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Are We the Baddies? Magic and Normativity in The Locked Tomb Series

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Published on August 9, 2023

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Recently I was skimming through Tumblr—ever an excellent way of wasting time—when I scrolled to a post reacting to the book Nona the Ninth, the latest entry in Tamsyn Muir’s The Locked Tomb series, published last September. One particular part of this poster’s reaction stood out to me, a reaction that I will roughly paraphrase to, “Wait, are the necromancers in the series…actually the bad guys?”

For the uninitiated, there are many, many necromancers in The Locked Tomb series (and as Charles Stross’ cover blurb for the original entry also assures us, they are mostly lesbians and in space!). To those unfamiliar with the books, the answer to this question might feel obvious: Yes, the necromancers are probably the bad guys, right? That does tend to be the usual depiction when it comes to people who mess with the dead, or even just folks who wear a lot of skull paraphernalia. The guys that stick their fingers in dead bodies and puppet them around? It’s probable that they are up to no good and are, in fact, scheming to steal your liver as we speak!

[Spoilers for The Locked Tomb series below.]

But of course, I’m don’t bring this up to call the OP out for being confused about the obvious. Like me, they have read the books, and it sounds as though we had a similar experience with them. The first two entries in the series take place within John Gaius’ necromantic empire, and the second book is told from the perspective of a full-blown necromancer. Protagonist bias being what it is, readers learn to roll with necromancers’ weird activities and styles of dress. What seems normal to them becomes normal to us. Indeed, one of the central joys of the first book, Gideon the Ninth, is being taken along on the journey of slowly falling in love with the necromancer Harrowhark Nonagesimus, the “hideous witch from hell.” You just have to get to know her a bit.

Only in the third and most recent book does Muir take us out of the dominion of John’s empire and the upper echelons of its society, and onto a world bursting with refugees fleeing the conquest of his legions, a campaign only hazily alluded to heretofore. Now we see its consequences.

And so Nona lived with Camilla, Palamedes, and Pyrrha, on the thirtieth floor of a building where nearly everyone was unhappy, in a city where nearly everyone was unhappy, on a world where everyone said that you could outrun the zombies, but not forever. (Nona the Ninth, pg. 39)

So, yes, it is understandable that this would be the book where readers really start to grapple more seriously with the idea that the Nine Houses may be a less-than-righteous society. And yeah, maybe all the skulls and talk of “arterial blood” should have been a hint…

As a reader, there’s a funny sense of dissonance as you find yourself considering the idea that maybe the most stereotypically “evil” genre of magic could be the instrument of wickedness here too…but that is itself often the fun of books, both in fiction and nonfiction: discovering the gulf between how you expect to feel about something and what actually bubbles up when you face it on the page. Muir has created a universe in which we root for necromancers—and their cavaliers!—as naturally as we’d root for any other protagonist. Now in book three, she’s complicated that dynamic, pushing the world of necromancy away to the distance where it starts to look less familiar. At that point, we’re forced to reevaluate and ask, “Why necromancers? Why the kind of magic that bleeds and oozes?” It’s an invitation to think more deeply about the overall themes of the Locked Tomb books—about bodies, death, grief, and the boundaries we draw and then sometimes erase between ourselves and others.

And while we’re on the subject of necromancy, it always helps to dig a little deeper, because when we read about magic of any genre we are always implicitly confronting what we do and don’t expect, what we consider to be normal. So, let’s talk a little about what is magic, what is magical about necromancy, and how Muir’s Locked Tomb series incorporates the inherent strangeness of magic as a concept into its themes.

 

What Does the Magic Mean?

In an interview with Ezra Klein, science fiction author Ted Chiang offers us this take on the nature of magic:

Magic is something which, by its nature, never becomes widely available to everyone. Magic is something that resides in the person and often is an indication that the universe sort of recognizes different classes of people, that there are magic wielders and there are non-magic wielders. That is not how we understand the universe to work nowadays. That reflects a kind of premodern understanding of how the universe worked.

Chiang defines magic here in opposition to technology (both real and science fictional), which he sees as more democratic, at least theoretically. It’s a good definition of the magic we find in fantasy fiction—largely accurate, I think, and pointing to an expressive feature of the common magic/non-magic divide: the idea that there is a natural class of special, powerful person, distinct from less special, less capable folks. Chiang’s definition deserves high marks for articulating that magic in stories is or can be “about” more than just what it is literally doing.

