruchemy, where the latter pair is characterized by use of metals, the former pair could be characterized by spren-bonding. My theory is that Voidbinding allows access to one Surge from the Surgebinding chart, and then something else–in Renarin’s case he would be able to do Regrowth, and the something else would be seeing the future as these stained-glass images. Even the glyphs on the Voidbinding chart (I’m assuming that’s what it is, but it’s the double-eye on the back endpapers of WoK) support this, where the Surge glyphs are symmetrical about a line, the analogous glyphs are just the same glyphs redesigned to be symmetrical about a point. As for operating the Oathgate, Odium never used the Thaylen City Oathgate, his spren was summoned into the Physical Realm by the emotions of the people there, and as for Kholinar, Sja-anat only corrupted the sprens there to sabotage it, she couldn’t actually use it to transport anyone. It was Malata (name?) the Dustbringer who brought the Kholinar singers army to Urithiru under Taravangian’s order. The Oathgate sprens might not care what kind of spren you are as long as you’re alive and sufficiently condensed into metal form in the Physical Realm.

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Benjamin Moldovan
7 years ago

Where does one start with such a huge doorstop, er, book? Seriously, THAT was cut down 10%???!!! Yikes!

Anyway for now… Something I’ve been wondering for a while… How the heck does Hoid know where to go on a planet? He always seems to be in the right place at the right time.  I know he’s a Worldhopper and all, but a World’s a pretty big place.

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Benjamin Moldovan
7 years ago

@18: I suspect that the Passions are indeed the original human religion.

On a separate note or two…  I like Jasnah becoming Queen. I wondered if that would happen. Great choice. As for humans being the Voidbringers. I totally didn’t see that coming.  I still don’t know what to make of that. I guess I agree with an early comment that they may have started out that way, but it quickly turned the other way around. What the heck are theory supposed to do about something that happened thousands of years ago?  Roshar is their home and where else are they going to go? And finally, I thought that Cultivation was the Night watcher.  If she isn’t, then who, or what, the heck is?

Ben M.

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Benjamin Moldovan
7 years ago

Correction. What the heck are THEY supposed to do. Trying to type on a Kindle is SUCH a pain in the butt.  

Ben M.

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Benjamin Moldovan
7 years ago

Apparently that early comment I mentioned WAS also @18.

Ben M.

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Benjamin Moldovan
7 years ago

I totally thought that Azure was Vivenna.  But I’m kicking myself that it didn’t even register until just now that azure is not just a name but a color.  (I actually have an old friend who long ago named their daughter Azura, or something close to that.)

Ben M.

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Benjamin Moldovan
7 years ago

I, also, wondered if Maya could be healed and revived. Is such even possible?  Of course, he’s not the one who killed her in the first place, but anyway, I’m also wondering / hoping that he can revive her.  

Ben M.

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Benjamin Moldovan
7 years ago

I need to be going to sleep soon, but a couple more questions real fast. Those last 2 surges, what were they, strong and weak coaxial force, or whatever the heck they are. Does anybody (outside of Team Brandon) know what the heck those can do, and which Orders had therm?

Ben M.

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mithrandir713
7 years ago

As mentioned above, Brandon gave a comment for an unknown ideal something to the effect: I will stand where others fall. Sounds to fit the stonewards and Taln Elin. Stonewards were known to be stubborn and dependable with great resolve. Sounds like Adolin to me. Think about the battle at the end of WoR or even OB. Just seems as we already have a pretty awesome edge dancer and no apparent stoneward other than the herald. I know Maya appears to be a match for an edge dancer but maybe that’s the twist or surprise to discover. 

Thinking the call to “unite them” that Dalinar is motivated by is deeper than simply untiting Roshar, humans and parshmen, but may be a call to unite the splintered shard of honor with odium. It could resolve what appears to be the downside to each respective shard. Honor or holding oaths and following law administered without passion (compassion), unbridled desires or passion wielded without restraint. Uniting them could lead to a harmonious relationship: passion wielded with honors restraint and discipline, law applied with compassion and originated from emotion.  

 

 

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7 years ago

ChocalateRob @83:

Sorry if it already came up but we ‘knew’ that we would be getting a book dealing with Eshonai’s flashbacks. Was that perhaps just a red herring and we’ll actually be getting them from Venli instead?

I don’t see how Eshonai’s backstory could be relevant anymore but Venli’s certainly would be.

BWS has already stated that he wouldn’t mind having a flashback character who is dead during the current part of the storyline, so there’s also that possibility.

Benjamin Moldovan @122: Chapter 68

Shallan grinned and let out a deep sigh. Her hair had reverted to red—she’d let the illusion lapse. “Wit,” she said, “why are you here? In the city?”

“I’m not completely sure.”

“Please. Could you just answer?”

“I did—and I was honest. I can know where I’m supposed to be, Shallan, but not always what I’m supposed to do there.”

Assuming he’s telling the truth (an admittedly big assumption), he just has some way of knowing where to be.

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7 years ago

In Re: Why the old Knights Broke Their Oaths

The more I think about it, the more I find myself agreeing with those who don’t think that humans being invaders was the reason that the Knights ultimately broke their oaths. If a particular Knight Order wanted to they could act the current Skybreakers and fight for the Parshmen cause of getting their land back.

We know from Dalinar’s visions that being a Surgebinder bonded to spren doesn’t mean that you couldn’t fight for the other side. The first time Dalinar has the Noedon vision, Noedon is talking about how a surgebinder was either a main cause of the destruction or was on Odium’s side. He also says that not all spren are as careful about who they choose as Honorspren. 

I can believe that the knowledge of the fact that humans were the invaders would cause some Knights to put down their weapons but what we saw in Dalinar’s vision was entire Orders of Knights deciding as a group to put down their weapons almost simultaneously.  It could have been similar to when Bridge 4 said that they would wait for Kaladin to decide if this would be a turning point. So maybe more militaristic orders would put down their weapons en mass but then we have the orders like the Edgedancers. 

The Edgedancers don’t seem like they were militaristic and they were considered about how the Knights putting down their weapons and abandoning Urithiru would effect other people. I couldn’t see the whole Order deciding not to protect people anymore and disband, not as an Orderwide decision. (True, I am making sweeping generalities here based on what we know of the Edgedancers from Wyndle and from the epigraphs in Words of Radiance). 

Lightweavers as well, based on the epigraph would probably not make a Order wide decision about this.

But maybe the problem that I have is how I’m thinking about the Recreance. Maybe only the initial part of the Recreance was the Windrunners and Stonewards decided as an Order wide decision and others just broke up as individual choices. Except that doesn’t match with how the spren talk about it. There aren’t any spren who’s Knight had kept their oath and left spren unbroken when they died a natural death that we know of. (Side issue: Do Knight’s die natural deaths of old age? Or does Stormlight keep them alive until they are killed hard?) The spren talk about the Recreance as one event that left a scar that leaves all the higher order spren too gun shy to try bonding with anyone for a long time. 

Maybe it’s an issue of timing. The Recreance happened after the “last” Desolation (well last before the current one anyway). We know there were Knight orders fighting at last battle for the last Desolation because we we a Windrunner and his squires in the first prologue where the Heralds abandon their oaths. Were the Knight Orders still fighting Parshmen? I thought that Parshmen were all imprisoned at that time, who were the Knights fighting? The vision in Chapter 52 in Way of Kings only refer to the Knights should be “fighting those devils at the front”, which actually might not be the Parshmen. Saying “those devils” could have been generally referring to a now all human enemy force. I wonder if the Knights stopped fighting because they didn’t want to fight against human opponents and worried that if they continued using Surgebinding it would open them Odium’s influence which could lead to the same type of destruction as what happened to the original human world. 

Okay I hope that made some sense. It’s not what the direct information everyone is considered with “humans are the Voidbringers” isn’t the important information but that “humans destroyed their old world” and maybe we are still missing the important conformation that that destruction was due to using Surgebinding in someway. 

 

 

TL;DR: The information caused the Recreance not because the human’s were the Voidbringers but because it implies that Humans destroyed their original world using Surgebinding and without a enemy to fight against after the “last” Desolation the Knights Radiant worried that their powers would destroy Roshar and/or open them to Odium’s influence.

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7 years ago

@117 Sasuther

Lift and her boon/curse

I don’t know about Lift being centuries old. Dalinar was on the Shatter plains for 7 years total right. And Lift went to the Nightwatcher while she was a child. So that could be anywhere between 5-10. She specifically wanted to stay a number she could count on her hand. I think that’s still possible.

It’s also makes sense to me that it could have been the Cultivations spren that granted the boon. Wyndle refers to the one who granted Lift’s wish as his mother, which implies that it was the Nightwatcher not Cultivation who granted the wish. If we assume that Nightwatcher is like the Stromfather in that she is a spren of Cultivation who is almost Cultivation but not exactly. The Nightwatcher would be mother to spren like Wyndle in the same way that the Stormfather is father to Honorspren.

Vasher

Vasher is with Dalinar’s ardents. If I’m not confusing things I believe that he and Dalinar sparred on the training grounds somewhere in part two…. I think it might time for a re-read. Lol.

Also it just occurred to me that had Azura/Vivenna stuck with Kal and the rest she probably would have found both Nightblood during the battle and soon afterwards would have probably found Vasher in Dalinar’s employ.

On a side note. I hope it’s isn’t something off camera (so to speak) when Vivenna finds Vasher. I don’t know what he did but I have a gut feeling that Vivenna will either punch him or hug him or both and I want to see that. I don’t really buy the Bounty Hunter line. I think that’s just what she tells people because that’s what makes sense when you are searching for someone.

@122 Benjamin

Sounds to me like Hoid had asked an entity similar to the Nightwatcher for an ability. I think in one of the Mistborn short stories we find out that he can’t harm anyone. So maybe it’s boon/curse thing. He always knows where he needs to be but he can’t get into any physical altercations/harm anyone.

@128

The last two belong to the Stonewards. At least the Stonewards use both. I think we have a vision from Dalinar of a Stoneward using both in Oathbringer. It made the side of a cliff face fall on the enemy. but causing the cliff to act weird. (Sorry can’t explain better, it was like the cliff face was all wavy and then it crashed on the enemy the Stonward was fighting in the vision. Dalinar asked the Stormfather if he could do that and the Stormfather was like no.)

Bondsmiths and Willshapers are the ones who share the bond.

Soft Coaxial Force (tension) allowed Dalinar to put back together building and inanimate structures that had been broken. But it should work differently for Stonewards.

We have no idea how Willshapers would use Strong Coaxial Force (Cohesion).

@129

It’s been confirmed that Maya is an Edgedancer blade. I think that an interview a year or so ago.

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7 years ago

#117. Sasuther:. You asked about Vasher, and didn’t remember seeing him in the Stormlight Archive.    Among the Ardents, Kaladin meets a strange looking sword teacher, who doesn’t shave his head  called Zahel.  He makes a lot of color references, which make no sense on Roshar.  He also talks about not hearing a voice in his head for a long time.  He used to be Vasher.

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7 years ago

Vasher as Zahel is still among Dalinar’s ardents. He shows up in Chapter 16. They don’t spar, but Dalinar does get a Vasher-style pep talk. He doesn’t find it very encouraging. 😁

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7 years ago

@78 Wetlander

You should consider that “freezing” is not necessarily something people do intentionally. There are different reasons this can happen to a person (see Rory Miller’s article here) and in Kaladin’s case it is that he only gives himself permission to hurt people if it is for the sake of protecting others. In this situation all the people involved in the fight are people he wants to protect, so, on the spot, he cant act. This actually works quite well for me.

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7 years ago

 To continue from @11 and @69 – somehow there never is time to make the humongous wall-of-text post that I’d really like to write – fortunately for everybody else here, I am sure ;)  :

I absolutely didn’t predict Eshonai’s death and it did hit me hard – I really liked her and the prologue upped my  anticipation for her journey. Now, I see why it was done – Eshonai couldn’t have feasibly gotten the ringside seat to Odium’s conquest that Venli, as a long-time collaborator and a promising prospect due to her power-hunger, did. And I did love Venli’s plot-line and do very much appreciated the redemption and change for the better theme of the book. Still, I find myself a bit disturbed that so many of founding Radiants of the new era are mass-murderers. And in Venli’s case she is also the first singer who achieved something unprecedented (technically probably second, as it looks like Timbre was fully in the physical realm already, but she is the one that everybody will remember) and is being positioned as a future leader of parsh defiance of Odium.

Also, there is a strange difference between Eshonai’s and Venli’s reaction to the stormform – Eshonai definitely _was_ mind-whammied and nothing like her normal self, while Venli remained the same person, only even more callous. Was it because Venli had a chance to practice with the stormform previously and had “mastered” it, while Eshonai didn’t have the time to do so? Or was it that Eshonai got some extra mind-control applied because she was resisting during the bonding process? That she escaped at the last, but too late to save herself? And if the former, is there still hope for remaining voidform listeners/Parshendi, who are seemingly being used as a body supply for the Fused, under false pretences? Will Venli preach “the gospel of Eshonai, the hero and first singer/listener Radiant” to the newly awakened parsh and her own people, after they become aware of Odium’s lies?

In any case, it explains how the ancestors of Listeners/parshendi were able to escape the first time, even though at least some, if not all of them must have been in voidforms during the planning process. Also, there is a tantalising little info that listener/Parshendi songs spoke highly of the Radiants – could it be that some of them helped with the Last Legion’s rebellion?

It looks like the wars between humans and the parsh didn’t end with Aharietam – probably because due to the partial breaking of the Oathpact, the Unmade could either remain on Roshar or seep back in over the centuries. And it looks like Ba-ado-Mishram the “Bondsmith Unmade” could supply the parsh with voidlight, in a similar way to how Dalinar can now supply stormlight. Which led to the power-hungry/warmongery voidforms dominating parsh society and continuing the war. Hence the “False Desolation(s)” And more, BaM was somehow Connected to all of the parsh, so her imprisonment by Melishi and Co. didn’t just lock out the voidforms, but ripped out part of their minds in a heritable way? And, ironically,  with the parsh threat seemingly gone for good, while Honor was dead/dying and apparently gone insane, the Radiants could no longer justify the alleged danger that their surge-binding posed to Roshar and disbanded soon after that “final” victory. Spren must have disagreed, so to prevent them from bonding new people, it was done in the cruel way that we have seen. The events of Feverstone Keep may have happened immediately after BaM was imprioned and mindless state of the parsh was discovered. What is still unclear is why on earth did the Radiants think it acceptable to abandon their shards in a way guaranteed to cause maximal bloodshed among the humans. 

But, I have to say that the whole notion that surge-bindings are that dangerous or that humans had them as such before conflict with the singers began and the latter flipped to Odium doesn’t sit well with me. Because we have the word of Talenel that surge-bindings were supposed to be “something new” that people have discovered between Desolations, the word of the Stormfather that Jezrien’s powers, conferred by his Honorblade, were something unique to him at the time, and even one of the Fused admitted that humans being able to use surges and their surges being “more powerful than ours” was a surprise, all of which confirms that the Fused came first, since they are the only Singers capable of using (Voidbinding) surges. Singer Forms aren’t surges and are never called such. The Heralds came after and in response to the Fused and finally, the surge-binders who became Radiants came due to spren imitation of the Honorblades.

OTOH, the dying Honor not only charged the Stormfather with creating a Bondsmith before the next Desolation and wanted that person to restore the Radiants, but in Kholinar vision he also regretted that humans on Roshar didn’t have Dawnshards – the very same weapons that allegedly destroyed their previous world!* Which tells me that these weapons weren’t used in some petty conflict between humans who irresponsibly destroyed their planet, but in a previous fight against Odium. That this is why Honor told the Singers to welcome humans on Roshar and why he, the God of Oaths continued backing them, seemingly, even after they broke their agreement with the natives**. IMHO, he owed them big, as they helped him and Cultivation to shackle Odium in the first place and lost their world in the process.

But then, isn’t it much more likely that a world will be damaged if Surge-binding and Void-binding are both used in a massive war during a Desolation while Honor is dead and Odium finally has a good chance of victory? Why did Honor practically tell the ancient Radiants to disband, only to engineer their later re-founding? With the new Radiants’ inexperience and ignorance isn’t the danger of destroying the world that much worse? Or was Honor going mad, the same as his Heralds, during his last years? Was he somehow driven mad on purpose? And did Tanavast put what remained of his sane mind into the Stormfather as a last resort?

* Which is almost certainly Ashyn, a world in the Rosharan system which has undergone some terrible cataclysm in the past as per “Arcanum Unbounded”.

** I suspect that there is more to it as well, as IMHO humans on Roshar come from at least 3 different worlds, possibly  all of them attacked/damaged by Odium in his quest for killing fellow Shards. It might have been that those who fought the singers and took their land were different people rather than faithless descendants of those who made the Shinovar treaty.

Finally, Taln. He is wonderful, the hero that Roshar needed, etc. But I can’t help but feel a little sad that the idea that a group of people with very different strengths and weaknesses would be a more effective defense for humanity than your ideal soldier dude is so thoroughly demolished by his faithfulness and the apostasy of the other Heralds. Particularly since their madness kinda precludes the notion that they have redeemed themselves somewhat by strengthening humanity and helping it progress in the meantime. Not to mention that given that the Heralds also represent ideals, it kinda confirms that pernicious Vorin belief that being a soldier is the highest calling. If only they didn’t include all those scholars, judges and artists, but had 10 soldier-dudes instead, Roshar would have been safe for 45 thousands of years!

And now he is also being presented as an “unlikely hero”? He, whose virtues*** and mortal profession aligned most perfectly of all the Heralds with the task of fighting and withstanding the Fused****? Wouldn’t it have been much more surprising if a scholar or an artist proved to be the most resilient? And the only other Herald with a projected PoV and a feasible shot at redemption just so happens to look like a gorgeous young woman who clearly has romantic history with him? Eh. Sorry, but this is somewhat disappointing. YMMV.

*** Having seen Nale and Shalash, it seems that “divine attributes” of the Heralds were indeed based on their real personalities. And it is easy to see how the strongest virtues of some of them would have been of no help in their predicament or even made their task that much harder.

****Which why, incidentally, I believe that Odium “altered the deal” on the Oathpact in some way. Because how on Roshar would it have been a sane idea to include a father and his daughter in a group destined for eternal battle and torture? Why send such an eclectic mix of people? Etc., etc. Which is why I suspect that the Heralds and possibly even Honor expected something else… and were soundly outplayed by their devious opponent.

Kei_Rin @131:

The Recreance happened 2.5 millenia after the Last Desolation, aka Aharietam. It happened at the end of “False Desolation” led by the Unmade Bo-ado-Mishram, which was concluded by her capture and resulted in the parsh losing their minds and becoming parshmen.

@132:

Stormfather only began to make honorspren when Honor was dying/dead, as Syl eventually explains to Kaladin. Prior to that, Honor used to make them himself. Since Cultivation is still alive and well, she is the “mother” of cultivtionspren that Wyndle mentions. 

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7 years ago


I was actually quite relieved that Eshonai died. There were too many characters that came back from beeing dead or presumed dead in WoR and having one character die that could reasonably have survived was a good start to balance that. I am still waiting for Brandon to write a character death that really hits me. He made a valiant effort with Elokhar, but in the end he was only a tertiary or at best secondary character and the investment in him was not high enough to give his death real weight. It will be interesting to see if one of the main characters will actually die in the future novels.

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7 years ago

@120: I don’t see Kaladin adopting Gavinor. Gavinor is a Kholin and he does have family left. I personally think it would be within character for Adolin to take the kid within his own household and raise him as his own. As for babies, now they are married, I do expect them. Adolin and Shallan are unlikely to remain childless.

@129: Maya is confirmed to be an Edgedancer. I personally find it to be the best fit for Adolin: a martial man is not all he is, this is what he became because of his father. And yeah, he is stubborn, he does not give up. I can see how him standing up to the thunderclast despite being barely able to literally stand let alone walk could remind us of Stonewards, but I will advice caution. We never really saw any Stonewards, it is thus easy to let our “perception” of how they “might be” guide us to make wrong conclusions. For instance, need I remind everyone on how many used to think Adolin was the perfect fit for the Dustbringers? They didn’t turn out how we all expected now didn’t they?

@136: I was surprised by Eshonai’s death too: we didn’t see that one coming. I expected her to be… alive or revive in a way or another, but I was pleasantly surprised when she stayed… dead. Venli’s progression was really interesting to read, I find myself enjoying her more than her sister and this bodes well for book 4.

I too was worried about so many Radiants turning out to be… well… scums. Also, something which I felt wasn’t highlighted well enough into the text, but maybe someone has a good explanation for it. Why was Teft chosen for the next Windrunner? Apart from being really, like really broken, he never came across as being more protective then the others. I felt his progression but a great spotlight onto the idea Radiants needs to be terribly broken to be chosen as the lesser broken ones had more issues progressing. I took note how Skar’s attitude to always try to make with what he’s got ended up having him be the last to make to squire. The whole Teft was chosen above the others story arc is also what got me wondering about Adolin: sprens it seems like the very badly broken people and well, he isn’t. The more broken you are, the more chances you have of being chosen: I didn’t think it was the case, but OB seems to point in this direction.

On Szeth: Also, did it bother anyone how Dalinar welcomes Szeth with open arms now he is a Radiant? They all made a point on how unredeemable Amaram was, on how they would NOT work with him because of what he did to Kaladin’s squad, but suddenly everyone is fine with Szeth? Didn’t this come across as odd for some? I sure felt Dalinar and company were way harder on Amaram then they were on others which ultimately caused Amaram’s fall.

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Guncici
7 years ago

@Many – In regards to Adolin and Maya, one of the things that I have noticed is that many peoples complaint is that Adolin is not broken.  What if that is the point, what if the point between those two is that MAYA is broken and Adolin will help her get better.

Just a thought.

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7 years ago

@136: I thought the death were very well handled within this book: two major characters died, Eshonai and Elhokar. Eshonai, not one of us saw it coming. Elhokar, while him dying has certainly been discussed, most readers were anxious to see him progress towards becoming a knight. His death was both sad and powerful, not because he was the most important character, but because it came at a moment where readers were having resolution on a much discussed topic.

I honestly do not see which other characters Brandon could have killed without harming the narrative. Kaladin, Shallan and Dalinar all are very needed characters, even if I wish Brandon would write them more external arcs as some arcs got long in OB as I read the book. I am assuming Lift, Szeth, Renarin and Jasnah are also needed due to them being Radiants so all which is left is Adolin.

Brandon could kill Adolin, but is it the best move? I personally think Adolin would be very interesting, especially now he has Maya, if Brandon were to give him a bigger role and if he were willing to explore inter-character conflicts (too many very internal arcs in OB) into the narrative (no more background Adolin, I pestered until I reached chapter 83 in this book), but one could argue we have too many characters, too many plot lines to follow. So huh tough call.

@139: I have read the idea elsewhere, but I don’t think this is how the Nahel Bond works… The sprens uses the cracks into the human’s soul to move in and, as a result, get conscience of the physical realm: Adolin cannot move into Maya’s brokenness to get a conscience of the cognitive realm. I honestly do not see how this would work or even if it would be relevant for the narrative nor how it would help Maya.

I think to revive Maya, Adolin now needs to say the oaths. He has to progress as a knight, but with limited guidance and no surgebinding. No super powers for him, not for a long while. A Radiant without stormlight. I find myself really liking the idea.

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tommy
7 years ago

Is it just me or is Kate Reddings pronunciation of Timbre completely wrong?

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7 years ago

@@@@@ tommy 141 – Not just you.

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7 years ago

Lift says somewhere that she has been the same age for three years. If that is when she visited the Nightwatcher/Cultivation, it is after Dalinar.

Hoid has some kind of magic that tells him where he needs to be, but not necessarily why.

Uniting is simply a description of the Surge Dalinar uses as a Bondsmith to bind stones and other things together. The Stormfather is supposed to look for a Bondsmith, and uniting things is what Bondsmiths do.

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7 years ago

I still don’t understand why Szeth is still walking around in his highly-recognizable Asassin In White robes. 

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7 years ago

necessary_eagle @@@@@ 144 – All Skybreakers squires were wearing white for their exercise on lashing so that the instructors can see if they had been hit with the colored paint or dye. Think paintball game here. That was when Nin arrived and took all of them. I believe the squires were not allowed time to change clothes. They just went to the skies. 

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Squeewockle
7 years ago

Apologies if someone has mentioned this before, I didn’t see it in the comments I read so far:

One discussion I’ve seen is that people think Adolin isn’t quite broken enough for the Nahel Bond. Like he’s not had enough development showing how broken he is (even though he might have reasons to be broken, like loss of his mother etc.)

But then, a little thought crept to me.

What if the Nahel Bond can work in reverse? What if you have a situation where the spren is broken (a deadeye) and you have a human that leaks into their soul this way?

Could be how the deadeyes might be repaired in the future. :D

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Bill
7 years ago

I had high expectations coming into this book and they were EXCEEDED to an extent that shocked me.

Brandon took his characters, very convincingly tortured them within an inch of sanity, and forced them to change, or even with Kaladin, to fail to change because he just couldn’t handle it.  He did it with Teft, with Shallan, with Kaladin, with Szeth, and oh my God with Dalinar.  That’s how you do character development, in spades!

And that end … I was so convinced the chapter headings were Jasnah, I never saw that coming.  It was perfect.

If I have any complaints at all, it’s that Jasnah’s just a little bit too perfect.  She probably should have been killed off in this book, at the end.  Well, some of the good guys should have died in that final scene, it was just too brutal not to!  (Does that make me bloodthirsty? :D )

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@146: I am kind of boring in the sense I really do not want all the deadeyes to start being revived. I feel it would take away from the Adolin/Maya story arc if it becomes an easy process.

Also, as I explained in a previous post, I am really not sure the bond can work on the reverse. Now I understand the plea for Adolin to stay “normal”, for him to never break-down and I can see how the solution might just be him, an unbroken human, bonding a broken spren, but in terms of realmatic magic, I am really not sure it is possible. Sprens move into humans spirit cracks, not the opposite. As far as we know, Adolin cannot move into Maya’s brokenness, not without Brandon going into a detailed and complicated explanation as to why it is even possible.

I’d rather the author focused on delivering a good story than to create complicated reverse magical mechanics, but this is just me speaking. I love character arcs and I kind of browse over the technical stuff, but I guess all readers are different.

Also, being a character reader, I do get annoyed when characters tend to slip onto the superficial side of things and I did feel it happened to Adolin’s character here. Despite a few good chapters and scenes, he came across as slightly more superficial/one-dimensional than in WoR, mostly because events which should affect him didn’t and progression which should be hard for him happened within two paragraphs. I would prefer if the author were to work on the character to make him more realistic than to use him up to showcase a given bit of magic, but then again, this may just be my personal preferences.

@147: The book delivered on some things for me, but not on others. Overall, I had issues with the pacing of the book, some of the character arcs and a few given scenes I felt were not required or too long. The climaxes however were very good and Elhokar’s death really hit home, so good chapters here.

If I am to compartmentalized the book, I would say early Part 1, late Part 3, early Part 4 and most of Part 5 were really good. Middle Part 3 and 4 were too long and dragged. Part 2 was fine. I liked how it flowed though it was odd Adolin never was around during any of their meetings: this seems as a deliberate choice, but it made little sense to me as I read the book.

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Kathy Marie
7 years ago

Just one small contribution

 

NO MATING!

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7 years ago

@148 It would seem to contradict WoB if many of the old spren were resurrected. I think most of them will stay lost. Though it’d be cool if one of Syl’s relatives came back for family drama. Maybe in the second arc?

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7 years ago

Loved the book, thought the people of Roshar being the voidbreakers very well foreshadowed through the story Shallan told Pattern and spoke of again with Wit…”We are the monsters…”

Felt that Shallan’s story arc was a bit long and could have been tightened up and that Adolin’s char is still too 2-dimensional.

For those thinking that Lopen becoming a KR was for the fans, it was also foreshadowed in previous novel and he’s broken..missing arm that he had to deal with both physically and emotionally, while being a bridge boy etc. 

Over-all a great book and am in awe at the level of world-building Sanderson provides. 

ImpatientKensai
7 years ago

I too originally thought that the Windrunner’s 4th ideal would be about accepting failure in protecting someone but I have since changed my mind. If you look at what Kaladin’s conflict was, it was the fact he didn’t know what side to fight for. He had lost his “us and them” mindset because he had friends in all of the parties involved. I think the 4th ideal will be about picking a side, narrowing who gets protected because he can’t protect them all. That is why, later on in shadesmar, he has such a hard time saying the 4th ideal because he he would have had to pick a side. 

If we look at the current oaths: “I will protect those who cannot protect themselves.” and “I will protect even those I hate, so long as it is right.” He has yet to have a guide in how to deal with enemies he once saw as friends. 

Kaladin will have a hard time fighting Moash. But he has chosen his side. If Moash attacked Dalinar, he would have to choose who to protect. That is why I think the 4th ideal will be about what a Windrunner does in that situation. 

In the end though, this is just speculation. Whatever Sanderson decides to do I’m sure will be good with me. The trust is there by this point. 

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7 years ago

 

@136 Isilel

Thank you, I had forgotten about the False Desolation. So that makes it likely again that “the devils” at the front are Parshshendi/Parshmen. I thought that the binding of the Parshmen happened in the ‘final’ Desolation because my brain is telling me that it was Ishar who bound them but that didn’t fit because the Hearlads had abandoned their oath. But I could be mixing things up. I’m going to look this up later. Unless someone here wants to provide a primer on the False Desolation.😊

If Odium was originally in the same planet as the humans then there likely some for Investure (Voidbinding?) Where there is a Shard is there is a magic system related to that Shard that some humans can use. So, the type of Investure might be “new” but I see what you say Talenel’s words being evidence that it might not be the Order’s ability to Surge bind itself that was dangerous. Maybe it was “new” because a large number of people (relatively speaking) could use the magic as opposed to only a few. Talenel I need you do define “new” for me so I can know what you are talking about here?

While we don’t have any evidence, I have a gut feeling that Voidbinding and Surgebinding are actually the same thing. The endnotes about the magic system at the back of these books talk about there being 10 levels of Surgebinding and 10 levels of Voidbinding. If Voidbinding was actually a think of Odium wouldn’t it 9. Brandon’s magic system usually are pretty number based. I think Voidbinding is ultimately the same thing but it seems to work differently when it comes specifics. The Parsh equivalent to Edgedancers being faster than Lift. The Pash equivalent to WIndrunner being slower than Kaladin. I suspect that those pash-people are bonded to corrupted spren making them Voidbinders as opposed to Surgebinders. (Note all of this is wild speculation.)

@137 and other

In Re: Eshonai’s death

I was both saddened by her permanent death and relieved.

Saddened because it rang the death gong on the Eshonai/Adolin ship that my crazy brain wanted to happen. I find I don’t really care about OTP, I just hop around on different ships. The only ship I didn’t want was Shallan/Kaladin, even though I could have seen a way that it would happen. I was in the Adolin/Shallan camp for this particular love triangle, if we’re going by actual book possibilities. My long shot bet was the love triangle just dissolve completely and we end up with Eshonai/Adolin and Jasnah/Shallan and Kaladin is forever with Sly (kinda like forever alone but not). 

Relieved because I want to be able to trust Brandon when people die in these books and that had been stretched a lot by people being brought back right and left in last book.

@139 Guncici and 146 Squeewockle

This is a fun idea. Adolin has already formed a bond to Maya in a way because he has away to summon and dismiss the blade from the physical realm and Maya does follow him. She clearly has been listening to him when he talks to the blade before duals and she likes him. Also, she doesn’t scream at him when he’s using the blade. Although the not screaming might not be telling.

@148 Gepeto

I don’t thing reviving a dead blade should be easy either. Even so, I still want to see Adolin be able to do so with Maya. I think it would also be an interesting to see which humans would try to revive their blades. The spren have tried but I get the feeling that it would be something that would need both spren and human to work together to achieve.

 

@151 Cepolgara

I feel like I need to slap myself! Wait a hot second – Was the story of the girl who looked up the story about how humans found Roshar?! Is that the fairy tail version of how the monstrous human’s found Roshar and “stole” the ability to use stormlight? I did not get that when first reading it.

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@121 I’m not sure I follow your argument.

Just for clarity – I am saying that Renarin is not a voidbringer (used for ease of use rather than saying bound-to-a-spren-of-Odium) because he is able to operate the Oathgates. Much of your reply to me seems to hinge upon Odium not having been seen as being capable of operating the Oathgates? That would seem to be making my argument for me?

To expand further upon this, we know that the Oathgates require an alive, bonded spren in the form of a Shardblade, or an Honourblade created from Honour’s very own Shard. We also have come across no voidspren (or any other kind of spren not linked to KR orders) which even resemble a Shardblade. Indeed, the voidspren have gone out of their way to capture (dead) Shardblades and plate (see hunt for Eshonai’s body, and the attack on Moash and Graves) despite the Fused’s ability to use the surges, the lesser types of voidspren linked with the Listeners, and even despite seeing Unmade who are bound to humans. That on its own is surely highly suggestive.

The point I was making re: Sja-anat could have been more precise, but essentially I was saying that in order for Odium to impact the Oathgates he had to use an intermediary whose primary purpose was to corrupt spren. If Odium has to corrupt the spren of the Oathgates in order to utilise them that is highly suggestive that they are ordinarily beyond his influence.

Indeed, all that apart, it would be a gaping hole in Urithiru’s security if they set up headquarters in a place which Odium could invade from any one of ten separate locations simply by infiltrating Urithiru with just one agent. I’d suggest that that risk would far outweigh any conceivable benefits from having the Oathgates. One misstep would see the annihilation of the Knights Radiant in a single blow.

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7 years ago

Trying to catch up on comments:

19 Re: Renarin – Ha!  I guess my comments urging caution on Renarin were memorable, so thanks I guess! :-) I do like the way Brandon handled this, though.  He let the suspense about Renarin continue to build early, then appeared to address it in Chapter 10 and beyond, via Renarin’s Healing and Shardblade, while still leaving just a hint of doubt via some weirdness. Next, Brandon starts to ramp the questions and doubt back up via Jasnah’s observations of Renarin.  And finally, in the Brandon Avalanche, he shows that the original doubts were well-founded all along!  Nicely done!  (I admit, part of me wanted to believe that Renarin really was a Truthwatcher, which allowed me to put almost all of my doubts away in Chapter 10, as my comments in the preview chapter can attest; I should have listened more to the little nagging voice in the back of my head!).

@31 – Re: Brandon’s story – I agree, and personally I think he’s doing a great job.  Although I would like to have seen more Jasnah or Rlain, I trust Brandon and am enjoying the story he wishes to tell. 

@52 – I was also looking forward to seeing Gallant bond Dalinar.  I guess it happens after Dalinar heads to the Shattered Plains.

Unrelated: I have an additional favorite character: the Skybreaker Master, Ki! :-)  In my “playful head-canon,” she’s a gender flipped Iriali that just happens to share a name with yours truly (my first two letters, anyway)!  In all seriousness, I am 99.9999% sure that Brandon just came up with a name that reflects the Iriali/Riran style (“Evi,” and “Toh” seem to hint that they are rather short names, ending in vowel sounds), but the name still stood out as soon as I read it.  Anyway, I am now a fan and hope to see more of her in the future!

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7 years ago

Wetlandernw @@@@@ 155 – She pronounces it “timber”, as in wood.

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7 years ago

@154: Renarin is at least partially a voidbinder, or at least so Brandon indicated.

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7 years ago

@141 tommy and 158 Muswell

Honestly, that’s how I pronounced the spren’s name in my head when I was reading it. 

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Jeremy
7 years ago

I didn’t quite get through all of the comments, these ideas might be repeats but I have 3 pet theories:

1. Maya will get reborn, but will not bond Adolin, or anyone else. The spren fear bonding humans because they don’t want to die, but they haven’t actually experienced it, Maya has, and will never risk it again.

2. Jasnah’s madness as a child was caused by the inkspren. She was too smart and to logical to pass up, but they figured someone like that could handle pretty much anything so rather than hoping she would crack, they snapped her, Mistborn style.

3. Spoiler about Azure’s sword on the hook where anyone could take it.

I think it’s the same as Vasher throwing his sword on the ground in front of people and letting the evil ones kill themselves. If anybody took Azure’s sword off the hook, it would probably not end well for them.

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7 years ago

I was reading through the gem records that head the chapters of Book 3, and I realized that they’re basically the Apocalyptic Log of the last days of the Radiants.

It’s a pretty sorry situation.  Even though the Heralds have declared Odium beaten, nobody’s living happily ever after.  The Sibling has withdrawn, and there’s only one Bondsmith, Melishi. The knights are quarrelling, especially Skybreakers and Windrunners (big surprise there). The Unmade have attacked Urithiru itself, and it may have to be abandoned. Some think this premature, but the Willshapers want to GTFO already. Radiants are questioning their Ideals: a Stoneward wonders if self-sacrifice is the coward’s way out; a Windrunner balks at the Fourth Ideal.  One Truthwatcher is worried about their fellows.  The Elsecallers are trying to hold everything together with scholarship.   And despite the Heralds declaring victory, the “parsh” continue to fight, pushing for Feverstone Keep and Rall Elorum.  And Honor, one Skybreaker fears, is changing.  

The Radiants are fracturing, but not broken. They have come up with a plan they hope will fix all this and finally end the war. They must trap the Unmade, especially the one who has bonded to the parsh in place of Odium. Melishi is confident that he can bind it and limit the parsh’s ability to take forms of power and access Voidlight. Surely if they do this, it will all be finished. They will defeat the enemy once and for all, and mankind will be worthy to return to Heaven.

You know, when I first learned that the parshmen had had their souls or spirits bound like they were, I was really pissed off. What kind of monster would think literal soul mutilation was an acceptable solution?! As I kept reading, seeing the powers of the Unmade, I decided that the answer was “A really desperate one.” Someone along the lines of Taravangian or Nale before Lift got through to him. I was still angry, but I could understand. And then, of course, it got worse. Melishi didn’t know what he would do–though that might not have stopped him, since, like Taravangian, he thought he was saving the world, with the added bonus of redeeming mankind in the eyes of god.

So, imagine, after all this turmoil, they finally find out the truth, but heavily filtered through myth and religion.  The Tranquiline Halls–their ancient birthplace AND their Heaven–has already been destroyed by humans. Their great enemy, Odium?  They brought him here, and fed him on the souls of the parsh.  The parsh themselves, their enemies for time out of mind, are victims of mankind twice over now.  Their Heralds were liars and betrayers, broken men who have forsaken them.  And their God, Honor, THE GOD OF OATHS,  promises them that their powers will destroy Roshar, the world they have fought and died for, as they did the first.

I can understand that this revelation would have shaken them to their core, even broken them, after a period of uncertainty and strife, and coupled with what they did to the parshmen.  But I cannot understand how they could betray and kill their spren companions, even if they thought that their oaths had already been broken or were never valid.  I suppose they thought this was an extension of what they were already willing to sacrifice–their Knights their lives, and the spren the pain of losing their Knights–but, honestly?  In their shoes, I probably would’ve killed myself and let my spren escape, hurt but still living.  I suppose, if I want things to be as bad as they can be, that that wouldn’t be possible because it would also count as breaking their oaths (the first Ideal, Life before Death) and kill their spren anyway.

When they chose to do this, they were acting for the greater good, and forgot the first of their oaths, journey before destination.  They put the end before the means.  And it’s heartbreakingly understandable.

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7 years ago

Well. Piles of wonderfully rendered twists, turns, and surprises. I would dispense up front with one comment which, though not intended so, will seem critical: Through most of this volume, the pacing is very consistent. We know that Brandon is a compulsive outliner, and it is quite obvious in this way. The staging of reveals, the development of character realizations, are so steady, and often in parallel, that it almost has the opposite of the intended effect. Ironic that so much of the dialogue and introspection in this volume is about how messy people’s lives are. That said, this is an amazing volume of work. I noted, when I reached Chapter 100, that a normal-sized novel’s worth of pages remained.

Now about the story…

It was always pretty clear that Roshar was not a native world for humans. They do not mesh with the indigenous flora and fauna in the least, whereas the Parshendi have a more symbiotic existence with the world’s nature. It’s a brilliant move to have briefly introduced, in TWoK, a segment of the continent which is more like Earth, with cattle, and chickens, and plant-life which does not react to movement or wind. In doing so, there remained some doubt which sapient species belonged, and which did not. Still, the vast weight of evidence said that humans were pilgrims on that world.

The first scene which had me wiping my eyes was not the wedding of Dalinar and Navani, but Kaladin meeting his new brother, Oroden. There is no way that we’ve seen the last of Kaladin’s family.

Speaking of Navani, when she’s trying to seduce Dalinar, she gets some of the funniest lines in the entire book:

    “Then who cares?” she said. “Let the ardents hie to Damnation, with ribbons around their ankles.”

    “Oh, I’m not objecting,” Navani said. “I’d let a confused dishwasher marry us. I just think it’s a little unusual.”

So, Cultivation (Mother?) steps in and handles Dalinar personally. Also, his memory recovery isn’t a failure of the Nightwatcher’s curse, but the method Cultivation designed for his forgiveness. Sneaky trick, Brandon.

It was quite pleasing that Jasnah accepted the Alethi crown. About halfway through TWoK, I deduced that of all the Kholin family, she was most fit to rule, but I never expected it to happen.

Aice, Paige. Neither of you mentioned the exclamation, “Merciful Domi!”. Surely this did not escape your notice. So just how many world-hoppers do we have on Roshar right now?

@71 RE: “nonplussed”. I find it absolutely misused in this passage, but I’ve seen this probably a dozen times over the last year. The proper use of the term has someone speechless, flabbergasted. Although, this seems counter-intuitive to the very construction of the word, so I get why some people would presume that it means to be calm and undisturbed. I was surprised that Brandon and/or his team let this pass.

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7 years ago

Wetlandernw @@@@@ 160 – The usual “tambr” pronunciation seems particularly called for because of Venli being a Listener and her continuous focus on Old Rhythms vs New Rhythms.

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7 years ago

Kah-thurak @137:

Oh, absolutely. Sanderson was trying to right the ship after his mistakes re: fake deaths in WoR. But IMHO, his original ideas for some of the characters in WoR were much better than what he went with in the end and wouldn’t have necessitated Eshonai’s death. Sigh. I.e.:

There’s another in this category–but it could include spoilers for an upcoming book.  I’ll talk about it eventually. ETA: Szeth originally died permanently in the end of Words of Radiance. I also changed my mind to let Amaram live in the scene with the poison dart. Adolin killed off Sadeas instead.

from his FAQ on writing: http://faq.brandonsanderson.com/node/467 . He also mentions in another section how initially  Jasnah’s disappearance wasn’t supposed to look like death. I can only assume that “another” is Eshonai, who was originally supposed to survive, but then had to pay for WoR’s sins.

I somewhat agree with you about Elokhar – but that’s where my other criticism comes in. I.e. that we _should_ have seen Jasnah’s reunion with her family, Kholins interacting as a family and then their mourning for him, instead of forced up-beat ending with the wedding. Also, it wouldn’t have hurt to see some glimpses of him as a person divorced from his kingship – like, maybe his thwarted artistic inclinations, supressed due to Vorin culture and his position, that would have made him interesting to the Cryptics, etc.  

In this sense, Eshonai’s death worked better, because at least we got a good feeling for her as a person. And at least her sister properly mourned her, despite emotional limitations of the voidforms. But I don’t like that she was killed so that not one but 2(!) mass murderers could become founding new Radiants instead. Redemption is great, it really is, but that feels like an overload to me.

Oh, and let me express an unpopular opinion here that Amaram in OB was mainly present as a fan-service to Kaladin fans, so that they could enjoy him being a punch-bag and our lead character could get that fight that he was thirsting for. It felt very obvious and quite artificial. I don’t say that he needed to become a good guy or anything, but it made zero sense for him not to air what he knew about Gavilar’s secrets once he became desillusioned and wanted to hurt Kholins.

Jasnah’s public put-down of him was completely illogical and made me seriously wonder what everybody was smoking re: her fitness to be queen, despite her being my favorite. This wasn’t more diplomatic than Adolin! What happened to “keep your friends close, but your enemies closer”? What happened to learning as much as you can before you act? The whole betrayal also played out extremely oddly. If it was pre-mediated, why lead your army outside the walls that you have previously repaired, only to have to re-take them? 

Also, let’s be honest, compared to Szeth and Venli, Amaram’s crimes were minor. Yes, Szeth was retconned into committing massacres because of honor (even thought in WoK he repeatedly spells out that it was mainly due to his fear of oblivion after death, i.e. out of selfish moral cowardice), but Venli did betray her people. 37 thousands of them or so, most of whom are dead thanks to her, as my recent skimming of WoR revealed.

So, yea, IMHO if Sanderson wanted to leave Gavilar’s shenangians unexplored, he should have gone with his initial intention with poison dart death for Amaram. It changed nothing re: Taln, as the way things played out, Ghostbloods could have just taken him directly and released him to Ash when it suited them.

Generally, the structure of SA, with 3 main characters, who get the lion’s share of the narrative and are often doing their own thing, only a couple of secondary ones get relatively few PoVs, etc. doesn’t allow for a lot of significant character deaths. And, of course Bridge 4 has to be largely spared because Kaladin*. I am very much afraid that Sanderson is preparing a Mistborn twist where Dalinar dies and Kaladin takes his place, though. I mean, Kal’s interactions with the Stormfather and glory spren seem to hint that way, sigh. I’d  hate that development, but Sanderson loves his ideal “men of the people” soldier dudes (see also Taln) and Kaladin is the closest the series has to a stereotypical fantasy hero and many (most?) readers’ favorite…

*IMHO Drehy or Skar should have died in Kholinar. Ditto at least some of Shallan’s people.

Gepeto @138:

Acceptance of Szeth very much bothered me. I don’t hate him with the fury of 10 thousand suns anymore after Edgedancer and OB – his interactions with Nightblood, Lift and Nale are good, but his continuing presence in the main storyline does feel forced and shoe-horned to me. I’d have thought, given his history of publicly murdering lots of  leaders from participating nations, that his presence would have been a bigger issue for the coalition than ancient history. 

Re: Teft, IMHO he did demonstrate leadership in WoK and WoR. He was Kaladin’s second, wasn’t he? And a sergeant in the army before that? I expected him to bond. But yea, I hope that bonding is not a matter of brokenness olimpics and that it is possible to open your soul in other ways. 

Oh, and another thing – shouldn’t Kaladin have fetched his family, since Alethkar is largely overrun? His being a Radiant, and such an important one, should put them in terrible danger, no? And paint a big fat target on Hearthstone if they remain there.  

 

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7 years ago

@118, EvilMonkey:

My prediction (based upon wishful thinking and nothing concrete) is that within the next 10 years Brandon will:

Finish the Front 5 SA

Complete Mistborn era 2

Be at least one book maybe 2 into Mistborn Era 3

Either do Elantris 2 or Warbreaker 2

And at least 3 other wonky projects, one of them Cosmere based.

I don’t think that’s terribly too much to ask for.

 

So minimum 12 books in 10 years, 3 of them SA-sized doorstops (at least)? Good luck on that. You’re also violating BWS’s stated intent to start Mistborn Era 3 after finishing the first five books of SA, unless you think he can bang out 3 doorstops in the first 5 years or so of that 10 while still writing other stuff.

@144, necessary_eagle:

I still don’t understand why Szeth is still walking around in his highly-recognizable Asassin In White robes. 

 

Why wouldn’t he? He is not trying to disguise himself. In fact he’s sort of fetishizing how evil he is.

 

I notice a theme in Stormlight Archive (and to a lesser extent all of Sanderson’s writing): siblings!

Gavilar and Dalinar, Kaladin and Tien and Oroden, Venli and Eshonai, Adolin and Renarin, Jasnah and Elhokar. One of the very few more-than-a-pair groupings is Shallan and her four brothers–Kaladin always has one brother at a time, not two. (Of course, to a greater extent than most fantasy writers, Sanderson always writes a lot about families.)

(Also, why are the Kholins the only ones with aunts/uncles/cousins?)

Changing things up department: what are the odds Navani will conceive? She isn’t actually substantially older than Kaladin’s mother and Stormlight is involved, and Sanderson hasn’t shown any fertility spren yet. I can also see Dalinar’s old friend Cultivation doing that.

 

Sja-Anat and the Midnight Mother and the rest of the Unmade are spren. MM wanted to replace Shallan’s bond with Pattern. What happens if someone Nahel bonds with one of the Unmade? It might corrupt the human … and it might uncorrupt the Unmade. Wouldn’t that irritate Odium (by which I mean, over-the-top infuriate him)?

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7 years ago

Isilel @165
Personally I liked Sadeas beeing killed by Adolin. That Amaram did not expose what he might have known about Gavilar could be due to either his ambitions as new Sadeas Highprince or his remaining loyality to the Sons of Honour. We do not know very much about his motivations.

I think it should be possible for a main character to die in multi volume fantasy epic like this. If it is done right, it can be a very powerful moment (see MBotF). Having the main characters shift more for each volume is something I personally have nothing against anyway, but I understand that a lot of people would be very disappointed by this.

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7 years ago

Hmmmm.  It was a ride, for sure. 

Aesudan: I was expecting that to be interesting, but not in a bond-with-an-unmade kind of way, that was extra creepy. I was a little dissapointed there wasn’t more to that conflict. We kinda had all this buildup in Kholinar just to lose it, and elhokar (sniff), and then just go somewhere else.