However, magic in fiction need not be limited to signifying the special, elevated class of people. Historically speaking, in the premodern times when our cultural notion of magic crystallized, this was not the case. In ancient Graeco-Roman contexts, magic was not even conceptualized as “residing in the person.” Spells, perhaps inscribed on sheets of lead, were thought to work by exhorting the power of some force external to the magician, maybe a ghost or demon or deity. The person who executed the spell might have special knowledge, training, or a relationship with a relevant supernatural power, but they were not thought to be innately magical themselves.

The problem here, you may note, is that exhorting a god for aid—well, that sounds like pretty basic religious behavior, no? And what of our potion-maker, be she fictional or a historical village witch, gathering and combining ingredients, experimenting to create desirable effects…is she not practicing a kind of science? Premodern people, with their premodern understanding of the universe, did distinguish between magic, natural science, and religion, but based on what criteria? The answer is, in a word, weirdness. Or, in a less glib word, non-normativity:

Someone who stitches up a cut or who goes into a temple to make a prayer is seen as acting in a normal and expected way, making use of normal scientific or religious patterns of action. By contrast, someone who cuts the throat of a puppy and burns it on a tombstone in the middle of the night is engaging in non-normative religious behavior, just as someone who smears the wound with a paste made from the wrappings of an Egyptian mummy, powdered rhino horn, and the intestines of a frog is engaging in non-normative scientific activity.”  (Edmonds, Drawing Down the Moon, pg. 9)

Without getting too deep into the weeds on the scholarship of ancient magic, contemporary consensus seems to be settling around the idea that magic, as denoted by various terms, was a label that came into use for the purpose of distinguishing non-normative from normative behavior. Being non-normative or weird is not, of course, the only criterion necessary for something to register as magical. (Prancing and wobbling around like you’ve joined the Ministry of Silly Walks, for example, won’t cut it.) But delineating an activity as non-normative and thus separate from more acceptable, legitimized avenues of religious or medical practice was the original, overarching use of the category.

Turning our gaze back to the realm of contemporary fiction, which is what Chiang is talking about, we may wonder if the concept of magic is no longer doing the same work in our fantasy stories now as it historically has. For, as Chiang’s definition implies, a category that once applied primarily to outsider peoples and deviant behaviors appears to have been co-opted to describe not just an activity that is common—so many wizards in fantasy!—but an elect class of people, regarded not so much as deviant from average folks but better than them. (Obviously, there are many works in the wide canon of fantasy novels in which magic has been banned or marginalized, but I suspect that these tales are iterating on the more established classic fantasy model in which magic and its practitioners are a normal or integrated part of the fantasy society, your sage advisors like Merlin or Gandalf, your boy wizard heroes like Ged, even your early anti-heroes like Elric of Melnibone.)

Take a seminal work of fantasy fiction, for example: Ursula K. Le Guin’s Earthsea books, in which magic operates as the world religion, with mages serving as experts on the natural and spiritual state of the world. The Archmage, Sparrowhawk, is sort of analogous to the Pope, and is versed in social graces and affairs of state.

“‘You are the son of the Prince of Enlad and the Enlades,’ the Archmage said, ‘Heir of the principality of Morred. There is no older heritage in all Earthsea, and none fairer. I have seen the orchards of Enlad in spring, and the golden roofs of Berila….’” (The Farthest Shore, pg. 3)

In Le Guin’s fictional universe of Earthsea, then, magic does not signify any deviance, and while I have not done a thorough survey of genre, I would argue that, with notable exceptions, this dynamic holds for most of fantasy fiction. In fantasy stories magic may not always be common, but it is not strange.

We may wonder, then: How did we come to be satisfied using the term ‘magic’ for something that has become relatively normalized? Has the term simply lost all vestiges of its original meaning? In fact, there is a fairly simple explanation for this seeming incongruity between the normative implications of literary and historical magic: while magic in fantasy fiction may be familiar and acceptable within the narrative, it does always still signify as non-normative to us, the readers. And this is all part of the fun. Reading fantasy commonly comes with a voyeuristic, quasi-anthropological appeal of observing a society or entire world that seems strange, weird, almost unimaginable even, to us. It is the common enterprise of fantasy adventures to ask us to consider: what if there was a land where dragons and wizards were abundant and the royalty were beneficent and physically attractive?