Shallan’s arc: I was not annoyed by how much space it took up, I found it compelling and horrifying and understandable and heartbreaking.  Girl is brilliant, and self-destructive. It does not seem resolved, either.

Dalinar: while the details of his past were not really unexpected, very well written.  His epic uniting of realms…did not expect that. In general, the epicness of all the radiants powers exceeds what I could have imagined. And so does the organization and speed of attack by the enemy, so, good thing.

Shadesmar: I really was not expecting a lenghtly jaunt through shadesmar for our main heroes. Interacting with syl and pattern more like they were real people, and the whole group all talking to each other’s spren, was cool.  It was interesting. Maybe worth it to get the visual on Maya and start that whole cool thing. But otherwise…what was the point of that detour? 

The Sadeas army turning to odium thing, it was a surprise twist, and my words upon reading it were “oh “$#_-& Adolin kholin.” Cause you know, their anger stemmed from his actions.  But that connection does not seem to have been made, by him, or Dalinar, or anyone. 

I enjoyed the internal conflicts of our main characters, yes. I liked even Kaladin’s musings on his depression.  But I also agree, so much clear opportunity for interpersonal conflict felt oddly sidestepped.  Or even interpersonal emotional payoffs, such as seeing firsthand Jasnah reunion with family.  It is certainly a challenge in a series this large in scope to fit it all in without series bloat, which I know Brandon aims to avoid, and that means not following the full potential of every storyline. I don’t envy him that challenge. 

On Maya: it would be helpful for Team Dalinar to revive a dead spren or many, because imagine what those spren might be able to reach them about how the knights radiant worked before.

In general, things got a lot more chaotic and sure much faster than I thought. Much is left hanging, so it’s unclear how a one year jump is going to work and satisfy on those items.

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7 years ago

I’ve an inkling that Maya may end up NOT bonding Adolin but will be “resurrected” as something akin to an Honorblade.  Just a thought anyway.

I think I’m the only one, judging by the other comments, but I found the Shadesmar Road Trip to be too long and it felt out of place going from the full-on-hell-fire-battle of Kholinar to pottering about in another realm.  Some good character points and superbly written as usual but it stood out for me as out of place.  Oh well.

Otherwise what an absolutely superb book.  I cried when Hobber regained the use of his legs and the joy of Bridge Four poured off the page.  I cried when Elhokar was SO close to making it.  I whooped when I realised who Azure was.  I whooped many more times.  I adored it.

Too many things to properly transfer from my feels to the keyboard.  REALLY hoping for a re-read soon so we can discuss the chapters in small batches.

Also.  F*CK Moash.  F*CK Taravangian.  

 

Edit to add:  I don’t think in ANY way whatsoever that Kaladin let Elohkar die by any inaction.  I fully felt he was incapable of acting – completely overawed by what was happening and how it was in direct contrast not only to his oaths but to his very being.  He had a breakdown, he couldn’t function and was urging Elohkar on to achieve his awesomeness.

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7 years ago

@158 – the question isn’t whether or not Renarin is voidbinding (at least in part) so much as what can Glys be if not a corrupted Truthwatcher spren (the post I originally replied to was saying that he isn’t). I have absolutely no problem with Glys being a corrupted Truthwatcher spren, and thus some of Renarin’s powers being related to voidbringing. The problem I have is how can Renarin access the Oathgates unless his spren was originally a KR spren? (I actually thought it was outright said that he was a corrupted KR spren, but maybe it was just an inference I made. My reread will be underway shortly.)

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7 years ago

@170 All we see is that Jasnah has a drawing/description of what a Truthwatcher spren SHOULD look like, and she states that it doesn’t look like Glys.  We don’t know how different Glys looks, but we do see that corrupted spren look somewhat similar to their uncorrupted counterparts.  This was not commented on one way or the other by Jasnah, so we really don’t know if Glys is a corrupted spren, or a real voidspren.

It is odd that it isn’t remarked on during Renarin’s POV after Glys is outed.

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7 years ago

Is nonplussed confused with nonchalant?
Timbre is obviously pronounced like in French where it originates.

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7 years ago

Carl 

Brandon’s writing speed is incredible. I don’t think my prediction is unrealistic based on his previous body of work. Over an 11 year span he managed to complete Mistborn era 1 and 3 of 4 in Mistborn era 2, Warbreaker, 3 SA novels and 2 YA series (The Reckoners and Alcatraz), and Rithmatist. Plus, he completed WOT. Judging from that, I just may be shortchanging him.

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7 years ago

Evilmonkey@173: I hope you’re right. I don’t think so. He has been writing slower and slower. Notice that right now nothing is in progress on his web site. (I don’t believe there’s a mystery project. It’s just a vacation.)

Seriously, I hope you’re right.

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firegazer
7 years ago

Goodness, where to start. I don’t think I’ve ever simultaneously loved a book so much and felt so disappointed in it at the same time.

Dalinar’s entire story arc was deeply moving to me. I had real tears in my eyes at one point. That one arc made me think quite a lot about the nature of crime and forgiveness, and all manner of other existential dilemmas. It was well worth three times the price of admission, and I would have happily read a book that consisted of nothing but Dalinar’s character growth.

Sanderson’s plot reveals remain the best in the genre, in my humble opinion. He always manages to catch me off-guard with at least one per book. For me, this book had: Venli’s conversion, the real meaning of “unite them,” and the champion that Odium had been grooming all along (though I know that was last one was more obvious to some readers than to others).

I was pleasantly surprised to see Kaladin fail to speak his oath this time. One of the issues I have had with Sanderson’s writing previously is his tendency to write infallible “man of the people” heroes who — while they may sacrifice themselves nobly — will never actually fail to accomplish what they set out to do. Kalladin broke that mold this book, and there is NOTHING I enjoy more than having an author break their own patterns in a satisfying and well-written manner.

That said, Sanderson failed to break pattern in a few deeply disappointing ways this time — and this turned what could have been a real masterpiece into merely a very strong book with a few obvious structural problems. I am somewhat taken aback to see so many comments — some from the beta-readers themselves — saying such things as “if you felt something in this book was lacking, it’s your lack of trust that is actually at fault.” I worked for a time as a literary editor, and my first degree was in technical editing. Every book in a series must be taken both in its own context and in the context of the greater series. While some of the complaints raised may well be remedied in later books, this does not erase the fact that there were some real flaws in this book when taken on its own. People did not pay to receive a book that is only good once every other book finally comes out — they paid to receive a book that was good to read NOW. Thankfully, this book WAS fantastic in many ways; but Sanderson had some weak moments in it, and I’d love to see him continue to focus on those weaknesses (as he clearly HAS done in each successive book that he writes), such that he continues to refine his writing. I want to see more moments like Kaladin failing. I want to see fewer dropped plot threads, more discipline in cutting out unfinished character development, and more focus on making every scene count.

The dropped plot threads were the biggest problem by far. Yes, Sanderson may have things he wanted to focus on more as an author — but the style in which he wrote directed readers to expect that he was going to focus on different things, which led to frustration and confusion when he did not follow up. Sanderson is fantastic at foreshadowing plot events, but seemingly on and off at foreshadowing character development. The last book ended on a gasp-worthy moment which was intentionally given its own space — Adolin, obedient son and shining example of nobility, murdered a villain in cold blood and wasn’t sure if he would get away with it. Sanderson gave this scene an implied spotlight — all the readers I knew could talk about nothing else, as soon as they put down the book. This was, as I would say to my authors, an implicit promise from the author, based on his writing style, that this event would play a large role in the next book and would fuel some manner of emotional conflict. The author then discarded that promise by refusing to focus on its emotional effect on various characters. Adolin had very few viewpoint chapters, but a viewpoint chapter isn’t strictly necessary here — in fact, because Adolin had so few viewpoint scenes, readers shifted to assume that they were reading other viewpoints on Adolin in order to heighten the dramatic irony. It never occurred to them naturally that the murder would end up being simply unimportant. As plot continued to progress along the path of the copycat killer, readers then began expecting that this investigation would naturally lead to Adolin’s secret coming out. When the secret did not come out — and plot careened down an entirely different path, forgetting Sadeas entirely for a long while, this frustration and confusion got in the way of enjoyment of other, normally well-written scenes. Broken promises distract the reader. They’re just not good craft.

On the other hand, Shallan’s emotional arc, while interesting overall, seemed to drag at times. I think many of her drawn out scenes fighting for space in her own head could have been cut without badly affecting the reader’s understanding of her conflict here. That space could have gone to Adolin’s thoughts on Sadeas and his fear (relief? niggling worries? we don’t know) about getting caught. The space could have gone to showing Jasnah’s return, and her family’s reaction to finding out that she was alive. The space could have gone to that same family’s reaction to Elhokar’s death. I still edit stories for close friends and family — more often than not, the question I end up asking all the time is: “Yes, but how does that make your characters feel?” All these dropped bits only really came home to roost at the end of the book, when readers were finally forced to give up hope that the author was going to address them properly. Many of them got a brief and unsatisfactory line or two devoted to tying them off without much fanfare or emotional satisfaction. As a result, no matter how good the book was, I can understand how so many readers finished it feeling abruptly disappointed. All those implicit promises felt broken at once.

I love Sanderson’s characters, and I’m always happy to see more pages in his books. But I feel like Oathbringer could have benefited from some ruthless editing down of some of these less crucial scenes in order to make room for Sanderson to make his other character development more focused. Some of these character arcs probably could have been moved to another book entirely, so that they could have room to breathe. A lot of readers noticed these issues — and they are legitimate structural issues. Those readers may not have the training or the lingo to describe why they felt this way so specifically, but I think that in this case, their gut feelings were correct. This was a great book, but it had room to be much better than it was. I really hope that Sanderson is able to identify some of those mistakes and approach future books with them in mind; and I have hope that he will do so! He’s shown an incredible ability to improve his writing from book to book, and that is by far the highest compliment I have to give an author.

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7 years ago

@150: I personally did not care much for the Syl drama we had in Shadesmar. I don’t find her to be the most interesting spren.

@151: I agree with your commentary. Shallan’s story arc was a hit and miss for me: while I really enjoyed how it concluded in Part 3 and in Part 5, I had a hard time enjoying the chapters which brought us there. I felt Adolin/Elhokar’s characters were under used during early Part 3 whereas I was wishing all characters truly teamed up together to rescue Kholinar. Instead we got two very separated story arcs which weren’t as interesting as they could have been and took too much time to mature.

And yeah, the end result is Adolin often reads as one-dimensional. His character should have been dealing with a lot of issues, but little of them were seen during Part 3. With Kaladin, Shallan, Dalinar, we feel their issues are following them throughout the narrative, but with Adolin they disappear when the focus is not on him and the end result is a character which has good moments, one good story arc, but reads as a lackey or a goof ball for the 750 preceding pages. 

@153: From what I could tell, the love triangle is far from being over: there is one very long and very active thread on the 17th Shard where people are basically saying Kaladin is Shallan’s one true match and her marrying Adolin is more lies, a fake persona and I’ll admit I skipped most of the discussion after reading that………

For my part, I consider the Kaladin/Shallan ship to be dead. Brandon is not a romance author which means romance will never form a major plot arc within any given books and, as such, I really do not expect Shallan having an arc where she dumps Adolin or realizes how much of a mistake she made. But other people have obviously different opinions.

I personally hope what Adolin has achieved it so impossible nobody else will succeed at doing the same.

@155: Considering I was a fervent “I do not want Elhokar to become a Knight” defender, I felt a heart-breaking death as he was muttering his first oath truly was the best possible outcome for his character. Tragic, but in a good way. I really loved what Brandon did with Elhokar. I also did not mind Kaladin freezing, I felt it was coherent with his character development so far: him not knowing who to protect and, as a consequence, being rendered useless. So yeah, this scene flew nicely to me. I felt sorry for Kaladin, not angry.

Thanks for explaining your idea better about Adolin and Maya being partners: I was scratching my head to make the magic work. Taking it out of consideration, I personally really like their current relationship and while I do wish it to evolve, I am fine with it taking its sweet time to mature. Those thunderclast fighting scenes and Maya furiously attacking the Fused (do not touch him!) are among my favorite scenes in the book. I especially liked when Adolin is lying motionless into the rumble and Maya tries to brush his mind to get him to get up and move. So sweet.

Yeah, I don’t mind for this to go on, for a while. I don’t mind Adolin having his “broken Nahel Bond” (because I do think this is what he’s got with Maya). I just want Brandon to give Adolin’s character more meat in book 4.

As for the gem being broken thing, well, one of my speculations have always been Adolin would lose his Blade, but then manage to summon it despite having theoretically broken the bond. I would thus really love if this were to happen in a future book.

On the Dustbringer theory, I realize many do not like when I use the word “many”. This being said, I’ll just say the “Adolin will become a Dustbringer” has always been a very popular theory having strong defenders onto various platforms. Arguing against it usually led to heated discussions, especially if you try to argue Adolin would be a much better Edgedancer. It typically relied on the idea Dustbringers were mass destruction soldiers combined to Adolin appearing to be “brave” and “obedient”. Those defending it were usually arguing Adolin’s character is a soldier and, as thus, needed to progress towards the most martial oriented order. OB showed us how dangerous it is to speculate on orders we have not met yet as the Dustbringers turned out being completely different than anticipated. They are interested in breaking things apart (Balat someone?) which arguably no longer fits Adolin’s character. As such, I am advising caution on using the same reasoning to place-hold him into the Stonewards (despite Maya!) by using the same logic and thinking what we think we know about the order readily applies to a given character. Sure Adolin’s bloody stand against the thunderclast could be akin to suff the Stonewards did, but it also fit within various orders and also… MAYA! Maya is an Edgedancer spren.

@156: As I read the scene, all I could think of was: “OMG Kimaniak was RIGHT. Renarin has bonded a Voidspren… He really isn’t a real Truthwatcher”. In retrospective, signs something was off with his bond appear early in the story, when Jasnah asks to see Glys and finds it odd he doesn’t seem to behave like other known Truthwatcher sprens. Also, Wit’s advice to never trust anyone seeing the future truly related to Renarin: I thought it did at the time, but I didn’t think it was because his spren has turned evil…

On Gallant: it can’t have happened before Dalinar went to the Nightwatcher. He was a wasted drunk for years.

@161: This isn’t how the Nahel Bond works. Maya cannot be reborn and then, suddenly free to bond another. Sprens are linked by the oaths their knights are saying, when their knights die, they fall into a traumatic cycle which doesn’t kill them, but may trap them into centuries of misery. There is no way Maya gets revived without a proper Nahel Bond.

The only way Maya gets revive and free to bond someone else is if Adolin forms a complete Nahel Bond with her, dies without traumatizing her and has her roam to find another knight. Highly unlikely to happen: Maya chose Adolin. We shouldn’t skip on the significance of Maya protecting Adolin in Shadesmar.

@165: Very good point on Jasnah not being any better than Adolin when it comes to dealing with recalcitrant people. In retrospective, Adolin might have sell himself short: he might have make a decent king, but in the end I think it boiled down to Adolin just not wanting it and being tired of being shoehorned into being someone he is not. My most fervent dream would be for Brandon to push on this and have Adolin figure out the man he actually wants to be which I hope to see is a mix of his father and his mother.   

Szeth is a bother. Very little page time has been given as to how everyone is suddenly fine with forgiving him for his crimes. I mean, being a Radiant ought not to to give anyone a free slate. Szeth also killed Gavilar, so Dalianr being fine with it is just stretching it.

I still found the choice of Teft hard to swallow, not because I dislike Teft, but the emphasis on his drug problems, his inability to move pass them, all of this really did make it seem as if it were a brokenness contest.

Nobody really knows about Kaladin being from Heartstone, but if I recall properly, he did tell his father to bring his mother and Oroden to safety. He mentioned knowing the right city. I personally suspect Lirin, Hesina and Oroden are currently traveling from Heartstone to Urithiru. It just takes time, hence we haven’t heard from them.

I agree with you about Amaram, I too thought it wasn’t the strongest plot point. It seems he just broke his entire honor code, no matter how twisted, to fight with the enemies of humanity just because Dalinar was not nice to him… I would have preferred if Dalinar moral issues on punishing a man guilty of lesser crimes than him be explored in reference to Adolin and not Amaram. 

@166: Navani is in her fifties, so I’d say her odds of conceiving are about null. Shallan and Adolin however….

@168: When Sadeas’s armies turned against Alethkar because they think Dalinar murdered Torol I expected it to flip back onto Adolin. I was even willing to forgive how this arc has done nothing in the story so far if the payoff was monumental within the ending sequence, but nope. Nothing. This was my greatest disappointment in the book: the built up was huge and the result was… well… it wasn’t much. Especially with Brandon hinting on how there would be people to think what Adolin did was totally wrong: we didn’t see them. Everyone was fine with it, even Dalinar. Brandon has a lot of writing to do to make me forgive him for this anti-climatic turn of events.

@169: I thought the Shadesmat trip was too long to. I would have cut it short at the lighthouse and have them move from there to the oathgate: everything in between seemed superfluous. Or it should have been spiced up some. Middle of part 3 and 4 were my biggest issues with the book: I felt they dragged, but for different reasons.

 

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7 years ago

Sorry for the double post, but I don’t want to edit and see my post disappear again… but I needed to say:

@175: YES. This. The book was good, but it was not as satisfying as the other ones: too many dropped character development. Especially with Adolin, but also with family relationships. The Maya arc was amazing, but it is not enough to forgive for the one-dimensional Adolin we were given for the previous 950 pages nor is it enough to forgive for not tying in the cliff-hanger from WoR in a satisfying manner. I also agree we spent too much time into Shallan’s head, I mentioned it a few times how difficult to read I found it at times, even if the payoff ultimately was satisfying.

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7 years ago

High points for me:

Any scene with Kaladin in it. Bridge 4. Lift’s POV. The Shadesmar adventure. A lot of the humor like Pattern’s No Mating!

 

Unfortunately of the three books I liked WOK more than WOR and WOR more than OB.

I found OB really depressing. My favorite character is Kaladin my second favorite is Eshonai. . . . . . ESHONAI COME BACK!!!!!!!!

The end of the Kholinar section really brought me down and nothing else in the book really brought me up again. The rushed ending was unsatisfying and I do not expect the next book to resolve the loose threads. WOR also had a rushed ending but I told myself the next book would flesh things out. That did not happen so I do not expect the loose threads from OB to be picked up.

 

OB had really good parts, but the conclusion was not satisfying for me.

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7 years ago

@171, We do know what Glys looks like: “red spren…like a snowflake made of crystal and light” (OB, 1097-1098), which is what I was saying about him not looking like either Truthwatchers’ or Edgedancers’ spren, and those are the only orders of KR that has healing powers, so it wouldn’t make sense either for him to be a KR spren from one of the other eight orders before corruption.

, My explanation of my reasoning got a little convoluted and confusing I guess :D I was more trying to lay out evidence for why I thought Glys wasn’t a KR spren, not so much for what he was/might’ve been. For me, there’s just more evidence against that he was a KR spren than support. For all we know he might’ve been a voidish/“evil” spren that was corrupted to become “good”. I’m content to wait for Brandon to reveal it fully, but the link @158 necessary_eagle provided (thanks for that btw) might be stronger hint of what Glys used to be before corruption. I agree Glys was corrupted but I don’t think he was ever a KR spren based on appearance and the power he granted. Glys himself doesn’t remember what kind of spren he was before he was corrupted, I think he knew about the orders and (some of) their powers, and just guessed based on the power of Regrowth he granted to Renarin.
 
(Still ) I think I understand your point about the Oathgates better now, I was trying to say that my interpretation of how the Oathgate works is that you don’t need a KR Shardblade to operate it. The requirement for operating the Oathgate in this scenario is that 1, it be condensed power in the form of metal that 2, grants binding (either Surgebinding or Voidbinding) powers. The deadeye spren Shardblades like Maya don’t satisfy both those requirements, and so can’t activate the Oathgates, but the Honorblades can even though they were never spren. The Honorblades being able to operate the Oathgates would support my argument that one does not need to have a KR spren Shardblade to use the Oathgates, because the Honorblades are unaffiliated, anyone can use them. In that case, Glys being able to operate the Oathgates wouldn’t be evidence that he was once a KR associated spren because the spren that grant Voidbinding would also be able to manifest as Shardblades and therefore able to activate the Oathgates.
 
As to Odium and his people not having Shardblades and not using the Oathgates, the Fused aren’t spren, they’re spirits of the dead, they carry their own Surgebinding abilities, but they themselves are not pieces of the three gods’ power like the spren are, meaning they can’t condense their powers into metallic form, therefore, no Shardblades. I’m not convinced that the Listeners’ stormform was a type of Voidbinding, because those spren seemed too common for one thing and not sentient–more akin to windspren than honorspren. And as to Amaram and the Unmade, Amaram already had two Shardblades, he didn’t need to try and manifest that Unmade (sorry, forgot it’s name) as a Shardblade, and I’m dubious as to whether a spren can manifest as Shardblade at all if it’s been trapped in a gem (and related to that idea is I’m curious as to whether Listeners/Singers would be able to manifest Shardblades with the spren contained in the gemheart, I guess we’ll have to wait and see what happens with Venli and Timbre).

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7 years ago

When Wit said that Shallan shouldn’t trust anyone who can see the future, he probably partly meant his own ability to know where he is supposed to be.

Kaladin wants to bring his parents to Urithiru, but they don’t want to leave Heartstone. Lirin wants to continue taking care of “his” people, they need him more in difficult times.

If Adolin had killed Sadeas in an official duel everyone would have cheered. He is no Skybreaker who worries too much about the letter of the law, why should finally getting a chance to kill Sadeas bother him a lot just because it technically wasn’t legal? He lives in a warrior society where feuds are perfectly acceptable, and Sadeas obviously was his family’s enemy. It would have been wrong if the characters’ reactions had followed modern ideas. Before this book came out I thought fans were taking this murder too seriously, so I liked that Brandon didn’t draw worrying about it out too much. It makes much more sense that most characters just say good riddance and move on with more important matters like the Desolation.

Spren want Stormlight as payment, and the Oathgates are spren. Living Shardblades use the Radiant’s Stormlight to open the gate, while dead Shardblades only seem to use Stormlight from the gem for bonding to their owner. Honorblades also allow using Stormlight. Maybe Voidlight isn’t as attractive to the gate spren and that is why Fused can’t use the gates.

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7 years ago

Re: the Recreance

The Stormfather points out that it wasn’t just the Voidbringer revelation that led to the Recreance, it was also the fear that they would destroy Roshar the same way they destroyed their first home, through the use of surge binding. He said that the original Radiants were okay because Honor convinced them that they couldn’t dwell on the past. He also says that Honor had changed by the Recreance and told them they would destroy the world, as Odium had said as well. I think there’s more to that story of how the first world we destroyed, and possibly how the Radiants were manipulated into breaking their vows.

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7 years ago

One thing I noticed that I didn’t before is that Timbre is almost certainly the daughter of the Reacher captain, Ico.  So, I guess that means Willshapers: lightspren / Reachers.  I’m pretty sure we also saw the Dustbinder spren (skin like old white ash that dissolves and regrows when they move, maybe ashspren?) and the Stonewards spren (the ones with skin like cracked stone with lightening underneath.  Lavaspren?  Gemspren?  Mountainspren?) as well as the Cryptics, inkspren, honorspren and cultivationspren we’re familiar with.  

I really want Szeth and Dalinar to have a long talk in the next book.  They’re both fellows with too much blood on their hands and the screams of their victims in their ears, but they couldn’t be more different.  While Dalinar loved the Thrill, even being around it made Szeth sick; Dalinar has always been confined only by the rules he applied to himself, while Szeth has not only been bound by rules all his life, but is looking for new ones now that he’s free.  I want to know what he meant when he told Nighblood that he hopes this goes better than the last time he heard a voice in his head.  I think the saddest Szeth moment was when he was starting to enjoy Skybreaker paintball, and then reminded himself that he didn’t deserve to be even a little happy.  I also liked how, during the introduction, the narration actually faltered through several of his name-stylings before settling on “Szeth.  Just Szeth.”

I am alarmed that Nale believes that only Ishar has stayed sane, when we know him to be a raving lunatic of a god-king.  Navani has won my undying respect for her competence in her POV chapters, and for being the kind of woman who tests her painrials on herself (for science!).  Also, I think she’s trying to design airships, and everything is better with more flying.  I think it’s possible that she may align with Cultivation at some point, as they are both female figures who nurture and nudge along progress, though Navani’s focus is encouraging scholarship rather than anything organic.  I am wondering if Renarin and Wikim will become friends, as they are (or were, in Renarin’s case) somewhat physically sub-par specimens of masculinity who were encouraged to join the ardentia but resisted, and share a distaste for physical contact.

I have noticed a theme in Odium’s method:  He chooses people who won’t take responsibility for their failings, or tries to persuade them that they aren’t to blame.  He tried to claim Dalinar by telling him he could relinquish the guilt.  Moash blames all his failings on being a product of his society, and eventually cares so little that he abandons both his culture and his self instead of trying to fix either.  Amaram denies that any of his wrongdoings were actually the wrong thing to do instead of the only thing to do, and insists that he is honorable or at least no worse than anybody else.  And Taravangian, of course, takes comfort in the thought that someone has to do what he’s doing, and he feels guilty a lot of the time, so it’s really all right.

I have the loony theory that Taln’s Scar is actually a series of dead star systems ravaged by Odium, and that the humans on Roshar are planet-hopping refugees.  I hope, desperately and without reason, that Tien is somehow connected to whoever / whatever the Sibling is, and Kaladin will get to interact with at least an echo of him in a non-traumatic manner.  I cannot picture Chiri-Chiri as anything but a tiny, Storm-and-Voidlight-eating dragon.  I am disapointed that the Dustbringers have defected, because they seemed like the coolest order after the Windrunners.  And Jasnah became my favorite person on Roshar when she described gloryspren as “avian” instead of mentioning chickens.

Also, while both Adolin and Renarin have pretty cool names, Kaladin apparently translates as “Born unto Eternity.”  I’m taking this from the chapter Born Unto the Light and the illustration explaining the glyphs, where “kalad” is used to denote the “ever” part of Everstorm.

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7 years ago

175. firegazer: Bravo!

Gepeto@176: “@166: Navani is in her fifties, so I’d say her odds of conceiving are about null.” Even if she’s married to a demigod or possibly god? (He Ascended, so at the very least he’s a Sliver of … something.) Remember, Dalinar just worked a literal miracle.

Isn’t it weird that Kaladin didn’t even try non-violent interventions to separate the two sides instead of freezing up? Say, Lashing combatants to the ceiling where they couldn’t hurt anyone?

I’m with a lot of posters here: Oathbringer is the weakest of the three current Stormlight Archive books. Sanderson talks about how he cuts 10% from all his manuscripts in the final edit. This one needed about another 30% cut, with 10% replaced by what are currently dropped story threads. In fact, my main complaint about his books in general is that the middle part (everything after the first, say, 20% and before the conclusion and denoument) tends to be repetitive and overlong. Someone should buy him a darling-killer.

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7 years ago

I have not read any comments yet, but here are some of mine:

I was pleased with myself that between the name (Azure), the statements about leaving a throne to a better ruler, and the hint of Royal Locks, I successfully ID’d Vivenna.

The whole “we were the Voidbringers the whole time” thing seems a bit hasty. Voidbringers are clearly Odium-affiliates. Sure, there was likely a First Desolation involving human Odiumites, but the fact that Shinovar was given over peacefully to humanity suggests that the first wave was actually refugees (likely from wherever Odium had last trashed), and the Desolation was probably done by Odiumites pursuing those refugees. In the chaos of the aftermath of that First Desolation, I’d assume that the Listener population was rather drastically reduced, which would mean that humanity could well have expanded in relative peace, only to have Odium begin to influence the Listeners as well as his original human followers. Over time, as mankind turned to Honor for protection, Odium lost his influence over them and turned his attentions entirely to the Listeners, corrupting their “gods” and turning them into the Unmade.

With the sinking of the SS Shalladin and the safe arrival of the SS Shallalin to port, I have begun construction of a new ship: the SS Jasnadin. Perhaps my biggest disappointment in the book was seeing Jasnah and Kaladin be so close several times without ever actually interacting. I do love the way the naval battle resolved itself, too. Shalladin almost won in a brutal boarding action, but the firm resolve of the captain of the Shallalin allowed its crew to snatch victory from the jaws of defeat.

I almost wonder if the 4th Windrunner Ideal might involve something about choose sides or priorities, as Kaladin’s big failing in this book was indecisiveness after he recognized so many worthy subjects of his protection fighting and killing each other, leaving him frozen.

It is fascinating to me that one of the Unmade is in rebellion against Odium. This has all kinds of implications for future potential shifts in allegiance, made even more intriguing by the fact that the Unmade in question is able to “flip” spren. If she can do it to honorspren (and presumably cultivationspren), then why not also odiumspren?

I am very glad that Renarin did not die. We finally got to spend a few moments in his head and it would have been a shame to lose him now. He feels like a character whose arc is going to be a long one and very interesting to follow.

Did Wit/Hoid Awaken the rag doll that he gave to the little girl?

Now that we know that it is possible to wield multiple shard blades at once (thanks, Amaram), I would not be surprised to see Szeth eventually using both Nightblood and his own sprenblade at the same time.

I kind of suspect that Dalinar may have begun the process of revivifying Honor (with himself as the new Shardholder). He may end up bonding all three of the “siblings” rather than there being three separate Bondsmiths, uniting them (see what I did there?) into a mostly-whole Shard once again.

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7 years ago

Caught up here.  Well done Alice and Paige.

I really enjoyed reading this book and getting caught up in the Avalanche.  

I thought the triangle got just the right amount of page time, which is to say not much. 

Glad to see that Eshonai actually stayed dead (I like her, but if everyone survives everything then there’s no drama) – although it did feel a bit like Venli just got shoehorned in to what would have been Eshonai’s arc, and I have next to no sympathy for Venli.  You started all this you power-hungry psycho.

Loved Teft’s scenes.  Conveyed emotions concisely.  Also I found it important that Teft and Kaladin’s 3rd Ideal were not exactly the same.  I think this has some ramifications for the magic system.  The Words are important and you need to say them, but they might hold different meaning for you.  The 3rd Ideal of the Windrunners is “I will protect even those I hate” – the “as long as it is right” is a Kaladin (or maybe Kaladin+Syl) spin.  Skybreakers have some variety in their Ideals too – the spirit of the Ideal is the same but you can be swearing to obey different codes, go on different quests.

Possibly my favorite part about this book is how much our A-list characters fail.  Shallan fails in feeding the hungry in Kholinar (i.e. in being Veil), they fail to save Kholinar, Kaladin fails to save Elhokar, they defeat zero Unmade in Kholinar, they fail to find passage at Celebrant, Shallan fails to operate the Thaylen Oathgate from Shadesmar, Kaladin fails to speak the 4th Ideal.  They should fail.  They’re new at this, they’re flawed people, there’re no operation manuals and Kaladin can’t just hero complex his way through every climactic scene.

That also makes it much more satisfying when they succeed*.  Dalinar captures Nergaoul using a lot of information that we already had about how the magic system works and Dalinar’s familiarity with the Thrill.  This is classic Sanderson’s First Law, and it really worked for me.
* But this only highlighted one part that really didn’t work for me, which was Shallan scaring off Re-Shephir at the end of Part 1.  The whole scene is basically Sanderson trying to justify to the reader why Re-Shephir would be scared of a 3rd Ideal Lightweaver, but we didn’t know any of that before.  Our heroes’ attempt to defeat this thing was basically to run in with swords and spears and have Shallan stick her hand in to the creepy copycat-murder-oil-tar and hope for the best?  Fail Sanderson’s First Law, Fail.  They’re extremely lucky that worked, but later when they’re planning on walking up to Ashertmarn they all point out that their plan is basically the same and that’s really a garbage plan.  One of these days Shallan is going to touch an Unmade and just get eaten.

Loved seeing Azure/Vivenna with some more mastery, and loved her pointing out that she’s not suddenly Team KR just because they’re on a boat together.  Although that kind of clashes with how she decided to lead the Wall Guard.  Does she get caught up in the quest around her or not?

I fanboy-squealed through most of the Battle of Thaylen Field.  Szeth’s entrance yes, Jasnah’s badassery yes, Adolin+Maya yes, Szeth-Lift-Nightblood yes, Lift-in-general yes, Rock-kills-Amaram yes, heroes-realize-that-hey-maybe-somebody-else-in-Urithiru-could-speak-the-3rd-Ideal-and-operate-the-gate yes.  This goes back to me enjoying Kaladin’s failure to speak the 4th – that lets Dalinar’s 3rd, Teft’s 3rd, and to a lesser extent Venli’s 1st and Szeth’s 3rd get some more shine.  Lopen’s 2nd was just for the fans, but Skar and Drehy’s 2nd was nice (even if it is silly that they’ve somehow gotten out of Kholinar and halfway across the continent and Kaladin uses a ton of Stormlight to get to them without knowing they have baby Gav).

I balked at Team KR’s too-easy acceptance of Szeth-as-bodyguard too.  Heat of the battle, he’s fighting the same guys as us and just anime’d one of the thunderclasts?  Great, let’s do this.  After the fact?  Mass-murderer (including people closer to our heroes than anyone Amaram killed) and oh yeah we all thought he was dead.  It takes some of the shine off Kaladin’s squires’ faith that he’ll survive whatever happened when EVERYONE takes Jasnah’s and Szeth’s return from presumed-dead completely in stride.

In the “now that you mention it” category – yeah the Adolin-killed-Sadeas thread basically got dropped and some of the “Shallan is crazy” page time could have been used for it.  But honestly Sadeas’ petty Alethi-ness was too small for the scope of what’s happening now and him being gone is more of a resolution of conflict for our characters than a new conflict.  They’ve got bigger things to worry about than the unresolved murder case of a guy who was openly just going to keep throwing wrenches at them.  And yeah I don’t totally buy the reasoning for the Recreance just yet.  And yeah what is going on with Renarin+Glys?

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Tommy
7 years ago

@155 Kate pronounces it TIMBER like Venli is about to take up lumberjacking. AFAIK it is supposed to be tambər, “the character or quality of a musical sound or voice as distinct from its pitch and intensity.”

 

Anthony Pero
7 years ago

So, just finished last night. Here’s my comments on the review. I’ll work through the comments later! So, sorry if some of this has already been addressed.

Expectations Unfulfilled

One of the most obvious of the unmet expectations is that not a single one of our Radiants clearly gained their Shardplate. There are hints that Kaladin, Dalinar, and Jasnah all manifested—or began to manifest—their Shardplate, but we don’t get to actually see it.

I’m not sure that’s what was happening. I seem to recall that Szeth specifically asked about Shardplate, and was told you got it after swearing the Fourth Ideal–but maybe that’s just for Skybreakers? I think its probably for the whole of the Knights Radiant, though. So, they shouldn’t be able to manifest the armor till they swear the Fourth Ideal, which Kaladin was this close to doing!

Another thing most of us expected to see was Kaladin gaining the Fourth Windrunner Ideal…and he was this close, but it didn’t happen. We were pretty stunned by that…what did you guys think?

There was always going to be a book where Kaladin didn’t swear an ideal, because he swore two in the first book, and there’s only five books in the first set. And I can’t imagine Kaladin wouldn’t be swearing the Fifth Ideal in Book Five. This book was about Dalinar’s journey, so it made sense to me that Kaladin was less important to the themes of the book.

One more major expectation that…well, maybe wasn’t exactly unmet, but turned out to be oddly anti-climactic, was the fallout from Adolin killing Sadeas.

That is a bell that has yet to be rung. I think that will still come back to bite Adolin and Dalinar. Ialai is still out there. And both the Ghost bloods and Taravangian might have need of and be able to use this knowledge in the future.

Expectations Fulfilled

Kaladin Goes Home

I didn’t find this part particularly great. Maybe because Kaladin had spent so little time actually thinking about his family in the past two books. I wasn’t as connected to them.

The Blackthorn

Well, to at least be an adequate husband and father. *sigh* Okay, okay…to not be a terrible husband and father.

He was exemplary as a man by the standards of his own people. If he seemed indifferent, it was more because he didn’t know any better, and Evi’s expectations of him were far, far from the cultural norm of the Alethi. He is very much like Saul in the beginning of the Book of Acts. We call him evil, from our perspective, but from his own culture’s perspective, he was “A Jew among Jews.” And then his eyes were opened. But that took a miracle, and divine intervention, not because Saul was hardened, but because its really, really, super uncommon for anyone to be able to overcome their cultural default.

The rest of Dalinar’s “faults” came from burying himself in the Thrill to escape his own pain and discomfort and feelings of inadequacy. This was the best through line I’ve ever read. And it was difficult for me to read, because of my own family history. It was incredibly accurate, and was reflected in Teft’s storyline as well. 

In the end, when Dalinar is screaming at Odium “You cannot have my pain!” was the point in the book where I lost it, and had to stop reading. He was accepting responsibility, and that was good… but Dalinar. There’s another level of growth available in there. It was powerful, and moving… and incomplete. But awesome.

The Bermuda (Akinah?) Triangle

I cringed when Adolin said he was going to “let Kaladin have her.” I was like, “YOU FREAKING DOLT! WAY TO SAY THE WORST POSSIBLE THING EVAR!”

I was also like, “Shallan? Three wives is only a fantasy in a very limited set of circumstances, which you can’t provide. The rest of the time its a nightmare.”

Renarin: Anti-Radiant

But it makes one wonder: if he bonded a voidspren and can be a good guy, could someone bond an honorspren and be a bad guy?

Nomenclature time. Voidspren are pieces of Odium, the same way Honorspren are pieces of Honor. Right? Glys is not a Voidspren. He’s whatever type of spren Truthwatchers bond, but he’s been corrupted by Odium. And no one can figure out how Odium did it. The Unmade behind the Thrill was not supposed to be able to control people and make their eyes glow red, and someone (Venli? The Fused who was in charge?) was wondering how Odium was able to make voidspren bond humans, since that was supposed to be impossible. Also, the Unmade that corrupts spren (Sja-Anat ) was only supposed to be able to corrupt lesser spren according to Mythica,  not the kind of spren who bond Radiants.

So, something has changed. Although, in the Thrill’s case, it was in Shadesmar. So apparently, its effects were just lesser until Odium brought it over in to the real world. Its still a mystery how Glys was corrupted. But he/she is not a piece of Odium.

Squires and Bridge 4

The Lopen seemed to be talking to Lift before he swore his Ideals.

Rlain got lost in the shuffle, in this book. It would have been better to not even get his POV in Part 2.

 

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Porphyrogenitus
7 years ago

@61:

I have been going through the comments slowly and your take on the humans/parshendi sparked a thought. There is a (loose) historical parallel here: the Listeners are like the Romans, the Humans are like the Goths, and Odium and his followers are basically the Huns. Hear me out.

You have a people who are minding their own business when a huge mass of refugees show up on their doorstep. They allow some to settle in their borders, but others begin raiding and fighting. War breaks out, and the natives get pushed back or taken over. Suddenly a great cloud appears on the horizon, smashing both sides equally, and using enslaved members of both groups as fodder for its armies.

This could inform the ultimate solution, too. The Huns were defeated by a grand coalition between Romans and Goths. Odium will be defeated by a grand coalition between Listeners and Humans. The Goths wound up becoming very Romanized in the end and Gothic Italy was pretty much a hybrid society. Perhaps the Listeners and Humans will end up forming their own hybrid society in the aftermath of this (actual) Final Desolation. There are hints already that some human groups are partially attuned to the Rhythms and certainly some look like they have partial physical attributes akin to those of the Listeners. Perhaps more than a hybrid society there could end up being a hybrid species entirely…

On an somewhat related note, the moral foundation of the conflict might end up being a good bit murkier than the initial Recreance revelation at first suggests, especially if it turns out that Honor and Cultivation imprisoned Odium on a human-occupied planet, in turn leading to Odium corrupting many of those people and sparking a war that effectively destroyed the world and forced the survivors to flee to Roshar. That puts the moral weight onto Honor and Cultivation, since they would have effectively victimized the humans. Perhaps that is why Honor went out of his way to persuade prior generations of Radiants that the truth about the Voidbringers was not an overwhelming one.

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7 years ago

@184 Porphyrogenitus
While it’s possible that Dalinar might bond all three of the Bondsmith spren, that does not mean he will unify Honor again doing that. All three of these spren existed before the shattering of Honor (who died surprisingly late, after the Recreance), and at least the Stormfather existed even before Honor and Cultivation came to Roshar. It was only after Honor was splintered that the Stormfather merged with Honor’s cognitive shadow. I would also think that Rayse, who isn’t that stupid, probably splintered Honor into the tiniest pieces he could manage. Leaving a whole third of a God to just float around with three spren just seems sloppy.

@188 Anthony Pero
During the battle in Thaylen City, Adolin noticed geometric shapes disappearing from around Jasnah, shortly after several soldiers ‘flew’ away from her with a lot of force, which some people believe to have been her shardplate. But Jasnah has a rather bad habit of not telling us everything she knows or how far she’s progressed with her ideals *sighs*

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7 years ago

@180: I think I would have preferred if Brandon stayed with his original idea and had Amaram kill Sadeas instead of Adolin. The fact it was Adolin yielded absolutely no consequences whereas if it were Amaram, then it would have made his character later on more coherent. Getting Adolin to kill Sadeas created expectations for the readers and they weren’t followed upon. If it had been Amaram then I wouldn’t be criticizing this story arc.

@183: Well I doubt Dalinar’s magical abilities can fix Navani’s womb and make it fertile again… I say their time to conceive is well behind them: let’s have the younger ones have kids now. Grand-pa Dalinar sounds rather cool to me :-)

From what I heard here and there, the 10% which was cut off mostly was words or sentences and not particular scenes. I however agree many story arcs could have been made 30% shorter and this page time could have been better used to either create drama or make a few characters less one-dimensional.

@184: Those who will remember my harsh critics of Renarin will be pleased I warmed up to him in OB. He finally did something and stop hiding into inaction. 

@186: No matter how coherent it was within the world not dealing with Sadeas remains, IMHO, a narrative mistake. It would have definitely made the story more active instead we got Shallan’s head story arc which had good moments and a satisfying conclusion, but felt disconnected from the rest of the cast. Tossing in Adolin into the mix would have made Shallan, Dalinar and Kaladin’s story arc so much more interesting, still IMHO. I also felt the Dalinar behavior towards Adolin was literally not explored decently in the book. We saw it in the flashbacks, but then both Adolin and Dalinar brushes it away within one paragraph: not satisfying.

I also think, is making each character arc being about themselves as opposed to play them in opposition one to the other yielded a narrative which dragged at times.

@188: I will honestly not walk into book 4 expecting Brandon will write anything else with respect to the Sadeas story arc. He dropped the ball here, he had 1000 pages to pick it up, but he didn’t. For me, this arc is done and close.

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Ewan
7 years ago

Sanderson has nailed it yet again, definitely my favourite author!

The only thing I was surprised hasn’t been mentioned much in this thread (and sorry if this is just agiven to everyone else!) but the hints about parshendi and humans getting it on at some point in the past?!!? Some of the ones i noticed;

1. Rock – mentions almost hearing a faint rhythm when thinking of his mother and the things he’d learnt during one of his reflections? And the fact he can see spren and the horneaters religion is still being alluded to and is obviously different from vorinism? (and i’m just realising as i’m writing this, his wife advises something bad is going on in their homeland, are the horneaters who carry a lot of parshendi blood being influenced by the return of the fused/becoming fused themselves?) Also that horneater children are assigned different roles like soldier, cook etc….this sounds tantalizingly similar to parshendi picking roles, the ability perhaps lost through breeding so roles are given out to make sure each niche in society is filled?

2. Lopen- makes mention of Herdazians having the tough dark nails (carapace anyone? or perhaps aimian who have blue fingernails? slight detour with that point)

3. The prominence of red hair in the horneaters which is only seen in the parshendi otherwise (apart from the horneaters “cousins” like shallen :) ).

4. Venli commenting that Dalinars features are that of a parshman!?

5. Moash’s name being an old parshendi name!!!

If there has been mixing in the past (which i’ve read has been proposed before but i don’t know if its confirmed? i can’t recall anything from the books) wouldn’t that have big implications for the story? And if all humans came to shinovar, could this explain the wildly different “human” races? Alethi’s for example, desecended from humans and parshmen in warform? it’d explain extra height and warlike culture (im presuming the offspring wouldn’t be able to change like pure parshendi so would retain characteristics?) And it could explain why the humans hair is “marbled”, like Adolins blond and black hair rather than being one colour? and the shin tend to go bald but hair is a big thing in alethkar, the parshendi often have hair on their various forms, some more than others.

I just thought it’d be interesting what with finding out parshendi have gemhearts, do some humans still? like Rock? what’ll that mean later on down the line?! Just some potential i thought was interesting but not discussed much!

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7 years ago

I see a pattern emerging based on these books. We get a character focal point book and on the next we get to see the painful aftermath of their Moment of Awesome. We get annoyingly angsty Kal in WOR and tragically confused Shallan in OB. If the pattern continues then we are getting some serious fallout for Dalinar in SA4. I postulate that the year break btw OB and SA4 is to give Dalinar time to finish his in-world tell-all autobiography. The Sadeas murder mystery plotline may have fell flat but judging from those flashbacks Dalinar and his sons are going to have some painful conversations ahead, things that simply cannot be glossed over in the narrative.

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7 years ago

@193: I so agree with you here, but then again, I honestly thought Adolin murdering Sadeas wasn’t something Brandon could gloss over… and he just did. As such, having expectations is not paying off: there is no guaranty Brandon will further explore Dalinar’s relationship with his sons and if he does, he’ll probably focus on the Renarin angle which will be interesting but not as interesting to me as if he were touching the Adolin one.

 

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7 years ago

Horneaters and Herdazians do have some Parshendi blood. I could swear that it was confirmed somewhere. What I found interesting was Venlis thoughts about Alethi and the rhythms, and how they seem to be subconsciously aware of them.

 

 

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@@@@@ 195 – Horneaters and Herdazians having Parshendi blood? It will be hard for humans and Parshman to procreate. Different anatomy. The Parshman are humanoid not humans. They have gemhearts. But of course, there is magic involved so perhaps with the help of a spren they can be compatible. But following the rules of genetics, the Parshman naturally procreting with a human is similar to an alligator procreating with a shark. Just my thoughts 

 

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Ventifer
7 years ago

To the people who are saying Lopen or Adolin aren’t broken because they are both super happy and cracking jokes. Could you imagine living on roshar with one arm? Feeling like a cripple in or near Alethi where war reigns supreme. Adolin lost his mother as a young child and his father was a drunk. Both of those could affect you pretty badly for a while. 

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7 years ago

Dalinar was AWESOME. Also Lift. And Szeth. The’re the best. Jasnah is probably my favorite character. She should have had more time to shine.

i don’t think Adolin will ever become a Radiant. The story needs non-magical main characters and he is a great one. I like WetlanderNWs idea in regards to him helping Maya but them not bonding together.

Did Hoid know Elhokar was going to die in the castle but didn’t say anything because he wanted that Cryptic? And a Cryptic is the perfect spren for Hoid.

Moash is terrible. I’ll be very happy when Kaladin destroys him in the final showdown. 

The unmade were fun. I pity them for some reason. Well, some of them.

Brandon Sanderson is great at destroying/playing with expectations but I think he might have overdone it with a couple decisions in this book. The book was great. I might have enjoyed it more if I hadn’t been trying to guess what was coming next every single page. I kept trying to prepare myself for the worst instead of allowing myself to get lost in the story. I’m gonna start my re-read straight away. Do a deep dive this time.

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7 years ago

Carl @183: In order to Lash something else, Kaladin would have to physically touch it.  If he’s frozen and can’t intervene with the spear, he’s not going to be able to touch them either.

Porphyrogenitus @184: Kaladin and Jasnah did interact in one of the early chapters of Part II; she suggested he cuddle minks and he suggested she cuddle skyeels.  I don’t believe they interacted on screen beyond that, but they did have the one interaction.

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7 years ago

@198: I started a reread the day after I finished, and caught a lot more detail the second time around. I kind of hope Szeth takes Moash down, and Kaladin never has to see him again, because the poor guy’s dealt with enough. But I think it will probably be part of his progression to the 4th Ideal.

@199: I dealt, really want fan art of Kaladin and Jasnah beset by those respective baby animals. Possibly Lightwoven, with Shallan snickering in the background. Alas that I cannot draw to save my life.

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7 years ago

The Horneater homeland is under attack because that is where Cultivation’s perpendicularity is. We know it was attacked by Fused on the Shadesmar side, and they probably also attacked in the human world.

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7 years ago

184. Porphyrogenitus: “Did Wit/Hoid Awaken the rag doll that he gave to the little girl?” Yes. The text mentions that part of his clothing goes gray when he activates it.

@192: We have a WoB that the Horneaters and Herdazians are part-Singer. Note that this means that Shallan (part Horneater) is part-Singer. Yeah, it’s biologically weird, since Singers (and all native Rosharian animals) have four sexes. One suspects that Investiture and Connection have something to do with it. BTW, this is why I’m thinking there are fertility-spren or the equivalent on Roshar. There have to be. (Also it’s super-appropriate for a goddess of Cultivation to have fertility spirits.)

@199: bad_platypus “Carl @183: In order to Lash something else, Kaladin would have to physically touch it.  If he’s frozen and can’t intervene with the spear, he’s not going to be able to touch them either.” Yes. Exactly. My point is that he didn’t need to freeze. He froze because he didn’t know who to defend, but in principle he could have defended both. It isn’t out of character–Kaladin can be frustratingly paralyzed whenever he faces a decision. It’s just, well, frustrating.

Notice that Timbre is the anti-Midnight Mother. She replaces Venli’s bond with the Voidspren and keeps it enslaved, but fighting for the other side. Enslaving spren is going to be a big deal in the Stormlight Archive at some point.

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7 years ago

@197: As I said before, the difference in between Lopen and Adolin is exposure.

Lopen has very little of it and most of it comes in the form of him being a comical relief. This being said, knowing he is a Radiant, people are forced to admit he has to be broken in a way or in another, even if it isn’t visible. Him not getting a lot of exposure means his character is filled with blank holes readers are free to fill in into whichever way readers find satisfying to justify how broken Lopen might despite his outside persona.

Adolin has a lot of exposure and if some of it comes in the form of him being a comical relief, he does have a complete backstory, viewpoints and several more introspective thoughts. As such, the readers know the hardship the character has gone through: apart from those few years in Jah Keved, Dalinar was an absent father for him too, his mother was assassinated when he was a boy of 12, his father then became a wasted drunk who hated him for taking too much after Evi, he was put in charge of the Kholin army at 17 while Dalinar did his “trip”, his uncle was assassinated, the Tower shook him (it comes into his viewpoints very often), everyone he knows are Radiant and he sustain several dire injuries within a short lapse of time (if stormlight heals the wounds, it does not heal the shock of being wounded). There is this WoB we got prior to Oathbringer release which states how Adolin grew up jealous of Renarin because of the attention he got: obviously this WoB did not refer to Dalinar as Dalinar ignored Renarin as he grew up. It may however relate to other characters, Evi maybe? Or the Gavilar/Navani/Jasnah/Elhokar family? It could be after his father rejected him, following Evi’s death, nobody really took him in, but they had taken Renarin in years ago due to him being left out by Dalinar. The Jasnah/Renarin scene does imply as much.

This is a LOT and yet, Adolin’s viewpoints spend very little time focusing on those issues. He seemingly doesn’t allow them to affect him as much as they would affect another man.

One of my favorite quote is this one:

Adolin blushed, then put on a stronger face He didn’t wilt beneath the stern words. When censured, Adolin only tried harder.

This sentence resumes Adolin’s character quite nicely: whenever he is faced with a hardship, his natural reaction is not to break down, to feel the strain, it is to grit his teeth and to push through. To focus on what he can do, no matter how small: we see this too during the Taylen battle.

These are great traits, but it has made readers doubt Adolin is… well… broken because it doesn’t transpire within his viewpoints. It is why I am arguing, in order to continue with the Maya arc, it would be preferable if Brandon were to spend decent time having the readers really feel how Adolin is both broken and fitting the Edgedancer ideals, though this last one ought to be obvious as he progress towards the oaths providing Brandon doesn’t do the trick to make it happen behind closed doors.

I am currently leaning onto the side of Adolin is broken, just he refuses to admit it nor to let it affect him, but if he keeps being pushed around, it will start to show. I am thinking he wouldn’t have been able to hear Maya if he weren’t broken: my limited understanding of realmatic magic makes me think this is how it would work. I have however observed readers not being very convinced by it which is why I hope Brandon will take heed and take the page time it needs to lay down stronger ground basis for this story arc going into book 4.

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McMe
7 years ago

With regard to whether Adolin is “broken” or not, I think we should be careful not to assume the person must be completely shattered. They just need a few cracks for a spren to slip in. The Radiant characters we’ve been focused on have largely been those with the biggest cracks, but perhaps that is only because they were the easiest for the spren to bond. In Dalinar’s visions of the past, it was implied that any worthy person could seek to join the KR, which seems counter to the idea that only the *most* broken need apply.

As for evidence that Adolin has the necessary cracks in his soul, consider that Adolin has committed murder. Murder is a soul-crushing act, even in a world as violent as the Alethi culture. I think that alone could be enough to open his soul to a willing Maya. Then we have the passing mention of the events of his childhood where he lost his mother and was emotionally abandoned by his father. Or his many years as a soldier… Just because he doesn’t act in a stereotypically “broken” manner doesn’t mean he lacks a few cracks. Besides, some people are just better than others at hiding (from) their problems.

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7 years ago

 Kah-thurak @167:

Why would Amaram still feel loyalty to Sons of Honor after becoming desillusioned with the Heralds and the Almighty and  going full Odium? Though, it is true that it is unclear when it actually happened. He could have been vascillating until shortly before the confrontation, which would explain why his betrayal was executed so oddly. It feels more artificial that Taravangian didn’t chose to publicize the fact that Gavilar apparently wanted to start a Desolation when he was trying to discredit Dalinar. And that he chose to blame Dova/Battar instead of Gavilar during his private meeting with Dalinar.

I agree that main characters should be able to die in an epic dealing with an actual apocalypse. However, in SoA as it currently stands, reserve bench for characters who could take over is not deep enough. This results from the first pentology having 3 main characters, rather than a more evenly distributed PoV structure, with all the 5-6 characters carrying roughly similar amounts of narrative, while being more or less prominent in a given installment. And from how they don’t interact with secondary/tertiary/non-PoV recurring characters enough to build up a decent number of potential successors.

Ironically, Kaladin has the deepest reserve bench re: decently characterized possible heirs with Bridge Four… but let’s be real. Sanderson will never kill him during the first pentology.  In fact, it is depressingly likely that Kal will take over from Dalinar and become the new Honor/ a heir Shard. But the thing is, Dalinar as an older leader/mentor dying to give way to a young hero is painfully tropy and expected. Not to mention that while Sanderson did good work with differentiating Kaladin from a stereotypical fantasy hero who is usually the main lead, Dalinar is still much more interesting and refreshing than him. IMHO, YMMV.

Ditto Shallan. Sanderson is doing something new and unusual with her – maybe not always entirely successfully, but it is certainly intriguing. Who is going to replace her? There are already substantially fewer interesting/ fleshed out female characters than male ones, though admittedly Jasnah and Lift are great, while Navani and Venli have potential. RIP Eshonai. And this particularly applies to  recurring non-PoVs who’d have to step up and fill the lack. 

Writheld @168:

I think that there is zero chance that Sadeas wouldn’t have enthusiastically jumped on Odium’s bandwagon if he remained alive. In fact, he was the one who always nudged Dalinar Odiumwarts – was it a coincidence that he died when he finally decided that he wanted not to bring Blackthorn back, but to get rid of him and take his place? It was Torol’s way of running his army for decades that made them so susceptible to takeover. I mean, is it remotely feasible that all those simple soldiers would have felt that strongly about wanting to avenge him? It isn’t like Sadeas ever sought or enjoyed particular love and devotion of commoners. Most people in his army were likely normal dudes like Kal’s former squads or Teft. BTW – what happened to their support staff? Scribes, scouts, messengers, officer’s wives?

KefkaPalazzo @171:

Truthwatcher spren looks like light shining through crystal. Glys looks like red crystal snowflake shining with light. Close enough, IMHO. Some corrupted spren look more similar to their uncorruted originals than others.

 tkThompson @179:

Honorblades can be used by anyone, but they are still made from Honor’s god-metal, that’s why they can operate the Oathgates. As we have seen, the guardian spren were very much of Honor and are still following his rules. So no, there is no reason to think that a voidspren-blade or Odium’s god-metal would work to open the uncorrupted ones. In fact, it would have been wholly counter-productive to create the Oathgates in the first place, if that had been possible.

Concerning voidbinding, it doesn’t have to mimic surge-binding exactly. That one Fused did say that human surges were stronger than the singer ones. OTOH, singers can probably hold investiture better. And Odium likely doesn’t want to invest as much of himself into Roshar as Honor, as his goal is to eventually leave, with his power as undiluted as possible.

Birgit @180:

Yea, I suspect that Wit, while he generally tries to be helpful when he can, tends to manipulate people into positions where they need to be to fulfill his goals. I am pretty sure that Sigzil found himself in the bridgecrews and Taln became a Herald thanks to him. He had also warned Dalinar that he would let Roshar burn if he had to.

I was also, on the whole, glad how Sadeas’s murder was handled. It could and did lead to some complications, but live Torol would have resulted in worse ones. And bigger stuff is going down anyway. I do think that Adolin should have had some PoVs in part 1, though, not just to touch on his stress, but to show us what was going on in Urithiru in general, provide an outside view of the mains and connect various characters/plots. Shallan’s and Dalinar’s PoVs were far too self-contained.

Sistertotherain @182:

Yup, Kaladin’s name sounds like a foreshadowing, sigh. And his parents sure had lofty aspirations for him. Poor Tien… Anyway, apparently Vasher liked Alethi language enough and was conceited enough to name himself Kalad (i.e. Eternity) after his first visit to Roshar :D. Only to then to accrue all the villainious reputation and earn a moniker “the Destroyer”.

Porphyrogenitus @189:

Honor and Cultivation absolutely did victimize inhabitants of Rosharan system, both human and singer, by chosing to imprison Odium in it instead of merely attempting to fend him off. I assume that’s why they bade singers to welcome humans after their world – IMHO Ashyn, was destroyed by Odium’s manipulations. They felt that they owed humans something, after sacrifing them liked that. Of course, there is also the matter of Rosharan humans originating from several other worlds as well – I wonder how this came about?

Speaking of the Recreance and how new Radiants reacted to the revelations, I was a bit confused why Dalinar didn’t bring up his Kholinar vision as _the_ argument for surge-binding and against giving in to Odium? After all, in it Honor was convinced that Odium would destroy Roshar and only Radiancy and unity could save them? How does this compute with Honor’s “ravings” to the last pre-Recreance Radiants about the dangers of their powers?  Something is very iffy there, IMHO.

Gepeto @191:

 Amaram supposed to kill Sadeas? I have never heard about this rejected plot idea. Didn’t Sanderson say that Iyatil was supposed to kill Amaram during his visit to see Taln instead?

Yea, most of Renarin’s formerly unfathomable behavior was very well explained. His refusal to become an ardent or an administrator is very understandable, now that we know that Dalinar only started being a father to him during their sojourn on the Shattered Plains and there was every reason to fear that he might lose interest in his younger son again, should the boy chose these other occupations. Not to mention that he’d have to leave his family and go among strangers. 

Renarin’s fear and uncertainty upon bonding Glys were also more than warranted. Etc.  I’d like it if his intelligence had been demonstrated a bit more – for instance, I am quite disappointed that it didn’t occur to him that Rlain was certain to have valuable information about what could be expected from the parshmen /return of their “gods”. But, I guess that it is one of the threads that is being, somewhat awkwardly, saved for the future volumes.

 

Some other thoughts:

Did it strike anybody else that both Dalinar and Mr. T made very bad bargains with Odium?

Dalinar only bargained for the lives of humans if his champion wins – there are so many ways that this could go wrong. Parshmen were technically “alive”, weren’t they?  Not to mention that it brings to mind an ominous  quote from another series:

“see what life is worth when all the rest is gone”

but what about spren, Aimians etc?

Whereas Kharabranth, according to annotations to WoK is a city-state that has no farmland and is dependant on trade to supply all it’s needs. So, yea, Odium could “spare” them and let them starve to death.

I have seen people saying that the protagonists had “an easy victory”. I actually think that their current situation is so bad that it is difficult to see how they could hold on for an alleged one-year time-skip. Now, I am ordinarily all for time-skips. In my experience, writers trying to cram an epic into a continuing, unbroken time-line end up with stuffing far too many events into a very short duration, which usually feels contrived and unbelievable.

But consider:

Nale and the Skybreakers defecting is actually more devastating than the loss of Alethkar. It will undermine trust and faith in the Radiants even among those otherwise inclined to welcome them. A Herald openly turning against humanity and confessing their prior defection and lies, as well as confirming Almighty’s death will cause an exisential crisis in all human societies except for Iri, who are already team Odium. But it comes worse – the Skybreakers have intelligence-gathering nets, cover-identities and connections to law-enforcement in all countries. Which means that they can continue to very efficently exterminate other Radiants as they pop up even in the (very tenious) alliance territories. They can hit information exchange at Tashikk and cut most of human communication capabilities. They could hit Urithiru. There are hundreds (thousands?) of them and all it would take would be the Dawnsingers/Odium quickly penning laws forbidding surge-binding and fabrial use by humans on pain of death.

But that’s not enough – our pitiful handful of Radiants from the other Orders can’t even trust any new additions to their number because, as demonstrated by Malata, they can be traitors too. And then there is Mr. T, a hidden dagger within the coalition. And even the Windrunners are inexplicably not sure whether they should be fighting – didn’t they hear about Dalinar’s vision where Honor said that if not stopped, Odium would destroy Roshar?! Seriously, Dalinar should distribute it as widely as possible.

And the Heralds are mad and either useless or active enemies*.

On top of that, the existing alliance is very tenious, destruction via the Everstorm continues, even though it is less severe, their banking system is destroyed, and they are going to face severe food shortages very soon. Meanwhile, Odium is free to contact and corrupt people and bring even more Fused over.

I really can’t see how they’d be able to hold out for a year, leave alone longer. Some media res chapters will be needed to explain it.

*I can only hope that the Herald issue would prove to be more nuanced than that, and not just with the heroic Taln and his love interest the gorgeous Ash. I mean, male Heralds were very prominent so far – in good and in bad:

Taln, the best of them, the one who remained faithful and protected humanity for 4.5 millenia.

Ishar, the author of the Oathpact, the one who created the Radiant Orders as we know them. Now likely the greatest traitor.

Jezrien, allegedly their leader and the greatest of them, worshipped over good chunk of Roshar over even Honor himself

Nale, the Illuminator, the one who clearly very much influenced the history and society of Azir, the leader of Skybreakers in a dogged, though misguided quest to prevent any future Desolations. Tragic villain, whom one can admire and sympathise with.

By comparison, the female Heralds are quite obscure. I hope that Sanderson balances it out with some redemption for them and maybe Kalak? Because yea, it is a new ball-game, but knowledge of the past and their skills could still be very helpful, if their madness can be channeled and/or accounted for. I really loved how Sanderson avoided the trope of largely ignorant and untrained newby protagonists being naturally the best at everything in WoR, with Shallan’s discovery of Urithiru being so dependent on Jasnah’s previous work. Let’s have more of this with the Heralds!

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7 years ago

Dalinar as an older leader/mentor dying to give way to a young hero is painfully tropy and expected.

@205 With Sanderson, that’s reason to believe Dalinar probably won’t. Unless he knows that we know, etc.

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@205: I agree with your commentary on the story not having enough reserve character to allow one of the main characters to die without impacting the narrative. Elhokar and Eshonai are about the most prominent characters Brandon can afford to permanently kill as redundancy is low. I also agree it would have been preferable had Brandon decided to increase his cast of main protagonist to a few more: he could have use Adolin, for instance, to add more layers into the story instead of leaving him in the background for 3/4 of the book. As such, I do think the overall narrative suffered from it as Dalinar/Shallan/Kaladin’s story arc were very internal and involved a great deal lot of focusing onto themselves which at times, did clog the narrative. 

I personally strongly disliked how neither characters (more Dalinar/Shallan than Kaladin) saw fit to think of how their behavior might affect others. This is especially true for Dalinar who’s all about his memories, his pain, he, him and himself but does not see fit to spare one moment to think of the two individuals who suffered the most for his behavior: his sons. How can his entire story be about just him? He killed his sons’ mother! He ignored one for a lifetime and rejected the other afterwards, how can he not be thinking of the harm he did them? How is it the only harm Dalinar’s character is even referring to is the one done to himself? How is it Navani is not voicing this out? This was one of the weakest aspect of the story, to me, the fact the so-called Radiants only think about themselves and the one character who’s essentially selfless, Adolin, thinks only about the Radiants. 

So yeah, expending the narrative would have helped, IMHO, but not with more inward characters, with other characters able to externalize more the issues we have read.

As to who is the best character in between Dalinar and Kaladin, well this is a hard one to answer, for this is. While I find Kaladin to be a tad too conventional, I find present day Dalinar a tad too boring and selfish. I currently wouldn’t remove any of them, but I would not spend Kaladin’s next arc focusing solely on minor characters bond to die as OB did and I would have Dalinar actually start to think about his family a little bit more. He burned his sons mother alive, am I the only one who thinks Adolin/Renarin ought to know the truth?

My main complain over how the Sadeas death was handled is not so much it didn’t panned out into drastic consequences (exile, imprisonment or death sentence), it is more it was completely glossed over from Adolin’s perspective. He was tasked to investigate his own murder scene which was daunting by itself, but not one page was devoted to it. I kept on reading expecting it to come back, to play a role and it didn’t which is what made me think Brandon made the wrong choice by having Adolin killed Sadeas. It should have been a greater issue and if it weren’t to be one, then he should have given us more Adolin viewpoints to verbalize it. Adolin’s entire arc feels so incomplete. I am really curious as to what the beta readers thought when they read it… I personally think it is one of the things Brandon did not do well in this book, I am curious to know if this was commented on or not and if not, then why.

About Amaram, huh, didn’t someone earlier in this thread said Brandon said it was his original plan??? Did I misread? Huh, if so then apologies: my source being this one thread, so huh… well. I guess my point was having Adolin kill Sadeas turned out not being the right narrative choice because it created expectations for the readers and Brandon did not meet them. Had it been any other character, then the expectations would have been different and the existing narrative would have been more satisfying. In short Brandon created a “promise to the reader”, but he didn’t follow-up on it, either because he didn’t realize he created one or he truly didn’t realize how much his readers were anticipating this. All in all, as far as I could glimpse, I am not the only one disappointed with this particular story arc.

I also agree there is not redundancy in terms of young female characters… except for Lift. Perhaps it’d be wise to boost up Rysn’s role within future books. 

On Renarin, I actually thought his decision not to become an Ardent came up rather weak… He didn’t want it because people kept telling him how smart he was. The idea someone might be affected by having people claim he is smart and should pursue this path is rather hard to understand. It seems to me Renarin wanted to be a soldier merely because he wanted his father to pay more attention to him and he saw it as the only way. This, at least, was better explained, so I am now fine with this story arc. 

Renarin’s so-called intelligence is one of the aspect of his character which needs more fleshing out. He still comes across as more “aloof” than smart to me. He still doesn’t try to use up all resources he has. I still personally find Adolin smarter than him for all the military thinking he does which likely glosses over Renarin’s head. Obviously, I am supposed to think Renarin is the smart one, but the story hasn’t convinced me of this yet. I didn’t find the scholars meeting to be an impressive display of smarts, from all characters, but maybe this is just me. An impressive display of personality, yes, but smarts? Not really, but YMMV.

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7 years ago

Re Dalinar’s actions at the Rift where Evi died.  I do not blame Dalinar.  He believed that something spectacular had to be done to the Rift and Tanalan.  Otherwise, others would resist.  As uncivilized as the destruction of the citizens were, it is (in this case) an unfortunate circumstance of the battle.  The same way that dropping the atomic bomb saved the lives of US troops in WWII.  The alternative would have been an assault on Japan by US soldiers.  Likewise, I could have understood had the Fused and Regals executed all humans in Alethkar.  They only kept them alive to use as slave labor.  Part of this could have been to show the run-of-the-mill singers that they are still not the bottom of the social rung.

Tanalan did not have to lock up Evi.  He could have rejected her offer for peace and sent her back to the Kholin camp.  Tanalan sought to use Evi as a weapon against Dalinar.  IMO, I do not believe it is reasonable to fault Dalinar about killing Evi.  He had no reason to believe that she was a captive or that the Rift used that area where Tanalan’s father once tried to hide as a prison.  It would have been one thing if Dalinar had specific knowledge that Evi was a prisoner and Dalinar still burnt the entire city with all citizens inside.

Nevertheless, I can understand why Dalinar would blame himself.  The part of him (even at this stage in his life) tried to fight the Thrill and thought that burning everybody went too far.  Dalinar thinks that if he did not go to far, then Evi might not have died.  I think Evi was dead the moment she entered the Rift.  Tanalan was all about getting revenge on Dalinar.  Killing Dalinar’s wife would have been the best way for Tanalan to get such revenge.  It would have been payback.

I think Dalinar should be held more accountable where he let himself be so consumed by the Thrill that he killed some of his own soldiers.

Knowing what I do about Sadeas in the current timeline, I have a suspicion that Sadeas was truly behind the plan to eliminate Dalinar.   I think he would try to play both sides. 

The Dysian Aimian continue to watch the new Knights Radiants.  The cremling that Kaladin saw when he Shallan, and Adolin were waiting out the Everstorm in the shelter in Kholinar.  I wonder if the Aimia will ever come out openly to fight Odium’s forces.  For that matter, do the Regals consider the Aimia to be there enemy as the do the humans?

My guess is that Kharat is Brother Lhan.

I think Brandon should write a short story where Adolin is part of E! Network’s coverage of the stars walking the red carpet before the Oscars.  Adolin’s co-host would be the late Joan Rivers.  Syl would be the special correspondent who would change her form to mirror what the stars wore.  Adolin and Joan could ask Syl to slightly change the dress or suit to show what it would look like when they offered alterations.

I did not see this coming.  Aesudan bonding an Unmade (Yelig-nar).  I guess that since Voidspren can bond with humans and humans can voluntarily side with Odium that is why the Fused were willing to have some humans fight for them.  There were those humans the Fused and the Regals knew they could corrupt.

Jasnah must have got the bandolier she had when she Elsecalled at the end of WoR at a lighthouse or town in Shadesmar.  Who would have thought that some humans would live permanently in Shadesmar.

Re Dalinar’s dream (after he resumes drinking in the current timeline).  I think Nohadon was Dalinar’s subconscious.  Deep down Dalinar knew the answers to the questions he asked.  The dream was Dalinar’s internal mechanism to get the answers.

Is Odium aware of Nightblood’s existence?  I think he must be if the Fused was told to give him Nightblood’s sheath.  How would Nightblood react if it killed Odium?

Did the Nightwatcher really have Nightblood?  Could she have given it to Daliner had he wanted a “Blade that bleeds darkness and cannot be defeated?”

Is the “him” that Cultivation refers to (when she tells Dalinar why she will grant Dalinar his boon) Honor?  I think it is.  That said, I could still be convinced Cultivation refers to Odium.

Here is an argument in favor of the him that Cultivation refers to is Odium.  

Perhaps Odium thought for a moment that Dalinar had reforged Honor.  The “we” when talking about killing “you” could be that Odium and Cultivation killed Honor together.  Cultivation said that sometimes things have to be pruned to let the entire being grow.  Even though Cultivation had a romantic relationship with Honor, perhaps over time the Cultivation aspect of the Shard took over so much that she felt the best way to save her adopted planet of Roshar was to kill Honor and splinter the Shard.  Perhaps this was because of something she foresaw.  I believe that we learned that Cultivation is better at foreshadowing/reading the future than Honor.  Having worked with Odium could be the “he” Cultivation was referring to when she granted Dalinar his boon.  Perhaps her foretelling told her that in order to ultimately defeat Odium, Honor had to die and the Shard splintered.

I have to think about this for a while.  I am not sure whether I think the above actually happened (Cultivation helped Odium kill Honor).  I would not believe it possible except for two things.  First, Cultivation is an immoral concept (neither good or bad).  Sometimes a farmer has to kill (prune or cut of branches that are living) to ensure the entire organism grows to its fullest potential.  This is also like a farmer burning some of his fields to help it grow better in the long term.  Second, it would be unexpected and unexpected is what Brandon often writes.

Is Dalinar now a holder of a Shard (Unity).  After the opens Honor’s Perpendicularity when he says that he is Unity?  If so, was that an original Shard.  If not, can somebody with enough will re-form a previously shattered Shard into a different type of Shard?

IMO, I think Kaladin’s Fourth Ideal will be something like “It is ok if I failed to protect somebody as long as I tried my best.”

I think Adolin cannot form a Nahel bond as he is not broken enough.  As I see it, Adolin’s only flaw is he is not as good as person as he thinks Dalinar is.  But Dalinar comes to accept that Adolin is still a good person even if not the ideal Dalinar believed Adolin to be.  IMO, however, this is not enough of a break in the psyche to allow a Nahel Bond.

I am disappointed that Nale and most of the Skybreakers choose to fight for the signers.  What about the Oaths Nale swore?  I do not understand how the Skybreakers cannot see that Odium’s forces among the Voidbringers want to exterminate humans.  That will include the Skybreakers themselves.

Will Ialai go back to the Shattered Plains after leaving Urithiru?  She cannot go to Sadeas lands.  Alethkar is in singer control.  I do not understand why she left in disgrace.  She could claim that it was Amaram who caused Sadeas troops to defect.  Will the Sadeas troops who were possessed by the Thrill but do not have redeyes be accepted back to Urithiru?

How did Amaram go about contacting Odium in the first place.  What happened to the rest of the Sons of Honor?  Will they also defect to Odium?  It seems unlikely that an organization dedicated to the return to the glory of the Vorin Church would support a race of people who would destroy that Church and kill all humans.

Where did Aesudan find Yelig-nar?  I think the gemstone that Gavliar gave to Eshonai contained Ulim.  Gavilar gave the other to Szeth.  BTW, what did Szeth do with that gemstone?  I cannot imagine that this was the gemstone that Aesudan unlocked.

Is there a WoB indicating what house Aesudan comes from?  Was she a daughter of one of Gavilar’s Kholin vassels? 

I hope in Book 4 Brandon gives us a scene where Shallan or Adolin (or anybody else) describes Shallan and Adolin’s wedding ceremony and celebration.

Even a blind squirrel can find a nut.  I predicted that Shallan will not turn on Kaladin when she learns he killed Helaran.  I said Shallan will come to realize that Kaladin was defending those who could not and that Kaladin was not at fault.  Yeah for me. (to paraphrase Shallan herself).

I also corrected theorized the Parshendi have some type of internal gemheart and that when they changed into Stormform, the gemheart vaporizes to trap a spren and then solidifies with the trapped spren inside (sublime).

I was so wrong about Adolin suffering consequences for murdering Sadeas.  He had no consequences. He did not suffer any mental anguish for his actions.  Maybe from an in-plot perspective, the resolution made sense:
                Adolin: I killed Sadeas
                Dalinar: How could you
                Adolin: Because he betrayed us before and said he would do so again.
                Dalinar: Ok.  Let’s get ready for your wedding.  BTW, here is some fatherly advice.  Make sure you are marrying for love and not because your cousin and aunt/step-mother created a casual between you and your bride-to-be.

From a literary perspective, Adolin killing Sadeas was a waste. It had no effect on the plot.  It had no effect on the plot.  I do not buy that the only way Shallan would have investigated the deaths (and thus uncovering the Night Mother and freeing Urithiru from her effects) was because Sadeas was killed.  Her character is such that once she learned of killings, she would have investigated.  In the first two books, there were a lot of buildup between the conflict between Dalinar/Adolin and Sadeas. At the very end of a novel, Adolin and Sadeas have school-yard fist fight that ends in Sadeas’ death. For Adolin not to face any consequences, is, IMO, a major literary disappointment.

Cultivation (temporarily) removed all memories of Evi from Dalinar’s minds.  Did that include the fact that it was a political marriage?  It certainly included the fact that Dalinar truly never loved his wife.  Given that, I wonder why Dalinar was so insistent that his sons marry for love and not a purely political marriage?  Was it Dalinar’s subconscious knowing that he was not 100% happy in his marriage.

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7 years ago

I think Sadeas’ death was meant to mark the end of Alethi politics as a major plot point. It also serves to add narrative weight to the copy cat murders. Adolin’s participation was more of means than an end in its own right. I wonder if Book 3 had been Szeth’s book, then there would have been more room in the narrative to deal with the fallout of Sadeas’ murder. That might be why we got the scene with the murder at the end of the last book but it mattered so little to this one.

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From a literary perspective, Adolin killing Sadeas was a waste. It had no effect on the plot.  It had no effect on the plot.  I do not buy that the only way Shallan would have investigated the deaths (and thus uncovering the Night Mother and freeing Urithiru from her effects) was because Sadeas was killed.  Her character is such that once she learned of killings, she would have investigated.  In the first two books, there were a lot of buildup between the conflict between Dalinar/Adolin and Sadeas. At the very end of a novel, Adolin and Sadeas have school-yard fist fight that ends in Sadeas’ death. For Adolin not to face any consequences, is, IMO, a major literary disappointment.

I strongly disagree with this. I found it refreshing how it was handled in the book and would have found a convoluted guilt and redemption plotline for Adolin tedious and out of place in the setting of the book. Alethis society does not have the strong condemnation of killing that our modern world has and Sadeas was quite planely an enemy that had tried to kill Adolin – and his father and thousands of his soldiers – before.

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7 years ago

@208: I think Dalinar insisted Adolin married out of love because he didn’t. I agree with you with Sadeas turning out being disappointing: it could have been better handled without making it a major focus point.

@210: Without spending a great deal lot of page time focusing on a redemption plot line for Adolin, the story could have addressed the murder into a more fulfilling manner. I respect Brandon deciding Adolin would not suffer major consequences, but I wished he had spend the page time needed to convince the readers it was the best course of action. At least, if we had seen more of Adolin, from his own perspective, silently dealing with it, fearing being uncovered and not knowing how to speak the truth, then it would have been more satisfying. It would have also been more satisfying if Dalinar had grated him with more than a reaction, if we, the readers, felt there was something broken in between father and son: blunt acceptation just didn’t really form an interesting narrative. It would have meddled nicely with the flashback if Dalinar came to realize his dreams of glory for Born Unto Light won’t happen and if it actually affected him.

As such, there were several ways for Brandon to deal with the aftermath of Sadeas’s death without compromising the narrative he planned to write. It would have been more satisfying for the readers, but it would have imply him giving Adolin more page time, especially in part 1 and 3, potentially in part 2.

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DeniseWaters
7 years ago

I think it doesn’t matter if Adolin is broken or not for a Nahel bond as Maya is a Deadeye. Even if we decide that he is very broken Maya does not have a way to connect with him as she doesn’t have a way to do so. Their connection and her becoming more aware and awake is a result of Adolin’s respect for her and of course, because of how he treated her from the very moment he had her. He has been talking to her, thanking her, appreciating her way before the radiants started showing themselves. So, IMHO Adolin is the one who initiated the connection and making it possible. I also think there is something different going on here as Adolin/Maya connection doesn’t match what we have seen other characters are going through with their Spren. Also, Adolin has a very different character development arc as he is not like Kaladin/Shallan/Dalinar or other radiants. He is not going through struggles trying to figure out how to face them and swearing ideals related to them. It seems he already knows how to face his challenges and does this with strength. I am not sure where this puts him compared to Radiants. I believe Sanderson has a different plan for him.

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7 years ago

I’m surprised no one referred to the story of the girl and the wall. I suspect that it has something to do with the first desolation with the wall being a barrier after the humans settled on Roshar, in Shinovar. Perhaps I’m wrong. Does anyone have any take on the story?

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7 years ago

Alice and Paige: Malata is a bad guy and she bonded an Ashspren.  Although Spark may not be such a good spren in the first place.

Reaction to Elhokar’s death: I admit.  After the first two books, I was not sure if Elhokar could be redeemed.  Heck, I am not sure I really cared if he was.  In the end, though, he did have a good death.  He found himself trying to save his city.  That he could not, was not his fault.  The deck was stacked too much against him.  At best, had he lived, he would have saved his son.  From a growth perspective, that may have been enough.  Although I do not think so. Most Alethi seem to believe that a mission is a success only if it was 100% successful.  Even had Elhokar lived and saved his son, I do not believe he would have seen it as a success.  He saw his wife be corrupted by the enemy.

What paper was Elhokar carrying.  I hope it was not glyphs phonetically spelling out the First Ideal.  That would be cheating.

Alice and Paige: I agree Shallan should fess up about the Honorblade.  However, they had nothing to do with stealing the weapon.  Members of the Diagram (probably Malata and Spark) stole it.  As part of King T’s deal with Odium, Odium required the Honorblade.  This is how it came into Vyre’s possession. 

BTW, King T got played by Odium.  I wonder if (and when) King T has a smarter day, he can figure someway to get better terms on his deal.  King T just saved his Kharbranth and any citizen born in the city and who is living in it (and his/her spouse).  Odium did not even agree to save children of Kharbranth.

Paige and Alice: Kaladin had already frozen when members of the Wall Guard were fighting the singers who Kaladin traveled with.  Kaladin would not have been able to save Elhokar regardless of who put the spear through him.    That said, I do not understand why Kaladin felt that he should protect the parshmen.  They were fighting for Odium’s forces.  It would be one thing if they were not fighting.  But they were.

How the other Heralds deal with the true death of one of their own will be interesting.  Does that void (pun intended) the Oathpact?  Will it cause the other Herald’s madness to cease (probably not).  Brandon has done a nice job of teasing some back stories of the Heralds.  All but Taln was of royal blood.  He was never meant to be an original Herald (according to Shalash’s thoughts)

Gavilar’s position (the need to bring about a Desolation so the Heralds will come back) is the same philosophy as Araman and the Sons of Honor.  It is interesting that Gavilar implies that the Heralds are his gods.  IIRC, most practioners of Vorinism think of the Almighty (i.e. God) as Honor.  We know that Honor was Tanavast before Odium killed him and shattered the Honor Shard.  Further, per Hoid, Tanavast was anything but a god.  A good guy, but not a god.  I wonder if Gavilar thinks of the Heralds as Gods or just said that to either manipulate Eshonai so she would understand what he was talking about.

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LewsTherinTalamon
7 years ago

Okay, thoughts coming out of this:

1) Hoid is amazing. That speech to Shallan, saving her from pulling a “Book 12 Rand” on us. Go Hoid! Whatever you’re doing!

2) Moash needs to die. Seriously, screw Moash. 

3) Why is Vivenna hunting Vasher? What?

4) Writing a seriously horrifying scene is difficult these days, making the Blackthorn city-burning scene that much more effective. Excellent writing. 

5) Szeth is cool now! Yay!

6) Nightblood remains hilarious, and seeing him/it interact with Lift was awesome. 

7) DAMMIT IM OUT OF BOOK TO READ

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7 years ago

@198 Airsicklowlander

I didn’t think that Hoid bonded with the Cryptic but just saved he Cryptic but then again he might have bonded with the the Cryptic. Hoid could be collect different magic types. I want to know more about that Cryptic because I’m fairly sure that was the the Cryptic that Elhokar was going to bond with.

@205 Iilel, @208 AndrewHB and others in re: Sadeas

I agree with you about Sadeas’ character here. If he had lived he totally would have been in Odium’s pocket. I think it was clear from the WoR excerpts with him that he was heavily influenced by the Thrill and Odium. Sadeas was actually very must like the Blackthorn near his worst, imo. He would easily have gone over to Odium’s side.

As for how the whole thing with Sadeas arch was handled. I actually don’t find to upset over it. The longer it took for people to figure out it who did the more it seems believe that there would be minim fall out. The fact that it was masked by the fact that an Unmade was doing copy cat killings made the waters even more muddy. Overall Sadeas’ army still believed and behaved as if Dalinar was the enemy and in the end the fact that they were easily controlled by Odium, which was were the real tension was in my opinion. At least for the grand scale.

Also, Dalinar’s response didn’t seem weird to me. It seemed he though Evi’s personality was stronger in his son then the Althei part of him but I didn’t think that Dalinar felt that Adolin had disappointed or anything just surprised him a little. I didn’t read that scene as Dalinar thinking that Adolin disappointed him or anything like that that other people seemed to get.

While maybe Sadeas didn’t advance the plot by leaps and bounds and maybe there would have been another way to get Shallan on the hunt for the Night Mother. I still found myself completely content with how it worked out. Part of it just have been the fact that Sadeas as an antagonist was extremely boring and annoying to me. He just wanted power to have power, he was a Thrill addict who didn’t care what actually was going on in the world so long as he got to kill someone in battle. There was no way to actually use him. Right before Adolin killed him, I was mentally lamenting that next would have him hanging out making this difficult for no purposeful reason.

The other human road blocks are are least interesting to me. Mr. T is at least interesting. Malata and her ash spren have their reasons. Graves is planning something and you don’t know if they are trying to help or do their own thing. The other kings have reason to be careful with Dalinar and the Alethi. Sadeas was the boring roadblock that would have the story stuck in neutral for so much longer then it needed to be.

In short I’m with nobelhunter and Kah-thurak here.  

In Re: other thing

It does seem like bargaining with Odium is a bit like bargaining with the Fae. Actually, come to think of it bargaining with Honor, Cultivation or Odium is like like bargaining with the Fae. Honor’s deal with the Heralds didn’t exactly work out well for them. If the Nightwatcher and the one example of Cultivation making a deal that we see from Dalinar is anything to go buy, she doesn’t exactly make agreements that follow the what the person thinks they are agreeing to. It makes sense that Odium would twist any agreement that he made so that it would always suit him. Dalinar is a bit too straight forward at times. We see often that even when he thinks of his words carefully he still thinks of them in the most straight forward manner.

Now Mr. T that I something interesting. Every time we see things from his perspective I can’t help think “The road to Hell is paved with good intentions.” I don’t hate him like some people seem too. He’s playing the long game and he’s doing so that no matter what the outcome something of humanity survives. In an abstract way I can respect why he’s doing what he’s doing. The think that I don’t like about him, is that he’s already given the battle up. He’s skipped the journey and figures that the destination is defeat so he’s working towards making that destination something that still has some people in it. I was actually impressed with Mr. T’s interaction with Odium a bit because he’d realized that Odium would never interact with him on his “smart” (sorry spelled “heartless” wrong) days but he made contingencies for that. The sad thing is that when he “smarter” (*cough*heartless*cough*) he had written off most of humanity already and therefore he didn’t tell himself how to save more people.

 

Re: Skybreaker defection

I don’t think the killing of other Radiants is going to continue. While we assumed being a Knight meant you had to fight on the side of the humans, I think that it’s not correct. Remember Dalinar’s vision where he meets Nohadon and how the conversation was about a Surgebinder who worked for the enemy. Probably the only good thing about the Skybreaker defection is now it isn’t a surprise that Radiants can fight for the other-side and they won’t get blindsided by it. *hopefully* *knock on wood*

Malata, she saddens me but I can’t be surprised that at least one higherspren order wanted revenge. I just hope Ash spren and Dustbringer are actually more chaotic neutral as opposed to full on working for Odium but that might be a foolish hope on my part.

blackweaver

I had a quick take on back in comments( @153). I currently don’t think the girl on the wall was even from Roshar I think she was a worldhopper who came to Roshar from the original human home world and “stole” stormlight.

@214

I want to believe that Elhokar was carrying the picture that Shallan drew of him. The one that showed him as leader who was fighting for his people. No proof just what I think the paper should be in order to have significance in that moment.

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Ingunn_d @16: Dalinar did force the Stormfather to become a Blade.  He apologized to the Stormfather a bit later.

Delat @17.  I missed that Jezrien’s soul was trapped in the gemstone on my first read.  I guess that the dagger contained part of Odium.  The same way that each Honorblade contain a part of the Honor. 

Birgit @18.  I missed the connection between the Passions and Odium.  That is so cool.  I wonder how what Thaylen society woud react if that knowledge is made public.  Probably the same way that the soldiers of Alethkar will react when they learn that the Thrill was an Unmade; something associated with Voidbringers.  Alethkar were proud that the Thrill would “infuse” them during battle.

Gepato @19.  I disagree with you re Adolin and Renarin will be mad at Dalinar if they learn the truth.  They might be disappointed that Dalinar lied to them for so long.  But as Shallan did not hold Helaran’s death against Kaladin, they will not hold Evi’s death against Dalinar.  They are old enough and have enough military and political acumen to understand why Dalinar had to “go nuclear” on the Rift.  Nobody would have thought that Evi would have gone to the Rift and be imprisoned.  Had they learned the truth back when it happened, maybe they would have had some resentment. But as bad as a father Dalinar was to his sons before he sought the Nightwatcher, I think Evi was as good a mother to the boys.  She would have installed the belief in them that their father was a great man.  That will not change years later when they learn the truth.  Further, it is possible that since bonding Glys, Renarin knew the truth.  Yet Renarin has not said anything. 

As such, I think there is nothing for Brandon to wrap up in Book 4 re the death of Evi plot.

Gepato @19 re adopting Gavinor.  Had Adolin assumed the throne of Alethkar, Adolin and Shallan would have had to adopt him.  Otherwise, there could be a dynastic issue if Gavinor would be the heir but their oldest son would not be.  I think it is more appropriate for Jasnah to adopt Gavinor.  If she were to ever have her own child, then there would be the same issues when Jasnah dies and/or abdicates.  Granted, Jasnah’s current character does not seem very motherly.  Perhaps raising a child would help “humanize” Jasnah.   That said, I think it is more likely that Adolin and Shallan will adopt Gavinor than Jasnah would adopt him.  My prediction. He will be raised by Navani and Dalinar.

Naupathia @26.  The spren that Wit bonded in the Epilogue was the spren who was going to bond with Ethlokar before Moash killed Ethlokar.

Carl @38.  Moash is not physically dead.  When he said he is dead it meant figuratively.  He adopted a new name (Vyre) – ok, technically he was given that name.  But, whatever.

Melissa @55.  Small quibble.  Kaladin did not fail the Fourth Ideal in OB.  He just was not quite ready to say the Ideal. 

Melissa @55.  Eshonai actually dying.  One of the few predictions I got right.  I thought the fall killed her not drowning.  But I will count that as a correct prediction.

Melissa @55.  It appears that for non KR Soulcasters (those that use fabrials), they eventually become the essence that they usually Soulcast.  Kaza mostly Soulcast things into smoke.  She was very close to losing her humanity.  Kaza wanted to go to Aimia because she believed she could find a cure for her solution.  Rather than die from the poison, Kaza used the Soulcaster one last time and let her essence become smoke.

Mai_ @59.  Great point about Adolin and Renarin learning the truth of how Evi died when Dalinar publishes Oathbringer.  Assuming, of course, they read the book (in Renarin’s case – I think he has learned to read) or have it read to them.  That said, I have no doubt that the boys will read or have the book read to them.

Squeewockle @61.  Odium did see Lift.  Or at least he looked at the rocks where Lift was hiding.  She ducked back down quick enough that Odium thought the light was playing a trick on him.  She must have made a move, and quickly hid herself so Odium concluded he really did not see anything.

Goldeyeliner @63.  Are you sure that Odium did not see Renarin’s name?  The text says that Odium stepped up behind King T.  I took that as meaning that he saw what King T saw.  Unless only King T could read what was in black, including the words he used to convince Odium that Odium really did need King T.

Kei_rin @104.  We did get a scene where Kaladin and Jasnah interact.  They had completely different philosophies.  This was the meeting where Jasnah said they should try to find the Heralds and kill them.  Jasnah theorized that this could be one way to end the Desolation.  At the very least, it would prevent Odium from directly interfering in Roshar.  They had completely different philosophies.  Basically, Kaladin thought of Jasnah a monster.  Jasnah thought of Kaladin as too kind-hearted to be an effective soldier.  An instant dislike of each other.

Misterkerr @110.  I agree with you.  There has to be more to the explanation of the Recreance.  Are we certain that the “translation” released was accurate?  Could the translation have been doctored by the Diagramists?  I think Book 4 will provide a further “explanation” for the reason for the Recreance.  The knowledge does not match the solution (breaking the Nahel bond and thus almost exterminating the sapient spren).

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kei_rin @216.  I forgot about the picture Shallan drew of Elhokar.  I hope you are right that the picture is the sheet he is covering.  It makes much more sense than Elhokar carrying glyphs saying what the First Ideal is.  It would be like how Bluth and Jasnah kept the pictures that Shallan drew.

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@212: I think it definitely matters if Adolin is broken or not. As far as we can tell, the only way sprens are able to influence the physical realm is through the Nahel Bond. There is no other way we have seen which would allow Maya to make her thoughts heard by Adolin, there is no other way for Maya to be able to brush over Adolin’s mind if not for a Nahel Bond. We also know the only way to bring back dead sprens if for the original knight to swear the oaths again: there is no revival outside the Nahel Bond. It would be a great revelation if something else was possible when it comes to human/sprens bond.

Now, Adolin is not the original knight, but his trip to Shadesmar allowed Maya to see him, to feel him, to get to know him and likely it helped her reached to him. When she protected him, she did something no sprens has ever done outside the Nahel Bond.

As thus, I do think Adolin is not only broken, but has a Nahel Bond with Maya, but since she was dead, the bond is imperfect and weaker than usual bonds. It doesn’t do for him what typical Nahel Bond does for others and it likely won’t do much for him until he reaches the level of the former knight, which he may never will. I however think, shall he stagnate, the bond would not evaporate, but remain stable in its current form.

I have come to believe just because a character does not read as “broken” does not mean he isn’t. Lopen doesn’t read as broken, Jasnah does not read as “broken” and yet they have to be: it is just not all characters will have centered on themselves arcs where they glance upon their own problems. Some people just bear their cross. A lot went wrong in Adolin’s life, imagining something broken him enough for Maya is not so hard, though, as I said earlier, I do think this is something Brandon should expand into the next book. To make it more plausible, more believable.

@214: Elhokar surviving with his son might have led to an interesting arc for him, I did feel he was manning up during the plot arc and it would have been nice to see where he would go from then and onward. A tragic death did however raise the stakes, but I had wish Dalinar had reacted more to it. 

@216: I also do not think Wit bonded with the Cryptic. 

As for Dalinar, I did not read he was disappointed, but I do think it would have bought buy the lack of payoff for the Sadeas murdering arc if he were. In shorts, it would have been nice for Adolin to have some consequences and his father disagreeing, even if not willing to do anything about it, would have been a small consolation. 

For my part, it isn’t I wasn’t pleased Sadeas was dead, but it seems to me the murder of a Highprince was dealt with little consequences and, after hearing Adolin lists us what said consequences would be, it was very anti-climatic no one seemed to care. At the very least, I expected Ialai to care enough to launch actions. When she named Amaram investigator, I expected him to find additional clues. It wasn’t realistic to me they didn’t suspect the explorers, they didn’t interrogated them. There were a lot of small clues onto the crime scene and while they may not have linked to them to Adolin specifically, the fact they were glossed over diminished the narrative, IMHO.

So it is not so much I feel the arc should have been major, it is the fact it was treated as if it never happened. No one character is seen to actually disagree with it or being affected by it. 

Wasn’t it confirmed the paper Elhokar carried was his drawing? I distinctly recalled reading it was the case… Did I hallucinate?

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@217 AndrewHB

In Re: Shallan not hating Kal and Adolin and Renarin’s love for Danlinar

I got the impression Shallan refuses to really face the fact that Kal killed her brother. There were a least time where she had to pull herself back when she made some jokes about him because she was starting to let her feelings about Kal killing her brother come though and being much meaner than she planned to be. She might logically know why Kal killed her brother and might even forgive him for it at some level but she isn’t facing it at all. If there was a scene where she did come to terms with it please let me know which chapter because I don’t remember her facing it and accepting it. 

On that same note, Adolin and Renarin might not be able to forgive Dalinar for being the reason their mom died. I’m with you back in comment  number 208 that while it makes sense that Dalinar feels guilty and what he did was monstrous he didn’t kill Evi with any intent. He did not kill her with deliberate and premeditated intent. But is that how he’s going to relay the story to Adolin and Renarin if he does tell them? Also what if they hear from a different source? Then it really it depends on what the story is that boys are going to hear about Evi’s death. 

We got the fact that their at least some people who were there at Evi’s death who believe (wrongly, so very wrongly) that Evi was a traitor. What if Adolin and Renarin hear that version of the story first and followed by someone telling them that Dalinar killed her on purpose. Right now the story of how Evi died is a weapon that could be used to cleave Dalinar from his children who are currently some of his strongest support. Adolin’s and especially Renarin’s love for this father is built on the fact that their mother seemed to love and respect him. What happens when that foundation is shaken? 

Honestly it might make me a bad person or a coward, but I don’t want them (Adolin and Renarin) to ever find out the truth. It can only hurt them and right now they have enough pain in their lives. It might be a better more compelling story if they found out and had to find away to emotionally deal with that fall out while still working with a father who they have complex emotions around. But I don’t want them to have that kind of pain. (Renarin’s already broken and Adolin doesn’t need to be broken to be Awesome.) 

@219 Gepeto

So, I don’t mean to be annoying but can you go into why you think Adolin is broken again? Or tell me which comments to go back to? I thought you were with me in the Adolin’s not broken camp. Why have you abandoned me Gepeto? I even managed to convince the stick to be fire and everything.

I mean I hesitate to say that Adolin isn’t broken because he’s a happy person but I don’t think he see himself as being broken. I think how a person views themselves is a major factor. I think I said before but I feel like we put too much emphasis on a person being “broken” in order to use the magic in Roshar. 

In Re: Sadeas’ death

“I wasn’t pleased Sadeas was dead, but it seems to me the murder of a Highprince was dealt with little consequences”  

True Sadeas’ death didn’t have great consequences because he wasn’t of great consequence in the grand scheme of the End of the World. Apparently, being a Highprince doesn’t mean much when the world is ending.  I’m being a bit flippant here but that’s also explains why I was happy that Sadeas’ died and wasn’t made a big deal about. He didn’t matter towards the end of the world/fighting Odium plot line and would have just slowed all that down. 

As for Adolin not facing consequences, I think I wasn’t bothered that much about because to me it as a classic example of “life isn’t fair and sometimes we get better than we deserve”. Adolin might have known that he deserved to face more consequences over Sadeas’ death but he got better then he deserved and Sadeas’ murder stopped mattering in the face of much bigger issues. 