Chiang’s concern, to bring us full circle, seems to be that this voyeuristic experience of magic in imagined other societies may reflect a classist understanding of our own reality, that it is appealing to a part of us that is comforted or flattered by the idea of a naturally special class of person. While this may indeed be a generic feature of fantasy magic, we can also find magics that are expressive of more than just some version of a natural hierarchy, which brings us back (finally) to The Locked Tomb.

 

 Necromancy, the Body, and Boundaries

He said, “This is the part where I hurt you. Are you ready?” (Nona the Ninth, pg. 406)

As discussed briefly above, necromancy is a version of magic that can feel difficult to read as a positive or even a neutral force. Dead bodies, the basic clay of necromancy’s art, gross us out, and we cannot bring ourselves to treat them with the sense of whimsy or aspiration that is part and parcel of other fantasy magic. Kimberly Stratton identifies this reaction as a feeling of abjection, à la Julia Kristeva, high queen of abjection theory. Necromancy’s disturbance of the corpse, Stratton says, triggers our sense of our own fragility in light of our inevitable demise and transgresses the normal ritual boundaries of burial with which we usually carefully manage our upset feelings about the corpse (“Magic, Abjection, and Gender in Roman Literature,” pg. 158).

We might say that where general fantasy wizardry contributes to a sense of certainty about individual identity—wherein, as Chiang says, one tends to simply and definitively be a wizard or mage or what have you, with the power to order the physical world and obtain unambiguous knowledge about the spiritual one—necromancy does the opposite and unsettles identity by inviting us to think about the dissolution of the self, about death, about the lividity and decay of the flesh that in life we try to keep so orderly. And this is a dynamic that Tamsyn Muir evidently recognized and considered full of potential.

The Locked Tomb series, to the delight of us all, uses necromancy in order to explore themes of unstable identity. Playing out with a distinctly carnal sensibility, it is a story about problematic bodies, not least among them the Body, the inhabitant of the titular Locked Tomb, whose nature we are just starting to become privy to in the third book, and whose awakening would threaten apocalypse for John Gaius’ empire. She is a monster in the old-fashioned sense of defying easy categorization.

Other bodies in the books struggle with health, that hazily defined metric of corporal stability, in ways that invite the necromancer’s interest or even undergird their power. Dulcinea Septimus, to give a memorable example, slowly dies from blood cancer in a process that feeds her pool of necromantic power, dubbed ‘thanergy’ in universe, but that power is insufficient—is anathema, even, to making Dulcinea herself well (“If they could figure out some way to stop you when you’re mostly cancer and just a little bit woman, they would! But they can’t.”).

Most especially, though, Muir’s necromancy pokes at the spongy boundary between self and other until more than just errant fluids start to seep through. Characters consume each other, become each other, reject each other so aggressively that their sense of reality jostles loose. This dynamic is primarily embodied (hey-oh!) by protagonists Gideon and Harrowhark. The Gideon of the first book undergoes an unconventional, backwards character arc. She starts off already confident and capable, yearning for distinguishment both in the honorary sense of receiving commendation in the course of military service and in the sense of becoming individual and free of her indenture to the odious Ninth House. Her every attempt to self-actualize may be blocked, but she is trying. And yet, after Gideon is unwillingly pressed into service as Harrow’s cavalier, the pair progress from mutual avoidance to begrudging partnership (with an undercurrent of romantic tension, obviously), and on to the uncomfortable codependency that appears to be the ideal for necromancer-cavalier relationships in this culture. The journey culminates when Gideon willingly sacrifices her soul so that Harrow can achieve the pinnacle of necromancy, Lyctorhood.

The topper to this queer hero’s journey is that Muir seems to want to deny us any decisive outlook on all this boundary transgression. Those in the story that cling to the certainty of conflict are not necessarily better off than those that embrace the mess of entanglement.

It’s difficult to feel unconflicted even about John, the Necrolord Highest and creator of all the universe’s monstrosities. His cavalcade of errors are only rarely acts of divine wrath and much more often appear to be just the least-bad mistake he sees available to him at the time. He is more of a bumbler than either a mastermind or a madman.

Then he said— “Do you remember what you said to me once I had done it? When we stood here together?”

She looked at him and she said, “Yes.”

He said— “You said, ‘I picked you to change, and this is how you repay me?’”

She said— “What else did I say?”

He said: “You said, ‘What have you done to me? I am a hideousness.’”

She said— “What else did I say?”

He said, “Where did you put the people? Where did they go?”