As for no one seeming to care. I’m sure that Ialai cares very much, as did Sadeas’ men who seemed to be loyal to him and as far as we know the Ghostbloods are still using her some how and if they thought for a second they could use the knowledge that Adolin killed Sadeas to their advantage they would. I also have to say that I’m bit disappointed in Ialai, I expected more waves from her in an attempt to both get revenge for her husband and to throw Dalinar off balance. I hope she’s playing the long game and that the she shows up again later in a more interesting capacity.

I wonder if Ghostbloods even knew that Adolin killed Sadeas. Shallan knows it know and she is playing double agent. I wonder if this a piece of information that she shared with them. If it is I feel it would be used against Adolin at a later date. Or maybe it might not be, there seems to an accepted brutality to the Alethi that maybe the worst that would happen this far removed from the event is that people will click their tongues and say their was more the Blackthorn in young Adolin then people realized. 

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@@@@@192 Ewan:  I don’t think Dalinar has Listener blood, it’s just that his face is blunt and non-expressive, and he’s usually solomn.  To humans this looks intimidating, but to Venli, whose people mostly express emotions through the Rhythms, it probably looks close to her species’ normal.

@@@@@214 / 217 Andrew HB:  Agree with kei_rin about the paper being Shallan’s drawing, I never even considered it might be something else.  In a movie or show, I think we’d see it lying on the floor just out of reach of his fingertips after Elhokar is stabbed, and possibly stepped on by Moash.  That’s how I pictured it, anyway.  I don’t think that Gavilar worshipped the Heralds as gods, but they’re the Vorin equivalent of saints.  Intermediaries between normal people and god.  Part of Vorin doctrine is that no human can truly look upon the form of the Almighty, after all.  

I doubt that Odium meeting Mr. T on a “smarter” day would have a better result, honestly.  Maybe on a day when he’s average. On a smarter day, he might have tried to bargain for the lives of everyone of a certain intellegence or ability.

And, Kaladin froze because the parshmen were people he knew, not just faceless minions of evil.  He could no longer tell himself that it was “us vs. them” because he’d met them, seen their pain and their confusion and their justified anger.  I actually really like this moment, for weird reasons.  But that is because I have Ideas and Opinions about soldier culture and dehumanizing your enemies, which I won’t get into now because it would be an off-tangent lecture.

blackweaver: I don’t think “The Girl Who Looked Up” is an actual person, as Andrew HB suggests; this is like a. . .fable?  Parable?  I mean, it’s an extended metaphor, and probably a folk memory of how humans violated the borders set for them by the Listeners and “stole” the favor of Honor and the spren.

Not @@@@@ anyone in particular:

I do wonder if we should be so quick to accept everything written on the Elia Steele as absolute truth.  What seems certain is that humans came to Roshar as refugees and were given a territory in which to live, and that they brought Odium with them from whatever destroyed home the fled from.  We do not know that they did this willingly or even knowingly; perhaps they were the inheritors of the kind of bad bargain the Fused have trapped the Singers in.  Maybe they were even the Listener-equivalent faction.  We don’t know what the culture of the pre-Odium native Rosharins was like; the Aimians are just as native as the parsh, and see humans as ancient allies.  It’s possible that the writer of the Elia Steele wasn’t in possession of all the facts, or that it is a fragment of a larger record that did not survive.  I mean, look at all the guesswork we did over the writer of Oathbringer’s preface!  Now that we know who wrote it, why, and what it is about it makes perfect sense, but a lot of the guesses we made beforehand did as well.  (I thought is was Jasnah until about two weeks before the book came out, but didn’t have a firm idea as to who else it might have been.)

I doubt that the parsh-natives were totally innocent in the lead-up to the wars with the humans; I doubt the humans were, either.  I’m sure there will be plenty of blame to spread around once we find out the whole story, and the root cause will almost certainly be traced back to Odium and possibly some well-intentioned figures like Taravangian, whose fear of coming tragedies enabled even greater ones.

I found myself quite pleased with the handling of Sadeas’s death; it started out as a big problem, but events passed it by, and by the time the mystery was resolved there was too much going on for anyone to spare much thought about it. And, really, Sadeas didn’t deserve to be anything more than an afterthought. :P I don’t think we needed a guilt-and-redemption arc for Adolin:  he was shocked at what he did, but he seemed to think the method more troubling than the result.  He always knew he was capable of killing Sadeas.  I also wouldn’t make too much of Dalinar “forgiving” Adolin for not being the man he (Dalinar) thought he (Adolin) was; I think the tone of the thought is just as important as the words, and the impression I got was that he knows it would be wrong to be disappointed that his son, whom he had a somewhat idealized picture of, has fallen short of that ideal.  Especially now that he remembers and knows how far away he was from the man he thought himself.

Honestly, there were times in the book when we’d switch between Dalinar POVs where he was beating himself up for not being the man he knew he should be, and thinking Adolin was so much better; to Adolin doing the exact same thing in reverse.  I’m not a father or a son, but I did like this dynamic even though it made me want to knock their heads together sometimes.  That particular type of feeling when the characters are annoying and delighting you at the same time, because they’re acting like people.

Edit:  Spellcheck, why have you forsaken me?

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Already Mad At Moash
7 years ago

Dalinar’s biceps ftw. That scene made me lol. 

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Melbu Frahma
7 years ago

For God’s sake Kaladin –

SAY THE WORDS

SAY THE WORDS

SAY THE WORDS

and then he didn’t. Still, what a great book. I tried to stretch it and savour it but when I reached the avalanche that went right out the window.

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Felix
7 years ago

But Jasah told us the voidbringers were parshmen and not only was wrong, but already knew the truth.

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Melbu Frahma
7 years ago

On a more serious note what is Hoid’s end game?

He appears to be collecting forms of investiture from each of the shards.

-Taking Larasium from Scadrial (Secret History)

-Clearly able to use Awakening / Bichromatic breath from Nalthis.

-Bonding the cryptic spren Elhokar’s had attracted at the end of this novel – (seemingly, he completed the first oath)

Any others I have missed? I don’t think I have picked him up in White Sand yet.

Is this some form of attempt to re-form Adonalsium? I guess we’ll be waiting for 20 years until Dragonsteel arrives to find out.

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@217: I disagree Adolin and Renarin would brush away knowing their father burned their mother alive. I also disagree with your statement wanting Dalinar needing to destroy the Rift. He didn’t need to. Everyone tried to stop him because what he planned was too awful, too terrible. He was advised to, at least, leave a path open for the people to flee, but he wouldn’t. He killed everyone: women, children, civilians. The horror he unleashed for so daunting Kadash threw his guts up and joined the Ardentia.

There is no way Adolin nor Renarin, but especially Adolin (because he idolized his father), would condone their father’s actions as not only legit, but necessary. Need I also mentioned Dalinar killed the messenger warning him Tanalan detained his wife? Dalinar did not know by his own fault: he is every bit guilty for Evi’s death, a far more terrible death than Adolin was led to believe. Knowing Sadeas torched the Rift is one thing, knowing his father ordered it and, by doing so, torched his mother is another one entirely.

Sincerely, if Brandon takes this event, have the boys know and treat, once again, as a no event, I do not know how I will react. From my perspective, it is impossible it will be a non-event.

I personally feel there is everything to wrap up in book 4 because Adolin and Renarin do not know the truth. Now whether or not Brandon will decide to wrap it up, I cannot say, it is entirely possible he won’t.

As for Gavinor, why would Jasnah, a single woman having no interest into children adopt Gavinor? Gavinor is a boy of 3: he needs parents, he needs s family. So while it may be Dalinar/Navani/Jasnah will think a bunch of nannies and tutors are sufficient, I will be disappointed if Adolin thought the same. Adolin/Shallan are by far the best candidates to provide little Gavinor a stable home, with loving parents, to grow up into. Dalinar/Navani honestly do not have the time to raise a child, but surely Adolin/Shallan will soon have theirs, so add one up seems like a good idea. Besides, Adolin would be a much better father than Dalinar ever will.

This being said, after disagreeing with some of your points, I have to say I do agree with you on Jasnah/Kaladin. I didn’t get a good vibe out of these two: their philosophy seems so drastically opposed I cannot begin to see if there even is a middle ground where they could meet.

@220: To be honest, as I stated above, Dalinar killed the Tanalan’s messengers without hearing them out. He is every bit guilty of Evi’s death: it was his thirst for vengeance and his incapacity at being bested which made him do something really horrific. The fact Evi died just gave a face to all of those mothers he did kill with intend.

On Adolin being Broken… Oh… My thoughts have gone around my brain back and forth on this one. My first impressions were the story did not carry on enough weight on how Adolin is broken: it wasn’t written in a convincing manner and the character seemed to bounce off, unscathed, from all hardships. I thus agreed with this idea Adolin is not broken because the character doesn’t read as “broken”.

Then I used Lopen as an example which I thought merely got to be a knight because Brandon thought to please the fans. I was willing to give a go as it was just a small part of the story, so what if it makes a lot of readers happy? As much as I love to criticize, Brandon did make me happy with Maya…

Other people pointed out, just because Lopen appears unbroken does not mean he isn’t. Some people just aren’t going to show their pain, some people are going to bury them into “something else”. Bad humor for Lopen, workaholic, duty and responsibility for Adolin. It got me thinking to this scene, when Shallan is fractured, Adolin finds her and she recomposed into herself, but it doesn’t last as when Kaladin flew nearby, she falls into her personas again, drops Adolin and wanders towards Kaladin. We didn’t get Adolin’s POV, but if we stop for a minute, then we can easily imagined how crushing this must have been for Adolin: he sincerely believes Shallan has made her choice and it isn’t him. He just saw it with his own eyes. What does he do? He walks off silently, gets her palanquin and… goes out to work. That’s when she finds him again, working. This is how he deals with stuff: by working. We see it too early in Part 1.

As such, he never appears broken, which isn’t to say he is not bearing any scars. He is not crushed nor destroyed, but if we stop for one second and see all he has been through, how can we state NONE of it ever grazed his mind? Only if a little? Sure, he’s always been able to compensate, he hasn’t had his Rift yet, but we’d be fools if we didn’t think Dalinar had mental cracks prior to the Rift, just as we may be wrong in thinking Adolin doesn’t have them.

There is also Renarin healing Adolin and sending this vision of him… this perfected vision of him. Whole. Which implies he currently isn’t whole, despite the appearances.

I also thought of Jasnah whom doesn’t appear broken either, but has to be.

I also thought of how it was possible for Maya to even affect Adolin if his spirit web was intact. It can’t be, not based on what I currently know.

This being, I do agree Adolin does not see himself as broken which is why I do think more will need to happen. I do think Brandon needs to spend more page time on this to make Adolin’s progression more compelling, more believable for the readers.

I would however argue Adolin thinks of himself as unworthy of Dalinar on more than one occasions: he did state not thinking he deserved to bath into his father’s glorious light. He thought he deserved to die in Shadesmar. He wanted them to leave him behind. He also often speak of the Tower, of how scared he was, how terrified, how knowing he is about to die really trials him. He did panic during the 4 on 1 duel.

Who’s to say how he is really faring considering the very little time we have spent in his head? This being said, my above commentaries remain valid: if Adolin is broken, then the narrative hasn’t been written in a convincingly enough manner.

On Sadeas: In a book where we spent 1000 pages reading the fracturing of Shallan into its tiniest details to the point where this story arc started to drag, in a book where we spent 1000 pages of Dalinar trying to remember or talking politic to the point where his story arc also dragged, in a book where Kaladin spent 500 pages interacting with minor characters just so he could freeze up later, I will still keep on arguing Brandon has not given the whole Sadeas arc enough page time to make it satisfying. I can understand, in a series which doesn’t delve into issues, this could be brush over, but considering the amount of details we got for Shallan and other characters, it really read as poor that Adolin gets so little for an event which was presented to the readers as dramatic.

So all in all, I do not mind so much the conclusion, but the treatment of the story arc was definitely lacking. There is a too severe disparity in between the characters and using up Adolin as a comical relief, in part 3, when we know he is supposedly dealing with stuff didn’t really flow nicely into the narrative, IMHO.

Hence, had Brandon taken Adolin’s character and given him the viewpoints he needed for this arc to flow nicely and in satisfying manner for all readers, not just the ones who didn’t care so much about the Sadeas murder, then I wouldn’t criticize the arc.

I believe this is one of the things Brandon might have over-looked into this book. He over-looked how many of his readers were expecting a satisfying outcome for the murder of Sadeas and if the conclusion he wanted to write is fine by itself, he did not sell it well enough to the readers.

I now fear he will over-look the Adolin might revive Maya story arc by not writing a convincing nor satisfying enough story arc to explain how: 1) Adolin is broken enough for it, 2) He can be an Edgedancer because it fits and not because the plot demands it.

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7 years ago

@226 I remember from the sample chapters thinking that whatever Dalinar had done it had to be worse than just putting an entire city to the sword. I mean massacres are awful but it’s not like burning people alive en masse.

Oh, wait.

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7 years ago

@224 Felix

Did Jasnah know the truth before the translation ofQ the Dawnchant? I don’t remember reading that. The way I understood it, at some point the Pash must have started getting called and described as Voidbringers by the humans because that what Jasnah’s research showed back in WoK. I agree with how @221 sistertotherain thought of the writer of Elia Steele. This can’t be completely trusted, it was written by the victors after all. Some it’s probably true and some of it might be written to make one side better then the other.

@226 Gepeto

Gavinor

I figure Jasnah will officially adopt him but might not involved super involved. The adopting him would probably be only for politically reasons. While it seems very likely that Jasnah wont marry, if she adopts Gavinor then there would be no question as to succession if she ever does decide to have a kid herself. She even just to do so for the optics of the thing even if she has no intent to kids or marriage in the future. I think AndrewHB brought up the dynasty issue before.

Dalinar

Sorry should have been clearer. I don’t think Danlinar is guilt of first degree murder of his wife. He didn’t intend to kill her. Second degree murder/voluntary manslaughter he’s probably guilty of because he did intend to burn down the city and his intentional action of burning down the city killed his wife (and so so many other people). I guess I’m just splitting hairs as to the reason why Dalinar should feel guilty. I wouldn’t say that he shouldn’t feel remorse or feel as though his actions were the cause.  Not trying to get him off the hook or anything like that and over all it doesn’t even mitigate what he did because whether he intended it or not Evi is still dead.

Having said that, I think how Dalinar presents his crime is going to make a difference. This entire series is about the power of words.

If Dalinar say, “I killed your mother.” This implies intent.

If Dalinar say, “My actions caused your mother death, it was my fault.” That doesn’t imply intent but show guilt.

If he just says, “I did it.” That phrase could also imply that Dalinar intended her death.

What if Adolin and Renarin here it from someone else who says, “Your father burned the city your mother was in because she was a traitor.” That would have intent and “believable” motive.

Dalinar didn’t intend to kill his wife but he did and that’s what broke him. In way he’s the opposite of Shallan, she did intend to kill her parents and those murders broke her.

@many people Brokenness

That reminds me. The reason why I think “broken” is over blown. Shallan got her powers super super young. The way that Shallan and others talk about her childhood before her mother’s murder, I find it hard to believe that Shallan broken in a meaningful way. Unless you are going to argue that all children are broken.

The way Sly talks about knowing that she had to find Kaladin and that it was always going to be Kaladin she was going to bond with. Does that mean that Kal was broken since he was kid as well? Is the fact that Kal suffered from depression what counts as him being broken? I don’t buy that. Maybe you could say that Kal broke when he couldn’t protect Tein but but before that I don’t believe Kal saw himself as broken.

Personally, I think it has much more to do with someone living up to and embodying the ideals. If you try to live up the ideals of one of the Orders at some point in your life you’re going to fail because it’s impossible to be an ideal and human at the same time and that failure probably leads to the person breaking. This might allow a person to access the magic easier but I don’t think that being able to reach the magic in the fist place require “brokenness”.

Remember also the listeners songs which paraphrased meant that the spren had a much easier time bonding to humans because where the listeners where broth, men were a feast for the spren. All of the magic is only possible because man and spren are bonded and it sounds like it was an easy thing to do.  So easy in fact Ishar placed oaths on it to limit it because otherwise it would have granted too much power to those who the spren bonded. I think that brokenness if it is requirement can’t be a big one.

I don’t want to qualify Adolin’s brokenness because how broken a person seems to me to be the same as saying how much pain is a person feeling and qualifying another person’s pain doesn’t seem right. Maybe Adolin is broken and that will lead him to becoming an Edgedancer. I think Adolin actually would fit that Order very well.

But I think the fact that Adolin could call and dismiss the sword show the same small bond that all Shardbears seem to have with their dead swords. I think that’s the bond that’s going to bring Maya back and that the “technology” that allows a non-knight to bond a Shardblade is going to be how Adolin gets to wield a living Shardblade without bonding it and becoming and Edgedancer.

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alex
7 years ago

Soo… Most comments out there afe very favourable, and while I agree with them, I also have to agree with the small percentage that is quite disappointed. To sum up the disappointed ones (which is more constructive then summing up the positive), the complaints are mostly about “too much Shallan” and others and “too little Bridge 4” and Kal. Yes, I agree, about 50% Shal time should go to Kaladin. Plus some action there like we used to. As it is, we are left with a beautiful picture without main subject… without main character, really.

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7 years ago

We don’t know when Jasnah learned the truth about the voidbringers, but it was probably in Shadesmar (unless Hoid told her).

Is the stele written in metal? And if it is from the Parshendi after a war with humans, it makes sense that they present the humans as the bad guys. There is no reason the writers had to know the real story (or want to tell it truthfully). The heralds lied about winning the war against the desolation, why should some anonymous writers of a stele tell the truth? The writers obviously were against trusting humans, but they might have been biased by bad experiences.

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7 years ago

It feels to me like the series structure follows his book structure. Thus I liken OB to the Part 3’s of his novels. The stakes are raised, there’s an epic moment and there us a point where you can see everything falling apart. Shallan outed as thief in WOK, Kaladin in prison in WOR, the fall of Kholinar in OB, part 3 for Brandon is often the most painful part in his novels. Despite the MOA’s in OB, this is probably going to be the most painful book of the front half SA. Odium making deals, voidspren running Shadesmar, Ialai still on the loose, 2 orders of KR in rebellion, a coalition fractured, the Fused moving nearly unimpeded throughout Roshar and our heroes severely outnumbered. Oh, and the Heralds are broken.

Probably means book 8 in SA will be just as painful as OB.

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7 years ago

We are all taking brokenness being a requirement for bonding as etched in steel but I forget where us readers obtained that knowledge. Was it a WOB or was it someone in the books? Anybody have a quote? 

I ask because I seem to remember that being broken isn’t the only way for a spren to enter an individual’s spiritweb. If a character in-world provided the information then it’s certainly possible that they don’t have all the facts. Look at Mistborn. We didn’t find out that Atium didn’t belong in the metal chart until the end of Hero of Ages. We still don’t know the properties or even the existence of Harmonium or what an alloy of Lerasium would do.

We know that getting broken is one surefire way to open the spirtweb for bonding, we’ve seen it. But for some characters the evidence available does not support a breaking, or at least that there must be more to it than just that.

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7 years ago

@18 i Really love the idea that the story Wit and Shallan tell is some sort of cover for what happened to the humans. They stole some of the light the Dawnsingers had…. but they didn’t steal all of it, so that doesn’t mean they can’t be friends right? 

Kaladin’s dilemma: the scene where Elhokar died was tragic, with him glowing and little Gavinor… agh! I do wonder, if perhaps Kaladin is a reflection of the Radiants’ thought processes and perhaps even Honors’… he saw that the parshmen weren’t truly enemies, and the men weren’t either. 

Interpretation of the dawnchant: ugh. So many complex ideas being explored here. I’m actually a little scared to discuss it. But really, is it wrong for me to have some hope that neither humans or parshmen will be drawn to extinction? 

Speaking of which, did anyone notice the MAJOR SHIFT of SINGERS—-> LISTENERS. Like what? Wait, WHAT?!? 

What happened to make the transformation? I think it has something to do with a shift from serving Honor and Cultivation, to serving Odium. Two allow growth and individuality, while one demands obedience…

Knights Radiant…i want to know more. That’s all. We still haven’t really seen what some of the orders can do  we just know in theory.

as far as brokenness, I disagree that there has to be a certain “level.” Perhaps they just have to recognize their own innate humanity??? 

 

HONOR: I’m still holding out hope that Honor isn’t as dead as he claimed… i mean, Syl came back to life, and Maya seems to be…. 

perhaps Dalinar…. or maybe Unity is the new form of Honor? 

 

HERALDS: does anyone else feel totally dumbfounded by Jezrien’s death? All the heralds were apparently. Also Jasnah’s finding of them is interesting and exciting. I want to learn more about the heralds, and i hope there is some form of redemption for them. 

ESHONAI AND VENLI: excuse me while I go sob for a while. ::::A&P, could you pass the tissues?::::

 

…THEN THERES THE PEOPLE WE HATE. Hate is a strong word, right? Agh. Especially cause Brandon has this way of making you feel for even the people you hate! Exhibit A: Taravangian. Gah. But then there’s the scene with the letters from his grandkids. Ok I just don’t know what to think. He would kill all to save a few? Exhibit B: Moash. I agree with previous statements that he is Kaladins foil. But gosh, why did I like the guy so much in WoR? 

HOID/WIT: I haven’t gotten to other cosmere stories, so I don’t know much about HOID… but as Wit it’s obvious that he knows way more than he lets on. He made me sob…. and he made me feel more than a little concerned when he took a Puzzle (I really hope the theories that this is Shallans puzzle aren’t true). Don’t know how much I can trust the guy, honestly. Call me a doubter. 

 

….and, oh! THE EPITHETS. I had to re read all of them after reading Dalinar’s intro to Oathbringer (which was spectacular!). I still think there’s more to those than we know, I just can’t bring my brain to remember them. 

 

Also, I love Lift. I’m pretty sure she’s my soul sister. 

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7 years ago

Some random thoughts and predictions:

Was Kaza the Soulcaster turned into a smokespren upon her death? Are some of the sapient spren former Soulcasters? And how come that there are sapient spren that do not form Nahel bonds – such as smokespren and mistspren?

Eye color – as far as I understand the Vorin kingdoms have comparatively high number of lighteyes because there are many descendants of ancient Radiants living there. IIRC, there is a WoB that the eye-color change is heritable. But when do the Radiants’ eyes actually change? IIRC both Lift and Kaladin are still dark-eyed unless they have summoned their Blades or surge-binded recently. And also, the eyes of Lighweavers and Dustbringers should turn red, right? But we never heard of red as a light-eyes color and wouldn’t it get them confused with Odium’s creatures? Also, do eyes of the Edgedancers eventually turn white? That would be creepy.

Much as the scene of Jasnah’s queenly entrance was bad-ass, I worry that there is far too much for her to do as an only existing Elsecaller and this would be a fatal distraction. Somebody needs to box highspren’s ears and remind them that Odium intends to destroy them, since they are also splinters of Honor, IIRC. Also, if they are indeed the most rigid, how is it that they don’t uphold oaths to the dead? Actually, _all_ the spren need to be reminded that they’d be on the chopping block if Odium wins. She also needs to find out what happened to the Sibling, as it is critical to them being able to hold Urithiru long-term. And there is so much information to gather and so many problems to figure out… I dunno. 

I have to say that I was disappointed that after Jasnah’s seemingly epic trek through Shadesmar, she had nothing to show for it and the only useful new info apparently was spoon-fed to her by Hoid. I mean, she bearded the highspren in their den… and nothing came of it?!

I don’t mind the way that the death of Sadeas was handled – nice subversion of expectations there, and the left-turn into a little horror plot-line that subsequently sequed into the greater theme of the Unmade was very enjoyable. Honestly, the murder investigation could never be meaty enough in itself – yes, despite my liking for Adolin’s character. It had to tie into something bigger. I thought that it would go into revelations about Sons of Honor and Gavilar, but I am well satisfied with this completely unexpected turn. However, I can’t help but lament Adolin’s confession to Dalinar – it would make giving surviving Sadeas soldiers a second chance that much harder. Dalinar can no longer swear that he doesn’t know who killed their highprince. But just booting them out of Urithiru would turn them into a plague of robbers or a tool of Ialai’s revenge.

Rlain is going to be a Bondsmith. They will need a singer one to unite humans and singers into an anti-Odium coalition and his whole history with Bridge 4 prepared him to become a bridge between the peoples. And there is no other sufficiently prominent singer in the series so far. Venli has already bonded a Willshaper spren and she doesn’t have sufficient links to humans.

There are hints that Navani might also become specifically Sibling’s Bondsmith – her history of holding realms and alliances together, her association with the glory-spren (though that may be a reflection of her connection to Dalinar), her fierce determination to make Urithiru work… OTOH, that would make 2 of the 3 Alethi and a married couple to boot… I dunno.

Do singers live significantly longer than humans? Browsing Eshonai’s chapters from WoR I have noticed that there were about 37 K listeners in Narak, but at no point are children either seen or mentioned in her PoV. They wouldn’t have been having any during the last 6 years, of course, but older children should still have been there, no? Parshmen, too, seem to have relatively few children and apparently birthing even one made a parshwoman particularly valuable.

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Already Mad At Eshonai
7 years ago

The prologue is a small part of Eshonai’s backstory pov. I wonder if that is all we will get… not sure if she will have a whole book dedicated to her, especially since she doesn’t seem as important anymore. 

More Kaladin, please.

More bridge 4, please. 

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7 years ago

Someone mentioned upthread that Vasher was also named “Kalad”. Note that Kaladin = son of Kalad! Is he even related to Lin?

Gepeto@207: “He burned his sons mother alive, am I the only one who thinks Adolin/Renarin ought to know the truth?”

There’s no “ought” or “if” involved, because Dalinar will publish it in a book.

 

kei_rin@220:

Honestly it might make me a bad person or a coward, but I don’t want them (Adolin and Renarin) to ever find out the truth.

See above. Not optional.

Melbu Frahma@225:

On a more serious note what is Hoid’s end game?

He appears to be collecting forms of investiture from each of the shards.

-Taking Larasium from Scadrial (Secret History)

-Clearly able to use Awakening / Bichromatic breath from Nalthis.

-Bonding the cryptic spren Elhokar’s had attracted at the end of this novel – (seemingly, he completed the first oath)

Any others I have missed?

He tried to become an Elantrian back in Sanderson’s first published novel, but failed.

All this discussion of Adolin being broken … Hoid just bonded a Cryptic. How is he broken?

(Yes, he bonded it. Do you really think he recited the First Ideal as he first touched it by coincidence?)

Why could Odium take control of Sadeas army in particular? Well, every one of them (probably over 95% of the ones in that battle, anyway) participated in the betrayal of the Kholins on that raid. Maybe made them a bit vulnerable?

 

Something I thought of over the weekend: “Adonalsium” is a bilingual reference that may have Realmatic significance. Hebrew adonai, “lord” plus Latin suffix -ium meaning “substance” make “Substance of the Lord.”

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7 years ago

@237 I’d bet by this point, Hoid’s spirit web is more cracks than whole pieces. The question might not be how he lets the spren in but how he keeps everything else out. Especially if each form of Investiture requires its own channel.

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7 years ago

I’m finally catching up with all the comments. Bear with me. @110 I like your point about Taravangian. I also would like to see him “normal” without his boon/curse and needing to accept responsibility before I make a complete judgement. 

@117- I like the theory that Lift could be centuries old. It certainly would add an interesting twist. But remember, in Edgedancer and WoR when we first meet her, the thieves assume she is 12. She makes a saucy comment about not being older than she can count on two hands (10), but mentally says she’s been that way for 3 years. Presumably, she is 13. If she is centuries old, she must not have a complete knowledge of it herself. As for her wisdom, I’d say it’s not uncommon for children on their own on the streets to know way more than you’d expect. @155Wetlander expands on this as well… though in defense of @117, it Is possible that Lift didn’t realize she spoke to cultivation. Dalinar didn’t realize it until his flashbacks…

@131 and others. I agree that there is more to the recreance. We don’t have all the info yet…. c’mon book 4!!!

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7 years ago

Odium mentions Fortune at the end of the book when speaking with Taravangian.  Is Fortune one of the previously unidentified Shards?  Or is it some other cosmere related aspect that I don’t remember.

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7 years ago

Re: When Jasnah knew about humans being the Voidbringers

I assumed that knowledge is what she was referencing in her conversation with Ivory in Chapter 47:

“We must tell the others what we learned from Wit, Ivory. Eventually, this secret must be known.”

“Jasnah, no. It would be the end. Another Recreance.”

“The truth has not destroyed me.”

“You are special. No knowledge is that can destroy you. But the others…”

Is there any other thing that’s likely to fit that?

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7 years ago

The Parshmen might have trouble having children because they have no mateform, and other forms aren’t really interested.

Fortune could be a term for being able to see the future. Taravangian seems to have made predictions in the Diagram like a supercomputer, not magical prophecy, which Odium seems to be able to use.

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7 years ago

There was an almost throw away line when Dalinar is learning to read about how the women have extra text in documents that they DO NOT tell the men.Maybe this was just meant as another catalyst for Dalinar to learn to read but it be more.

 

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Naraoia
7 years ago

@243 I’m almost certain one of Shallan’s early PoVs in TWoK mentions undertexts. IIRC it’s in relation to Jasnah’s biography of King Gavilar. It might be important, or it might just be an interesting bit of culture.

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7 years ago

I have close to a bajillion thoughts about this book,  but don’t have time for even a fraction of them. None of them are as great as all of the comments that are already here, I’m sure,  but here are some of the thoughts. Those that I leave out are not any less important,  these were just the first to come to mind while writing this.

Thought one: ELHOKAR!!!! Augh. I will never ever be over that. Ever.  I’ve been waiting for him to become radiant for so long. So long. I had hope for him,  and wanted him to become the hero he could never see in himself. And there he was, so close,  so unbelievably close to becoming a Radiant,  and then…augh! None of that was okay. The only good that came of this was Queen Jasnah.

Thought B: The Voidbringer reveal.  I wasn’t ridiculously shocked by this, actually. It definitely does make the question of what is right more difficult to answer though. But,  I don’t get how so many people are willing to side with the fused on this or to just abandon the fight altogether. Yes,  that land may not have been theirs originally. But they are not their ancestors. No one involved in this war actually displaced the parshpeople themselves, though they did benefit from their ancestors’ wrongdoing. Killing all of the humans does not solve this problem. It’s a classic case of two wrongs not making a right. While those who are giving up on the fight are right that they have no claim on the land, they do have claim to their lives, and I believe that those are worth fighting for.

Thought III: Dustbringers. Spark seems to have sided with Odium, and if that’s the case it begs the following question. Did all spren of that sort (I forget what they are,  ashspren?) decide to take Odium’s side,  or will some of them work with Honor and Cultivation? If none of them do,  will the Knights Radiant get any Dustbringers at all?

Thought 4: Taln. He is so good. I love him to bits. And he and Ash may or may not be my favorite couple now. By which I mean they totally are. If Moash kills either of them I will kick a wall in  or something.

Thought funf : Unity. Not only was Dalinar’s uniting of the realms amazing,  but I noticed something interesting from the Way of Kings. The very first chapter we get from Dalinar’s perspective is called “Unity”, and I think it’s interesting that our first introduction to Dalinar is the name he would eventually take.

Thought the sixth: Chapter 82 (at least I think that’s the  Girl who Stood Up chapter) was beautiful. I adore the relationship between Shallan and Hoid.

Also, I’m so happy that Lift got to join the main group. I shouted in happiness when she first appeared in the dreams, and her interactions with everyone did not disappoint, especially nightblood. I was also happy to see Rsyn again. I  haven’t even touched on Renarin or Maya,  or the Unmade, or Syl having a bounty on her, or bridge 4, or Venli, or Vivenna, or the love triangle….there is so,  so much to think about in this book. I don’t even know what I want to discuss. 

It seems crazy that there will be a year gap between this and the next book. I imagine that year would be packed with important things, and it might be hard to catch up on all of those events midbook. But I still can’t wait for it.

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Gleemancer
7 years ago

Doing a second listen and I’ll complete it before weighing in with takes on the book itself. In the meantime, just a quick word of thanks to you, Paige (and in this case, Alice as well), for the good work you do here. You’ve got such an engaging and distinctive voice (which, as a fellow short form writer who shares your passion for fantasy lit, I deeply appreciate), and your takes on the material are always on-point. Kudos, and keep up the great work!

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7 years ago

I just noticed that my copy of OB has a big typo.  On the Contents page, it says “Book Two: Oathbringer.”  Did anybody else notice this on their copy of OB.

Thanks for reading my musings.
AndrewHB
aka the musespren

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Obelix
7 years ago

Funny and interesting review. Thanks for that.

I won’t go into many items already discussed in the blog and in the comments. I do want to mention one thing. I am a little surprised that Cultivation/Nightwatcher’s plan is an unexpected development to many. I thought it was very similar to Preservation’s devious and long-haul plan against the encroaching and increasing power of Ruin (Mistborn trilogy – Scadrial system). I think there is a strong similarities between the strong but one-track goals of Ruin and Odium and as well as between the apparently weak power but clever plan to preserve life and create champion(s) for life by Preservation and Cultivation (+Honor).

More thoughts on that from other readers?

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7 years ago

@247 that typo has been in every copy of the book I’ve seen so far, unfortunately. 

@248 I agree that there are many similarities between Odium and Ruin vs. Preservation and Cultivation/Honor,  down to the former being in a prison that the heroes may potentially release them from. Cultivation could be said to be a different side to Ruin’s coin. They both focus on change, but Ruin focuses on the decay while Cultivation focuses on the growth. 

FenrirMoridin
7 years ago

On the Gavinor adoption front, I was joking earlier about Kaladin adopting him, but for anyone saying Adolin and Shallan will be good adoptive parents: I hope if that’s the case the 1 year timeskip is good for Shallan because she is nowhere close to a good mental state for child-rearing.  I suppose she could be the bad parent with Adolin as Good Dad, which would be a fun dynamic, but is not a good endorsement for their collective aptitude in terms of raising a child.  And them making children of their own won’t really remedy that situation, unless Shallan makes a fourth personality for child rearing.  

As much as I loved Oathbringer as a book, I was disappointed I didn’t love it more than Words of Radiance, which I think is solely because of how much Sanderson side-stepped drama in this book.  Shadesmar was the chasms sequence of this book but it didn’t have nearly the same power I found.  
In a lot of ways it reminds me of how I felt with Bands of Mourning: the book was weighted a bit more towards propulsive plotting and action while abandoning some of the interpersonal conflict more common in the book before.  

And I’m sure that opinion is only like 10% influenced by my lingering sadness over Elhokar’s death.  That’ll go down for me as one of Sanderson’s most tragic scenes.  And it’s not helped by Hoid claiming the same Cryptic at the very end of the book; I’m glad he saved the precious baby Pattern but Elhokar was so close.*
*Yes put me down as one of those assuming it’s the same Cryptic, it feels like there’s no proper narrative reason for it to be anything else.  

Also put me down as needing fanart of Kaladin with kittens and Jasnah with skyeels, even though it’s a double-edged sword: sure it’s a cute scene but the tsun-tsun is very strong in it, and will probably form the bedrock for the Jasnadin ship I’m sure will flourish now that Shallalin won out over Shalladin.

Hmmm what else.  Oathbringer felt like it had a few too many lampshade moments: probably the biggest example being Adolin telling Shallan he’ll “let Kaladin have her.”  It wasn’t untrue to the characters but I still cringed at Shallan having to assert it’s her decision after Adolin had a dumb but lovable self-sacrifice moment – yes we get it, good job spelling it out.  Especially doing so *twice* in short succession, as Kaladin explained to Syl how Shallan made the choice and that was it.*
*This is actually part of my biggest question for a seemingly inconsequential detail: why was Syl in particular so fixated on Kaladin pursuing a romance, especially with Shallan but in general?  Is it just a new character quirk (or a quirk with their relationship as Nahel partners), or is it Sanderson trying to hint at a deeper meaning?  We’ve been told that honorspren are the most human-like so maybe that’s why?  I guess it could be a hint at there being a deeper layer to their relationship, but I’m not sure I could get on a Kaladin/Syl ship, human/spren relationships don’t seem to be a thing, or haven’t come up at all yet.

It’s interesting to me so many people loved Adolin in this book, I thought he was fine but he kind of faded into the background for me in this book.  I put it down to him being so anti-drama in his role in the story, despite how things seemed after Words of Radiance.  Which I don’t necessarily mind, but I definitely lost interest in him over the course of this book.
Maybe Renarin took over some of it?  It was nice to see him coming into his own in this book, and that scene where Jasnah decides to spare Renarin might be my favorite in the whole thing.  Renarin foresaw that Jasnah’s love would fail but his vision was wrong and it DID NOT.  
*So good.*

I’m not sure I buy Jasnah being able to already manifest Shardplate: not that I couldn’t believe she already reached that level of Radiant-ness, but because it seems weird for her to hide the ability while a war is happening.  Sure Stormlight means most wounds aren’t that much of a danger, but I get the feeling one of the big advantages in having Shardplate as a Radiant was being able to conserve Stormlight by not having it wasted on healing, so you have more for your use of Surges.  
It wouldn’t be the first or fifth time though that Sanderson has surprised me by having a deeper reason for why something happens/doesn’t happen in his book.

Amusingly, while Kaladin is my favorite of the three main viewpoints, I feel like the best part for him was probably Part 2 when he didn’t have his point of view there. Seeing Kaladin through Bridge 4 was a treat, and seeing inside the heads of Kaladin’s core cast of Squires was the biggest overall delight in the book I’d say.  

I have a lot of other thoughts on the book but none of them are cohesive enough to share right now.  But something that I noticed in the last 3 books (as I reread The Way of Kings and Words of Radiance before Oathbringer, because of course): Kaladin is a very scream-y man, he’s not afraid to yell out when he’s feeling particularly emotional.  Perhaps this is because of how passionate he is?  I wonder how well that will translate to a visual medium though, if they do manage to successfully adapt the Stormlight Archive: shouting scenes like that can be hard to pull off without becoming cringe-inducing.

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7 years ago

Sasuther @117.  I did not believe Lift is centuries old.  I just think she misunderstood the consequences of what she asked.  She may have wanted not to grow up (meaning she would always remain a child).  However, I believe this is not what Cultivation gave her.  I do believe that it was Cultivation (and not the Nightwatcher) who granted Lift’s boon.

Gepeto @138: If Shallan becomes pregnant, she should ask Syl to be her midwife 😊

Gepeto @138 @140 re Eshonai’s death.  Do not speak for everybody.  I always believed she would not survive after the end of WoR.  Also, what makes you think that “most readers” wanted to see Elhokar “progress towards being a knight.”  I do not recall many posters on Tor.com (admittedly the only SA fan site I read readers comments on the series) wanting him to be a KR.  Some thought he might; that he was broken enough to become one.  For me personally, I never liked him.  I felt he was too weak of character.  As I thought you have said in the past (and my apologies if you did not), not every good guy should become a KR.  It does help that not all Team “Good Guys/Gals” have god like powers.

Ke_rin @153.  I thought that the Edgedancer-like Fused was faster than Lift because she could Edgedance using her feet.  Lift was not that experienced.  She used her knees to glide.  On the other hand, Kaladin was more experienced than the flying Fused.  As such, Kaladin had greater control and could fly faster.

Ke_rin @153.  Re screaming Blades.  The only way to hear a spren scream is for a Nahel Bonded person grab a dead spren Blade.  Somebody like Adolin does not hear a scream when he holds a Shardblade.   Relis heard the screaming.  But that was a bleeding effect because he held a dead spren Shardblade while Kaladin performed a Lastclap.

Wetlandernw @154.  How could Elthokar’s spirirt/soul contact Honor.  I thought Honor is dead (hence the splintering of the Shard Honor).

Gepeto @176.  What does Dalinar being an alcoholic have to do with him being able to or not being able to “bond” with Gallant.  I use “bond” in quotes, because I am not sure if it is bonding in the same way that the word is used to refer to a Nahel Bond.  Also, I am not sure why (not being an alcoholic myself) but I see a distinction between an alcoholic and a drunk?

TkThompson @179: I do think stormform is a Voidbringer form.  Those with stormform have red eyes.  That is a sign of Voidbringers.   (Or at least under Odium’s influence).

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@250 FenrirMoridin:  Damn, you’re right about the shipping.  I hadn’t even thought of that.  I don’t care for shipping in general, and to me romance is always the least interesting part of a character’s story unless it’s convincingly tied into their greater development.  This is one reason I really like the Listeners / Singers; they don’t worry about sex outside of mateform.  It’s a non-issue in forming relationships.

I don’t think the spren have a concept of sexuality, either, since their whole method of reproducing involves a single parent shaping a child.  I think any relationship between spren and human will be entirely without a sexual aspect.  It doesn’t seem to occur to anyone in a Nahel bond, human or spren, that that might be a thing that could happen.  Love, certainly, but not sexual love. I also think this might be the reason Syl was trying so hard to matchmake for Kaladin; she recognizes that this is a kind of love most humans want, and it’s one she can’t provide, and she wants him to be happy.  Shallan in her “nice young lady” persona is mostly cheerful and clever, which Syl approves of.  Plus, she doesn’t have a dead Blade.  Kaladin likes her as a person after the chasm adventure, and she’s the right combination of factors for her human to feel a basic level of attraction to. So in Syl’s mind she’s perfect!

I heartily disagreed with Syl on this, and was glad to see it not be so.

And I got to see my preferred ship of Eshonai / nobody happen, if not quite the way I wanted.  *weeps forever*

One of the things I like so much about Brandon Sanderson’s writing, especially in this series, is the focus on familial relationships, particularly between siblings.  Vivenna and Siri were cool to read about, but the relationships between Kaladin and Tien, Renarin and Adolin, (not siblings, but close family) Renarin and Jasnah, Shallan and her brothers, and Venli and Eshonai really warm my heart.  I’ll take a well-written family relationship over a romance any day.

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 birgit @@@@@18 The Spren of the Oathgate reminded me more of The Oracle in The Never Ending Story.

That picture of the Oathgate in the book was amazing. The pictures were one of the things I forgot I was missing when reading the week to week chapter releases.

@@@@@ everyone regarding Elhokar – I think that was his Spren that Wit rescued. It did seem to have a lower intelligence (beginning stages or pre-Ideal stage of the bond). It is believable too since Elhokar has been seeing the same things Shallan saw. He even has been telling/realizing truth’s about himself, like his ability as a king or how capable he is compared to Dalinar, as well as accepting these truth’s about himself.

Anyone else thought about what type of Fabrial they can make out of the Unmade? They now have the unmade that produces the Thrill Trapped in that gemstone.

I hope my first post was legible!

 

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7 years ago

There is an unwritten contract between the author and the reader to hold all opinions/verdicts/judgments for the end of the book/series. Thus I personally judge “middling” books in a series only with great difficulty. Even as the individual books are broken down into five parts, this book is the middle/third installment of the first half of the Stormlight Archive. The middle parts of all three books are deeply frustrating, characters constantly taking three steps forwards and two steps back. In Oathbringer, in the third part of the third book, we discover Dalinar’s past, Shallan flies apart, Kaladin finds himself petrified at the sight of his friends killing each other, and King Elhokar, the budding Radiant, is slain. I should also note that I have only skimmed the thoughts recorded to date. So forgive me if I repeat other’s thoughts or step on toes. Lastly, I thoroughly enjoyed many, many things in the story–Kaladin’s reunion, LIFT (I wish there was more interaction between her and Bridge 4 and KALADIN…would’ve been hilarious), Szeth’s arc, the monarchs, Dalinar’s marriage, etc. Brandon Sanderson has given me a great deal of joy in his stories, for which I am quite grateful. However I am rather  deeply disappointed/flummoxed with several things in Oathbringer. 

One of the headliners for me was the handling of the Sadeas murder and Adolin’s entire character development to date.  Everyone sees the dilemma: Sadeas is abhorrent, Adolin/”Prince Charming” is merely acting for the greater good (Taravangian’s motivation as well, I must note), lets just sweep it under the rug. And Sanderson does just that. Before two-thirds of the book comes to a close, we discover the truth of Dalinar’s past. The sins of the father overshadow the sins of the son. The repercussions of these events will probably surface in subsequent books, and may even have Roshar-shaking implications. But Sanderson positioned Dalinar to receive this information after rediscovering his own crimes, which DRAMATICALLY softened his reaction to his son’s confession. This effectively euthanized the whole point of a dramatic cliffhanger. Furthermore, we get a whole lot more of the “nice guy” side of Adolin, than we did in previous books. There were moments here and there–Adolin defending the honor of the prostitute in the first book, joining Kaladin in prison (only AFTER Kaladin defended him and Renarin in the ring), and a few other small moments—where we glimpse a decent man in Adolin. For the most part however, he is hot-headed and snobby, at least towards Kaladin. But it is this book, after we know him to be a completely indefensible murderer, where Sanderson goes the extra ten miles to demonstrate that he is a seemingly-decent, seemingly-honest prince charming. He is making me feel like a jerk for, at best, distrusting the guy. I remain skeptical whenever anyone goes to great lengths to soften a murder. And, from my fairly comprehensive reading of Sanderson’s work to date, I think the author would agree with me. So what in the world is he (Sanderson) up to? 

The second major point of frustration was, in a word, Shallan!! She went from one of my favorite characters to…well, pretty much the bottom of the list of protagonists. I feel like Sanderson dropped a bomb on her character–she was all over the place! Different masks, different selves, clashing desires, entirely fractured. Until she sorta kinda wasn’t???  And then she told Adolin about the other selves inside her (only told Kaladin that she shoved the feelings aside), and when he picked her out of the others, HE was the one who knew her?? Then he tells her that he murdered Sadeas, and she is OK with it?? And the logical, the stabilizing, the obvious thing to do on top of everything else was to marry him within a weeks time??????????????  I feel like Kaladin was done a serious disservice somewhere along the way. At least to some extent, she was considering him, but she never really gave him a shot beyond some witty banter. And, more frustrating still, there was never really another pairing for him in the story, unless either Lift (who is roughly the same distance in age from Kaladin as Shallan is from Adolin…though it is a strange/disturbing thought at this point) is a few years older in the next book, or Jasnah decides she needs a consort, or Rysn becomes a Radiant. I have been wondering if their entire relationship was more of a brother/sister development/replacement–Kal replaced Helleran, Shallan replaced Tien–but this whole tangle is maddening and certainly leaves much to be desired.  I really hope that Sanderson doesn’t kill off Adolin in the next book and then repeat the Navani/Gavilar/Dalinar tangle–go after the second after the first dies–or, Heaven forbid, try a Guinevere/Arthur/Lancelot mess. Nightmare!!

Lastly, although terribly tragic, I think the writers of this review were quite harsh on Kaladin concerning the events surrounding the death of the Elhokar. By the time Moash enters the picture, Kaladin is on the ground, frozen and terrified for his friends, watching those he loves kill each other. I cannot imagine the horror of witnessing one group of my friends murdering another. To call this a disastrous failure on “The Second Ideal” is way out of line!! The Radiant abilities in these stories serve to amplify the resolve within any given Radiant. The actions of his friends broke him. To handle this situation with any modicum of grace, he would’ve had to possess the answers his deeper questions. This scene was essentially his worst nightmare. But Sanderson is clearly developing his character to become King. Of what, I am not sure, but the whole image of Jezrien, his status as the first of the Windrunners, the little comments from Elhokar about kingship directed at Kal, his mentorship under Dalinar, his uncertain status among the inner circle of Radiants (he is not of the Kholin family), his ability to truly lead. Dalinar may be able to fuse as a bondsmith, but Kal is the leader. He is the King.

Another point of worrisome speculation, has anyone considered that this generation of Radiants may actually be Heralds-in-training, to replace the current Heralds in the Oathpact and to endure the horrors of Torment even as the previous generation?

Again, all these are the frustrations of the middling book/part in a Sanderson series. But I am seriously miffed over the Adolin/Sadeas situation and the Adolin/Shallan shenanigan. 

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Steve @254

I had similar thoughts up-thread regarding part 3’s for Sanderson.

I wouldn’t call Adolin ending Sadeas indefensible murder. Murder it may be but considering the fact that Sadeas’s orders deliberately killed 2/3 of his army and was a budding Radient away from being wiped out with the rest of the Kholins and threats of a knife in the back regardless of the changing world, the killing was completely justified in my opinion. 

I’m of 2 minds about how the aftermath of the Adolin/Sadeas conflict was handled. Like many here I expected more out of that storyline and was a bit disappointed that Brandon went a different direction with it. On the other hand, I can also see that Brandon preemptively removed a character that no longer served a narrative purpose. A traitor in the midst of the heroes? King T is more compelling. Amaram served as the link to Dalinar’s Blackthorn days and as a contrast between being honorable and just acting like it to keep up appearances. Ialai is a better foil for Dalinar as she can hit him in ways he cannot anticipate. Also, she’s the reactionary who doesn’t realize the stakes have been raised. No doubt had Sadeas lived his parts would have seemed petty and frustrating. Also wrongheaded. Bottom line, a new day with new problems. Sadeas no longer fit so he goes down. And his death was not without consequences. Dalinar’s seeming dismissal of the death of a highprince is the catalyst for the entire battle of Thylen. If the investigation gets more weight, if Dalinar is forced to publicly punish Adolin we might get more character development for Prince Charming but that’s all we get. The story reads wrong because the heroes are focusing on local issues while the world begins to burn. All while occupying a city of ancient lore. 

And I am of the opinion that without that trip to Shadesmar we don’t get Maya. Maya is important as hell, and I’m convinced that her importance goes beyond her relationship with Adolin. Even if he doesn’t become a Radient with her awakening, she was awake and aware at the Recreance. The information she could provide as a primary source could help the heroes immensely. Bonus if she provides a roadmap for restoration of dead Shards. Maybe resurrected Dustbringer blades bring the Order back into the fold. Maybe all the resurrected spren help all the other spren that have held back from bonding to come back and defend the world from Odium. At this point Team Honor is hideously undermanned. Even if the resurrected blades never become blades again, restoration goes a long way toward healing the rift between human and spren created by the Recreance.

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Another thought, I think Lift may be able to heal Maya. Even among Radiants, there is something special about her. I believe someone said she is of two worlds, both the physical and the cognitive, which may mean her healing can work on both Spren and Humans. (She may also be able to heal Rysn’s legs…by healing the soul of them, which Renarin cannot do.) However, if she is resurrected, Maya may have to leave Adolin. As things stand, I am sure Adolin will NOT be able to become a Radiant on account of Sadeas…Life before death? I would be severely disappointed in the entirety of the Radiants if he were inducted. His situation is unique from literally every other case of murder/killing in the story, even the assassin in white and Dalinar. He knew/believed what he did was wrong by any measure of law, he was not in danger of any kind at the time of action, he was remorseless, and he would do it again. The “Greater Good” school of thought and the “Life before Death” mantra are oil and water; they cannot/will not/should not mix. I have been wondering if Adolin will be a crisis character–the character (in simple ways) far better/more innocent than many of the characters who kills an evil man and must die for it, creating a powerful/humbling philosophical conundrum/irony for those with worse on their consciences.  (Of course, he could also submit to death, die, and Lift could bring him back from the dead. This would satisfy the punishment, allowing him a second chance to join the Radiants and to bond Maya. All kinds of possibilities.) Also, how will he react when he discover his father’s secrets? How will the Skybreakers and the High Princes react to the news? How will Szeth react when he discovers the crimes of either Kholin? How can he determine justice according to Dalinar’s conscience? The only person, so far as I can tell, who has not committed murder or crossed major lines, is Kaladin. The Skybreakers in Oathbreaker would agree that he came close, but never crossed completely. Even Shallan stole that soulcaster from Jasnah! 

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EvilMonkey @@@@@ 255…cool name!

I certainly concur with most of your observations. Sadeas was coming to the end of his loop, and the rest of the story builds well on itself. It fits. Also, trust me, I understand the guilt of Torol Sadeas. He is loathsome and has certainly  committed his share of crimes. I have wondered if Sadeas actually did have something to do with the rebellion, and if Ialai was actually the one who suggested to Evi that she try to persuade them to make peace. Dalinar spun out of control afterwards, and thus had little time to investigate further, as only a small group knew about that night’s events in the first place. There is no one, well, not many who would argue that he deserved anything less than swift and final justice. That is the construction of the story. However, we are discussing a book where a person’s character determines their place and abilities in the world. We are discussing issues of both law and justice. What would the Skybreakers decide if Ialai requested their justice? That is probably how Sanderson would think through this problem. Adolin named himself murderer, and Sadeas, technically, broke no laws. Adolin also insists that he is not sorry and would do it again. Sanderson would never simply have Adolin kill a man simply to move on with the story. This would break the deeper currents of thought in the story. Never happen. There is great weight in this action, although an unfortunately delayed response.

And, yes, Maya’s information would be invaluable. I hope Lift can heal all of the dead spren.

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@228: I do not think the heir to the kingdom needs to be adopt by the monarch. Sadeas’s heir was a nephew and Dalinar suggested to make Gavinor Adolin’s heir without adopting him. I honestly do not see much argument in favor of Jasnah adopting Gavinor. If not Adolin, then it will likely be Navani or no one in particular.

I too do not want brokenness to end up a war into whom has suffered the most, but it seems it has already become one. The discussion as to whether or not Adolin is broken is a good testimony for this: why are we arguing he is not broken? Because he doesn’t read as broken. Why are we arguing he is broken? Because we feel there is enough pain in his life to justify it even if the character is not showing it.

Hard one. As I said in one of my first commentaries, I think this may be something readers will still be discussing on the eve of book 4 release which is why I hope Brandon will make it more obvious within the next book, whichever his decision may be.

@237: I guess my feelings are Brandon skipped on the emotional content with this book which makes me yearn for him to settle the score into book 4 but addressing it. How Evi died is one way to add more drama and darkness into Adolin’s story arc which is mainly why I hope to see it as a plot point. 

To echo some of the commentaries below, I was not entirely satisfied with how Brandon chose to handle Adolin’s character. I was hoping, with OB, his character would get additional layers, an edge and show off another side of him then the Prince Perfect Charming. I have been hoping him dealing with his own imperfection might give him a few rougher edges, depth and have readers appreciate the character more. 

Now, of course, there are many readers which are satisfied with how the character was handled, I suspect this is mostly due to the Maya arc which was superb, but I cannot help but feel Adolin has become bland. There has always been readers complaining on how bland Adolin is, on how one-dimensional he was, there has always been those who never understood why some readers really liked the character. I had hoped OB would fix the issue by giving Adolin the depth he needed. Can one nice story arc buy back one-dimensional comical relief Adolin we got in Part 3? The clown we read? I am not sure it can… Adolin’s arc should have been deeper, more fleshed out. The clown severely clashed with the layers and the darker side we saw peeking out towards the end of WoR. What happened to it?

It didn’t happen. As much as there are many arcs I loved into this book: Maya, Venli, Bridge 4 on average, additional focus on the Skybreakers, Elhokar’s death, I cannot help but feel Brandon missed an occasion here. He missed the occasion to develop Adolin further and I do think shoving him into the background for 3/4 of the book was not the best of solution. He skipped on the emotional impact of murdering Sadeas and while several readers did not mind it, I still feel this narrative choice was done to the detriment of Adolin’s character growth. It made him read as bland and boring for 3/4 of the book, the last part not being enough to compensate for it. I find it odd how Brandon managed to make several minor characters come to life, but more or less failed with Adolin having more viewpoints… It may be because none of his viewpoints were about him dealing with things the character was supposed to be dealing with.

I also agree having Dalinar skipped on learning about Adolin murdering Sadeas until he remembered what he did was… well not satisfying. Had he wrestle with it from the start, it would have made, IMHO, a stronger narrative, more coherent and more satisfying for the readers. Those who loved how it was handled would have probably still like it and those whom were left dissatisfied would have liked it better.

As such, these choices made by Brandon are hard to comprehend. Adolin murdering Sadeas carried a lot of expectations, I think anyone ever having so much as dip into the fandom was able to appreciate it, and as such I still cannot understand why Brandon did not give it a few more chapters to make it more coherent and satisfying for every one. Of course, there is always the argument the book is too big, but I honestly thought Dalinar/Kaladin/Shallan’s story arcs could have each been trimmed down and shorten which would have leave enough page time to write in a more satisfying outcome, not one which changes the narrative, but one where Adolin’s character is given enough page time to come to life, to stop feeling so bland and to give the readers a sense the arc actually had at least one consequences.

@251: I do not speak for everyone, but threads on how Elhokar wil become a Radiant have always been popular on the 17th Shard and on Reddit. Last I checked, the majority of the commentators have always been in favor of Elhokar becoming a Radiant, hence the “many” comment. 

The same is true for Eshonai, I do not remember, from memory, reading anyone thinking she was dead, so while there might be those who did, the most prevalent line of thinking was she survived.

@256: Quite frankly if Adolin is skipped on being a Radiant because of Sadeas, then every single known Radiants should not be Radiants. Dalinar burned an entire town on his own FREE will. He purposefully killed innocent people for no other reason his pride was hurt. Everyone disagreed with him, everyone thinks he went too far and the horror he unleashed is so terrible it should have barred him for life from being a Radiant. 

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@256 Don’t forget “Strength before Weakness.” Sadeas just admitted he’d never stop playing petty politics. He’d have to be dealt with at some point and despite their pretty words, Alethi politics is still a blood sport. It could be argued that Adolin was just getting to the point, rather than pussyfooting around for months.

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@256 Steve

As things stand, I am sure Adolin will NOT be able to become a Radiant on account of Sadeas…Life before death? I would be severely disappointed in the entirety of the Radiants if he were inducted. His situation is unique from literally every other case of murder/killing in the story, even the assassin in white and Dalinar. He knew/believed what he did was wrong by any measure of law, he was not in danger of any kind at the time of action, he was remorseless, and he would do it again. The “Greater Good” school of thought and the “Life before Death” mantra are oil and water; they cannot/will not/should not mix.

So what about Jasna’s philosophy lesson in WoK? I think you are vastly overstating this point. Adolin was in a situation where it was clear that Sadeas was going try to kill him and his father in time, and he took him out. Morally, the killing of Parshendi over Gemhearts is much more problematic than this.

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@250, FenrirMoridin:

… I get the feeling one of the big advantages in having Shardplate as a Radiant was being able to conserve Stormlight by not having it wasted on healing, so you have more for your use of Surges.

As opposed to superhuman strength?

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@258 Gepeto

Based on the way Brandon wrote OB, a few things. 

One, the major consequence of glossing over the investigation was the Avengers team up moment at Thylen. Part 5 makes me satisfied that Brandon made the right decision regarding Adolin and his skimpy characterisation so far. 

Two, I think many people were annoyed with Shallan and her variable personalities. Probably as many as were annoyed with super angsty Kal in WOR. I think this is deliberately done. It’s a way of showing that being a Radient isn’t all roses and rainbows, that speaking Words, Truths, whatever doesn’t magically make all your issues go away, that it takes time for broken people to cope with improved situations. Dalinar probably gets the similar treatment in SA4. That will more than likely involve fallout from his autobiography and subsequent explanations to his sons. 

Three, while a part of me is annoyed that Adolin didn’t get more meat to his storyline, I believe that giving him more than what he got would have been  detrimental to the story Brandon told, some of the messages he wanted to deliver. YMMV of course but I think that not only did Adolin get treated very well by the story, his support looks to me like echoes of an Edgedancer pre-bond. I didn’t read clownish with him, just nice and capable.

Four, the path to more Adolin seems to me to lie with Maya. If Adolin can unlock dead blades then he becomes important whether or not he achieves Radience. He could become the first dualblade Shardbearer; we don’t count Amaram because his blades were dead and Adolin’s blades would be alive. 

Five, judging by the Radients we’ve seen on screen and their actions Adolin is well within the parameters for gaining a Nahel bond. Killing Sadeas doesn’t disqualify him from every Order. Skybreakers may not want him but many others would snap him up in a heartbeat. Elsecallers, Edgedancers, possibly Windrunners, Dustbringers presumably, he has a home in KR if he can attract a spren (and if Maya allows it without bonding him herself).

Last, Adolin is probably never getting as much development as our big 4. Dalinar is a Bondsmith and the leader of all KR, Kal is bonded to spren royalty and will probably become the only Windrunner to speak their 5th Ideal, Nale gave Szeth a Skybreaker franchise, making him the new head Skybreaker (KR branch) and Shallan has no Lightweaver challangers other than Ash the Herald. Wishing for him to get as much development as them is futile. With charismatic Lyft on the scene it becomes even less likely. Other than an Adolin novella (completely possible given the year timeskip) Prince Charming ain’t pushing much farther into the main narrative. Given that, the parts he does play are not only important but vital to the narrative. It could be worse for him. 

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@261 Carl: Yeah – super strength is nice but the nature of spren-weapons means that strength is not necessarily that important when it comes to fighting as a KR.  A lot of the extra athletic prowess granted by Shardplate is covered by stormlight’s passive benefits (except for the enhanced strength, which Kaladin ruminates on when Rock uses a Shardbow at the end of the book), and a lot of the Surges most obvious battle uses do not require strength.  
Not that super strength would be bad to have, I just feel like the magical suit of armor’s biggest benefit is, unsurprisingly, its protective capacity.

Sanderson has already said in some Words of Brandon how plenty of KR orders would be ok with what Adolin did – and given some of the conversations we’ve seen in Oathbringer, I feel it’s safe to say that the most important factor is how Adolin himself feels about what he did.  Adolin was pretty clear: he doesn’t regret killing Sadeas.  And while it did ring a bit emotionally hollow for there to be *no reason for him to feel regret anyways,* I don’t think that act itself would preclude him from becoming a KR.  
As for Adolin becoming a KR or not: I’m not sure how I’d feel.  On the one hand, after the progress he made with Maya in Oathbringer, it feels like he has to be building up to something.  On the other hand, after Adolin finally had his quick arc to accept he’s the oddly normal one in the cast, it would be weird for him to suddenly become Special – and not just that, but extra Special since I doubt many other people would be reviving dead Blades, unless that becomes an arc unto itself.  I was never extremely happy with Elend becoming Special at the end of Well of Ascension, and I was much more interested in his narrative growth than Adolin; but at the same time Elend’s transformation was abrupt, while whatever is happening with Maya is occurring relatively slowly.  
RAFO I guess?  Three or so years isn’t that long…

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@262: A few answers…

One, while I did love reading the final confrontation its impact was diminished by the fact it, again, failed to address the fact Adolin is the one who murdered Sadeas. Once I read the entire Sadeas army had joined the enemy side in retribution for Dalinar having murdered Torol, I thought this is it. This is the pay-off: Adolin will be forced to publicly state his guilt to make it stop. He’ll do something crazy to try to make it stop. The pay-off is right here and there and no… it wasn’t. Adolin murdering Sadeas ended up in a way which made many readers believe it would fuel additional character development for him and it didn’t. As such, the book did not deliver on this front and while everyone’s millage clearly vary with this one, I didn’t personally find it satisfying. I understand the story Brandon was trying to tell, but I still think he could have handled it much better than he did without changing his narrative. If he had handled it better, nobody would have qualms about it.

Two, I was more annoyed by Shallan’s personality issue than I was with Kaladin being depressive. The reason for it is I feel Shallan’s personality issue was at the core of several climaxes whereas Kaladin’s depression was more momentarily and really focused onto about four chapters, the prison scenes. I can deal with four chapters, but Shallan’s arc felt like it dragged, reassessing the same issues over and over again. I feel it would have been superior if more condensed or perhaps if another character was tossed into it to make it less centered on Shallan. For instance, the Kaladin arc was better, IMHO, because it involved him deciding to kill Elhokar which was an interesting twist. It also involved him “killing” Syl, again something interesting and it led to the chasm scene, which may not have been my favorite chapters, but were filled with emotions. Shallan’s personality issues panned on nothing anywhere near equivalent. I sincrely hope not to read long downward spiral for Dalinar into book 4: he already got a very long story, I’d rather read about the other characters. I have had enough of Dalinar for the time being, but YMMV.

Third, a story is always better when all characters are more fleshed out. Of all characters Brandon has written, there are two I currently feel at lacking, lacking depth and layers: Adolin and Navani. Those two often read as bland. IMHO the problem with their character aren’t the lack of viewpoints, but the fact those viewpoints never focus onto them. They nearly always focus onto them doing things. As such, no I don’t think Adolin having a few sentences which touches his issues is satisfying, not when compared to the arcs the other characters got. I personally believe the story would be superior if Brandon were to drag the blanket a little more to the right: less intense focus on the main three, more focus on the important secondary character. Navani, I didn’t talk about her, but I did wonder why she even had viewpoints. She seems very bland to me, she hasn’t taken form yet, but I am sure she could if she got the page time needed for it. Having an “important” character interacting with a character which feels unfinished is never good for the narrative.

On the matter of Adolin echoing the Edgedancers: I have read a lot of comments from people really not seeing it, not believing it. If it was meant to be obvious, then Brandon did not make it so. Mind, this is not a fault in itself as this could easily be fixed into the next book. My main grievance is how Adolin was treated as comical relief, a buffoon and how his character development was skipped over.

Four, I loved the Maya arc, it was very well written. The problem is I read a lot of readers still not able to picture Adolin evolving with this bond. Why? Because he remains too bland, not fleshed out enough. He’s there, but he always seems to be there as an afterthought.

Five, I agree with five.

Last, Adolin not being one of the big 4 should not banned him from being more fleshed out nor from getting character development. We have seen Teft, Rock and Moash getting decent character development: it perhaps help within limited page time, but at least it tagged onto the characters real issues and it focused on them. All come across as deeper, better than they did before. As such, Adolin not being one of the “important” character according to the “plan” is not an excuse for allowing a character of “importance” being so bland. As I said, the story is always better when all participating characters are fleshed out decently, when all characters have something substantial to add to the story. If all a character has to add is wearing ridiculous clothes when he is supposed to be dealing with hard stuff, then I sincerely wonder what he is even doing there in the first place. And yeah, this is a critic for Part 3 where Adolin was around, but not participating into the story except to add a few scenes made to create laughter.

So all in all, while I do not think Adolin was treated “badly”, I think Brandon skipped on character development here and the end result is the character, instead of becoming fuller and deeper, has gotten lighted. Even with Maya, there is little substance to Adolin’s character as all the elements which could have been used to give him some were dropped early into the story or not explained well enough or concluded within one-liners. Nobody has ever asked for Adolin to get as much development as Shallan, but I do think the story would be superior if he were to be given better arcs more structured around him in order for his character to stop reading like a picture perfect image.

I personally do not care much for Lift. I liked her novel well enough, but I didn’t care so much for her in OB. She didn’t add much to the story, to me, as a reader, but YMMV.

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7 years ago

Why does everybody say that the Dustbringers as an order went over to Odium? We know only one Dustbringer who works for Taravangian (who technically is against Odium). There is no organized order doing anything as a whole like the Skybreakers (and Nale actually leaves the choice to each student what kind of law they want to follow).

Nale has two blades: his honorblade and his spren.

Where is Adolin comic relief? Other characters like Lopen are probably supposed to be funny (I never cared for Lopen), but Adolin is no clown. His interest in fashion might seem silly to lower-class characters, but giving him a hobby is part of fleshing out his character, which you claim doesn’t happen. We know more about Adolin than most other characters, including the main characters (does Kaladin have any hobbies?) We don’t need another depressed character who can’t deal with what he has done or failed to do like Kaladin and Dalinar. Adolin deals with problems by trying harder instead of moping, which is nicer to read about. That doesn’t mean he doesn’t have any problems, it’s just harder for other characters (and readers) to notice.

Brandon probably intended killing Sadeas as an end of the two-book Sadeas as villain arc, not as the cliffhanger many fans saw. It did have consequences, just not the ones many expected because they used their own values instead of those of the characters to judge them. Applying US law to Adolin might be an interesting exercise for law students, but it has nothing to do with Alethi law or morals.

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Steve
7 years ago

@@@@@ 259-260

Jasnah placed herself and Shallan into a situation where she had to defend both of their lives. She argued quite well that everything she did was within the bounds of law. True, in that moment she wasn’t focusing on preserving life. But her life and that of her ward was in imminent danger from people already blatantly disregarding the law, the local guards were corrupt, and, if she simply scared them off, they would wait to ravage another day. She was carrying out the function of the local impotent guards. I know it sounds like a minor difference, but I think these subtle differences change the picture entirely. HERS was a case of strength over weakness, not his. Had Adolin cleverly constructed a similar situation, one in which Sadeas made an attempt on his life, his action might have been both morally right and legally defensible. But as things stand he merely committed essentially a crime of passion and broke Alethi law. And, again, by Adolin’s own admission, he is a murderer. 

Concerning the parshendi and the gemheart quests, again, no one knew the truth. No laws on Alethkar, or probably anywhere else in the world, considered the parshmen, let alone the parshendi, to be protected by law. In this story, knowledge/awareness of past, unsatisfied crimes may prevent people from being able to swear the oaths. This would explain why Dalinar was able to swear them. Cultivation withholding his memories, Dalinar was able to focus on reforming his life, becoming a far better man and father and person than he would have perceived himself to be with the memories dragging him into the ground. He perceived himself to be a man who could satisfy the first ideal. Elhokar had been seeing spren in experiences similar to Shallan in the early days. He could have said the oath at anytime, probably. But he did not speak them until he was afraid for the life of his son, at which time he said them while looking at the image of himself (or what he could be) that Shallan had drawn of him. That is the key!

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7 years ago

I never got the impression that Adolin was taking on the role of a clown or a buffoon at all. I understand that you feel that Adolin didn’t get the development you were looking for, but as Birgit said, he does have problems, he just deals with them in a way that’s harder to pinpoint as development. I agree that it seemed the Sadeas issue was brushed aside a bit though. That was somewhat odd. But overall, I don’t think Adolin was done as much of a disservice as you seem to think.  But,  to each their own. 

@266 you mentioned how with Jasnah it’s more okay because they would have come back to kill them another day if she’d just scared them off. But, a similar case could be made for Adolin. Sadeas had already shown that he was willing to sacrifice the Kholins’ lives for his own benefit, and to sabotage every effort Dalinar made.  If Adolin let him go,  he would just come back to wreak havoc another day. 

@265 I don’t actually know whether or not all of the dustbringers went to Odium. It was just a thought I had, because we don’t know what kind of organization their spren have. With Syl for instance, she was the first honorspren to form a bond this time around, and now other honorspren are joining the fight. So, if the first dustbringer spren decided that joining Odium might be a good idea, there’s the chance that the ones that follow will have made the same decision. I know spren are individuals, so there’s the chance that some dustbringers will still join the Knights Radiant, but depending on how their spren are organized, it might be difficult. 

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7 years ago

A lot of people reacted to my commentary on Adolin being a buffoon/clown/comical relief and I feel I need to specify/clarify a few things. What I mean by it is mostly related to Part 3 where, in the middle of Veil and Kaladin’s story arc, we had Adolin pop around in flashy clothes. I understand it was probably meant to change the tone, to break the pace slightly, but it clashed to me and I disliked seeing the character used in such ways. I don’t mind seeing Lopen being used in a similar fashion, because I always felt this was his purpose, but Adolin? I have liked Adolin’s lighter toned viewpoint in WoK as I felt it changed the tone in an appreciative way, but within Part 3, I felt it took away from the character.

@260: Good point on Jasnah and even better point on the Parshendis. The sprens aren’t as picky on people as it would first seem upon first glance.

@265: I do not recall ever arguing for Adolin to be depressed or moping: I have mostly always wanted the character to get more depth and while there were a few very good scenes in OB, the final result left me mitigated. I understand Adolin is not a character easily affected by things, he does allow others to see it, other characters are not really catching on it, but it also means readers aren’t. It makes the character feels incomplete.

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Donna
7 years ago

I don’t  think  Adolin  is meant  to  be  a  radiant. I think  he  was  meant  to  be  a  revealer. He will be  the  focus  of  normal  humans and explain  the  role  Radiants will  have. With  his  lineage and bearing, he will  be  able  to  meld the  population  to  accept  Radiants as fellow  human  beings .  He  will  be  a  key  for  Dalian to  get  the  common people  on  their  side. He has been  trained  his  whole  life  to  lead, to all the  people, he is an upstanding  figure. Sure he could be King, he is in line, but Jasna  is the better choice, and I thank Shallon for bringing  this  to  Dalian and  Adolins attention!  I am now working  on  a  slower  read of Oathbringer. I’M  SURE I missed something  in my frenzied first read! Since Amaran put all of house Saldeas as to shame, we won’t  need to  worry  about  them  for  awhile. I still think  Islani will come  up  with  some  scheme to  move  her  to  the  front  of  issues. My favorite  LOL in the  story…Pg 690, Adolin and  Kaladin talking, starts with punchy  guys, reread it, made me lol, those  two  guys  are  really  getting  along  lately  

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7 years ago

Gepeto @207.  I hope Brandon does not expand Rysn’s role in later books.  I see her a side character Brandon can use to visit locales that the main story line will not visit.  Having Rysn involved in the main storyline would severely diminish that role.

Thanks for reading my musings.
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7 years ago

@250 FenrirMoridin

Shallan/Adolin adopting Gavinor

I’m with you in hoping that they aren’t on the short list for adopting this kid. He’s already going to need a mountain therapy that he’s not going to get for living for who knows how long his mom being controlled by one of the Unmade. Shallan at least isn’t in any place to be looking after someone else’s well-being. Also, I personally I feel that this particular newly wed couple need to spend sometime to figure out how they work on their own before adding kids in the mix.

Kaladin’s love life

Syl wanting to get Kaladin into a relationship seemed to me like something a mother or a close friend would do. There seems to be this idea that people will instantly be happier if they are in a relationship. (*eyeroll*) It would amuse me if Syl convinced Kal to end up in relationship and started getting jealous like Tinkerbelle because she didn’t realize it mean that someone else would also have Kal’s time and attention. 

I think of Kal and Syl as being platonic life partners. Personally given the characters that we have on screen I don’t want Kal to end up in a relationship with any of them right now. Maybe Brandon can change my mind in later books but right now it’s just Kal and Syl against the world but I don’t see them as a romantic pairing. 

@251 AndrewHB

Lift’s Awesomeness

I got the impression while reading that the Fused Edgedancers were generally much faster but good point about Lift handicapping herself by only going about on her knees. It’s possible that if she was on her feet she would have been just as fast.

Sidenote: I now want a Christmas short where Szeth takes Lift to an iced over pond to teach her how to ice skate as Knight training. Bonus points if Kaladin goes with because he doesn’t trust Szeth with Lift and Kaladin and that forces Kaladin to learn how to ice skate as well.

I actually thought that the Fused had more experience. Hoid talks about how he knew a particular Fused and danced with her a looooooooooong time ago. Even before we have that little tidbit that implies that the Fused had a lot more time to practice with the powers, I didn’t think the Fused were written as being particular unskilled at using the power just that they the powers worked differently for them.

Adolin and his Sword

Yeah, my earlier comment was me thinking outloud about the nature of Adolin’s bond with his sword. I figured that Adolin couldn’t have a Nahel bond because there was no screaming and that the nature of his bond to Maya is probably built more on the “new” way of Shardblades with gem stones that people figured after the Recreance.

I’m starting to think that the way people have been bonding Sharblades after the Recreance is more like an inverse Nahel bond. It connects a spren to a human and spren can understand what they are being used for why but their purpose is dead because the human wielding them isn’t bound oaths. Maya is definitely making herself known to Adolin now but I don’t think he has created a Nahel bond with her. I think it’s something else, that is new in world.

@256 Steve

I think I would feel let down if Lift was the one to heal Maya. To me, Maya’s revival is tied tightly to her bond with Adolin and so if that get short cut but going to a third party to heal the blade would not read as emotionally satisfying for me.

I don’t think the “Greater Good” philosophy and some knight order would be antithetical. Maybe for an Order like the Skybreaker, Windrunners and Bondsmiths but maybe orders of spren wouldn’t care. I seem to remember something like this argument being made in the book to one of the characters at some point. I think it was Szeth. He’s definitely killed a bunch of people and he given the same set of circumstances I think he would do it again.

Ultimately it all depends on the spren accepting the words when they are offered.

@258 Gepto

Good point about Dalinar just suggesting the Gavinor be Adolin’s heir without adopting. I figure it’s situational dependent but we’ll see. Hey for all we know Dalinar and Navani are just going take over raising Gavinor.  

@265 birgit

I don’t think that the Dustbringers went over to Odium but neither do I think they are going to fall back into the Knight Orders for Honor. I feel like they are now a chaotic neutral element in play. Which is why it makes sense that the Dustbringer we do see works from Mr. T. Mr. T does want to save humanity but he doesn’t care about saving all people or even a majority of people. But even then I don’t see the Dustbringers as being a cohesive group spren the way we see the Honorspren or Edgedanger type spren (what was their name again?).

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7 years ago

@270: Really? I’ll admit I have not been a fan of Rysn within the past two books, but I really liked her chapter in OB. I thought she had evolve into a really interesting character and I’d love to see her take over a more important role within the narrative. She made a very good impression on me within this book and I wanted more. 

@271: I really hope Dalinar will not raise Gavinor. I’ll admit I have been pinning on the idea of Adolin as a father, but it is true Shallan may not be there yet. Either way, I will treat this as an open story arc which go could many ways, including no way at all. I however do think one thing is rather sure, Kaladin will feel highly inclined to protect this kid. And I am predicting he will become friends with Oroden.

On Adolin’s bond with Maya: I am currently going to go with Nahel Bond because it is the only way we know sprens are able to interact with humans. So while I do think we cannot rule out “something else”, I will, for the time being, be into the “it is a Nahel Bond, but it is very weak” band wagon.

 

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7 years ago

If Maya, or any of the deadeye spren, are revived, they will have memories of previous Desolations, or at least from before the Recreance. Sounds like a valuable source of information for the good guys in upcoming SA volumes.

Who else is guessing that we’re gonna see Elhokar’s son and Kaladin’s little brother become BFFs and eventually KRs together? And who else wants to see Navani and Hessina team up to pool their wisdom and nurturing skills in dealing with the tykes? Little Gavinor (in his little uniform! with his little toy soldier! breaks your heart!) has been through so much – you just want him to be surrounded by kindness now. (Elhokar’s death – such a shock. Tragedy.)

Surely Glys is Sja-anat’s son (he even talks like a child: “It will go!”); whether he is actually a spren of Odium is less clear to me. The bonded spren we know now might not be as well-informed as they think they are – we’ve seen their understanding grow and change already, and maybe it will keep doing so. Timbre seems to have more memories and awareness than Syl or Pattern, which is also interesting.

I wonder if Rlain will get a spren similar to Glys? or to Timbre? That would be awesome!

The beta readers and those on Team Sanderson have more insight than me, but it has always seemed to me that Shardplate is something different from what everyone thinks (so probably I’m wrong). The descriptions in TWoK of the chasmfiends’ carapace, and even that of axehounds IIRC, is waaaay similar to how Plate is described, and it made me wonder if Plate isn’t something organic, like putting on the shell of a living creature? No one else seems to have thought this, so I’m probably wrong.

Did anyone else read the Prologue and start absolutely hating on Gavilar and calling him “Idiot” right out loud? The ten of fools.

I’m still hoping we’ll see Eshonai’s & Venli’s mother and the runaway Listeners at some point. Not a surprise they weren’t in OBR.

Finally (because it’s getting late), what if Dalinar didn’t put Honor back together? What if he reassembled the splinters into a new Shard – one called Unity? Always another secret, always another mystery! :-)

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7 years ago

I think Dalinar’s Unity will be like Sazed’s Harmony, he will combine at the very least Honor and Odium. Maybe Cultivation too if she shatters in the course of SA. Note that this will probably be at the end of SA. But our Bondsmith has been touched by all Three Rosharan Shards personally. No one else we know of has that going for them.

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7 years ago

I’m not sure why everyone keeps calling Moash a traitor.  He’s always been true to his primary goal, which is kill Elhokar.  

Everything he’s done, from training with Kaladin, to accepting guard duty, to joining the Diagrammers (however unwittingly), was all in pursuit of his goal.  “I will kill Elhokar” was basically his ideals 1,2,3 and 4.  

And at this point, he’s pretty much the only character to have achieved his goal.  I say good for him.

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7 years ago

@@@@@ Steve

Jasnah placed herself and Shallan into a situation where she had to defend both of their lives. She argued quite well that everything she did was within the bounds of law. True, in that moment she wasn’t focusing on preserving life. But her life and that of her ward was in imminent danger from people already blatantly disregarding the law, the local guards were corrupt, and, if she simply scared them off, they would wait to ravage another day. She was carrying out the function of the local impotent guards. I know it sounds like a minor difference, but I think these subtle differences change the picture entirely. HERS was a case of strength over weakness, not his. Had Adolin cleverly constructed a similar situation, one in which Sadeas made an attempt on his life, his action might have been both morally right and legally defensible. But as things stand he merely committed essentially a crime of passion and broke Alethi law. And, again, by Adolin’s own admission, he is a murderer. 

So you are actually stating, that by “cleverly constructing a situation” an unethical act becomes ethical? Jasnah had many options to deal with the street robbers. She could have excerted her own influence to bully the city guard into dealing with them. She could have hired people to observe the area and capture them. She could most likely have captured them instead of killing them with her soulcaster. Those men were common criminals and should have been dealt with according to the law. In german self defense law, there is actually a legal category for what Jasnah did – Notwehrprovokation – which severly limits the legality of actions taken in self defense under such “cleverly constructed” circumstances.

Sadeas however is a completely different case. No laws bind him, he is responsible for the death of hundreds or even thousands of people (for example the bridge crews he sends to their death even though they were his subjects and the men of the Kholin army he betrayed in the field). In killing Sadeas Adolin evidently saved many lives (including himself and people dear to him whom Sadas explicitly threatened), which could not have been achieved by calling upon a higher authority of any other method.

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7 years ago

To add to Kah @278

Just because Adolin feels he is a murderer doesn’t mean his disqualification from the ranks of KR. Shallan is a self-confessed serial murderer, a matricide and patricide. She has a bond. Dalinar would tell you with the benefits of hindsight that he is a murderer and guilty of a number of war crimes. He leads the KR and is bonded to the largest remaining Splinter of Honor. Szeth is a multiple regicide. Though he felt his actions were coerced at one time his conscience calls his crimes murder. We don’t know who his spren is yet but we know he’s getting one. Jasnah routinely hires assasins, both to protect herself and the interests of her family (not necessarily their safety). She’s bonded. If this series has taught us anything it’s that people don’t have to be perfect to save the world. They just have to try. Adolin may never obtain a Nahel bond but it won’t be because he stabbed a d-bag in the eye. If anything, there is a strong contingent of fans who believe he is disqualified from a bond because he hasn’t done enough f’ed up stuff to attract a spren, that he’s basically too nice. Steve, I think you’re on the wrong track but feel free to disagree and discuss. No condemnation here.

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7 years ago

264. Gepeto, “Navani, I didn’t talk about her, but I did wonder why she even had viewpoints. She seems very bland to me, she hasn’t taken form yet, but I am sure she could if she got the page time needed for it.” I think she’ll be a bigger secondary character during “The Jasnah book.” This book did a very good, subtle job of showing similarities and differences between Jasnah and her mother, and I’d bet serious money BWS did it on purpose. For instance, they both used Stormlight abilities to incapacitate attackers with a touch of the hand. Navani knocked them out with a painrial, and her daughter (who takes after her uncle/father-in-law) killed them en masse, but ….

As to your feeling Adolin is underdeveloped: yes, he is. Remember we’re still only 3/10 of the way through the story! I suspect BWS plans to give Adolin more development in the second pentology. I don’t necessarily like this story structure, actually, but I can see his (hypothetical) logic. Adolin is one of the younger characters, so by Book 6 he’ll still be in the prime of his life (if he’s alive) where Dalinar and Navani will be quite elderly (if they are still alive).

Agreeing with EvilMonkey: while some talk about how Adolin is disqualified for the Radiants because he’s a murderer, Jasnah hired multiple assassins, as established back in WoK. Shallan literally murdered her father. (I don’t think that by my own local laws, she murdered her mother–that was self-defense.) Don’t project your morality onto spirit beings from a fictional Cognitive Plane adjoining a fictional alien planet. Turns out they aren’t bound by your rules.

About who adopts Gavinor: I think he’ll end up group-raised, because everyone will want to help him. All of our main characters, without exception, are that kind of person (as of the end of Oathbringer). For folks who doubt Shallan’s capability, remember she kind-of-raised her own brothers, while even more mentally ill. (Heck, I will bet that Lift becomes a cool older-sister figure for him, just as she is for Gawx.)

Dalinar is Unity, and he is forging new bonds that astonish the Stormfather. I see no reason that Adolin’s bond with Maya has to be identical to the Nahel bond, given that–it just has to occur to someone (Jasnah or Navani, probably) to consciously try to form such a bond. In fact that would be a fun scene, if the idea is the result of a mother-daughter conversation about matters Realmatic, as they enthusiastically feed on each other’s thoughts and build up to a real breakthrough. And then later Navani tries to give Jasnah all the credit.

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7 years ago

@278: My personal thoughts are a story will always have a stronger impact when all its important characters are decently fleshed out. We’ve spoken a lot about Adolin, but I do have similar issues with Navani. She is a character of importance and she remains Dalinar’s main character inter-action, but since she lacks depth, I felt it made those inter-actions less meaningful. Some felt off to me when I read them and it definitely took away from Dalinar’s main narrative he would only inter-act with characters I felt were lacking in characterization. As if he was spoking to dummies. One way to help Navani’s character to grow and to develop into a fuller character, some of Dalinar’s viewpoints could have been hers.

I understand the structure Brandon wants to give to his books, but I find the close focus on three characters is currently being done to the detriment of the larger group characterization. Navani and Adolin, being two characters of importance enough to come across in the narrative quite often, really feels under-developed next to the others. And while this may be the “plan”, as a reader, I feel it takes away from the story. It makes me think of Navani as a one-sided piece of paper, it makes me think of Adolin as a buffoon (the comment which caused so much reaction). All in all, there are several types of characters: main protagonists, important side and minor. Currently, Brandon has focused more character development into the main protagonists and into the minor category, but he’s skipped the “important side” ones which is comprised of Adolin and Navani. He has given them viewpoints, but those didn’t serve the purpose to enhance their characterization or not enough for them to really become stronger characters.

So while it may be Brandon has “plans” for those characters, later on, I personally wouldn’t count on it. I was not entirely sure how fixed not flexible the plan was until I read OB, now it seems more defined. Either he will not or he genuinely believes he doesn’t have to, but I doubt Brandon will spend more time, in any given book, on those two characters then he did in OB. Sure, at the end of the series, they will be better fleshed out then they currently are, but I feel it is highly possible, they will always read a tad one-dimensional compared to the others and this is a shame.

Stronger characterization is always preferable to weaker one and I firmly believe this statement is true for all characters, not just the three “main protagonists”. I however no longer believe SA will dedicate a big enough window of opportunity to achieve this, being a primarily plot oriented story. There is nothing wrong with this, but the first two books gave the impression the final product would be a tad different.

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7 years ago

I really hope that Brandon is able to learn from the mistakes Jordan and Martin made… a long story like this needs to limit itself on relativly few central characters, otherwise it becomes unwieldy and the plot comes to a standstill. Erikson managed this by switching central characters relativly often, but I dont think Brandon will take this route. He might just keep it at Shallan, Dalinar and Kaladin. We will see…

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7 years ago

@280: Actually, I loved Jordan. While it is true he failed to tie in all the loops he created, I cannot say there were characters which fell short of characterization. I never mind the large cast because I felt the large cast was well explored. 

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7 years ago

@281 Gepeto

We obviously disagree on this one. I think Jordan lost control of his own narrative and it diverged into a multitude of viewpoints that made it impossible for him to tell a coherent story.

I think Bill Capossere nailed it in his review of A Memory of Light:

“There is, I absolutely believe, an utterly great 5-6 book series buried in this 14-book narrative and I’d love to see almost an anti-Director’s Cut (a former-fan’s cut maybe) of that version.”

I really hope that Brandon can avoid this and his own work on the WoT makes me optimistic that he is aware of the problem.

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7 years ago

#282 Kah-thurak:. I loved Wheel of Time.  I was Fairly new to Fantasy, when I read  that series somewhere around 2015.  I loved it enough that I read the series through four times, before moving on to other series.  It was an excellent story and Robert Jordan had done well with it, prior to his death.  Then to know that the young man that I had been hearing such good things about took and finishing the series, using whatever material was left, with the guidance of Jordan’s publisher widow.  I was amazed.  Sanderson wrote not one volume, but three full sized books full of structure that got the large continuing cast to the place that Jordan needed them to be so that the ending written years before blended smoothly with the new written by Brandon Sanderson.  He is my daughter’s age, and I was loved that it could be the best of both worlds.

Now remember I was a new fan, who only knew Robert Jordan  from the Wheel of Time.  For me, it helped cement a reader relationship with Brandon Sanderson, beyond the few book series that I had previously read.  Some of us readers really enjoy complex  books with many characters.  I may not live long enough to see the final for Cosmere or even for Stormlight.  I am seventy-one years young, and by the time, he takes three or more years each for seven big books to finish the series, I will be in my nineties.  Heck, I may not even be able to lift one of his big book, but I am willing to take the ride and enjoy what ever  I can from his pen.

As a story, I am greatly enjoying the Stormlight series.  Is there stuff that makes me unhappy.  Yes!  I would like him to stop wasting time with children’s books and get on with the rest of Cosmere.  However, he is ever so much better about that than George RR Martin, whose last big book was published 2011.  That is six years the fans have been waiting.  Note there was also a large space between his last two books published.  Brandon Sanderson is constantly plowing away at his writing desk.  Personally, I have doubts if Martin will ever finish his series.

So I say, Brandon Sanderson keep writing large complex Cosmere related novels.  I love this. It keeps the old grey cells working.

 

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7 years ago

It sounds like Brandon will swap central characters for the second arc of five books. By treating it as two series of 5 books, he’ll avoid some of the issues Jordan fell into.

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7 years ago

I don’t know if someone else mentioned this already (I’ve read most of the comments, but not all yet), but in looking at the gem journal things the particularly small emerald is super interesting. Whoever spoke to that gem had the ability to see the future as well,  and based on it being an emerald, he or she was a truthwatcher, similar to Renarin. This seems to imply that the power of foresight is related to Truthwatchers, and it fits their name.  I wonder which taboo powers correspond to the other orders. 

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7 years ago

I love WOT. That series is actually what led me to this site and the awesome community therein. That being said, there was definitely some bloatage to the series. Crossroads of Twilight in particular probably pushed away many loyal fans due to slow pacing and no Moments of Awesome of real note, at least none that I remember. And the PLOD. Omg the PLOD! Perrin nearly had me tearing out my hair. Brandon being the fan and the writer that he is was surely aware of both the greatness and the problems of WOT.  Bloat is a huge issue for fantasy epics, especially for discovery writers like Jordan and Martin. Brandon as an outliner isn’t quite as prone to this malady and finishing WOT taught him some lessons regarding character focus as well. I’m sure that the limited viewpoints from secondary and tertiary characters are an attempt to keep a tight reign on the narrative and thus avoid one of the weaknesses of his mentor’s magnum opus. Because for as much as I love WOT (I reread it at least once a year) I know it wasn’t perfect. SA isn’t either but by writing the way he does Brandon ensures he will at least make different mistakes.

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7 years ago

#286 Evil Monkey:. I do remember that there was one volume that folks I know complained about, but it never bothered me.  I never studied literature in college, and learned a bunch of fancy terms like what ever is a discovery writer.  My major was accounting and there was no fun or pleasure there.  But then my Economics text book was so boring that it put me to sleep, and it lasted for two semesters.  So maybe I learned to accepting most writers, if it accomplished my purpose.  I found that I was reading and attempting to comment on George Martin’s work,  with almost no background in reading Fantasy.  I hadn’t even read Lord of the rings in 2011.  So I went and got a better background and have been reading mostly fantasy since then.  I had read most of Martin’s work, Narnia, the Hitchhiker series, Jim Butcher’s Dresden Files, and the two Legends books.  I decided after reading The Hobbit and The Lord of the Rings, that I would use the two Legends books as my guide to classics.  And I have been reading fantasy since then.  This year, I caught up with all the Sanderson that I missed (adult books in Cosmere), found Neil Gaiman, read some classic series about a grey mouser that I no longer have access to the books, kept up with the Expanse Series, and then read a lot more Sanderson.

So, I don’t know if my background is valid enough to comment on whether Sanderson’s able to string a given number of characters.  In OB, he ditched Eshonai that I really liked for her sister, who seems to be getting a makeover.  He even killed off the sister’s once mate.  I kept hoping that Eshonai would come back.  Personally, I find Shallan’s tendency to split her personality really scary, and I like her as a character, much better without all that garbage.  I do like her  romance.  It is kind of sweet and very upper teens.  I like the way that OB ended, I have great hope for the future.  I am even glad that the assassin in white has turned into a good guy.  Anyway this is an old lady’s two cents opinion.

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7 years ago

Most of my so-called advanced analytics in literature comes from reading what pro authors have to say on the subject. Discovery writing vs. Outline writing is just how an author frames a book. No method is right or wrong, just what a writer feels comfortable doing. Each one has built in advantages and disadvantages. Discovery writing tends to flow more naturally as the characters dictate where the story goes but one has to try to avoid going off on tangents. Outline writing tends to be geared towards a tighter narrative but sometimes the characters feel stilted or too formulaic. The greatest of writers overcome these issues or deliver great stories despite limitations. Bottom line, great stories are great stories regardless of the methods used to write them.

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7 years ago

#288 Evil Monkey.  Thanks for answering me.  I guess in general, I actually prefer  discovery writing, which you say is where it moves to the natural flow of the story.  That might explain why I am having problems with what little writing we have seen out of George Martin.  Lately, his last three stories published in the Game of Thrones universe have been very dry and boring outline based.  Almost like newspaper writing.  Full of facts, but very little feeling.  A friend in an article called discovery writing, character driven drama.  That is the kind of writing that I am looking for from Sanderson.  I want to feel the emotions that the characters are feeling, so that I care about them.  I don’t want to read a dry accounting of the facts and figures.  I do not read text books for pleasure.  What I want is a good story, involving people I care about.  At least Brandon Sanderson has a large enough base that he can really spread his wings and show us his characters from many different angles.  

 

 

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7 years ago

Actually Martin IS a “Discovery Writer”. He is also on of the best examples how that kind of writing can go wrong: The cast of characters ever expandes until there are so many that it becomes impossible to move the plot forward for all of them in a single book.

Jordan had many qualities and I absolutely loved reading his books, have read most of them many times. I listened to the whole series in audio book form this year. BUT: I skipped a whole book (CoT), most of another (Winters Heart) and large part of certain plot lines (PLOD, some of the White Tower internal power struggle stuff). I still think that he would never have been able to finish the series in three books as Brandon did. Which is also why I believe that Brandon is perhaps the best suited author right now to write a series of this scope. The only other example I am aware of of something like this actually working is Eriksons Malazan of the Fallen with 10 doorstopper volumes written in 12 years of mad ambition and utter brilliance (sadly I doubt that Erikson will ever write something like the MBotF again).

To bring this back to Oathbringer: The reasons, why some characters get “more attention” than others are, in my opinion, exactly the lessons Brandon took from finishing the Wheel of Time: You cant write books like this without focus. You cannot tell ALL of the story. Some pieces have to be left to the reader (Erikson REALLY believes in this ;-)) and for me that works very well. Actually, for my tastes, we get slightly too much of the story (for example, I would not need the detailed flashback sequences, and especially Kaladins in WoK are rather tedious for me).

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7 years ago

I like Martin very very much.   He has bitten off a lot – characters from each of the seven kingdoms and ironborn and wildlings, characters from most of the countries of Essos plus the Dothraki and Faceless Men, attentive focus on each of the major religions plus the maesters, etc. The quality has remained very high throughout but…I am seriously hoping that when he gets over the middle volume-itis that has affected writing speeds for ADWD and the soon-to-be finished work (fingers crossed), the story will streamline and move more quickly to the epic closing.   

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7 years ago

I haven’t given my general thoughts about Oathbringer.  I finished it last week.  

I liked it in general.  Pretty exciting plot with big eventful battles in Kholinar and Thaylen City.  Solid character development for the principal players. 

I was surprised by the concept of the Fused and the major role they played in the book.  Did we have any indications or hints in the first two books that they existed?  I expected the enemies to be an increasing number of red-eye parshendi, Thunderclasts and black shadowy creatures  (such as Dal saw in his visions).  Where were the energy surgebinders?  Did I miss hints on that or is it some type of Sanderson deeply hidden concept always meant to appear in book 3 or a retcon?  Really liked Wit’s throw away about dancing with one of them thousands of years ago.  

Very surprised by Eshonai dealth.  I guess Venli now steps in the shoes as a main player.  

I was surprised by the lengthy interval in Shadesmar and the human-spren business like interactions.  Not sure what I was expecting but it was not that.  

Vivienna/Azure!  I believe she is trying to hunt down and get back Nightblood.  Finding Vasher/Zahel would be a plus.  But…didn’t she say she was a bounty hunter?  Who would be paying her a bounty?  Can’t envision anyone in her home planet or anyone on Roshar.  Also – very odd that she acknowledged she traveled from another world without Adolin, Shallan, Kal and others pressing her on that.  Odd and unrealistic.  

Have to say, I was hoping for more Radiants from other parts of Roshar.  We got Venli, our new dust bunny (I mean dustbringer) and Teft but did we get anyone else at all?  Color me surprised on that front.  

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7 years ago

I figure Martin’s problem is that he’s a short fiction writer who’s stuck writing an epic.

Sanderson, in contrast, tries to write short stories but comes up with novellas. Long form is his natural medium.

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7 years ago

@293 noblehunter

Exactly.

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Kevin R. Elder
7 years ago

I understand that the writers of this article were going for a particular “thing” with their use of cool-hip-lingo that the kids are using, but I actually found it incredibly distracting and fairly trite. It felt more appropriate for a Twilight review – in that it is really juvenile and ineffective. I also understand that you both felt “all of the feels” on numerous occasions, but the review does a disservice to Sanderson’s craft and maturity of language. If your only emotional response was to cry, good or bad, your reader is left with a tiny spectrum of emotion. I appreciate the time and energy taken to write the review, and I would guess the reviewers are more capable than this particular example, but I would hope in the future more effort and style would be given to review a book with so much substance. Be like Kaladin, try harder, do better. Even while you are crying all of the feels. Thank you. 

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7 years ago

Kevin R. Elder: that style was clearly humorous. Maybe you didn’t find it funny. I liked it, personally.

 

All: “Discovery Writing” is a method writers use, not a style of writing. It refers to doing less up-front planning, just sitting down and writing.

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Tommy
7 years ago

Two observations after re-reading.

Glys looks like a red pashion spren. Make of it what you will.

The girl who looks up was Shashara. Lots of hints…white hair. animated scarf…

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Sheen
7 years ago

I bet that there was more to the Recreance. They were scared they would destroy this world as they did the previous one remember? I bet the Radiants destroyed Natanatan while fighting the Parshendi and it terrified them. Also, the whole reference to Urithiru being a giant fabrial of some kind had something to do with it. I bet the Oathpact was a physical thing as well, centered at Urithiru (with 10 OATHgates btw). When they abandoned their oaths, I bet they broke something in Urithiru as well, destroying the Oathpact, Honor, and the minds of the Heralds at once. Such a good book! Loved it from start to finish!

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7 years ago

On the matter of comparing writers and their various styles, I can only say I have nothing but praises for Robert Jordan. Looking back into the story, I can’t say there are many story arcs which could be removed without taking away from the experience of reading those books: so many things had to happen for the final battle to come to life, it feels natural it took this long to get there. I strongly disagree with the idea WoT should have been content within 6 books! Those 6 books would have been all plot, plot, plot, plot, plot, plot: all the beauty of the story, the characterization, the world-building would be evacuate from it just to focus one thing, make the plot move forward. This definitely isn’t the kind of story I appreciate the most as my personal tastes are such I will never shy away from a story arc, if this is a good story arc, if the characters shone through this story arc and if it engaged me reading it. I will not care if the “whole narrative” has not significantly move forward as long as each character has moved forward. There will always be the next book for the narrative and, in the end, WoT turned out into something really epic. A colleague of mine has just started reading WoT and she’s enjoying it.

Therefore, I never thought Jordan “lost control of his narrative” nor that “he had too many characters”. I thought each character had a purpose, a personality, flaws and strengths and each character was decently fleshed out. Well, except for the Forsaken which turned out being pretty bland villains, but I gave the story a free pass on that as it was written as the classic good/evil clash.

In the case of Martin, I personally think a lot of the frustration lies with the fact we haven’t had a book in 6 years. I personally loved a Dance with Dragons, I thought it was a beautiful book and yeah, the narrative didn’t move forward by a lot, but things take time to happen! People do not flip on coins instantly. Though if I am to offer a critic, I would say Quentyn and Aegon’s story arcs were probably superfluous. A Feast for Crows was arguably the weakest book as it focused on a different cast of characters which was a bit painful to read.

Now to Sanderson, with WoK/WoR, I thought he did a very good work of balancing narrative with characterization. He delivered a satisfying story and enthralling characters: I didn’t get the feeling the characters were trapped into the narrative. I thought the pacing was near perfect. With Oathbringer however he definitely focused on the narrative: he wanted certain things to happen, so he made it so those things happened, but from my reader’s perspective, it felt rushed. On one side, it had the downside effect 3/4 of Dalinar’s narrative was talking to foreign leaders which arguably were similar reading chapters. On the other side, it dropped so many story arcs I felt it failed to address realistic issues the characters should have had. For instances, Alethi internal politic was presented to us, within the previous books, as being deeply volatile, cut-throat and unforgiving. The Kholins had no allies, but all of a sudden, they found Urithiru and everyone is pleased to follow them? All the known Radiants are either Kholins or within the Kholin’s entourage and nobody asks about it? Nobody has qualms about the Radiants? Nobody is trying to over-throw Dalinar? I felt those were glossed over in order to focus on the Unmades and Shallan’s personality issues (which honestly had way way too much focus in this book).

Thus, still to me, Oathbringer didn’t deliver on many fronts: it delivered in terms of narrative moving forward, cinematic action and climaxes (though I don’t consider the one in part 1 to really be a climax), but it didn’t deliver in completing the already started story arcs. It dropped too many story elements, including elements the book introduced. So while many readers found what they read instead to completely atone for the broken expectations, it personally made the book less enjoyable to me.

In the end, it may just be Brandon is too narrative/outline centered for my personal tastes. 

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7 years ago

#290 Kah-thurak: You say Martin is a Discovery writer.  I would like to propose that Martin was a discovery writer, when he wrote the first five novels in his main series, which the fans call A Song of Ice and Fire (ASOIAF).  He hasn’t been lately.  Aside from all the junk he has repackaged and released and his Wild Card junk,  he had only released three new stories.  In Dangerous Women he wrote The Princess and the Queen.  In Rogues he wrote The rogue Prince.  Most recently, he wrote Sons of the Dragon for The Book of Swords.  All of the material was originally created and partially used for his coffee table book, The world of Fire and Ice, with the help of Linda and Elio, who run the Westeros Database.  They are likely also three of the five basic plots that he suggested as new HBO possible programs in the Game of Thrones universe after Game of Thrones finishes after one more season.  To me, all three of those stories read like newspaper articles or text books.  Very dry and boring compared to his stuff from Game of thrones or A Dance with Dragons.

Now as I said about Sanderson finishing Jordan, I only know what I read about 2015/16.  I was not a fan of Jordan prior to reading Wheel of Time about that time frame and Sanderson had already written and published his three books.  But I understood that the publisher/widow had contracted Sanderson to write the one book that Jordan had left notes for, and that taking three to finish was what Sanderson said he needed.  I also understand that Jordan and Sanderson had never met, even though Sanderson had been a big WOT fan for years as he was growing up.

Yes, I know what you mean.  I tend to reread books that I like, and sometimes I have been known to skip certain passages.  If I were to start doing that for SA, Kaladin’s flashbacks would be high on my list.  They are definitely too much of a good thing.

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7 years ago

Does anybody have theories as to the effects on the Oathpact now that Jezrien is completely dead (as opposed to banished to Braize) and his soul is trapped in the gemstone of the dagger that killed him?  Does this mean that the deal that Dalinar made with Odium at before the Battle of Thaylenath City?  If it does and Odium can return to Roshar then it will be much worse for those who oppose Odium than they thought.  And that is without the knowledge that King T (and his influence on the Diagramists) is now fully on Odium’s side.

Thanks for reading my musings.
AndrewHB
aka the musespren

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7 years ago

#293 Noblehunter:. I agree completely.  When has GRRM ever written and finished a long epic series.

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7 years ago

# 297 Tommy: Interesting theory.

 

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7 years ago

@302 Sarcasm? Most authors only complete one epic series. I’m basing the judgment on his early career that was all short fiction or single novels.

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7 years ago

@299

So, in summary, you expected both more and less, in certain aspects of the volume, and your enjoyment suffered due to those unfulfilled expectations.

I would submit that you should enter into the assimilation of a particular work, ANY particular work, absent a majority of those expectations. Clearly, from your own words, they have resulted in both judgements of what YOU believe should have happened, juxtaposed with those things Brandon intended to have happen, and constraints upon the quality of your experience wherever there was a divergence between your opinion of how such a volume – and its existence within a larger work – should have been composed, and the volume as you perceived it.

Certainly, I cannot gainsay the validity of another’s experience with a piece of art, that would be spitting in the eye of the beholder. I can, however, offer an utterly distinct experience, wherein I was thoroughly captivated by the pattern and pacing of delivery; the advancement, introduction, and side-stepping of various plot arcs; the reveals of critical new information and the destruction or discarding of others. All of that and more, delivered in such a way that I was never for an instant in danger of the eight deadly words. My own thoughts and opinions regarding more than that, are actually no more than that, opinions.

We can all agree that the end of Oathbringer marks approximately 30% of a completed work of fiction. The idea that each volume should share all of the same patternings and outlines of a stand-alone work, is specious at best, and a terribly unrealistic expectation. Given how much is yet to come, and how much none but Brandon yet knows, I find it extremely easy to reserve judgement regarding the overall, instead allowing myself to enjoy the ride currently offered.

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7 years ago

 
Martin’s fake histories are actually the saddest thing about the whole ASoIaF mess. Martin used to be a brilliant writer of short fiction. Look up some of his older stuff if you like. But now even his short stories have become tedious and boring. Though to be fair, there are obviously lots of people who still love his writing. For me, it has stopped working entirely, which is something that never happened with Jordan, even during the very boring parts of his story.


I think that even if you like all of the WoT, which does kind of make sense if you mainly enjoy a very thorough way of character development in books, you should be able to see that Jordan lost control. He thought he would finish his series in one book at the point where Sanderson took over. This was obviously impossible. Sanderson needed three. Jordan would never have been able to do this. He might actually have continued almost indefinitely…

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7 years ago

We can all agree that the end of Oathbringer marks approximately 30% of a completed work of fiction. The idea that each volume should share all of the same patternings and outlines of a stand-alone work, is specious at best, and a terribly unrealistic expectation. Given how much is yet to come, and how much none but Brandon yet knows, I find it extremely easy to reserve judgement regarding the overall, instead allowing myself to enjoy the ride currently offered.

This is a very good point. Even an author like Brandon, who has a very good idea what is going to happen in his stories and how they will end, will change over the long time a series like this takes to write. You can see this very well with the Malazan Book of the Fallen. The author of Memories of Ice and Dust of Dreams is theoretically the same person. But this person has changed very much and logically this does affect the book he writes. Also there are stylistic differences that authors include on purpose… The Expanse series for example explores slightly different genres within its setting in every book (Noir, Western, post-apocalyptic…). And Brandon Sanderson main strength as an author allways has been to improve his writing by trying new things and improving his style. His characterizations for example have improved vastly over the years.

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7 years ago

#301 AndrewHB:. I am not so sure that Jezrien is completely dead.  His soul still exists, even though it never made it to Braize.  In a way, you could say the Oathpact was broken, but didn’t it say in the beginning of the Way of Kings that it held if even one of them was killed and went to Damnation.  Also the Desolation is not yet finished, so it is too soon to total up the results.   At least, that is how I understand the process.

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7 years ago

# 304 Noblehunter:. I don’t do sarcasm.  Normally all you get from me is truth as I see it.  All those years in accounting molded me.  :)

I agree with you completely.  I have read his retrospective, well, all except the horror section.  I tried one and it was just too much for me.   I agree with you.  I also think that he is old and losing energy fast.  I have severe doubts about whether he will finish the series.  I know about old, I am two years older than George.  I used to defend him, but no longer.  I will keep hoping.  In the meantime, I will enjoy D&D’s ending, when ever it shows up.

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7 years ago

# 306. Kah-thurak: My daughter gave me for Christmas one year a copy of the two volume Retrospective, which I have read.  Well almost all of it.  I didn’t care for his Horror stories.  They were too scary for me.  I also have tried to purchase his current works, if reasonable.  I don’t need umpteen copies of the same story.  I used to read his Not a Blog, but I soured on that.  I have spent a lot of evenings talking with other fans on The Tower of the Hand.  Most are very discouraged with GRRM.  

The Histories are terrible, very newspapery and boring.  Not the same level as most of ASOIAF.  I wonder if he has lost it.

#307:. BTW, I love the Expanse.  A couple of friends bugged me until I read it and it gets better every time.  There is a new book coming out this week.  Mine is already on order at Amazon.

 

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7 years ago

I was rereading a second time the entire novel of Oathbringer and I caught this.  Did anyone else notice when the Radiants join Dalinar on the Battlefield, he counts seven (page 1141), and Stormfather says behind  your niece.  Then two more join them.  One is a large and powerful man, and the other, a woman with long dark hair.  Both of them have dark skin.  Stormfather says that he knew them long ago, and that they are in the presence of divinities.  It was before the fight with Amaram.  On the second reading, it occurred to me that they are the two Heralds, from Amaram’s camp.  I’m thinking Ash and Taln.  Does anyone else have a different opinion?

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7 years ago

@305, Freelancer:

I would submit that you should enter into the assimilation of a particular work, ANY particular work, absent a majority of those expectations.

That’s fine if we were just starting a new story. After 1000 or so pages, the expectations are (or should be) what the author created, what Sanderson refers to as “promises to the reader.” Many (including me) found that promises made were not kept in OB.

 

AlerieCorbray: yes, they are clearly the Heralds.

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7 years ago


Personally I think that Freelancer is correct in this. In the internet communities a lot of people “analyze” the novles of fantasy series with the goal of extrapolating the content of future novels. To some degree this is a fun game. But if I look at what, for example, Gepeto wrote before Oathbringer was released and after he read it, I think that for some people it actually spoils the enjoyment of the books. Because the predictions are usually wrong. And if you put a lot of effort into something and it turns out to be bogus, you get frustrated. So maybe the problem of the “Discovery Writer” not beeing able to stick to a coherent narrative, has, for some people, turned into a problem of not beeing willing enough to be “Discovery Readers”…

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7 years ago

 Kah-thurak @282:

As somebody whose favorite WoT volumes and IMHO the pinnacle of the series were  4-6, I disagree. IMHO, WoT would have been perfect at 7-9 installments. Frankly, most characters were pretty much were they needed to be for the final push by the end of volume 6 and the rest of the series engaged in a lot of weird re-sets and re-treads of  characterization arcs as well as recycling of villains to first side-track the subplots and then get them there again. OTOH, that final stretch couldn’t have been perfunctory either, because much of WoT popularity was based on it’s expansiveness and puzzle-box nature. Not to mention that LTT’s prologue and the crystal columns visions promised something sweepingly epic for the Final Battle. 

But I don’t really see whatever happened to WoT as being due to it having too many on-going PoVs. Proliferation of PoVs in the later books happened _because_ the overall plot stalled, not the other way round. Frankly, I still suspect commercial motivations. 

As to ASoIAF, the problem there was completely different – namely that vast majority of the PoVs were too young to be more than observers and GRRM failed to move on the timeline enough to let them organically grow into movers and shakers. And that happened due to his love of cliffhangers and of ending everything with a bang whenever possible, which then made it difficult to follow-up with a necessary time-skip.

IMHO, Martin in particular and fantasy and SF writers in general need to learn more from historical novels and history – periods of frenetic activity and overlapping events often enough alternated with uneventful stretches; shocking and eventually influential incidents didn’t necessarily provoke immediate responses. In other words – they should learn to use time-skips. Now, personally, I love the more complex world presented in AFFC and ADwD, but GRRM has clearly run out of  steam writing them, which is sad. But again, proliferation of PoVs is the symptom, not the cause.

Gepeto @299 :

I too felt in OB that having only 3 “main PoVs” was too limiting. In particular during part 1, where I really wanted to feel how the things were settling down in Urithiru and both Dalinar and Shallan were too inward-looking and focused on their own goals to provide it.

I feel that it is another case of Sanderson saving some of the issues for the upcoming books, which sometimes feels a bit awkward and contrived (see also easy acceptance of Szeth(!), etc.). Like in OB the characters that had no reason to hold revelations about Gavilar back – revelations that would have been devastating to Kholins, had to artificially  dance around the issue to preserve the mystery for later. Ditto people not wanting to return home immediately after the  parshmen left and disturbing reports from Alethkar started. Don’t all those highprinces and nobles have families back home? Don’t they worry about their lands? Shouldn’t they blame Kholins for keeping them and their soldiers away for so long and leaving their homeland defenseless? Etc. Those are clearly all problems that Queen Jasnah will have to deal with in the next book, but they should have already come up.

Ditto part 3 – I really wanted a PoV of somebody with emotional ties to Kholinar. Could have been Elokhar – a bit more characterization would have made his death even more poignant. Also, it is not believable to me that only a hundred people among local nobles and their retainers would have joined 2  figures of traditional authority promising to put an end to eldritch goings-on and to rescue the city that was about to fall. But I completely disagree that Adolin was “a buffon” there. On the contrary, IMHO it provided a nice bit of characterization and showed us Adolin’s artistic side. Also, his Edgedancer side, as he was the only one who took the time to warn their hosts about what was coming in case of their mission’s failure.

I do worry that Kaladin, Dalinar and Shallan remaining primary PoVs, with everybody else getting only occasional screen-time will prove even more limiting in the next 2 installments, as they’ll need to have their fingers in too many pies at once to support the narrative.

I loved the “lower decks” PoV structure of part 2 – more of this, but with other characters would be very welcome. Here is to hoping that some of the bridgemen join other Radiant orders, but characters with different backgrounds are needed too.  

AlerieCorbray @310:

Ice and Fire histories are pastiches of history books – GRRM just filled in some history of his world, mostly for his own use, and then has been convinced to publish it. Some people enjoy this stuff, in absence of the novels. That being said, the pieces published as “short stories” in anthologies aren’t particularly well edited. Did you read 3 “Dunk and Egg” novellas now  collected in “A Knight of the Seven Kingdoms”? They follow a hedge knight and his squire through their adventures about 90 years before the start of ASOIAF and are very enjoyable (IMHO).

Did you try Robin Hobb? Her “Farseer Trilogy” is different, following just one protagonist, but it is very emotional and poignant. And while this first trilogy has an entirely satisfying ending, she subsequently wrote 4 more trilogies in the same world, sometimes following the same characters, sometimes not, with a couple of them having multi-PoV structure, all building up to a satisfying conclusion. And it is all finished!

And now for something completely different re: OB:

Why on earth didn’t Elokhar and Adolin wear armor during their attack on the palace?! Not shardplate, just mundane armor, for some extra protection. Ditto, the Wall Guard. Kaladin only mentioned jerkins and shields. Azure was the only one wearing breatsplate, IIRC.  It is really funny how Taln is so glad to see soldiers in steel armor in Taylenah and feels that humanity now has a chance, but in practice almost nobody uses it? IIRC, the spearmen in WoK also only had leather. Is it the absurd WoT “rule of cool”, where armor was for losers and the more armor somebody wore, the easier they were to defeat? Seems a bit out of place in SA.

Shallan’s family history may be even sadder than I thought. It now seems very likely that Lin Davar had been much more aware of persistent threat to his daughter from the Skybreakers. A lot of his actions that seemed motivated solely by anger/ ambition now look like desperate attempts to protect her. Like his dealings with the Ghostbloods may have been about buying protection of one powerful secret society against another, and his quest for power might have been in service to their interests. His refusal to confide in his sons, particularly Helaran, no longer looks like bad judgement. His attempt to assassinate Helaran was likely due to learning that his eldest son joined the Skybreakers and would be a lethal danger to Shallan, should he ever return home. That fateful aluminium necklace was yet another safe-guard against detection, etc., etc. Lin’s abuse of his family and his household, not to mention actual murders and attempts at such  still can’t be excused, of course, and he did very much give in to hate but it was an even more terrible situation than I imagined.

And a dark mirror to what happened with Dalinar, who had _actually_ killed his wife, but was saved by his son’s love (based on misinformation). Lin, who was innocent, let himself be destroyed by his sons’ equally misinformed hate – and Shallan had been unable to save him. Which makes me think that the big next step for Shallan will be confessing the truth about their mother’s death to her brothers and Adolin.

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7 years ago

@313: What you say is absolutely true. I do realize part of my disappointment in the book is tightly linked to the amount of speculation I have made for it. Even if I tried to tempered them down significantly, I never, never, never, never once thought Brandon would make Sadeas’s murder be such a non-event. I thought it could pan out differently than what I was thinking, I thought Brandon could make it go ways I wasn’t keen on, but I never thought he would ignore the story all together as if it never happened.

No matter how much other readers are saying it worked for them or how much the found the rest of the narrative so fun to read it didn’t bother them or they are just in it for the ride and they are fine with whatever Brandon writes as long as he puts his name on top of it, it was such a crushing disappointment it negatively tainted the entire book. Oh I didn’t hate it, I enjoyed it, but I turned each page eagerly awaiting for resolution to happen and I got disappointed chapter after chapter. I hoped until I reached the end of the book and I was forced to say: “Well, this was all for nothing”. As such, Oathbringer will never be as good of a book as WoK and WoR were to me: it can’t be, it was such a disappointment to see things turn out this way. And how Brandon chose to write Adolin, Maya’s great, but everything else… He could have been so interesting, but the narrative would not allow him to. Instead, Shallan and her head problems took so much page time… Argh. So frustrating.

On the positive side, I will certainly not have much expectations for book 4 nor do I think I will spend the next four years speculating for it. As thus, I may enjoy it more, no matter what happens to it, though I did note a growing tendency to ignore the small scale events which personally help make the story come to life. OB was so much plot, plot, plot. 

@314: I agree about your criticism of OB. I too felt the three main viewpoints were too inward to be as interesting as they were supposed to be. I agree a story as big as SA cannot be carried by only three protagonists, especially not these three. I also think Brandon went too far with Shallan’s personality issue. I get it, he wants his characters to appear realistic, he doesn’t want them to get it easy, but it was too much and now we are going to be stuck with it for the future books. Too much focus on that, it took away from developing other characters which could have served to all the things you have mentioned. I too felt ill-at-ease at seeing the Alethi politic being evacuated from the story as if Brandon was trying to show us just one aspect of the story, but was glossing over everything else which would make it feel stronger, more developed. It is also what I loved about WoT: it never glossed over such things and yeah sometimes the plot seemed to move by baby steps, but I never got the impression entire story arcs were dropped or not explored. I never had to try to fill out the holes with my imagination.

Szeth’s return and acceptance was not well done. I loved Szeth’s time with the Skybreaker, this was very interesting to read and this comes form a reader who used to hate Szeth, but I thought his story should have stopped there. It needed more page time to feel complete and if OB wasn’t able to allow him those pages, then it should have been moved to another book. Having him pop back in and everyone is “Oh great another Radiant” just doesn’t work out for me. In fact, I would say everyone being: “Oh great Radiants” when everyone has spent hundred of years hating them is really not plausible.

About Part 3, I also agree a bit of additional characterization for Elhokar would have been welcome. I have seen people make this critic as they felt his death wasn’t as impact-full as it could have been (I was personally fine with Elhokar in OB, it worked for me). Adolin trying on new silly looking clothes and just being in the story to show what he is wearing was not a good use of his character which made him appear like a buffoon, to me at least, arguably not to all. Sure it showed his artistic sense, sure he has a lot of Edgedancer qualities, but Brandon is going to have to do better than that if he wants to convince his greater readership Adolin is more than a uni dimensional perfect fop who can do no wrong. 

Somehow, I do not think Shallan confessing her past to Adolin will come across as a plot point. 

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7 years ago

#312 Carl: On the appearance of the two Heralds in that scene, did you get the impression that Stormfather thought that they were there to join the battle and fight?  Who was the “HE” that Ash was taking Taln to see, do you think?  Do you think that it was Dalinar?

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7 years ago

#314. Isilel: ASOIAF POV’s too young.  Funny you should notice.Word was that GRRM was planning on doing a five year age skip and then he didn’t in the books.  That made a problem with filming the HBO series.  Apparently Northern Ireland has rules about what kind of scenes that minors are allowed to film.   They did age up most of the children by five years, so it made talking about past events very screwy.  Like when Dany was born.  

I am glad someone liked the more complex world of AFFC and ADWD.  GRRM had tied himself in a difficult knot with dividing character scenes geographically and then especially in AFFC, he introduced all those new characters that didn’t click with the average viewer.  I loved Brienne’s wandering.  It really gave me a feel for the common folk.  The average fan seems to hate the histories.  His latest appear to have generated almost zero reaction.   I speak from being a daily visitor to the Tower of the Hand website.  As far as the anthologies containing the histories, I disagree.  I have found them very nicely edited and well written.  In my opinion, it was only the last one that was done poorly.   The last anthology can not be blamed on GRRM, all he did was to submit one story, no editing.  I am still betting that it turns out to be a plot outline for a new HBO series in late 2020.   

Okay Dunk and Egg hold a special place in my heart.  I discovered them in Warriors in March 2010.  That was my first taste of Martin.  I love Mystery Knight.  I ended up reading the three Hedge Knight Tales in reverse order at first and then proceeded to read them in the correct order, over and over.  My daughter then introduced me to The Game of Thrones.  I read through the first four books about nine times before Dance was published.  Loved the world that Martin creates.  I am lucky in a way.  My husband has been constantly reading fantasy since he was a boy.  When he finishes, he passes it to our daughter.  So she has ended up with a huge collection of fantasy.  When I was ready to read Wheel of Time, she had all the books, except the last three, which I purchased for her.

I am so glad Hedge Knight went graphic.  It was so good to see Mystery Knight finally show up.  Hopefully he will soon publish all three tales in one volume.  That would be nice.

Robin Hobbs.  I have read shorts by her, but never a series.  I will keep her in mind.  Speaking of, Robin Hobbs wrote the only short in The Book of Swords anthology that I couldn’t finish.  It was too dark.

 

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7 years ago

@314 Rand was still only in the middle of his arc. While most of the cast could probably head into a final trilogy, the main protagonist still needed a lot more development to get to a point where saving the world made sense to him as a character. Some of the worldbuilding blocks needed still needed to be moved into place, too. So a number of characters had to be put on hold while the rest of the story caught up to their character arcs.

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7 years ago

@318

Rand and Egwene both. The heads of the Superboys and Supergirls both needed their powerups before the Last Battle could take place. Rand needed to go dark and find his way through it, Egwene needed to forge the White Tower into a sword capable of battling the darkness. Without either of those things occurring the Light loses. 

That being said, i still think with better planning and less focus on some of the secondary and tertiary characters Jordan could have wrapped up in like 11 or 12 books. The reborn Forsaken device is one of the things upping the page count; Moridin/Ishmael is the only resurrected forsaken that had any relevance to the LB. All the other LB players from Team Dark never died. Graendal, Moghedien, Demandred and Mesanna could have handled everything the reborn had their fingers in, either by themselves or by promoting other Darkfriends like Taim. There’s other things but that is what comes to mind at the moment. 

Then much of the frustrations of WOT is now not a factor. The PLOD isn’t so bad now that I don’t have to wait 2-4 years for the next installment of a distasteful plot development. WOT is actually better when taken as a whole than its individual novels. The foreshadowing alone is done better than anyone I’ve ever seen do it and I have read a lot of books. If we bring this back to Brandon, I think despite expectations of what we should be seeing we gotta remember we are only1/3 of the way through. Just because Brandon hasn’t delivered a promise in one book does not mean it will never be addressed. And you might get answers to questions you didn’t even know you should be asking in the bargain. Just my opinion.

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7 years ago

Hey! Shallan spoke a Truth to Adolin at the end of OB. Also to herself.

I wonder if she’ll be the first of the current (non-Skybreaker) Radiants to manifest Plate.

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7 years ago

@319 

Brandon hasn’t delivered a promise in one book does not mean it will never be addressed. 

Huh, honestly is there anyone who actually expects Brandon will write even one additional sentence on the murder case to make it more satisfying for the readers who didn’t like it? I say not. The fact some readers thought it was underwhelming is never going to be a weighting factor for the next book. No one cares if some readers didn’t like how it panned out.

On my side, I maintain my point: having Adolin murdered Sadeas was a narrative mistake. The murder mattered, not whom did it and, as such, it should have been done by someone else. There is absolutely zero plot point or event which happens because Adolin was the culprit. None. Hence, it was a bad choice.

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7 years ago

Renarin’s reluctance to explore/practice his Knight Radiant Surges takes on a different perspective when you know that Glys was corrupted by Sja-anat before he bonded Renarin.  Can Sja-anat corrupt a spren in Shadesmar?  Or can Sja-anat only corrupt a spren in the physical realm?  I also wonder if Sja-anat corrupts a sapient spren, will other sapient spren shun the corrupted spren (like they do with dead-eye spren)?  I hope we find out why Glys wanted to bond Renarin after he was corrupted.  Did other Truthwatcher spren try to stop him?  If we do not learn the reason in Book 4 or 5, I hope we will learn in in the 2nd five book series.

I am looking forward to how Brandon handles the 1 year time advance from the end of OB to the start of the 4th book.  Yet I have two nitpicks.  First, if we have Shallan or Adolin thinking about his/her wedding ceremony and/or celebration, it will be via a flashback.  I would like to have had a real-time scene of the wedding ceremony and celebration.  I think it would have given us some more insight into Alethi society.

My second nitpick is we will not be able to have a real-time scene with Jasnah taking to Ash or Taln when the wake up.  To be slightly hypocritical of me, I will be more upset if Ash and Taln remain unconscious for the entire 1 year gap.  IMO, this would be worse than learning of the results of Jasnah’s conversation with them via a flashback.

Thanks for reading my musings.
AndrewHB
aka the musespren

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7 years ago

@319 I think SA being split into two arcs will help avoid the problem of character arcs getting out of sync. Keeping characters in sync over five books is far easier than over ten or thirteen.

@321 It mattered to Adolin.

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7 years ago

#320.  Carl:  If you read the lower half of page 1150,  you will see an incident where  Jasnah has been hurling red eyed soldiers up in the air.  She is surrounded by a different glow than Stormlight, which appears to be geometric shapes outlining her body.  Others have assumed that she is forming armor.  Note:. We do not know how far along she is in saying her words.

As far as Kaladin, there have been times when he is fighting that he is surrounded by wind spren.  It is assumed by some that they will form his armor, when he says the right words.  Both of these two Radiants appear to be well on their way to forming armor.  Jasnah may already be there.

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7 years ago

@323: Not in a way which triggered any plot nor character development. It was a moot point. 

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7 years ago

BTW, note that Hoid gave that doll a Command more complex than even Vasher has been shown to use. “Fetch keys” is way more straightforward than “… take care of her.” He’s good.

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7 years ago

I was disappointed with the Ars Arcanum in this volume. You would think with all the worldbuilding revelations that the Ars Arcanum would reflect our broadening knowledge but the endpapers look nearly identical to previous volumes.

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7 years ago

It saddens me that among the comments, there are so many complaints and yet no one has mentioned that Brandon did something out of the ordinary, which is actually extraordinary in my eyes! He took a stab at the Romance genre, used the accepted tropes and then totally owned it.

Interlude 2 – Ellista was so unexpected and a true comic relief while it also advanced the plot. The scene was at the Jokasha Monastery where Navani had sent the cypher she was able to formula based on Dalinar visions. The main character was an ardent named Ellista which from the account was a brilliant linguist and translator.

I won’t write a synopsis of this Interlude. Since it was very early in the book, I really enjoyed it and laughed out loud just for the joy of reading something from Brandon which was so out of character for him.

If any of Brandon’s team reads this, please tell him “THANK YOU” from the bottom of the heart of a romance junkie like me. LOL He was able to characterize romance readers so well while also writing a story that is so Regency era romance. LOL And it stayed within the confines of Roshar. 

As Syl will say – Brilliant! And from Pattern – No Mating!

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7 years ago

# 322. AndrewHB:. We don’t know for certain that Glys is a Truthwatcher Spren.  Jasnah does not think so.  She came equipped with a description from The Stump, the new Truthwatcher Radiant that Lift found.  She described her spren as looking like light reflected on a wall from a mirror.  Instead Renarin’s spren is bright red, shimmering like the heat of a mirage. It had a crystalline structure like a snowflake, that dripped toward the ceiling.

On your other comments, it does seem a shame with the time skip that we missed Shallan and Adolin’s wedding.  It would have been nice to receive a first hand account.  And yes, it would be good to have a first hand account of Jasnah’s first conversation with the two Heralds. I definitely agree on those points.

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7 years ago

@328:  Agreed!  I found a reading of this on YouTube long before the book came out, and I laughed every time I listened to it!  I especially liked that 1) the romance-reading ardents are not portrayed as stupid and the woman in particular seems to be a brilliant linguist, and 2) one of the romance options for the sequel is the King’s Wit! I’m thinking that these books were written fairly recently, from the reference to the Shattered Plains and the fact that Ellista didn’t know there was a sequel.  So the King’s Wit in question would probably be based on Hoid.  I imagine that the look on Hoid’s face if he had read that would be absolutely baffled amusement.  In fact, I wouldn’t be surprised if he had read the book himself, and then sent a helpful critique to the author with emphasis on getting his character right.

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7 years ago


You will recall, that after Words of Radiance was released, there already was a discussion of Adolins killing of Sadeas in the comments. Some people, like you, thought that it would have vast consequences for him, others thought this wouldnt happen. Now it didnt. You even realized that sticking to this point so firmly more or less ruined the book for you. But you are still not willing to consider how this version of events actually made sense. It was a fitting end for Sadeas to be killed by Adolin whom he never took seriously and therefore mocked and provoked at leisure. Adolin realized, that he broke official rules by killing Sadeas. And in a modern society, within a rule of law, this would have had consequences if discovered and probably left Adolin with more internal struggle. But the Alethi are a much more primal society. They are constantly at war with each other and with the Parshendi. Adolin is a Duelist and a Soldier at war. He has killed enemies before and has little qualms to do so. And society would not frown upon him killing Sadeas and getting away with it… most Alethi would see it as a sign of strength.

The main consequence of Sadeas death was for Amaram to become Highprince, a position where he could be corrupted by Odium and his army turned against the Alethi. It is (as far as I remember) explicitly stated in the text that the rage of the soldiers over the murder of their highprince was an angle Odium used to control them. So you do have a consequence of Adolin killing Sadeas. It just wasnt what you thought it should be.

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Melbu Frahma
7 years ago

One of the best things about reading a series of books like this is that even with all the analysis and theory-crafting that goes on between the release of consecutive volumes even those theories that seem to hold sway in the popular consensus are inevitably dashed in moments when the only authority on the plot, i.e.. the author, releases the next volume.

Irrespective of what “I felt was going to / should have happened” I am still happy and glad that Mr Sanderson has more tricks up his sleeve than any number of close-up magicians.

Oathbringer was a joy to read and undoubtedly it will give rise to many more theories until the next volume is released. Whilst various things in Oathbringer didn’t happen in the ways that I was expecting, I am personally glad of this; there is a reason why I am not making my living telling tales of Roshar (not sure anyone would buy them)!

My only criticism is that the book was too short (Haha!) and depressingly it’s going to be a long wait for the next volume, in spite of Mr Sanderson’s ridiculously high writing rate (certainly no criticism is intended).

I don’t get hung up when my pet theories are squashed, as inevitably Mr Sanderson will have found some way to subvert and exceed my expectations. I would politely suggest some on this forum could do well to remember that the Stormlight Archive is Mr Sanderson’s work, his toil, blood, sweat and tears (hopefully metaphorical) and he is entitled to do with it as he wishes. It might be worth noting the fundamental tenet:

Journey before Destination.  

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7 years ago

@331: Sadeas being murdered had consequences, very small ones, IMHO, but consequences. I will not deny it and I will accept Brandon chose to play it this way even if I find it slightly under-whelming (too many loose ends), I accept this how the author wanted it to happen. And I am not against the idea, really. This isn’t what bothers me the most.

What bothers me is the fact Adolin was the one to do it had no consequences. By consequences, I was not only envisaging legal issues or stern punishments, I was also envisaging personal more internal consequences. I more or less knew in advance, the most stringent punishments readers came up with (exile for instance) were not very likely to happen. In fact, I wasn’t even sure there would be an “official” punishment for Adolin, but I have always been convinced it wouldn’t be swept under the rug. I always thought Adolin, at the very least, would not think it about it, would bear it, would feel it makes him unworthy of Dalinar and while there was some of that into OB, it was so diluted I couldn’t find it satisfying. The character comes across as very simplistic, without struggles, without failures, with things all working out for him just because the narrative demands it. Even when he does something difficult and illegal, he walks out of it completely unaffected.

So all in all, if Brandon wants Adolin to be a bland and simplistic character without any struggle who’s just there to offer the viewpoint of the “normal guy whom never had issues in his life and for whom starts always align”, then having him murder Sadeas wasn’t the right choice. It opened the door for more complexity to be have and since it didn’t happen, then it come across as unsatisfying, for myself and other readers. Had he make someone else murder Sadeas, the narrative and Adolin’s character would have been identical, but the story would have been more satisfying. There would still be the problem of Adolin being an overly simplistic character lacking depth, but since this is the character Brandon wants to write, I thought hinting at complexity to come was not the best of move.

Thus it is my perspective using Adolin’s character to murder Sadeas diminishes the story by creating expectations which weren’t met while not altering the narrative in any visible way. I just can’t see it as the right narrative choice anymore: it was a great one when we thought it would buff up Adolin’s character, but since Brandon obviously has no intentions to do so, it became a point of contention within the story, something to critic, something for readers to be discontent with whereas, had he used anyone else, none of this would have happened.

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7 years ago

I think that you are still vastly overstating the importance of Sadeas death. Adolin has killed a lot of people in his life. Most were Parshendi, sure. But Sadeas was his enemy. There is really no reason for Adolin to be terribly upset about having killed him.

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7 years ago

@@@@@ 328, Sheiglagh –  I have to agree with you .  When I first ran into the “romance book” in the read, I started laughing.   I could not believe Jane Austin showed up in Sanderson.    Alice pointed out it was probably more Georgette Heyer – but either way, laughter was the biggest response.

Along with a pondering of the 4th wall-ness of the male ardent saying “Sequels always have to be bigger.”

I also read romance novels, not as many as I once did, but still, I appreciated the shout out and how the female ardent was written.

@@@@@Gepteo,  I’ll be honest, while reading the Beta – I thought about how you would react to Adolin’s PoV in the book.   Your reaction has not been what I expected.  But like you , there are parts of Adolin’s story arch I disagree with.   I think he’s discounting the leadership role he plays with the other soldiers.  He’s a prince, and that is not small or unimportant, even with the KR around.

But really, the Alethi fighters kill people.  We can gussy up the terms all we want, but Adolin has killed on the battlefield a thousand times.    Before he ever fought Sadeas.      There are just too many other / bigger issues for the death of one Highprince to matter.   The other Highprinces that died in the main battle of WoR barely get mentioned.    
Poloma’s “Well, that’s one problem solved.”  Is too much of the thinking of the other characters.

When Adolin finally tells his dad the truth, House Sadeas is broken in power. Ialai Sadeas might still try something, but the real threat is removed.  

Adolin feels no guilt for that death.    Good for him.     No, this was not the story I was expecting.  OB is a much better story.

 

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Xaladin
7 years ago

Steve (@254?), I agree with your analysis of the attraction between Shallan and Kaladin, that it is more fraternal than romantic (the Veil component of Shallan’s personality is another matter).  She subconsciously sees him as the big, strong, and supportive brother she lost – Helaran, while he sees her as taking the place of his kid brother, Tien, in bringing him out of his depressive moods.  He even expresses this idea to Syl as a reaction to the impending marriage of Shallan to Adolin.  In any case, the would-be pairing of Shallan and Kaladin (“Shalladin”) as the two who understand and can stimulate each other best, appears to have evaporated.  However, with Sanderson, you can never be certain how the story will play out.  Meanwhile, both Shallan and Kaladin have retrogressed.  She can no longer control her pseudo-selves to the point where she exhibits a split personality.  Marriage to one she loves may help consolidate who she really is, or the tensions in living with someone else may aggravate her escapist tendencies.  The latter could occur if she continues to keep secrets from Adolin.  Kaladin, in turn, can’t cope with the moral ambiguities inherent in conflict among those he considers friends and is frozen into inaction at a critical point.  He will probably be OK with fighting and ‘killing’ the voidspren animated Fused or humans that represent a danger to those he loves, but killing the awakened Parshmen is another matter.  I see him undertaking missions rather than dominating a battlefield.

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Tommy
7 years ago

Couple things.

The Romance interlude was funny but as I commented earlier it totally broke the 4th wall for me. I wouldn’t be surprised if some of the clues have long reaching implications but I went from the excitement of Jasnah showing back up to the vision of Brandon winking at me.

I haven’t seen anyone discuss this. Across the Cosmere when people die (with one notable exception) they die. We know of the superhuman healing that stops radiants, twinborns, or mistings from dying but death once it comes seems final. Their spirit gets pulled to that distant realm and no one comes back. Preservation and Harmony and even Hoid seem shocked by the exception we know about. In this context we have Odium interrupting an unknown (but huge) number of the Parshmen to constantly return as the fused. He even threatens one of them (when Venli escaped becoming fused) with taking away that ability. How did he do it? Was the oath pact that trapped 10 humans in that same limbo a concurrent development or a response to it? Did the Oathpact come first?

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7 years ago

@334: It is not the death I felt he should be affected by, but the fact he disobeyed his father. This should have been a “moment” for Adolin because his entire life, from early childhood and so on, has been built around revering Dalinar, obeying him, taking every single criticism with a strong face and always try better to please his father.

I felt this was under-looked, had it been looked into, I’d probably be fine with the narrative as it is.

@335: I’d be curious to know what reaction you thought I would have. I would also say my reaction to this book is so horribly complex I can hardly keep track with it. I feel like I rushed so much through some parts and I had so much excitement I more or less ended into a fool mood.

I am hoping the re-read will help me get a better perspective on the book and I’ll admit I have re-read the Fused/thunderclast/romance scenes at least ten times. Each time I open the book to re-read a given section, I always fall back to re-reading the same sequence.

I never expected Adolin to feel guilty for killing Sadeas, but I expected him to feel unworthy of his father because, by doing so, he not only disobeyed, he broke the Code. Seeing this scene, with 15 years old Adolin, in the flashback, I keep thinking this should have mattered and while the subject was broached, I didn’t feel it was enough or it was made to matter enough.

There is a lot I could write on what Adolin too easily discount: I did feel it was within character for him not to remark the impact his own leadership had nor to acknowledge it. I just wished Adolin had a deep enough arc so these little things could be better explained. I however felt this specific part of the narrative was appropriate.

On the side note, I personally adored the Ellista interlude. I am not a big fan of the random interludes, but I appreciated this one. I thought it was a really good one: I loved seeing stern Ardents indulge in trashy romance.

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7 years ago

#333. Gepeto:. To me having Adolin be the one to breakdown and kill Sadeas was perfect.  Here was someone that Sadeas had egged on to the highest level.That action was done constantly, with the main difference this time, there was no one else around to calm Adolin down.  It had been happening for years like an itch that couldn’t be scratched.  There had been a ton of forewarning that this could happen.  When Adolin let’s loose, with no one around, it would seem that he gets away with the crime.  Then comes the guilty feeling and by being involved with the investigation, Adolin is really worried that his part will come to light.  Then the King is dead and father Dalinar want him to be king, and Shallan wants to marry him and not Kaladin.  Well, he confesses to both of them, he is not worthy.  Excuse me.  How is this guy bland?  He has traveled to Shadesmar, even communicated with his dead blade.  He is fully capable of commanding his father’s armies.  He is kind hearted and loving.  Not a boring character. 

As far as punishment, in a way, the Kholin brothers had been making their own rules for over thirty years.  Their country of  Alethkar prided itself on its ability to protect by making war.  And so was reflected in their children.  Adolin’s vocation was as a soldier making war against the peoples, who had killed his uncle the king.  His advocation was dueling.  In essense, he was and is a trained weapon.  So, in a way, he decided his own punishment after the ways of his family. He would not be king, but he could be the High Prince of his family lands.  Obviously, I have zero problems with the way Sadeas’s death played out.  In fact, I liked that Amaram was appointed the next Sadeas High Prince.  Such an excellent opportunity for Odium to sneak in and  tempt him to the other side.  Sanderson wrote it very well.  

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7 years ago

Additional thoughts.  Of course I want Adolin to become a Radiant Knight, but I am willing to watch it develop slowly.   I am encouraged that he has been able to reach his blade Maya, and really want that line of communication to continue and grow.  The thought of a full grown Knight in shardplate turning into an Edgedancer greatly amuses me.  What can I say?

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7 years ago

@331, Kah-thurak:

But you are still not willing to consider how this version of events actually made sense.

(Speaking about Adolin’s murder of Torol Sadeas and not having many consequences.) I don’t speak for Gepeto, but for myself it wasn’t that it doesn’t make sense. It makes perfect sense plot-wise and setting-wise.

It just isn’t satisfying to this reader as a story. However, I do recognize that the story is not over yet and I would be rather surprised not to see it come up again later. BWS is doing a lot of echoing in this series (e. g. Adolin stabs Sadeas in the eye, and later Moash stabs Elhokar in the eye). In this book Dalinar is devastated by the revelation of bad things he has done in the past–I would not be surprised to see Adolin experience this in Book 4 or Book 5.

@340, AlerieCorbray:

Of course I want Adolin to become a Radiant Knight.

There is no “of course” about it, IMO. I’d be disappointed if that happens, just as I would not have wanted to see Siri become an Awakener in Warbreaker. Characters should have different arcs. I also think it would be redundant to have Navani become Radiant.

BTW, as for the romantic triangle: I would bet money that by Book 6, at least one of Shallan, Kaladin, or Adolin will be dead, or Ascended, or otherwise out of play. 20+ years in the future is a long time for a world engaged in a devastating war.

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7 years ago

@339: I think @341 summarizes the best. As a reader of this book, the denouement employed wasn’t satisfying. I know several are disagreeing with me, but the crescendo employed within WoR where Adolin gets pushed over, farther and farther out of his comfort zone which ultimately led to this moment where he snapped did carry out more weight then the aftermath we got. In shorts, reading those scenes really, honestly leave the readers expecting something to happen because of those actions. Just the fact this has been abundantly discussed everywhere in the fandom should be sufficient evidence to highlight how much readers have expected this arc to play a role within the narrative and while it did play a role, honestly nobody can’t say it wasn’t anti-climatic. The best we can say about it is: “We didn’t really mind for XYZ reasons”, but nobody can come and say it was climatic. Nobody can say it was the continuation of WoR’s climax nor that if offered any sort of really interesting consequences for Adolin. At best, people are saying: “I never really liked the arc, so I’m fine with it not really happening”, but any reader who actually cared is disappointed by it on to one level or another.

Also, it is listed within the list of “broken expectations” within this post which is pretty self-explicative as a title. It was an expectation readers had and it was broken. Of course, expectations get broken all the time, but I didn’t feel what we’ve got in exchange offered enough to compensate for it.

I do not find Adolin refusing to be king an interesting nor a climatic development: Adolin was never supposed to be king in the first place. Had he refuse to be the Highprince, now this would have been interesting (probably much more interesting than reading Adolin as a Highprince, but this is another topic entirely). So basically, Brandon created this narrative where Adolin gets shoved into a position he was never supposed to occupy, then used the murder as an excuse to back out of it: this is not climatic. Nor satisfying. This isn’t the follow-up on all the tension and the emotions felt during the knife stabbing scene: this is an outcome created by the narrative which has little impact.

It has been my on-going commentary as I read Part 1: first I was very excited as I thought it started strong. I felt tension and I really wanted to know what would happen, then… it evaporated. It became Shallan’s head problem story and Re-Shephir which maybe was needed for later on, but didn’t carry the same anticipation, the same tension as having a snare close on Adolin. Well, for me this is. I can’t speak for others.

On the matter of Adolin bigger story arc, apart from the anti-climatic handling of his character greatest climax moment, my other issues are it is disconnected from itself. It has no beginning, no denouement, no climax, no ending. It starts with Part 1, which was a strong start, had Brandon built on it, Adolin’s arc would have been magnificent, but it was dropped. There is a sharp break of tone, within the writing of Adolin, from his early viewpoints to the rest of Part 1. Issues were raised, but they were dropped immediately. Then he disappears from the narrative for 500 pages and when he is back, he is goofy, funny, making jokes Adolin. Wait? Where the continuity with Part 1? How come everything which was raised just disappeared in thin air in order to have Adolin flip around to a comical-relief glossing over illusions of himself? Then we move onto the palace attack, which was great, only to fall into Shadesmar where Adolin speaks of how over-whelms and insignificant he feels. OK, this is great, but again where is the continuity with the previous chapters? Where is the common line to group them all together? This was another break into the character as we don’t see Adolin express these thoughts before, it was sharp break which isn’t consistent with previous chapters. Then he revives Maya, which I loved, but it doesn’t really come at the end of a story arc: it just kind of happened and I know Brandon wanted this to play out naturally, but the problem is without a coherent story arc, Adolin’s arc (if I can refer to it as is) doesn’t carry the emotional impact it should. It also raises the question of is Adolin broken enough for it or not which we may have argument to support, it doesn’t transpire into the narrative. As such, am I suppose to believe Adolin is broken because I can make a rational argument he is? Or am I suppose to believe he isn’t because Brandon didn’t really write it this way? What was the author’s intend here? What did he want me to believe? It is not clear…. Really not clear.

There also were several continuity errors within the flashbacks with respect to Adolin’s character. The timelines were wrong on several places: Adolin being aged or de-aged depending on the flashback. How can he be born 23 years ago, but be going on 13 eleven years ago? If he were close to 13 when Evi died, then the chapter should have been 10 years ago or 10 and a half years ago. 18 and half years ago, Adolin is 4 and a half, Renarin is about one year old or a little under, but not much (he makes his first steps). Later in the flashbacks, Adolin is 17, but Renarin is only 12 or 13… when he should almost be 14 or at the very least well pass 13.

There are also parts of the flashbacks which contradicts the canon from WoK/WoR. For instance, back in WoK, Adolin states he never wanted to be a soldier, he only agreed to become one after Gavilar died to avenge him and have his father go back to the man he was before it happened. This is mentioned at least three times in both WoK and WoR. In the flashbacks however, 15 years old Adolin is a proud soldier and Dalinar is a drunk father who talks down to him constantly. OK. So how can Adolin be a soldier at 15 when he says, back in WoK, he didn’t become one until later and only reluctantly? And why did he want Dalinar to go back to the drunken mean man he was? Adolin leading the Kholin troops to the Shattered Plains, when again, he didn’t take up to soldering, still according to WoK, until later?

Thus many little things didn’t work out for me within Adolin’s story arc, things which Brandon could address and fix within the next book and I sincerely hope he will, but I am not willing to wager much it will happen.

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7 years ago

Very, very good review.  Thank you.  

Has anyone touched on the Heralds.  I just realized that Jezrien had an encounter with Szeth before he assassinated Gavilar Kholin.  He and Dalinar were old drinking buddies.  Why was he around the palace?  Who spoke with Dalinar in the vision he had?  Was it Jezrien?  Just more questions for me. 

 

 

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7 years ago

Alerie@317.  Yes, the Hobb story in Book of Swords was very dark.  That portion of the Assassin’s Apprentice series is very dark, with the Kingdom both being invaded and facing “forging,” and I agree this particular story was dark to the point of pain.  I’m still not sure what I think about the ending.  

But…Hobbs is great.  One of my favorites and well worth reading.  The main character – Fitz, who you saw in the story – is an epic character who makes extreme personal sacrifices to defend his kingdom, with insufficient recognition for his efforts.  Very touching, very moving, stays with you a long time.  

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Tommy
7 years ago

I honestly have no recollection of Adolin saying he didn’t wanted to be soldier. He starts training with the sword at age 6, aspires to win a shard blade and not be given one. I can think of cases where he prefers a certain lifestyle but I think this statement is a stretch similar to Shallan hates Renarin.

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7 years ago

For the Adolin fans

Maybe it’s me, but I’m having trouble understanding those who have issues with Adolin’s character arc. I’ve heard people questioning his page count, on-screen time, importance to the narrative, and any number of things regarding the direction Brandon chose to take him. It kinda makes me wonder if we are reading the same set of novels.

I’m not certain of the exact page count or the scenes he is directly involved in but for a supposed minor or secondary character he has been involved in more scenes than all but 3 of the big 4. More than Renarin, Jasnah, Szeth and Lyft if you discount the novella. All 4 of these characters are set to get a flashback book, 2 of them in the front 5 SA. And his scenes have not been filler. In WOK he nearly caused Dalinar to abdicate. In WOR he has the 4-1 duel, interrupts the Everstorm and of course kills Sadeas. In OB he RESURRECTED A DEAD SHARDBLADE!!! That’s supposed to be impossible. Other than that he keeps Shallan and Kaladin from shattering into a thousand pieces because of the pressure of their Oaths. He has taken part in nearly every climatic scene in SA, all without being an asshole.

Is it that people want more? At whose expense? This is Stormlight. Archive not Adolin’s Archive. We aren’t in his head enough? Not sure that’s necessary or even beneficial to his character. I know I won’t convince those who are unsatisfied with the role Adolin plays in the narrative but it just baffles me that a character can be so loved that people would have him be the focal point to the exclusion of all other characters. He isn’t the only good part of SA, is he? I hope Adolin gets a novella of his own someday but if not I’m satisfied with Brandon’s take on Prince Charming. I hope Adolin love doesn’t ruin a great series for everyone.

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7 years ago

@345:

WoK, Chapter 12

The changes in Dalinar had begun with the death of his brother. That terrible day was when everything had started to go wrong. The loss of Gavilar had nearly crushed Dalinar, and Adolin would never forgive the Parshenids for bringing his father such pain. Never. Men fought on the Plains for different reasons, but this was why Adolin had come. Perhaps if they beat the Parshendis, his father would go back to the man he had been.

WoK, Chapter 58

“He works very hard, ” Dalinar said. “He truly loves it. Not the war, not the fighting. The dueling.”.

WoR, Chapter 56

There was a time, he thought, when I didn’t like the battlefield because it wasn’t quiet, like a duel. Despite his original reluctance, he had become a soldier.

There is another one I cannot find again where Dalinar expresses sorrow over having been forced to turn Adolin into a soldier. There is also one where Adolin says Dalinar was a soldier by career whereas he only became one because of the circumstances which I cannot find either.

I find those passages all basically say the same thing: Adolin never wanted to be a soldier, he became one because Gavilar was killed, not because he wanted to.

I find they clash with the information within OB where young Adolin is a proud soldier at the age of 15. I also find the passage where Adolin wants his father to go back to the man he was before Gavilar was very odd as this man was a mean drunk.

These are little things, but when I try to make myself a truthful tapestry of a character, I find it hard to do so when the information I have seem not to fit one with another.

@346: A bit of statistic.

Shallan Davar =106,337 23.4%
Dalinar Kholin = 94,454 20.78%
Kaladin = 74,588 16.41%
Dalinar Kholin (flashback) = 47,274 10.4%
Adolin Kholin = 20,842 4.59%

Adolin occupies 4.59% of the page time in Oathbringer. I would say wishing for the percentage to increase a little isn’t really pushing out for much. As for where to take it from, Shallan has 23.4% of the book, Dalinar had 31.18% which is a lot, even if it was his book. If each of those two characters were to give a mere 1% of their page time to Adolin, he’d start to have enough page time for a more complete story arc. This is about 2500 words total for those two characters, which is not a lot.

In terms of word count, 20K is less than in WoR, it is less than in WoK where he had was a last minute addition.

Is Adolin ruining SA for me? Maybe. Maybe not. I’ll tell you once I’m done reading the series, but I cannot say I am thrilled with the direction Brandon has decided to steer SA into.

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7 years ago

By the way, if you like the work of “Robin Hobb” you might want to check out the stuff she publishes as “Megan Lindholm” (real name Margaret Astrid Lindholm Ogden, and no, I’m not giving away any secrets). Mostly or all out of print but findable as paper, many available as ebooks.

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7 years ago

#346 EvilMonkey:. I suspect my way of thinking about Adolin is very close to what you said. Well spoken Sir.  One of the greatest things is that he found a way to reach Maya.  However, in my humble opinion, he didn’t resurrect Maya totally.  She would still be a dead eye in Shademar.   She likely still has the scratched out eyes, with the other spren avoiding her.  She is not communicating very well, it seemed to take all her energy just to whisper her full name.  If she is truly resurrected, she should be eager and ready to go recruiting and if she decided on Adolin giving him useful hints to help him say the words.  If not Adolin, she should be seeking other possible Radiants.

Any break through would be amazing.  If they choose not to make a formal bond, that is fine with me.  What is important, now that the matter of Sadaes’s death has been resolved, it is time to get on with life.  I love the path we are following, but the hardest burden will be the wait between volumes.

 

 

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Tommy
7 years ago

@347 I don’t read any of those as bitterly opposed to becoming a soldier. Something that he did out of duty and honor to his father. He can’t have hated it that much since he spent most of the WoK wishing for the return of the Blackthorn as he saw it.

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7 years ago

@350: As I said, it is stated in the book Adolin did not want to become a soldier and only made the move after Gavilar was killed. Adolin says it, Dalinar says it.

Oathbringer says Adolin was a soldier years before this happened.

The information is contradictory and, even if mental loop holes can be made to make it fit, it still remains contradictory. We could argue 15 years old Adolin was dressing like a soldier and hanging around soldiers without being one himself, but the fact Dalinar refers to him as “soldier” and criticize his uniform is kind of a hard one to loop hole around.

Thus, in WoK/WoR, it is stated Adolin became a soldier out of need and circumstances whereas OB has Adolin become a soldier on his own volition. As I said, there are two other quotes I couldn’t locate yesterday: one has Dalinar says he’s sorry he was forced to turn Adolin into a soldier and the other one has Adolin states he only became a soldier because of the circumstances and notes it as one difference in between himself and his father. If I find them again, I’ll post them.

This is one of the many continuity errors I have noted within Adolin’s story arc with OB.

Another thing which bothered me, back in WoR, Adolin worries over the consequences for murdering a Highprince. In OB, he murdered one, but not once does he think of what may happen if he is found out. Independently of how his character processes the action, he should have wondered.

Now, I understand Brandon focused on the bigger narrative and, as a result, didn’t focus on the smaller scenes, but those smaller scenes were the ones which, IMHO, would have make the story hold better on its own. Too many holes, too many missing scenes. This is especially true with Adolin’s character, but it also true for other characters as well.

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7 years ago

@351

1. From the time of the Rift scene until the Galivar assassination Alethkar was at relative peace. But as a warlike society they would still train for the next war. Adolin has been training to fight from an early age. He may not have wanted to go to war but he did want to fight and had a gift for it. After all, he trained with the sword so hard and was so good that he won Maya at 16 years old.

2. Most of Adolin’s yearning from the Blackthorn comes from the stories he’s heard about his father’s battlefield prowess, probably reinforced by Evi. He never saw the Blackthorn in action until they reached the Shattered Plains, and that only in fits and starts. Adolin idolized the image of his father. That’s what he is trying to live up to. 

3. Don’t discount Evi’s role in Adolin’s behavior. She was the one who encouraged Adolin to act like a soldier in the presence of Dalinar.  I don’t see a contradiction of his character arc, just the expansion of the puzzle, though still lacking all the pieces.

On to other things:

I believe that the Radients have to change, have to be different than the Knights of old to kill the Desolation once and for all. I will expand on that thought if anyone wants to read my take on it.

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7 years ago

@352: How do you correlate the pieces of the puzzle with Adolin stating he never wanted to be a soldier back in WoR? Which is confirmed by Dalinar? How do you correlate those pieces with Adolin being reluctant to go onto the battlefield, at first?

That’s the part that doesn’t fit and no matter how I loop hole it in my head, seems to be Brandon changed his mind on Adolin.

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Tiffany
7 years ago

I was fully convinced that Dalinar’s memories were coming back because the Nightwatcher had taken memories of “his wife” and now that he was married again, he was going to start forgetting Navani. I kept hoping that wouldn’t happen.

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7 years ago

# 354 Tiffany: Did you read the entire book?  This was explaining as his memories finished playing out.

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Morgan
7 years ago

Okay, but my question when I finished the book was that if the humans were the Voidbringers, then who did the Heralds represent? Were they there at the first desolation when men first came to Roshar? And if they were, do they have knowledge that they are the voidbringers? And how did the oathpact come around? And so many more questions! Can’t wait for the next book!

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7 years ago

Not wanting to be a soldier is not the same as not wanting to fight. Presenting a martial presence as a way to connect with a father he both loves and idolizes is not the same as loving war. Evi trained Adolin from an early age to present that martial presence, teaching him to salute Dalinar, teaching him to treat their relationship as less father/son and more commanding officer/soldier.

The scene in Oathbringer where Dalinar feels some hatred towards his sons for looking too much like Evi, he expressed disappointment but never outright said he hated them. He thinks it but does not say it. He treated his sons with coldness but he is so stoic it can be quite simple to misinterpret if one cannot see into his head like the reader can. Adolin took it as a rebuke; he must work harder to please dad. Renarin saw his father’s pain and brought him a drink. Dalinar realised he did his sons a disservice but they rarely felt that way.

 

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7 years ago


Adolin clearly has been trained as soldier for a long time. And the war on the shattered planes is also ongoing for a relativly long time. So Adolin is a soldier, but loves duelling more than battlefield fights. He might not have wanted to become a soldier at ~18 when Gavliar was killed, but he has been one for 6-7 years now. He can have conflicting feelings about his role, his father and the meaning of fighting and duelling – such things are normal. You expect characters in books to always make sense, never contradict themselves and evolve in a linear fashion. This is not how people work at all.

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7 years ago

I think people might be taking “Humans are the Voidbringers!” too literally. Humans seem to have brought Odium to Roshar, but in the “present day” Odium’s direct servants are Singers, and most humans are his opponents or enemies. Surely one of Sanderson’s points is not to be simplistic and blame entire nations, races, or species for the acts of some of them thousands of years ago!

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7 years ago

 @359 Carl
You are most certainly right. I think that Renarin and his bonded Void Spren and the Unmade that helped Shallan may have been included to show, that even the forces associated with Odium are not necessarily evil an can choose to do the right thing.

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7 years ago

I’m still hoping for insight from a commenter or Alice or Braid Tug on the question I asked @292 above.  I was shocked by the Fused showing up.  I expected the bad guys to be red-eyed voidbringers or thunderclasts rather than a wholly new form of anti-surgebinders.  Is there any foreshadowing in WoK or WoR hinting that the Fused existed and would lead the revolution against Rosharian humans?  

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7 years ago


As far as I understand it, the “Fused” are the “old Gods” that the Parshendi feared in WoR and whose return they wanted to prevent.

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7 years ago

 AlerieCorbray @317:

Robin Hobb’s story in “The Book of Swords” anthology does take place in the setting of the Farseer Trilogy, but it is also essentially a horror story. The phenomen of Forging is something that people in the trilogy have to deal with, but never in such a detailed and personal manner. As a fan of GRRM, there is nothing in Hobb’s series that should be too dark for you, IMHO. I suggest trying “Assassin’s Apprentice”, the first book in the above-mentioned trilogy.

If you don’t like it, you might still try “The Ship of Magic”, which is the first book of the “Liveship Trilogy”, that takes place in another part of the same world, but is fairly different, with true multi-PoV structure, more detailed and at the time very original worldbuilding (though there has been an upsurge in maritime fantasy since then), etc. It does spoil the ending of the first trilogy in a general way, though, which is why I don’t suggest reading it first, even though it aligns very well with your tastes as described in earlier posts, IMHO. Hope you will find something new to enjoy – and completely finished instead of a work in progress, for a change!  

Keep away from “Soldier Son” trilogy, though, the only one which is set in a completely different world and arguably Hobb’s weakest work.

Noblehunter @318 and Evilmonkey @319:

I really don’t think that Rand and Egwene needed more than 2 volumes to reach the positions and states of mind that they needed to be in for the climax. Particularly since they are barely in many of the post-LoC volumes and Rand was already nicely primed to go dark after his captivity. That, as well as Mat linking with Seanchan, Elayne taking her thrones and Moiraine’s return could have been easily accomplished in 2-3 books, if Jordan didn’t decide to bloat and endlessly re-tread things. PLOD, the Andoran succession, recycling of the Forsaken, The Bowl of Winds, Far Madding etc. – none of it was needed and it very much weakened the narrative in the end, IMHO. Even the AS intrigue, which I, for one, very much enjoyed in the earlier volumes, had degenarated into boring and wholly unbelivable childish squabbling, for the most part, which, in the end didn’t even lead to much of anything, as the absurd OP strength hierarchy remained in place, etc. And yes, I felt this on re-read before the concluding book came out, too, so it wasn’t just a function of waiting for each installment.

 

Returning to SoA, I very much enjoy, it, but it does seem to inexplicably drop emotional beats and pay-offs from time to time, while otherwise mostly doing well in this respect, so these omissions stick out like sore thumbs to me. I.e. in WoR:

Jasnah’s “death”. Only Navani seemed to react to it like I’d expect. Dalinar only missed her expertise, Adolin had no reaction at all (!). But worst of all – Elokhar. He may not have been close to his sister, but he had been angsting about assassins for all of WoK, so he should have by all rights blown the gasket after she  was actually “murdered”, no? But nothing. Frankly, at the time I thought that it was  a clue towards Jasnah’s survival, but now it seems to be just weak writing, because the same thing happens after Elokhar’s real death in OB. Yes, there is a lot going on at first, but in the epilogue both Navani and Dalinar are strangely content and happy just a couple weeks later. Ditto how nobody except his father, worried about  little Gav after the news of the riots and communication cutting off.  IMHO, YMMV.

Again in WoR we have Adolin having to chose between the life of his father and that of a young woman he was beginning to be infatuated with and again no room to react to such a fateful decision.

Jasnah’s return from the dead in OB – you’d really think that we’d get an emotional pay-off there, particularly seeing that it was our last chance to see Jasnah and Elokhar interact on-screen  until her flashback book in… 30 or so years iRL? As well as could have fleshed out the latter a bit more before his exit stage left. Nope.

Adolin and Elokhar arrived at their childhood home and heart of their power as a House to find it horribly transformed and menaced by horrors out of legend. Emotional reaction/PoV? No.

Szeth suddenly joining Our Heroes after all the anguish and fear he had caused them ? Nothing. Though, to be fair, I expect that we’ll see a pay-off there even if it will have to be in media-res.

I want to reiterate that I enjoy SoA very much so far, but I hope that Sanderson manages to overcome this unevenness that makes certain parts feel artificial and not as fulfilling as they could have been.

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7 years ago

@358: I do not expect character to evolve in a linear way, but I expected younger Adolin not to be a soldier at the age of 15. I expected him being reluctant about it because his future self told us he once was. Sure, he’s a soldier now, but before, when he was younger, it isn’t something he wanted. Therefore lies my problems with it: older Adolin told us the path he now walks is not the one he would have chosen for himself. Dalinar confirms Adolin is not walking on a path he wanted to walk on, but the flashbacks tell a very different tale, one where Adolin is eager to walk on the exact same path as Dalinar, which is to be a soldier.

This isn’t about linearity or anything, this is about the flashback being in direct contradiction with what older Adolin has told us. Older Adolin can’t say he only became a soldier due to circumstances if he was one before the circumtances arrived. This does not make sense and it isn’t about people changing their mind or anything: it is about the character’s past not matching what the character said it was without having a good explanation (magic altered memories) to justify it.

@363: About Robin Hobb, I needed to say Liveship has one of my all time favorite character arc: it was just fabulous. You honestly do not expect it when the book starts, but it unfold in a beautiful manner allow the characters of interest to grow, to evolve and it was just perfect. If people are wondering, after all my ranting, what kind of character arcs I love to read, then this is a very good example.

This being said, I agree reading Assassin first is preferable, though appreciation for this one may depends on a readers given mood. I loved Fitz at the time where I read it, but I don’t think I would like him if I were to read the book for the first time now.

I conquer about Soldier’s Son: most depressing book ever. It goes on paths you really don’t want the story to go. Not a bad series, but arguably not the best from this author.

About the little scenes and the powerful moments not being written: There has been some level of criticism about this within the fandom. All I can say is I agree with every single point you have raised and if I was willing to move past the omissions, back in WoR, I felt with OB Brandon has created too many loose ends within his characters arcs for the story to feel satisfying. I can also say there are other readers which have raised the exact same points and felt Brandon decision to remove all of the “little scenes which did not directly influence the big bad main narrative” has diminished the emotional impact of the book. I’ll go farther and say it made the book… cold. Emotionless. To me this is, not to say there were no emotions, but it feels like Brandon took away too much of it. I never felt fuzzy while reading OB nor anxious nor satisfied: I just read the story, but in the end, it felt very… technical perhaps?

But yeah, there is some amount of criticism being made towards this. I hope Brandon will read it and adjust it for the next book, taking the time to tie on those lose ends, taking the time he needs with Adolin, Navani, Gavinor and Szeth’s characters to make their arc feel more completed, without holes.

Another critic I have read yesterday was how part 1 built on tension which is never capitalize on, it just vanished. Brandon has always been excellent at capitalizing on momentum and tension, but within OB, I felt he didn’t, I felt he was so focus on his big narrative, he so wanted his big ending battle, he didn’t pay enough attention to the rest of the story.

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Whitespine
7 years ago

 I think you are conflating training to be an officer, impressing your father, and perfecting your dueling skills with training and desiring to be a soldier. I read Adolin’s story as quite consistent. It seems that the times he had with his father as a child were fairly rare and at uncommon intervals. Thus, when presented with the chance he always tried to make a good impression on this “great man/warrior/officer” that Evi always described. But it is clear (I think) that he isn’t seeking to be a soldier per se as much as a great duelist – as his “calling” is. In fact, many of those scenes in WoK where he says he doesn’t want to be a soldier serve to reinforce the other feeling he expresses of hating the restrictiveness of solider life under the codes. Specifically, wait for it, not dueling. That is why he is languishing. He loves to duel but as a soldier in a time of war he can’t. But he is doing it out of honor and a memory of Gavilar and wanting to make his father proud. Kah-thurak already expressed a lot of this, but I wanted to add my 2 cents.

 I will grant that the desire to bring back his father to how he used to be does seem more inconsistent now that we see how he acted, but I think EvilMonkey offers a believable interpretation of that.

@259 Carl and others who have raided this,

 I agree that the whole “humans are the voidbringers, we must all stop fighting now and question our existence” is a bit overblown or unbelievable right now. I mean, if you think about it, the first desolation is as far back in history as perhaps the first civilizations here on earth. (the 4500 year gap since the last desolation gets you to 2500 BC and then it sounds like the oathpact was working for at least a 1000 years – it references that several were separated by centuries initially – and then there is however long there was before the oathpact but after humans arrived). If we were suddenly attacked by Atlantians who claimed that humans forced them into the ocean in 4000BC and they want us wiped out, I personally, would have no qualms about fighting them. I mean, I would be willing to offer them an accommodation of some land on various coasts if they wanted or something, but I would not accept that they have more of an inherent right to the world than we do at this point. I mean, lets face it, as much as  we like to gloss it over, human history is filled with one group of people invading, subjugating, and assimilating or anhiliating another group over and over again. Now I’m not saying that is the way that is best or how it always needs to be ( I hope that we are moving to a place where people use diplomacy more to resolve conflict) but that is what our history is filled with. Heck, even America, which was founded by revolutionaries and has been a relatively free and progressive country has plenty of skeletons, too. Yet, that doesn’t make our soldiers or politicians hesitate to defend it.

  My point is, I don’t buy that this was the reason for the Recreance; there had to be more to it. I think it had to do with a combination of the horror of what they did to the parsh in turning them into parshmen and destroying the shattered plains awakening fears of surgebinding being dangerous. And, I feel like the reaction of the humans in the book ( i.e. Bridge 4) was a bit unbelievable. Yes, it would be shocking to learn that humans invaded, but now, thousands of years later there isn’t really any going back. Especially with the current Singers being on the side of Odium who, while not being just “hate” like we thought before, is clearly not a nice guy and wants to destroy you. Overall, I think more of the political leaders reactions were more to the dangers of surges which makes more sense, at least.

EvilMonkey, I for one would be interested to hear your thoughts on the new Radiant and how they need to change. Theories are always fun to read.

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ai83
7 years ago

I’m perfectly happy with how Adolin handled his killing Sadeas. This whole book is about how Radiants must be broken people for Investiture to fill them. They’re not better people, they’re possibly the worst people out there who are redeemed by their insistence to stand up and move on. I am happy with how Adolin handled this and it was the honorable thing to do, even if not the legal one. We see the approval of the Cognitive Realm in the actions of his sword – and I can’t wait for the moment when he revives her. 

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7 years ago

@365: All of what you say is true, but then again how to do you explain 15 years old Adolin being a soldier in uniform? How do you explain 17 years old Adolin being given command of the Kholin army?

OB tells us Adolin has been a soldier a LONG time before Gavilar’s death and while he may not have seen combat until the Shattered Plains, the fact he was a soldier, at a time where he free not to be one, is inconsistent with the previous books.

@366: The reason I am unhappy is it was very anti-climatic and a poor use of the momentum from both WoR and early OB. As for Adolin’s character, Brandon has made up his mind: what we see is what we get. His purpose, within the narration, merely is to offer a counter-viewpoint to the Radiant, one which is at times funny, at times serviceable, but never introspective enough for his character to truly have an arc. He is a tool the author is using whenever he needs someone capable to take over from the Radiants or someone lighthearted to relief the tension. Some readers are content and satisfied with it, not asking for more, but other readers thinking there ought to be more to Adolin and wanting his character to get a bigger, fuller, deeper story arc, well, OB didn’t quite make the mark for them.

I have read readers thinking having Adolin in the story much mean Brandon has a plan, something in mind because keeping as he is just isn’t interesting. This had been my personal take for a long time, but after reading OB, the simplest answer is the right one. Brandon just uses Adolin as a band-aid for the scenes where he is needed, whether it is coherent one scene from the next is not really important, whether insights are missing or not for his character also isn’t important, in fact, nothing is important with Adolin except for the actions he does which helps the Radiants. That’s it.

And there are readers whom are quite disappointed this is how the author chose to write it.

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Whitespine
7 years ago

@367

I guess I wasn’t very clear in that point, but it was what I was getting at about training to be an officer, etc. As the son of a high prince, but even just as a light-eyed Vorin male of high dahn, there was an expectation of learning the art of war. Whether Adolin wanted to be a solider or not, he was going to learn how to be a soldier and how to command soldiers, even if he didn’t want to be a general long-term. All the high princes knew how to fight and command, but many of them still focused on other things – Sadeas on politics, Sebarial on economics, etc. Even Renarin, who shouldn’t have been a solider and wanted to be in scholarship still pressed on and trained as a soldier. So with that in mind, it instead would have been very weird not to have seen young Adolin in military training. He was always going to do that even if he didn’t want to be a “solider”. In fact, even though he was a “soldier” (in that he was learning the art of war) at 15 you still see that his mind isn’t on that. When he asks Dalinar to come observe it isn’t to see him command or train, but to duel. That is always where his heart was and why he didn’t want to be a long-term soldier. He would have moved on to politics with a specialty in using dueling to make political maneuvers, maybe with a side hobby of fashion and growing a tailoring/design empire. Nothing he did made it seem like he wanted to be a solider. Just that he was in military training like he was expected to be.

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7 years ago


I guess what all your problems with Oathbringer come down to is that you really wanted Adolin to be primary character, when he is only a very important secondary character. Maybe he will become more important in future books, but right now he is not. So in your frustration about the lack of material on Adolin you overanalyze every scrap of information that you can find and construct inconsistencies in his behavior that are not really there. You cannot motivate everything he does from the information we have on him, but as we obviously dont have a complete picture this is to be expected.

Also you always try to suggest that a lot of people share your criticism. And maybe some do. There are most certainly points to criticize, as Isilel rightly shows. But on the whole Oathbringer is a very well received book with good ratings on Goodreads and Amazon for example.

Also: When Dalinar starts shifting command of the Kholin armies to Adolin in WoK he is 24 or 25, not 17.

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7 years ago

Of course these characters are not members of our species, but we H. sapiens don’t do that. That is, we don’t freak out because our ancestors were horrible conquering land-thieves.

I am an American citizen. With the exception of the few reservations left, all this land was stolen from the native peoples. (OK, a small fraction was purchased.)

I am of Jewish descent. Read the Torah (“Old Testament” to you Christians). The story of Moses and Joshua is the tale of how my ancestors killed everybody and stole the Land of Israel.

Maybe you’d prefer to ask the currently-peaceful people of Mongolia, who conquered everything they had ever heard or cared about? The descendants of the Vikings–you know, the people of England and Normandy (to name two countries) that descend from Viking land-thieves? Or the Scots? Little known fact: “scot” means “Irish brigand”. The Scots are descended from Irish pirates who conquered northern Great Britain.

My point is: the fact that I said this will not make my cousins give up Israel to the descendants of the original people of Jericho, or the Moabites, or whoever. Nobody is expecting whites (and blacks) to move away and return California to the Miwoks and the Paiute and the Chumash.

So why would the Radiants of Roshar just give up and walk away from their oaths? Some of them were Alethi, whose whole culture is about fighting and killing! Makes no sense.

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7 years ago

# 292/361 RobMRobM:. I will give answering you a try.  The fused were originally called the Parshendi’s old Gods, which King Gavilar threaten to bring back. That was why their council of the five had the slave kill him.  Each one of the Fused, requires a living willing volunteer  to hold the dead spirit.  As long as there are volunteers, the dead can return to the Fused state the next ever storm.  Which makes them almost impossible to kill for long.  Remember the one that Moash killed in the frostlands. Killing the king did not keep the fused from returning.  Remember that spren that Venli was talking to.  It told her how to start the Everstorm, and thus bring on the sprens that carried Odium’s red eyes and the storm form for their bodies.

Vivenna never used Nightblood on a regular basis.  I remember once she threw it unsheathed into a crowd of soldiers.  She was carrying it to look for Vasher, who had been captured.  The sword told Lift that Vivenna never drew the sword.   No guess, who Vivenna would work for, who might want the sword.  Last we heard, hundreds or thousands of years ago, she had gone off with Vasher to look for Yesteel, who was Arsteel’s brother.  He was one of the original five scientists in Warbreaker.

 

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7 years ago

# 363  Isilel:. What I have been using as a guide to fantasy writings, are the two Legends anthologies by Robert Silverberg.  Robin Hobb has a story in Legends II.  I must say, it was one of the weirdest ones that I ran into.  It was kind of confusing.  Anywho, the story I read was called Homecoming, it listed the series as Realm of the Elderling. In the intro it talks about three trilogies- the Farseer, the Liveship Traders, and the Tawny man.  But it doesn’t say where this story belongs.  Yes, I have heard of her, but It will be a while before I am able to take time to read a series by her.  

Thank you for the suggestions, but I read a lot slower than I once did, since going blind.  I am elderly and often prefer to stay within comfortable boundaries.  I’ve been reading a lot of Sanderson  multiply times trying to understand what is happening to Cosmere. With him combining  all of his adult fiction, his imagination must be huge.  That alone should keep me busy for along time.  Then add George Martin’s stuff that should keep me very busy. In any case, thanks for your suggestions.

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7 years ago

Carl @241:

I understand where you are coming from – I, too, didn’t want all Kholins to become Radiants. Honestly, while I guessed  that Elokhar was seeing Cryptics in the mirrors in WoK, I am slightly disappointed that he was on the cusp of actually  bonding one when he was killed. However, the problem is that more Radiants than the 10 who assemble during Dalinar’s acsension (assuming that the 2 Heralds will bond), are going to be needed to make effective opposition to Odium and his troops/allies in any way feasible. And while Sanderson certainly can introduce completely new characters to fill that niche – and I hope that he does, it won’t be satisfying if _all_ of them will be.

In particular, I feel that the 2 other Bondsmiths need to be already somewhat fleshed-out  characters, rather than come in from the cold. Now, I am fairly certain that one of them is going to be Rlain, as it is pretty clear that that they’ll need a singer Bondsmith to bring the singers/listeners into their anti-Odium coalition for the first time ever, and he has been built-up as a bridge between the 2 peoples. However, I don’t believe that he can do that by bonding the Sibling and having to, consequently, remain in Urithiru for the most part. Also, he demonstrated no affinity towards running cities so far.

And yet, waking and bonding of the Sibling will necessarily be an important plot-point in the next 2 volumes, because, as has been repeatedly pointed out, they won’t be able to hold Urithiru long-term otherwise. And I really don’t see how they’d be able to continue being a meaningful opposition to Odium without it. But who is there who could become Sibling’s Bondsmith in such a way that we’d be able to follow the process somewhat? Who has been built up to have  strengths and interests compatible with attracting a city-spren? Navani.  Yes, I know. 2 Alethi and a married couple, no less, as 2 of 3 Bondsmiths… It is problematic. I don’t entirely like it. But what are the alternatives?

As to Adolin, I too kinda wanted him to remain a highly-functioning normal and to contend with all the new-fangled Radiants et al., and all the complexities of new powers as a leader of Alethkar (now in exile). But spren-blade revival that has started with Maya is obviously vital for the overall plot and Adolin refused kingship, so his path is clearly going elsewhere. And if storming Elokhar can become a Radiant, or a cheerful, well-adjusted person like Lopen – who, according to a recent WoB doesn’t have any dark secrets or a tragic past, unlike the rest of the Bridge 4, it would seem very contrived to exclude Adolin on those grounds.

AlerieCorbray @372:

Sorry, I somehow got a mistaken impression that you were at lose ends fantasy reading-wise after plowing through the works of Jordan, Martin and Sanderson. I wouldn’t have been pushing one of my favorites on you otherwise ;).

To answer your question about Hobb’s story in “Legends 2” – it is a foundation story for the trading settlements that play central roles in the “Liveship Traders” trilogy. Like some of the short pieces in these anthologies that are aimed at fans of a particular series wanting more from their favorite world, it might be confusing for newcomers without context. Some of the weirdness has to do with woldbuilding – there was this fallen civilization that had produced wonderful treasures (as seen in the story), but delving in their ruins changes people mentally and physically for reasons.

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7 years ago


The question would be how Spren actually choose the people they try to form a bond with. Where do they start looking? Some say “brokenness” draws them, and that may be true. But it could also be, that the spren watch those who have allready formed a bond and therefore are close to the people who are close to existing Radiants. This would explain why Kaladins squires are so likely to form a bond for one they have the right mindset to attract honor spren AND they are close to hand. It would also set Navani up to bond some sort of engineering oriented spren (maybe even one that likes to operate cities).

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Whitespine
7 years ago

@270 Carl,

 Exactly. Well said.

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7 years ago

High level Hobbs

1 Farseer trilogy – tales of royal bastard and assassin Fitzchivalry Farseer as the kingdom struggles with enemies from without and within plus issues with several forms of magic, prophecy and DRAGONS.  Truly epic, one of my favorites. 

2. Liveship Traders – tales of the Vestrit family in an area far south of Farseer territory who are business oriented traders and make use of ships made with special wood found in the Rain Wild areas that lead to talking ships with independent personalities.  Also DRAGONS.  Well done series but I like Farseer better.  

3.  Tawny Man – new challenges to the next generation of Farseers, with help from a major character from the first series, including DRAGONS.   Touching, with several sharp spear points driven home.  

4.  More series after that which I won’t discuss in detail because of spoilers but involve various combinations of Farseers, Vestrits, inhabitants of the Rain Wilds, inhabitants of places south of Liveship lands and … maybe even more DRAGONS.  

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Cahoona
7 years ago

Ok, so there is a lot of talk about Adolin not being broken enough for a full radiant bond.  I don’t know why we should expect to already have all of that flushed out for us.  It seems clear to me that it just hasn’t happened yet.  If Adolin is going to get good and broken in coming books I think we already know enough to completely break him.  I don’t know if anyone has brought this up yet, but what does everyone think will happen when Adolin finds out that his Father murdered his Mother.  He’ll crack right open, and Mala could come in to form a bond. That is just one way, but it would totally work.  If Brandon wants to go that way then you will have a fully fleshed out arc to it.  

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7 years ago

#373. Isilel: As I stated, I am old and retired, so I do have a lot of time to read.  I started reading Martin in March 2010, with the Mystery Knight Hedge Knight Tale that was part of the Warriors anthology.  After reading the Hedge Knight Tales backwards and then forward, I progressed on to the main series.  Once I got into Martin’s world, I didn’t want to stop.  I did have questions and it took me until May 2011 before I found a comfortable home for discussions at The Tower of the Hand.  They have been very kind to me, even as I went through almost total blindness from cataracts.  Luckily that is fixable, so after five surgeries, I am near totally functional and seeking new territory.  I read the first four books of ASOIAF nine times and A Dance with Dragons three times.  I have read a lot that George has written including his retrospective and the three history novellas that he had published.  I am not interested in his Wild Card series, and while I own his World of Ice and Fire, I had only read those sections that I must, when I have been researching an essay/article.  I find the big book as dull and boring as reading a history textbook or reading those three novellas that are the only new material that he has published since dance.  If GRRM were publishing new ASOIAF, I would love to be reading it and talking about it, but …  he is not writing new I&F material, except as background for his potential new series after Game of Thrones ends. Not the same thing at all.

Sanderson, I have been reading since 2011, when an on line friend  told me about him.  With other friends I discovered Warbreaker, and one wonderful friend sent me a copy of the British Edition of The Way of Kings, just before The Words of Radiance was due out, in late 2013/14.  It was then I discovered how wonderful TOR was and I later tried to keep with with a reread a little later of WOR.  Sadly life and ill health got in the way.  I  have only been recently able to try and keep up with you all.  So to me, Sanderson is great fun to follow.  He is such a busy young man and so amazing with the complexity of Cosmere. 

Jordan’s Wheel of Time, I read a couple of years ago.  I read the series four times, it was such a great world to be visiting.  I realize the author wrote other series, but I was mainly interested in the one the Sanderson helped finish, and it was magnificent.

Back to Robin Hobbs, thanks for the series that will make sense out of the Legends story.  I will try and track it down to read.    Liveship Traders.  Thanks a bunch.

 

 

 

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7 years ago

#376. RobMRobM:. Thanks for the summary of those Robin Hobbs series.  That will make it less confusing.

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7 years ago

@377: The problem is some of us have spend a great deal lot of time thinking Adolin’s life would take a turn for the bad after he murdered Sadeas. It seemed like such a cliff-hanger, such a life changing event/mistake/action and the ploy turned out being disappointing. Hence, while it is true Adolin’s character could, theoretically, hit a hard spot upon learning the truth about his mother, I cannot bring myself to believe Brandon will write it. If WoR’s ending did not lead into a deeper more meaningful ending then I certainly do not think OB will lead to it. 

Oathbringer has cemented Adolin as a very side character who’s purpose is to fill in the blanks, to bring about a lighter viewpoints, to be funny when requires, to be reliable when the Radiants aren’t. His purpose is not to have a story arc, hence while I have no idea where Brandon is going with Maya, I can’t bring myself to believe he’ll write a coherent in depth Adolin centered story similar to the ones he has written for his other characters. This is not going to happen within SA.

Hence while yeah, Adolin could be broken by the narrative, we aren’t going to read it just as we never got to really know how someone like Lopen is broken. Adolin’s character is disappointingly unexplained. The latest discussions have him be a sociopath, him having “other motives” for his actions other than “being genuinely good”, stuff like “his reputation”. The latest discussions are still pinning him for Odium’s Champion and run on the fact Brandon never writes Adolin’s viewpoints and, as such, his motivations are left open.

I would have wish for Brandon to make his character more coherent with OB, not less.

@378: Wow. If only I could get my mother to read…. I am trying to bring her up to Ken Follet’s century trilogy which I think she would like.

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7 years ago

I wonder if there is something going on in the author’s head that we can’t see yet, because OB has so many “and then there’s no payoff” moments. Jasnah returns from the dead off-screen. Elhokar dies and nobody including his storming mother seems to care. Adolin murders a highprince and it has no consequences except that he’s replaced by a possibly-worse one.

It’s a pattern of some sort, but I can’t see why Sanderson would do it on purpose.

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7 years ago

@381: To be fair, Navani did care about Elhokar’s death. We had a scene where she cried in Adolin’s arms as he told her, where they both grieved for Elhokar. Hence I wouldn’t say his death wasn’t broached. It was. I don’t see what more Brandon could have done when it comes to Navani grieving Elhokar. There was a scene, it had emotions tied into it. Adolin grieved too, so I don’t know why it is said he didn’t. 

I however agree with you on Jasnah’s return and, of course, Adolin murdering Sadeas. For the former, nothing will fix the fact it wasn’t broached, Jasnah cannot come back twice. For the later, I have seen some readers express the thoughts Brandon will deal with it within the next book, saying this isn’t done yet and, as much as I want to, I cannot bring myself to believe this may be true. I really honestly think Brandon is done with this arc: he didn’t write more because he didn’t think it was required. 

So while Jasnah is a character whom will get a very strong focus, eventually, we know this won’t happen with Adolin. As such, what we have read is probably all we are ever going to get. This WoB on Lopen depressed me because it implies brokenness is not really require as long as someone is “open” to the Nahel Bond. I have thus convinced myself this is exactly what Brandon is planning for Adolin: he is “open” to Maya, naturally, hence he bonds here despite not being broken. Hence all my hopes his traumatic childhood may actually be used properly have vanished: this won’t happen.

The pattern is Brandon will not waste page time to write the small scale emotional development unless they benefit his main narrative. How Navani reacts to Jasnah’s return is not relevant to it, hence it was skipped. The greater majority of Adolin’s character is not relevant, hence his story arc is a broken collection of viewpoints having little cohesion in between them. Brandon is doing it on purpose because such is the story he wants to tell: he wants to focus on the big elements. He does not want to focus on character development which isn’t one of the top three because it is not important. 

I mean, even if someone were to brought it up to Brandon, I believe this is exactly what he would say: “I told the story as I thought was best. Readers always have the possibility to write the missing scenes, but these weren’t included because this is a big book and other events were more important.”. 

I would however really love to hear what he has to say about Adolin… about why he gave him such an under-whelming arc. I’d love that, but I am not sure the answer would be very telling.

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7 years ago

Gepeto@382: “I would however really love to hear what he has to say about Adolin… about why he gave him such an under-whelming arc. I’d love that, but I am not sure the answer would be very telling.”

Whatever you say about Sanderson, he will talk to his readers. Maybe you should participate in his next Reddit AMA or something?

(Note: I personally have few negative things to say about Sanderson.)

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7 years ago

Re: Navani’s wonderfulness. Navani is my least favorite character. She represents everything I hate about women. Was she trying to mess Dalinar up so much he’d kill his own brother?

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7 years ago

#380 Gepeto:. everybody is different.  I am the kind of reader, if nothing else is available, I will read labels and cereal boxes.  I love reading that much.  You didn’t say how old your mother is????  I was born in 1946, a first year baby boomer.  That makes me 71 years young.  It is easier to relax and read something, if you are no longer working full time.  Is  she done with having to attend classes or travel for work?  If your mom used to read and doesn’t want to now, she may be having trouble with her eyes. 

I live in a senior apartment building and I have found that most seniors develop severe eye problems in their sixties.  Some conditions like cataracts are fixable and some conditions are not.  Have her eyes checked.  I have an 84 year old neighbor, who apparently has never liked reading.  She would much rather be outside doing fun stuff.  If she is more physically limited these days, find her books about activities she used to enjoy or maybe about places she wanted to visit.  Or did visit years ago.  For that matter she may enjoy an audio book on tape.  Very nice, if the eyes aren’t working like they should.  

In my case, I kept in classes to improve my job skills until my late fifties, like taking trig and Calculus.  When I stopped working eventually, I had read very little for pleasure.  I tempted myself with reading Harry Potter and Narnia, tried to read all of the Cat who…. Mystery Books.    I also read a bunch of Science Magazines.  Then I got started on two prolific writers Kathy Reichs of the Bones series and Jim Butcher of Dresden Files.  Then my daughter suggested Diana Gabaldon, who writes the Outlander and Lord John series. In the last ten years, I have read Outlander over thirteen times, the last being when her book eight was published.  I was looking for a Lord John story, when I discovered the first story by George Martin, and so on. 

Anyway, there may be all kinds of reasons why your mother isn’t reading.  If she is still working, that can block her reading energies.  It can also fill up her nonworking hours.  She might have undiagnosed eye problems, especially if she is sixty or older.  Prehaps she misses an activity that she used to enjoy, you can help her with that.  And try books on tape, they can open all kinds of worlds to her.  That might open your favorite author to her or not.

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7 years ago

Wow, you guys comment a lot. It took me longer to get caught up on comments than to finish OB! And after wading though them all, I know that no one has mentioned my theory yet! Short and sweet: Jez is dead, Moash becomes someone new aka a “Herald” aka Odium’s champion with 9 other “Heralds” his shadows. And the other “Heralds” might be actual Heralds (Nale) or replacements for too insane/non-cooperative Heralds.

Also, another vote for Hobb here. I only read series 1, 3 and 4 from RobM’s post. Maritime stories didn’t interest me as much, but I might go back to read Liveship. It worked well enough to skip that one, but there were a few things I missed. But I couldn’t waste that much time away from Fitz!

I didn’t mind Shallan’s arc as much as Kal’s previous regressions. I thought Adolin’s arc made sense. I was so happy when ‘Bridge 4’ was listed as a POV at the start of part 2.

I was disappointed at not seeing the jaws drop on screen for Jasnah’s return. But that’s about it for my disappointment. I think the rest is likely just delayed gratification. Rlain? Renarin? Rock? Azure/Zahel? Szeth/Nightblood? Lift? More please

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7 years ago

The purpose of the heralds is to keep Odium imprisoned. It wouldn’t make sense to have a herald on his side.

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7 years ago

@383: Oh please it is not negative. I absolutely love and respect Brandon which is why, despite wanting, I am unlikely to bring it up with him. I also sincerely believe his answer would be very straight-forward, I sincerely believe he would say the murder of Sadeas was broached into the story and there weren’t more reactions because so is Adolin’s character. I do not believe the author would agree with me and since this is his story, his characters, then I am in the wrong. Brandon has always been a plot focused author and I have always been a character focused reader: I have loved what Brandon did with the first two books, but wanting him to play onto the inter-character emotional content was just me wanting a fish to breath out of the water. This isn’t his writing style: this isn’t something I can criticize. Brandon is super nice, I really do not want to bring my petty grievances to him.

@384: I do not understand your comment. Navani arguably isn’t my favorite character, but why are you saying she is messing out with Dalinar?

@385: My mother was born in 1949: I guessed by your comments you were of similar age. She has been retired for over a decade, but she seems busier now than before. I feel like she can never stay home and relax which is why I have been wanting her to pick up reading again (and I am also trying to get my father whom never read a book in his life to try reading because the idea of not working seems to create a lot of anxiety into him). She used to read a lot, but she says she lost interest into it. I mentioned the word fantasy, but this may be too much for her. Hence I am currently trying to convince her to try Ken Follet which I think she would like. The books she used to read often seem like historical fiction which is why I thought the Century Trilogy is something she would enjoy. She also took history classes so this is definitely one of her interests.

My father just got his first cataract and a friend of mine went through four of those as well, a result from a motorbike accident. He is not even 50 yet and has three young children. His eyes are fine now, but wow, he did a lot of eye surgery. My mother’s vision however is good, for a person her age, no problems other than the typical ones which come with age, so she has no restriction towards reading except an issue with sitting still. She does a lot of training and I worry she is over-doing it: she got hurt last year. Seems to me she does so much of it because she fears being at home doing nothing, hence my idea of getting her to read again.

I tried to get her to read Outlander a few years ago, but she didn’t really get into it. I can’t say why though, I was sure she’d love it. Maybe it had too much romance for her. My mother isn’t really the romantic type. 

My thoughts are she isn’t reading anymore out of a fear of being at home and not “doing something”. I think she just needs to find something to read to hook her up again. She always read a lot when younger.

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Dan Burke
7 years ago

I like Adolin even though I wanted to think of him as a privileged brat from the beginning. He’s genuine.  Kaladin even likes him, for much the same reasons I do.  I was most surprised and thrilled about Maya!  I think this is a great path, and I hope she fully revives.  But I think it’ll play out better if their bond is unique.  i.e. he never says the oaths, but their relationship continues to grow, and she stays and fights with him.  Of all of them, (from what we’ve seen) he’s not really broken like the rest, that kind of broken is a lifetime of inner pain.  But he’s honorable.

 

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7 years ago

@389: Some of us thinks Brandon under-played the drunken dismissive criticizing father barely hiding his hate towards Adolin story arc he had going on within the flashbacks. I have come to see Adolin’s childhood as almost equally traumatic as Shallan. He too lost a parent to brutality as an older boy. He too lived with an abusive going on a downward hill parent. The major differences I see is Adolin is not responsible for his mother’s death which caused additional trauma for Shallan and Lin wasn’t as abusive with Shallan directly (but was abusive with her brothers and his wife) as Dalinar was with Adolin. People will of course disagree with me, but apart from locking her up, Lin was not dismissive towards Shallan, he did not criticize her. So all in all I would say both fathers were abusive within their own ways, but to state Dalinar has not been abusive towards Adolin is plain wrong. He was. He was abusive towards Renarin too, but in a different manner. This however is reflected within the text wuth Renarin’s broken behavior being a product of his father’s treatment of him.

As thus, I definitely feel it was under-played. Adolin is written as if none of this ever happened, but it did. I do not believe into people growing up into such an environment, no matter how rich, without it hurting them in one way or another. This was totally skipped when it comes to Adolin and I have no answer why besides Brandon not wanting Adolin to be affected by all of it.

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Dan Burke
7 years ago

@390 : you make good points, but I can’t agree that his potential pain is under played.  I feel the way he is written he has found more peace with the problems of growing up.  Adolin was older when Evi died, and had more time having Evi build him up as a great man to be idolized.  Something to that effect was mentioned in passing at some point.  He also had more time with Dalinar in the flashbacks, and seemed more forgiving of Dalinar’s weakness after Evi’s death.  And there’s also the fact that trauma and bad upbringing affects everybody differently.  Some are broken, others are made better for it.  And Renarin already had problems before Evi’s death.  It almost seems “too much” to me that he was the one that wound up with a corrupted spren.  It’s starting to feel like piling on.  I’m not ready to accept that Adolin’s pain is under-played.  I am open to debate, but I won’t be swayed easily here.  And of course, time will tell.

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7 years ago

@391: Adolin was twelve when Evi died, so about a year, two at most, older than Shallan was when she killed her mother. I personally do not consider “he was older”, I consider he was young enough to have a reaction to it, especially since it had for effect of having his father become a drunk no longer content to spend time with him, instead preferring to criticize him, to diminish him while trying hard not to show how much he has come to hate him.

I personally do not believe it is possible for anyone to grow up “normal and well adapted” when having lived through such circumstances. I also do not believe a teenager has the emotional stability nor the life experience to reach “peace” on his own without counselling or outside help. 

Thus to me, the fact Brandon gave Adolin a traumatic childhood, which by all means is just as traumatic as other characters, but didn’t right plausible reactions nor anything hinting towards a hidden trauma is not very plausible. Adolin was 12, not 32. It is impossible seeing his father destroy himself into drunkenness while having him reject him, have few words but open unfair criticism to offer left NO scars. I cannot believe it.

As for Renarin, yeah, it is a bit much he got to be the one with the corrupted spren, but so has been the story. Brandon does his best to maximize the trauma into his Radiants, but I felt he ignored the one he wrote into Adolin by a need he had for him to remain “normal”.

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7 years ago

#388.  Gepeto: That is funny.  I was just about to mention Outlander.  When I was introduced to it in late 2007, I had gone from being very stable economy wise to living in a business attic over top of an assisted living facility, where my daughter worked for her mother in law.  All my retirement savings gone  to support me, when no one  wanted to hire a mature individual  with health problems.  The patients were male veterans, normally in their late fifties and sixties, with mental illness.  I had been forced to give up my vehicle in a community with almost no public transportation.  Outlander was wonderful, it took me mentally away from my troubles, which is likely why I read it so many times that I wore out my daughter’s beloved copies.  When my disability retirement finally came through, I was able to purchase her brand new copies.  That is a first for me.  I have never borrowed a book, and then destroyed it.  And I had destroyed five of hers.  

Does your mother like mysteries?  A lot of stories appear to be very light hearted.  I got a far amount of amusement out of the Cat Who … Books by Lilian Jackson  Braun.  She includes a fair amount of local history because the main character is a retired newspaper writer, who takes a position of writing a column for a local newspaper.  There are about thirty stories, which are full of all kinds of stuff about cats.  A good historical mystery writer, other than Diana’s Lord John,  was Ellis Peters’s  Brother Cadfael Mysteries set in the Middle ages in England, near Wales.  There are about twenty individual books.  All of these fifty tales are short compared to Gabaldon, Martin, or Sanderson.   I know that my local Librarian pointed me to mysteries from many different cultures, including Japanese, Chinese, Native American, French, English, and of course. American.  

Maybe she would enjoy an anthology with a bunch of different authors, from different genre.  George RR Martin with his partner in crime Gardner Dozois put together a great batch of them in recent years.  There was Rogues, Dangerous Women, and Warriors.  For that matter, she might find Arcanum Unbounded interesting, if she is curious what kind of stuff you are reading.  I believe that Sanderson tries hard to write his shorter works, so that you don’t have to be a fan to read them.  On straight history, I’ve enjoyed Darwin’s account of the Voyage of the Beagle.  It was written in 1835, mostly as the ship he was on was surveying the coast of South America.  If he wanted to get off for a while, he would go knock on someone’s door.  He saw a flight on passenger pigeons that blacked out the day sky, and now they are extinct, amazing.

Paige from New Mexico
7 years ago

I’ve been so busy that I haven’t had time to pop in here to read all of your comments and respond … but I just had to remark on this observation:

@60, Antonella: About that scene in Kholinar´s Palace and Kaladin blocking out: ALICE YOU ARE JUST MEAN. Give him a break! 

I love that you blamed Alice for the Kaladin diss. ;)

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ai83
7 years ago

 @367 – I’m a chick and like Adolin. And so does Shallan. He’s cute, cool, funny, and dependable. He’s very brave for how he handled Shadesmar while being the only non-Radiant. He talks to his dead spren and she answers him. He WILL be Radiant and the key to resurrecting the Dead Eyes. He was prepared to let her choose Kaladin if she wanted, which is very selfless. He knows Shallan and loves her for who she is. In fact at the end of the book I started being afraid that Shallan might choose Kaladin even though after the chasm sequence I was hoping for them to stay together. She made a good choice in the end. Even if he doesn’t become Radiant, Adolin is Shallan’s Steris. 

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7 years ago

@377 In the cosmere there are many symmetries, e.g. between animate and inanimate objects, between giving and receiving, between whole and shards. We see Odium’s spren becoming good and good spren becoming evil due to bonds. We see Venli’s spren eating up an Odium spren.

So Adolin doesn’t need to be broken. His spren is broken instead and her cracks will allow Adolin’s sanity and will to live to seep in. All other Radiants are broken and have sane spren. Perhaps Adolin’s solid mental balance is just what his insane spren needs to return. Finding out that Dalinar unwittingly had Evie killed will not break him. Evie is just a distant memory and he loves his father. Seeing how he was wiling to give up Shallan if she didn’t want him, we know he has every bit of mental fortitude to handle even bigger blows. Dalinar’s killing of his wife wouldn’t impress even Renarin. It’s his burden alone. In Sanderson books there are never 2 characters learning from the same mistake. 

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7 years ago

@397: If Brandon makes Adolin not care about finding out how his mother died and have him just surf over it, then I will scream to the injustice and likely disengage myself from this story. Nobody has infinite mental fortitude and Adolin has already filled out his stakes: if Brandon wants to add more, then he will stretch my suspense of disbelief. Already, he had Adolin a very normal and casual relationship with alcohol which is not typical of children having lived with an alcoholic parent. Those I have met, within real-life, all refused to drink and to indulge themselves.

Adolin’s lack of sequels for his childhood is not very plausible to me. I would hate for Brandon to decide only the mentally ill people are to struggle in life and everyone not mentally ill are just never affected by event on the virtue of not being mentally ill.

I also disagree Evi is just a distant memory. When Adolin speaks of his mother being assassinated, it is clear he still has vivid emotions tied to her death. I definitely do not think he doesn’t care about her and loves his father so much he would readily forgive him for having burned his mother alive. Nothing would grate me more than Adolin saying to Dalinar: “You did what you could, do not worry about it or way to go dad, you sure burned them.”.

My thoughts on the revival is wanting Adolin to fill in the cracks on Maya is more wishful thinking from the readers for not wanting Adolin to break down. Based on what we know of the magic, the Nahel Bond works only one way: the spren invest into the cracks in a human’s mental web in order to gain conscience of the physical word. Adolin, as a human, has no means to perform the same operation. This too would break my suspense of disbelief as I would feel Brandon is changing his own rules in order to avoid having to “break Adolin”.

As such, I consider Maya can go two way: status quo or slow going revival.

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7 years ago

@68 Gepeto

I am so incredibly behind on the comments, but I had a question about one of your statements. “Hey a lot of readers are not getting how Adolin can possibly be broken enough to form a Nahel Bond, not because he never had hardships, but because it doesn’t seem like they broke him. It would be nice if this was explored a bit more so we’d get a clearer idea, it would make the story arc more powerful.”

What about the Lopen? He’s a KR but nothing seems to have broken him.

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7 years ago

Brandon said that there are other ways besides being broken to become open to magic, but he didn’t explain what those are.

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7 years ago

I finished the book the first week of its release, but I’ve not had much time to participate in the discussions, though I’ve snuck in now and then to read the comments. It goes without saying that I enjoyed the book immensely. There is so much to digest that I’ll probably need to schedule some time to re-read the book in the very near future. I’ll make three observations now that don’t seem to have been picked up in the comments so far.

First, is it just me, and does nobody else see the “I am Unity” moment as a huge storming Deus Ex Machina? Let us recap: Kaladin, Adolin and Shallan are trapped in Shadesmar, battling the fused; Adolin has already taken a spear in the stomach, and the rest are about to be swamped; Lift and Szeth are on the ground, slowly being eaten alive by Nightblood; Dalinar himself is under extreme pressure, on the verge of being turned by Odium. Things are as black as they can become and the heroes are on the point of losing. Suddenly, Dalinar finds some strength to deny Odium, stands up to declare “I am Unity”, and then somehow blends together the physical, spiritual and cognitive realms, which solves all the protagonists’ immediate problems.

My immediate reaction at this stage was to jump from my seat and pump my fists, and then devour the rest of the book at breakneck speed. In my more sober moments afterwards, while going over the events of the book in my mind, I asked myself: of all the things he could have done, how did Dalinar know to form Honor’s perpendicularity at that point, which saved Kaladin and co? More important, have we ever seen in any of the books that Dalinar had thought about the properties of the three realms and why they need to be brought together at that point in the battle? Do we know if he is even aware of the three realms?

What it seems to me is that Sanderson employed a magical device whose existence could not reasonably be inferred from the previous information presented in the preceding books, to save the day for the heroes. Classic D.E.M. Erikson (Malazan Book of the Fallen) pulls stuff like that out of his ass on every other page, but I wasn’t expecting to see it in a Sanderson book.Of course, if someone here can point me to a reference in any of the books so far that shows that Dalinar is aware of the three realms and has had the vaguest thoughts about the desirability of uniting the three realms, I’ll concede that the crowning moment in the book is not a D.E.M.

Second, I got the impression that some essence of Cultivation is carried by Lift, perhaps more so than in any other person, and which may explain some of the things she does. I’m not sure if Lift herself is even aware of that taint essence, that she carries a noticeable whiff of Cultivation around. Why do I think so?

Recall that when Odium first appeared to Dalinar in the Recreance vision, he told Dalinar frankly that he is looking to kill Cultivation who has hidden herself somewhere. During the conversation (chapter 57),

Odium patted him on the shoulder. “Take a minute, Dalinar. I’ll leave you here. Relax. It—” He cut off, then frowned, spinning. He searched the rocks.
“What?” Dalinar asked.
“Nothing. Just an old man’s mind playing tricks on him.” He patted Dalinar on the arm. “We’ll speak again, I promise.”
He vanished in an eyeblink.
Dalinar collapsed backward, completely drained. Storms. Just …
Storms.
“That guy,” a girl’s voice said, “is creepy.”

I am convinced that the only thing that would cause that kind of reaction from Odium was that he thought felt Cultivation’s presence for a moment, and then decided that his mind was playing tricks on him when he didn’t feel her power. He left right away, anyway. And then we learn that the person whose presence Odium had felt was Lift. If Lift was any ordinary person, would Odium had reacted that way?

Third, Sanderson seems rather fond of arranged marriages between his major protagonists, doesn’t he? We’ve seen an arranged marriage in each of his major Cosmere series. Elantris had Raoden and Sarene, Warbreaker had Susebron and Siri, Mistborn has Wax and Steris, and now Adolin and Shallan in Stormlight. Is there a deeper significance here?

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7 years ago

@@@@@ Alison

I didn’t see the Unity moment as a Deus Ex Machina moment. The Words come upon every KR character we’ve seen out of seeming nowhere. We get hints as to their mindset, hints as to when they’re close to their level up, but the actual Words just get spoken into existence. Same thing with Dalinar. If his Unity moment was Deus Ex Machina then most everyone who says the Oaths has that same mechanism. High leverage situation? Check. Nearly all hope lost? Check. Opportunities to live out and embody the 1st Ideal? Check. And it makes sense that the leader of the KR has the biggest example of the Sanderson Oath Formula. Btw, I believe by reforging Honor’s Perpendiculary he was demonstrating Spiritual Adhesion, and there were hints in text that something like this was possible (although not expected by far). The Stormfather told Dalinar that he wouldn’t get much out of his Adhesion surge if he only applied it to war, then there was the scene where he literally put the Thylen temple back together. Those two scenes stuck in my mind as lead up to the Big Boss Battle and Dalinar’s role in it. Can’t remember exactly where in OB it is though.

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7 years ago

@401 Alisonwonderland
By that logic, basically everything is a “Deus Ex Machina”. Shallan Soulcasting for the first time? Deus Ex Machina. Kaladin making the arrows hit the bridge and not him and his men during the plateau runs? Deus Ex Machina. And so on… I personally find the need to have everything explained beforehand and in detail extremely tiring. Dalinar did not know how to do or even what exactly he did. He was pushed there by circumstances the same way the other Radiants were in their turn.

@398 Gepeto
Again: Humans, and therefore characters in books, are not little logic machines that all behave neatly in the same way as another in the same situation. That some people abstain drink because their parents were addicts is plausible, espeacially considering the view of western societies on drug abuse. But that you project this on Adolin and criticize the books for having Adolin behave according to the social norms of his society, no matter that his father had (and overcame) an alcohol addiction is simply nonsensical.

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7 years ago

@399: I still haven’t read the WoB, but apparently a spirit web can be opened through other means. I would however hate if Brandon were to use this ploy with Adolin’s character, I feel it would cheapen his arc. It works with Lopen because he is a relatively minor character meant for pure comical relief, but with Adolin? Already several readers expressed their reserve over him potentially becoming a Radiant, have him become a Radiant without being broken and it would feel like he is cheating. So, IMHO, a bad idea for the narrative.

@401: About Dalinar’s Unity Moment. I am ambivalent about it, so while I would refer to it as Deus Ex Machina, I can’t say I was thrilled when I read it. It didn’t work out as an OMG moment as well as other similar moments written within the previous books. For instance, when Kaladin decides to run to rescue Dalinar’s army instead of taking his men to safety, I jumped in satisfaction within my seat. Similarly, when Kaladin jumps into the arena, I was over-whelmed with such a strong feeling of satisfaction. On the reverse, Dalinar doing his “thing” didn’t trigger any emotions. I’ll admit I didn’t understand what he was doing and, yeah, it did seem convenient. In trying to analyse why my emotions didn’t ramp up in Oathbringer, I am thinking it may be because I felt Kaladin, within his scenes, was not only making an important decision, he was taking direct action, action he understood. Dalinar, it seemed, just clasped his hands together and boom, did magic. So while I guess there is a rational for it. I have to agree it was a tad too convenient it happened to save Kaladin, Shallan and Adolin from Shadesmar.

On the Arranged Marriages: It never bothered me. I felt each union Brandon presented within his books was unique.

Wax and Steris both agree to marry for logical and economical reasons, but as they spend time together, end up developing first a fondness, then love. 

Sarene and Raoden corresponded for months before agreeing to marry each other despite having never met. So while they never saw each other, they did know each other enough to feel their guessed was educated. Nobody forced them to marry nor to engage in correspondence.

Siri and Surebron were indeed forced to marry and indeed ended up liking each other after getting to know each other. They both thought the other was a “monster” prior to finally getting around to figure out each other.

Adolin and Shallan were put into a casual by relatives, but the rules were established from the start: neither are forced to marry each other. They can back down at any time of their choosing. I never read them as an “arrange marriage” as they both had full agency to what they wanted to do with their casual.

As such, I wasn’t bothered by it. I do not find it cliche within Sanderson’s books because I feel he did brought up a different angle to each of his romances.

@403: My impressions are Brandon means for Adolin to be nothing more than your average steady normal guy and he has been using his viewpoint in such manner within OB. My issues with it is he gave the character a backstory I do not classify as “normal”. So while it may be realistic for the child of an alcoholic to grow up having a normal and healthy relationship with alcohol (and where I live alcohol is not seen in such a negative light as within the US, it takes stronger incentive to develop a negative relationship with it), I personally feel once you add it to Dalinar’s more or less abusive behavior, to an assassinated mother, I feel you do not have the recipe to justify how your character is so perfectly well-adjusted.

It just holds my suspense of disbelief Adolin could be the perfectly normal and steady average guy I am perceiving Brandon wants to write while having so many traumatic elements within his own past.

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7 years ago

Susebron doesn’t think Siri is a monster. He just doesn’t know what he is supposed to do with a woman.

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7 years ago

@405: Arguably, he is afraid of her which is why I used the term “monster”. He didn’t know what to make of her nor what to do of her. To him, she was something very bizarre to be afraid of which I felt correspond to the definition of monster, but more monster “monster under the bed” then blood-thirsty monster. This is what I meant.

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Jeffry Wagner
7 years ago

I can’t remember, does this series actually say that Honor was splintered, or just that he died?  It seems like those are quite different things in the Cosmere.

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7 years ago

Jeffry Wagner@407: “I can’t remember, does this series actually say that Honor was splintered, or just that he died?  It seems like those are quite different things in the Cosmere.”

It is the same, but Honor is two different things.

Honor per se is a Shard of Adonalsium. It’s a basic component of the Cosmere (which translates to English as “little universe”). It can be fragmented but not actually destroyed. Like all Shards (which are Spiritual in nature), it has to be embodied. A “human” (actually an alien from another planet, but very humanlike) named Tanavast was carrying the Shard (the Cosmere term is “vessel”). When Odium/Rayse splintered Honor, it killed Tanavast.

So Honor, the principle or essence, is splintered. (This is why the Stormfather turned from a nearly-mindless spren of nature into a thinking being–he now embodies a splinter of Honor.) Tanavast, the former Vessel of Honor, is dead. The language can be confusing because Cosmere people sometimes refer to the Shard and Vessel as one entity–which for most purposes they are.

There’s a Word of Brandon somewhere that it’s possible but very difficult to reconnect splinters and rebuild a Shard. One could argue that this is what Sazed did, recombining Preservation and Ruin, two fragments of Adonalsium, into a greater whole.

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Hitesh
7 years ago

I think there is something going on with Kaladin related to windspren, like how they followed him, to even the honorspren surprise, in shademsar. I think it’s something different than they making a shardplate around Kaladin, as some other readers have guessed.

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Andrew
7 years ago

Did anyone realize that allomancy and feurchemy were introduced at the very very end? What did you think of that? Could it be that the world that the human’s came from was the world mistborn is set in?

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Whitepsine
7 years ago

Andrew,

No, I missed that. Where did you see it?

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7 years ago

This whole series has been much more Cosmere-crossover-intensive than I expected. The only thing I’m sure we won’t see is AonDor, which wouldn’t work on Roshar (because its power depends on closeness to Elantris).

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7 years ago

One of the letters in Part 2 (the quotes at the start of chapters) appears to be written by Sazed.  The author of the letter says “I would have thought, before attaining my current station, that a deity could not be surprised” (Chapter 54) and “I am finding that the powers I hold are in such conflict that the most simple of actions can be difficult.” (Chapter 55).  Anybody else notice this?

What is the ratio between time on Roshar than on Earth?  What I mean is how much shorter is a year on Roshar than a year on Earth?  During Jasnah’s “conversation” with Meridas Amaram in OB, she implies that a full term pregnancy on Roshar is 7 months.  (“Yes, from what I understand, she spent the seven months she was with child entertaining each and every military man she could find, in the hopes that something of them would stick to you.”, Page 526).  Am I reading Jasnah’s insult correctly?

Thanks for reading my musings.
AndrewHB
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7 years ago

It was pretty clearly Sazed, yes.

Just realized something. Remember the girl who climbed the Wall? Her hair turns white. People here related that to the Royal Locks from Warbreaker, and that’s probably relevant but … when the Shaod happens and someone turns into an Elantrian, their hair turns permanently white. And Hoid’s hair is permanently white. One suspects that there is something going on there.

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7 years ago

AndrewHB @413, Re: Jasnah’s quip, I was curious about this when I read it, too, and quickly realized that they got it right:

A Rosharan year is 1.1 cosmere (i.e., Earth) standard years, and a Rosharan year has 10 months of 50 days each.  So 1 Rosharan day = 1.1* 365.25 / 500 = 0.804 Earth days.  An earth pregnancy is 40 weeks = 280 days, so an equivalent Rosharan length of time is 280 / 0.804 = 348.45 Rosharan days = 6.97 Rosharan months, which matches very nicely with Jasnah’s statement.

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7 years ago

Moash – I think of him as morally lazy.  He blames Elokhar for his family’s tragedy because it’s easy.  He blames society for all of his problems because it’s more convenient than introspection.  He follows the Fused and ultimately Odium because it’s the path of least resistance.  (Mr. T has much the same motivation) I don’t see how somebody like that can be redeemed.  

I think the Fused set him up with the murder of Jezrien.  Any of them could have stabbed a drunk hobo, but they were actually afraid to. The fact that the other Heralds felt it (including Nale offstage) bodes very very badly for Moash.  He only gets a boss fight with Kaladin if the Heralds don’t find him first.  

I look forward to seeing what sane Heralds can do when reunited with their Honor blades. 

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7 years ago

Black_Dread@416: Nale is no threat to Moash. He has placed himself under Odium’s command.

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7 years ago

Alisonwonderland @401.  I do not think Dalinar’s Unity scene is Deus Ex Machina.  OB had indirect hints of Dalinar creating Honor’s Perpendicular in the novel.  In Chapter 64 (page 639), the Stormfather tells Dalinar that Dalinar’s power is the power of Connection of joining men and worlds and souls.  Later on that page, the Stormfather says Honor’s power pierces all 3 realms and brings them together momentarily in one.  While this later quote refers to Honor’s power during a storm, it is part of Honor’s power.  Dalinar’s power, which is the power that Ishar once held, is a representation of Honor’s power.

Thanks for reading my musings.
AndrewHB
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7 years ago

BTW, people have figured out what’s up with the Diagram, right? (Yeah, that’s mysterious.) Let me spoiler-protect it even though it’s only a guess. White-on-white text below, highlight to read, and I’ll add some space for those reading on other browsers who might want to look away.

 

 

Odium is changing it, just like Ruin used to do on Scadrial. That’s why there’s always something new there when Taravangian is about to give up his plotting–Odium adds it.

Like I said, just a guess but I think it’s a good one. Also remember Hoid’s comment about not trusting anyone who claims to predict the future–would have been nice if T. had heard that.

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7 years ago

#419 Carl: I have the worse trouble with TOR’s method of hiding spoilers.  It takes forever before I can make it work.  But I did, and that is an interesting comment.  To me, it makes perfect sense.  I agree that is highly likely to be true, except, didn’t Stormfather say something about Odium must be bound by the truth, by his oaths.  I suppose it isn’t against the rules for him to influence someone else  to do the deed for him.  As long as another hand does the  writing it fits within the parameters of what restricts Odium.

Of course, Mr. T is not likely to have that conversation with Wit because they are hundreds if not thousands of  miles apart.  Hoid is in the former capital of Alethkar and Mr. T is either in Urithiru or he has returned to his holdings.  

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7 years ago

Even with reading the comments, I’m still really unclear on the connection/distinctions between voidbringers, Odium, spren, singers, listeners, parshmen, Parshendi, Fused, stormforms and voidspren. I always also figured humans were native to Roshar and the parshendi were not, so that wasn’t a big revelation, but I’ll have to look up some more about which Shards were initially on Roshar – it sounds like the humans perhaps brought Odium with them. But then the Parshendi talk about abandoning THEIR gods (which seem to be implied to be Odium/voidspren) so…the metaphysics of it I still don’t have hashed out. I’m probably going to let it sit for awhile and check out the coppermind wiki once people have time to get it updated.

Plus, who were the Heralds? Are they part of the original people to come to Roshar, or did they arise later? Were the spren and Parshendi there even before Honor and Cultivation? What is the Sibling? I’m still a little unclear on the exact nature of the Recreance and why – it was interesting to see how everybody reacted to learning they were the ones who invaded Roshar and took it from the Parshmen…nobody here in America seems to really lose sleep over the fact that we invaded an occupied land, and I have friends in Australia and New Zealand and they have similar baggage there as well. And at what point did the Parshendi get their minds wiped? Before or after the Recreance? What was going on with Honor and him going crazy, was that just Odium attacking him? Before the Recreance, when the Heralds were in Damnation, stopping a Desolation – what was the state of the Parshendi? Were they ‘possessed’ by Odium during that time, or peaceful? Obviously there’s a lot going on here! [Nobody has to answer these, eventually I’ll get it sorted it out]

That said I loved the book – Way of Kings and Words of Radiance were pretty good. I appreciated the worldbuilding and characters. But I still couldn’t say I was drawn to it particularly more than other books – but this is where I found myself really getting much more invested and eager to know what happens, in part because of how much time we’re able to spend with the characters. The things I find myself most excited about are not so much revelations about Roshar history or realmatic theory (even though I’m really intersted in learning more and more and how it relates to the rest of the Cosmere), but the intrapersonal development.

As for stuff I liked – first of all JASNAH YAAAASSSS! She’s been my favorite character since the beginning, so I may have whooped when she became queen. I also love that her ketek for Shallan/Adolin is what makes up the book titles. I got a huge kick out of how excited the Azir were to get her writings.

Is there a possiblity that the Dawnchant translation was corrupted somehow? T is the one who mentions leaking it at an inopportune time. Is it possible they altered it a little?

(Speaking of T – while part of me feels kind of sorry for him because he seems to have at some point been trying to do the right thing…yeah, screw him. Although at this point I’ve lost sight of what the Diagram’s original goals even were or how they thought they were helping. But at this point it seems like he’s gone the Sauruman route, which is to figure he can’t beat em, so he may as well join em.)

The only part of the book that really dragged for me was Shadesmar – it was really interesting seeing the different types of spren and spren society, but I would groan internally whenever we got to one of those chapters…I think it could have been condensed just a little bit.

Regarding all the different epigraphs – I think it’s really cool that Cephandrius/Hoid/Wit may be coresponding with Harmony. I actually squeed quite a bit when I got to the chapter heading that seemed to indicate that.

I’m not as enamoured of Szeth as some people, but does anybody else find it somewhat problematic that Szeth is basically still swearing himself to another man? While I agree that to an extent it’s all – including human law – somewhat fallible and so the point of having a code to follow is so that you can avoid your own flaws causing issues, it seems that by just picking another person to follow Szeth is still not really doing the work of figuring stuff out for himself. Not sure if that’s making sense.

Amaram – I still don’t really know what his motivations were either. Maybe I just have a hard time understanding the villains. But similar with the Ghostbloods and the Diagram – there are all these sooper sekrit societies and I’m not totally sure what their aims are. (Moash, on the other hand, really worked for me as a villain.)

Other Cosmere crossover moments – when Kaladin saw that oil painting of the Nine Champions, for some reason my first thought at the description was that it reminded me of the paintings for the Returned in Warbreaker. And then when the seller said it was a painting for a divinity that had been rescued from burning – is that a possiblity?

I was also intrigued by the special metal (aluminum?) that could ward off the Fused.

As for somewhat deeper thoughts: this book gutted me, in part because of the timing. I started reading it right around the end of November. I was able to get about 800 pages through until I had to spend a few days focusing on a final exam for a class I was taking which my grade seriously depended on! But within that time I did get through the VERY cruel ending of Book 3 – I basically felt just like Kaladin, watching all of these characters that we had been introduced to and become invested in – suddenly all kill each other. It seemed so meaningless (as it was supposed to). AND THEN ELKOHAR ARRGH! I always enjoy redemption/self actualization arcs, and that was just PAINFUL (especially with his little boy in his arms!). Still, I couldn’t help but think ‘Bravo, Brandon’ for that.

As I said, I had to take a bit of a break for my final exam, and then the next Star Wars movie came out and that…kind of wrecked me a bit. But it was really kind of weird – because it wasn’t really that long ago that I was reading Wit and Shallan having their talk (which I loved) where Wit tried to help her understand that our failures/brokenness are a part of us and how we learn and then in the movie [spoiler for TLJ] you see Yoda appear Luke to give that very lesson. Wait! Is Yoda just another one of Hoid’s alter egos??

I spent a few days after the movie processing THAT, and then pushed through the 400 or so pages I had left in about two days so I could return it from the person I borrowed it from before my vacation. And after I finished I just felt…depleted and empty. NOT becuase I was disappointed with the book, but because both the book and The Last Jedi were pretty emotional experiences for me and now they’re both over. Realizing when I came home that I know longer had this world to sink into…arrrrgh! (I also cried at the end of the first Misborn trilogy because I was so upset I had nothing left to read, lol, and was going to miss the characters.)

BUT, having seen them in so close together means I’m drawing some interesting, if not unfounded, parallels.

First – I’m not particularly attached to Adolin. Actually, I find myself MUCH more fond of him in this book than I ever was in the previous books. He’s sweet, earnest and just doing his best while extraordinary things are happening. I am SO GLAD they did not go the Shallan + Kaladin intense brooding romance angle. The part where Shallan recognizes that Adolin knows her literally made my heart leap in my chest. I do have a big soft spot for romance (I don’t read romance novels, but Ellista’s interlude was SO funny and I loved that she was otherwise a smart, logical person who just liked to indulge in some high drama at times) and I just felt like it was really sweet and satisfying. And while I rolled my eyes a bit at the ‘let him have you’ verbiage, it did remind me a little bit of one of my other favorite couples, Han and Leia.

Anyway, my point was that while I’m not attached to him, I can definitely relate to having to temper specific expectations and especially attachments to characters in fiction you are passionate about – the new Star Wars trilogy has been a huge exercise in that for me, and while I’m not really thrilled with the narrative and characterization choices they’ve made…I’ve more or less made my peace with it. Kind of. ;)

But to continue to Star Wars parallels, without saying too much, Dalinar’s whole journey of dealing with his own horrible past, accepting his pain, his guilt, the importance of taking ‘the next step’, of accepting how all the parts of his past are part of him and part of what started that journey, taking responsibility for what he has done and vowing that if he must fall, he’ll keep rising a better man – it was all really moving to me. Along with that the part where Teft’s variant of the oath ‘to protect even those that he hates’ that finishes with ‘even if the one I hate the most is myself’ and it was just…a really powerful moment for me. The cracks where we are broken are where we fill it with something stronger.

In some ways all of this was what I WANTED to see for  Kylo Ren’s arc, since there’s been a lot of talk on if there could be a redemption arc for him, and what that could look like. But that does not seem where the movie is going. I kind of wish they could just get Brandon Sanderson to do the next Star Wars movie ;)

Also really enjoyed Shallan starting to come to grips with her multiple senses of self, accepting that she is allowed to be happy, that her true ‘flawed’ self is worth protecting, facing/accepting the pain in HER life but not that she deserves it, and Kaladin still struggling with his own depression (I really like that Sanderson does not tie up the ‘brokenness’ of the characters in an easy bow) and for once allowing himself to be saved…just a really great entry over all, and that’s not even going into the actual worldbuilding and plot advancement of the bazillion things going on in this book.

I was on the edge of my seat for (another thing that almost has a parallel in TLJ come to think of it) the part where Jasnah has drawn her weapon and is about to kill Renarin (who is one of my FAVORITE characters so I was completely freaking out while all this was going down) because it seems like he’s gone evil – but then her love wins out and he realizes that his visions aren’t all true. But now that I think about it, it’s an interesting contrast to the scene in TLJ where for whatever reason/vision, Luke thinks for a split second that he needs to kill Ben and even draws his weapon. Ben…does not take it as well as Renarin does.

I am definitely ready for the re-read as I know there is so much I missed. Will the re-read cover the preview chapters? I really missed not having somebody to talk to after each chapter! But I think it could be useful to go over those chapters (even if maybe a briefer overview) again – especially for those who didn’t participate!

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7 years ago

The Parshendi gods are probably the Fused, but perhaps being bonded to Odium spren makes you more open to being possessed by them.

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7 years ago

Lisamarie@421:

Let me start by saying, a lot of your questions simply haven’t been answered in the text yet, especially, “… the connection/distinctions between voidbringers, Odium, spren, singers, listeners, parshmen, Parshendi, Fused, stormforms and voidspren.”

We know the ancestors are the gods the Parshendi/Listeners were hiding from. Those ancestral spirits possess the bodies of living Singers to become the Fused. That’s stated. In general in the Cosmere, Cognitive Realm creatures tend to Connect with Physical Realm creatures for any kind of magic system (Shards and their Vessels, Aons and Skaze on Sel, Allomancers and Feruchemists Connecting with Shards via their metals on Scadrial, etc.). Bloodsealing and Forging are apparent exceptions, but one wonders about how both depend on written symbols. Aons? Skaze?

“I always also figured humans were native to Roshar and the parshendi were not, so that wasn’t a big revelation …” Other way. But yes, that wasn’t concealed to an Earth-native reader.

“As for stuff I liked – first of all JASNAH YAAAASSSS! She’s been my favorite character since the beginning, so I may have whooped when she became queen. I also love that her ketek for Shallan/Adolin is what makes up the book titles. I got a huge kick out of how excited the Azir were to get her writings.” Maybe I’m older than you, but I really liked that it was Navani’s writing that was actually persuasive. I’m coming to appreciate her more and more. She represents an entire magic system (artifabrians) that is sort of being ignored a lot in-story, but I’m sure BWS has plans for it.

“Is there a possiblity that the Dawnchant translation was corrupted somehow? T is the one who mentions leaking it at an inopportune time. Is it possible they altered it a little?” See below, but remember that the Stormfather confirms at least the broad outlines and other dawn-age spren also don’t argue.

“The only part of the book that really dragged for me was Shadesmar – it was really interesting seeing the different types of spren and spren society, but I would groan internally whenever we got to one of those chapters…I think it could have been condensed just a little bit.” I wrote up above that it could have been halved and the story would have benefited.

“Amaram – I still don’t really know what his motivations were either. Maybe I just have a hard time understanding the villains. But similar with the Ghostbloods and the Diagram – there are all these sooper sekrit societies and I’m not totally sure what their aims are.” That’s on purpose and we might have to wait 7 more books for complete answers. By which time I’m likely to be dead, because I’m older than you (or BWS). Thanks, Brandon.

As for Amaram, remember that he’s being corrupted/half-controlled by Odium and the Thrill at the end of this book. Also he probably doesn’t fully understand his own motivations.

“I was also intrigued by the special metal (aluminum?) that could ward off the Fused.” Has to be aluminum. And since in nature metallic aluminum does not fall from space, why would Hoid’s trove have done so?

Because you build spacecraft out of aluminum, of course. That’s also why it was in the form of panels, presumably. We probably won’t see any space travelers per se in at least the first pentology and maybe in the Stormlight Archive, but we know that Mistborn Era 4 will include some.

By the way, modifying what I wrote in 419: that isn’t Odium. It’s Cultivation. She’s the one who can see the future best (on Roshar) and she plays the long game. And Hoid just reminded us not to trust her in this very book, subtly (as is his way). That makes Odium’s surprise at the Diagram totally sincere, and he’s apparently completely fooled. She’s good.

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7 years ago

I just finished the book, prolonging it as much as I could bear, and am sad only that it’s o ver because I enjoyed it soooooo much.

 
The only parts I didn’t enjoy were Dalinar’s flashbacks — I hated nearly every revolting bit of those except the hilarious Knife Incident. I never liked him very much, and I knew he was a brute on the battlefield, but the depths of his awfulness are horrible.
 
I didn’t share your expectations.  I would have liked more Lift (though I didn’t need her fixation on Dalinar’s butt), more Bridge Four antics, more snark-offs, and much more Rosharan ecology and wildlife. I was surprised to witness so little reaction to Jasnah’s return, but the indestructibility of Radiants was more widely know than I’d thought.  Eshonai’s confirmed death saddened me, but we’ll eventually get her flashbacks, and Venli was a pleasant surprise. 
 
I was also pleasantly surprised by the voyage though Shadesmar, and by Szeth becoming an enjoyable character who only goes on *one* killing-rampage. And I loved the early developments with the Parshmen. 
 
I categorically dislike most romances because I’m a Romance Grinch. And I feel bad for Kaladin, once more ‘losing his chance’ for love. But Shallan’s response to Adolin “letting Kaladin have” her was exactly what it deserved. Reminiscent of Kaladin intending to “save” Laral, and her response. Kaladin may have a “saving-people thing,” as they say in Harry Potter, but he needs to learn when it’s not needed.
 
I have depression, and strongly related to Kaladin’s experience of it, including the way he self-shames himself for everything, including his own self-shaming. I don’t have Shallan’s PTSD, but I related somewhat to her struggle of understanding who she is and the conflicts between the different aspects of her identity, though I can’t develop personas to the same degree.
 
So eager for more discussion here, and glad I’ll be able to join in this time.
 
: “Homecoming” was the first Robin Hobb story I read, too. :-D I followed it with a combined reading of Assassin’s Apprentice and Ship of Magic, and have now read the full series complex.

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7 years ago

@423 – Navani is definitely one of my favorite characters and one perhaps that doesn’t get enough credit (or even give herself enough credit) both in and out of universe.

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7 years ago

#424 AeronaGreenjoy.  I have been reading almost all fantasy for about ten years.  I had almost no previous background in the subject, although I had read science fiction since the mid-1950’s. I am seventy-one and have been reading a very long time.    I have read a lot of anthologies, as in if an author that I follow had written a.novella, I often try to find a copy to read.  Then, I will read every story in the volume.  That was the case for The Book of Swords, which has a recent Robin Hobb’s called Her Father’s Sword.  I found the story very dark, more like a horror tale, less like a fantasy.  I do not read or watch Horror.  When I read Homecoming in Legends II, I was not that impressed with Ms Hobb.  In my humble opinion, it didn’t grab you like most of the other represented authors. Their stories were new experiences that were just over a hill and I couldn’t wait to catch up with them.  For me, Homecoming felt like a burden to be bore, until it was read and finally finished.  To a certain extent, I have been using the Legends series as a guide book to fantasy.  In using it so, I have read about half the series published in Silverberg’s wonderful double anthology.

On to a more interesting subject. Did you know that Sanderson published a bunch of the flashbacks in a novella called The Thrill.  It was in Unfettered II.    I suspect in his case, Dallinar would have you know that the red thrill that comes over a fighting man is in reality a force like a spren.  I believe that is what Dalinar  captured in the giant red gem.  It will no longer be available to contort what a soldier is thinking during battle.  By discussing the state of Dalinar’s butt, Lift is letting him know that he is far too muscular and healthy looking for an older man.  It is less her having the hots for him and more her telling him that she is watching him.

This series is not being written as a comedy, it is more a slice of life.  A little comedy and then some sad drama, just like real life.  I am in the middle of rereading the entire series starting with the Way of Kings.  I stand amazed at the world that he has created.  Prehaps a reread wll show you how much he has shown us.  Note: I had originally read the series about four times for the two books.  I then read it twice in prep for Oathbringer, which I have read twice, not counting what I read of the early release chapters.  I am retired and can spend long hours reading.   I will keep trying to read Robin Hobb, even though my expectations are low.  Thanks for your advice.

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7 years ago

I wanted to say – AlerieCorbray, I love reading all your comments and hearing about how you got sucked into the world of genre fiction :D

I did have other thoughts but I guess I’ll follow Alice’s lead and post on the other thread :D

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7 years ago

@426: I don’t know if you would like Robin Hobb’s work. It tends to be sloooow paced, especially in the first book or two of a series, and has other Issues. But it’s fun to see that someone else started them in the same unusual place that I did, with “Homecoming.” I didn’t much like the characters in “Homecoming,” but I love hostile fantasy landscapes and the deadly, mysterious, magical rainforest setting hooked me. Unfortunately, most of the stories are set elsewhere (except the Rain Wild Chronicles, which are consequently my favorite though I’m in the minority there), but I enjoyed some of the other settings too. I have not yet read “Her Father’s Sword,” and probably won’t like it much when I do; I’m not into horror. 

I haven’t read or heard about “The Thrill” as a novella, and don’t plan to seek it out, given my revulsion at the flashbacks in OB. Lift commenting on Dalinar’s butt was funny the first time, and fit her tendency to snark at everyone — and I think Dalinar needed a good snarking — but for some reason, I didn’t like it as her continued nickname for him.

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7 years ago

#  429.  AeronaGreenjoy: I had found the Trill in those days before Oathbringer was published.  There were also other stories in the collection by authors I follow.  I was able to purchase it as an ebook for a good price.  As far as Lift calling Dalinar by an inappropriate Nickname, that is very her as Edgedancer showed us.  I guess this is how Brandon thinks that preteen or early teens behave.   My only child is almost forty, so it has been too long to remember.   I suspect that I am many months or years away from trying Robin Hobb again.  All this discussion, plus remembering what I read, has made seeking her out, less desirable.

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7 years ago

The Thrill is caused by an Unmade that Dalinar captured.

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7 years ago

#432 Wetlandernw: Finally an Alice response and it’s  a memory  challenge.  First let me say, I enjoy your pieces a ton.  They are really adding to my understanding and knowledge of Cosmere.  I am reading the series again and have just finished The Way of Kings for the umpteen time.  Eagerly awaiting the reread.

My daughter was thirteen in1991, while I was thirteen in 1959.  We are talking caveman days. Personally, I wouldn’t have called an adult by a silly name like pancake face or tight butt.  We called our choral teacher Mama H______ behind her back, because she was very bossy.  That was much the same way, myself and others called a recent boss, general Larry behind his back.  But he was a retired two star.  And I am not the sort of person, who called as an adult any silly names to their face.  Now, I have heard others say that kind of thing.  Note:. as a child, sometimes I call my brother names.  We would fight, I would win, until he cried for mom.  I would be punished for being a bad older sister.  I learned not to call him names.  It is possible, my daughter learned by my example not to behave like that.  

I’m not really straying.  I have heard preteens calling folks silly names, so Lift’s behavior appears typical of that age between ten and fourteen, before most young people begin to  model more actions on adults.  If a sixteen years old called someone pancake face, her peers might give her a very rough time.  Good luck in raising your fourteen years old.  Fifteen is a bear.  So, I am in the camp that believes that Lift is likely thirteen.  I am sorry for speaking in generalities and will try to be clearer in the future.

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7 years ago

# 434 Wetlandernw: Sadly I was often the victim of teasing, but we grow beyond those times and find our own place in life.  Lift is kind of an equal opportunity name caller.  Part of it is a cover for what she really was blessed with prior to becoming an Edgedancer.  She has made her home in Azir, where jobs are based on how well you did in an exam.  Yet, she can not read or write.  She is an orphan from Reshi, where everyone is very fair, living in a region where the average person is very dark.  She loves hiding behind a child’s face and she hopes body, and yet she faced one of the scariest beings alive, Nale the Skybreaker.  She not only faced him in the first Everstorm, but actually fought against him in defense of the Stump.   No wonder she and Szeth are so nicely partnered together.  By the way, I agree with those that think Cultivation, not the Night watcher granted her boon. Otherwise, why would Odium think that Cultivation was present, when it was just little old Lift.

Any who thanks for getting back.  Fourteen in a girl wasn’t too bad, although many faced with first year in high school, seem to be attempting to starve themselves.  Like eating one lettuce leaf for lunch.  It is fifteen you need to protect against.  Mine ran away for a long and painful weekend, while her boyfriend tried to convince her to run way with him to New Orleans.

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7 years ago

By the way, I agree with those that think Cultivation, not the Night watcher granted her boon. Otherwise, why would Odium think that Cultivation was present, when it was just little old Lift.

Because Nightwatcher is a Sliver of Cultivation? Note that Cultivation calls her “daughter”.

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7 years ago

# 436 Carl: Excellent point.   Sooo the smell difference between mother Cultivation versa  daughter Nightwatcher may not be a significant lead  in the evidence.  We can only be fairly certain about Dalinar because of his returning memories and his discussion with Odium.  It was definitely Cultivation.  Lift and King T’s Old Magic provider could be Cultivation, the Nightwatcher, or spren unknown.  It impressed me that this variety of Old Magic is very powerful.  Perhaps that is because of the shard’s close contact with the pilgrims.

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7 years ago

Remember, Taravangian and Lift don’t have amnesia. If they had spoken to Cultivation one would expect them to know it, but their internal monologues don’t seem to.

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7 years ago

#438 Carl:. I believe that of King T, but not so much of lift.  

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zmef
7 years ago

Hey!

As far as i remember the book, the Stormfather confirmed that the Nightwatcher is one of the ‘Siblings’.

That would make one Bondsmith for Honor/Stormfather, one for Cultivation/Nightwatcher . Which for me would indicate that the third and unknown sibling should be related to Odium?

However, I feel like I am missing something very obvious here?

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Ritesh
7 years ago

Dalinar is becoming Honor? is it why odium says “we killed you”?

Does Szeth know something we don’t? is it why he speaks his ideals to Dalinar?

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Tyler Smith
7 years ago

Can I just say that I’m pretty sure that the spren that Wit bonded was Sja-anat? She is the mother of Pattern, so she is a cryptic, she is considering defecting, and what other spren would be of such importance that the void bringers would bother mining the castle walls, and Wit would bother hanging around to bond to it when he obviously has some control over light weaving already?

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7 years ago

If Hoid bonded Sja-anat I’ll be astonished. And she is not the mother of Pattern, that’s Cultivation. She’s the mother of Renarin’s corrupted spren. She also isn’t tiny, or a pattern–Shallan sees her.

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Tyler Smith
7 years ago

Where did it say cultivation was the mother of pattern or that Sja-anat considers the corrupted spren her children? Its a big book series already so i could have missed it, and I had to listen to it on audio. And as far as the “ask my child” or what ever she says in the book, making that a reference to Renarins spren doesn’t make sense.  Shallan’s groups was going to use the gateway right then, Renarin was far away but pattern was right there and she is called the Mother of Secrets, Cryptics and secrets kind of go together. Shallan sees her in the mirror when she is full sized, but as we can see from someone like Ivory and sly, spren can change their size in the real world.  The storm father is Sly’s father but we have nothing to confirm he looks like a wind spren like sly does so no guarantee that a higher spren couldn’t take on multiple appearances. 

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7 years ago

@@@@@ 444 Tyler Smith
If you’re listening to the audio, have you looked at the illustrations that are originally part of the book? Brandon Sanderson has them on his website and they truly add something extra to the story. One of them, specifically, is about the Taker of Secrets (Sja-anat). This image gives us some important information:

Creator: Her twisted creations are her beloved children. Her admiration of the spren of our world inspires her. Corruptor: She seeks the Children of Honor and the Children of Cultivation. With one touch she corrupts.

So the sapient spren seem to be called the children of Honor/Cultivation. The Lightweavers seem more closely connected to Cultivation, which is probably why people say she’s Pattern’s ‘mother’. The other thing this image shows is that Sja-anat considers the spren she’s corrupted to be her children. Glys is corrupted (by Sja-anat, as she’s the only one who could have done it), and Pattern is not, which is why the general conclusion is that Sja-anat was talking about Glys when she told Shallan ‘ask my son’.

As for your last comment, I think it really depends on the type of spren. Syl can change both shape and size, Ivory just his size. Pattern seems limited to different variations of either a flat or threedimensional fractal. 

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7 years ago

My thoughts on Kaladin’s Fourth Ideal

I will sacrifice the one, so that I can save the many

Deals well with his sense of morality (that he doesn’t feel comfortable sacrificing anyone, regardless of circumstances).

It also ties in with the gem-box, not wanting to “not save” someone.

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Matthew
7 years ago

Why is no one talking about the fact that Pattern is not with Shallan? He is at the Palace in Kholinar with Wit now. We know during the book that humans can bond with unmade/voidspren. Is it possible that she accidentally bonded with the unmade that wanted to defect? That helped her escape to Shadesmar.

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John
6 years ago

Just finished reading Oathbringer, thoroughly enjoyed it. I guess it’s a bit late to be posting anything, but – a few (admittedly minor) thoughts/theories:

1) I think it’s an important distinction to make that the Recreance wasn’t just caused by the Knights’ revelation that the world belonged to the singers. There’s a part of the Eila Stele that mentions how they used Surgebinding to destroy their original planet. So I think the Radiants’ logic, leading up to the Recreance, might have gone like this:

-Surgebinding is a very dangerous art

-Defending human presence on Roshar might no longer be a morally sound mission

-Giving up Surgebinding is probably the best thing to do to avoid a repeat of what happened on our old world

Not defending their choice to kill all those spren, but I can kind of see how they might have seen this as part of their mission to protect Roshar. Plus I think they were getting a little corrupt near the end.

2) What Renarin sees cannot actually be wrong, at least not on its own. Rereading the scene where he was supposed to die, the only thing that stopped Jasnah from killing him was her seeing Renarin nod in acceptance. So my theory is that Renarin’s visions can be wrong, but only if Renarin himself does something to prevent them from occurring. He knows the future, so he can change it. As for Dalinar becoming Odium’s champion (which Renarin’s visions are also wrong about), Dalinar was strengthened by Cultivation for that conflict; she can also see, and thus change, the future. So while his visions clearly aren’t inevitable, I do think they would occur without direct intervention.

As a side note, this may be why Renarin forms a blind spot in Odium’s visions of the future. It’s like two people burning atium: they cancel each other out.

3) I don’t understand Nale’s decision to side with the singers. I would be fine with it if the conflict were clearly human vs. singer, since the singers have the prior claim to the land. But it isn’t; it’s Honor vs. Odium, and in terms of Shards, Odium is clearly the invader. Nale justifies this by saying Odium won the land by “right of conquest.” Right of conquest?! Wasn’t he just talking about how the land rightfully belonged to the singers despite the fact that humans conquered it? Actually, isn’t the whole point of justice to prevent people from taking things that don’t belong to them, i.e. conquering? How can you be a Skybreaker of the Fifth Ideal, the very embodiment of the law, if you believe in something like the right of conquest?!

Also, who is more likely to form a society based on justice – the followers and remnants of Honor, or a god who is the literal embodiment of passion and hate?

I disagree with Nale thoroughly on this…

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6 years ago

, good comparison with atium. Never thought of that and it makes lots of sense.

As for Nale, keep in mind that he’s insane. He’s the Herald of justice, and he has spent the last several centuries murdering innocent people (within the letter of the law) because he thinks they’re dangerous.

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KaladinFan1
6 years ago

Hey, I’m really confused by the whole Renarin thing. Could someone help me? Truthwatchers are mentioned in Words of Radiance as one of the ten orders of Knights Radiant. So how can it be a variety of Voidspre

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6 years ago

@@@@@ KaladinFan1, the short answer is that we don’t know what’s up with Glys because the text has not fully explained it yet. It’s supposed to be surprising and confusing now.

The longer answer is, fans have guesses. Sja-Anat, one of the Unmade, is (at least so she says) trying to change sides, to abandon Odium. We know that her “job” for Odium is to corrupt spren, and she refers to Glys as her son at one point. Many fans, including me, think she corrupted Glys, a Truthwatcher spren. That’s why Renarin can apparently use only one of the two Surges a normal Truthwatcher would have, but has future-seeing powers seemingly greater than normal Truthwatchers.

Remember, all of that is guessing based on very little actual information. We will know more once a non-corrupted Truthwatcher appears in the story for comparison.

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Moash
5 years ago

Could someone bond an honorspren and be a bad guy? Yes. #Moash.

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5 years ago

: your fictional namesake has not bonded any spren.

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4 years ago

New to Stormlight, just finished Oathbringer, struggled with TWOK for months and for the first time ever i truly know the moment when i fell in love with SA The moment when Kal decided to go back and save the Kholin Army at the Tower, from that moment i have been hooked. Erithuru is perhaps my all time favourite concept for a City/Citade

Have read the first few chapters on ROW on here, loving it so far. What an awesome concept(those that are caught up will know what I’m talking about) that has been introduced. 

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