She said, “I still love you.”

He said, “You said that too.”

(Nona the Ninth, pg. 410)

I suppose what I have been trying to say, what compels me about this series is how its magic is in the mess—the mess of ambiguity, of slippage between life and death, love and hate, Gideon and Harrow. Muir’s books would be extremely readable just for being a lot of fun, which they are, but they are also compelling examples of the still-potent capacity of magic to be a signifier of disturbance rather than determinism. That I suppose is my own answer to our original question of “Are the necromancers the bad guys?” Not good, not bad, but another secret third thing: a mess!

And—returning to Chiang just one more time—I want to end with the invitation that we could take a more generous attitude toward literary magic in general. As I have said, I think that Chiang is correctly identifying a potentially problematic implication of the idea of innate magic in fiction, but he is generalizing, and if we investigate specific examples, we will often find that there is more at work. Just to return to our previous example, Le Guin’s Earthsea series and her wizard Ged, we find that she is using magic not to define but rather to explore relationships between people and their own identities, people and other people, people and nature, etc. Her books, Muir’s books, and probably very many others—please feel free to mention examples in the comments, if any come to mind—use magic that way in order to bring us closer to the things we find weird or uncanny.

In the manner of anthropology, these stories challenge us to think about what it means to be human, in and of ourselves and in relation to others—but in the manner that belongs to fantasy and science fiction (and even, really, all books) they can also make us wonder what it’s like to be not quite human, if we can truly imagine that…to be alien, animal, android, or monster. These exercises are of course fun, but they also at times help us prove to ourselves how much more understanding our minds—and, yes, also our silly little hearts—can hold.

Kristen holds a master’s degree in Greek, Latin, and Classical Studies, but she also holds strong opinions on subjects in which she is not formally accredited. She reads. She is always trying to read more, MORE!

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sterling
1 year ago

Oh, they are very definitely the bad guys.  But some of the necromancers don’t know it because they have either been brainwashed or have no perspective of anything outside of their (evil) society.

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Joel
1 year ago

The problem with this pace is,  it makes the false assumption that everyone who reads this series has the same reaction, and that reaction is based on a binary.

This series does an amazing job of circumventing the binary (in more ways than one) and demonstrating that choices are not always good or bad (or skilled and bumbling as this author chooses to lable).

There is no “good guy” or “bad guy.” Just look at the actions if the resistance. Are they “good guys?” No.  At its heart, in my opinion,  this series is about folks just trying to do their best in untenable situations, and the sympathetic characters are neither good or bad. We just want them to be happy.  

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Rachel
1 year ago

This is maybe more of a placeholder for myself, but I would really be interested to see how this analysis of magic shifts when you also consider the themes of love that Muir is exploring as well.

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Gnomon
1 year ago

This was a great essay, and has me wanting to revisit the Locked Tomb (once again!) as well as asking me to reconsider and diversify the way I conceive of magic the fantasy RPG games I run.

You ask for other examples that on closer examination dwell in the messiness of magic.  Patrick Rothfuss’ world of Temerant and his forms of magic seem to reside in this this non-normative messiness. The names of the forms themselves imply messiness “Sympathy” “Glamourie”, “Naming”. They invite interpretation, and even though ‘normal’ characters might think of this magic as deterministic “you are this, therefore you can do that”, Kvothe learns that this isn’t the case.  Slippage, where Sympathy users can use too much of themselves, leads inadvertently to a destruction of the self. Even magic like  alchemy that is relatively commonplace in other settings, is actually in Kingkiller, as Simmon describes, a dangerously messy form of magic.  And the part that always blows my mind about Kingkiller is how there are even deeper, more esoteric and exotic magics (like Naming) that are just so messy. And this is where the most interesting characters in his story live!

But then, the way Patrick describes the command of these magics broadens our sense, as readers, about what was is actually quite magical about the very normative things in our lives: music, story-telling, poetry (yes, Kvothe hates it, but Simmon’s use of it is powerful), making, sign-language, even silence.

Thank you, Kristen, for this essay, it was truly inspiring.

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Melvin
1 year ago

Wow.

A different reaction here from the other posts: I never drank the kool-aid of 20th century existentialism (19th century pre-existentialism was my jump off point). Even those who presume that existence preceeds essense are not able to generalize that to the realm of story/narrative in fiction: the fictional story does not exist in the sense of the “real” world. The impact of the story is –relative to my n=1 experience– the harmony/dissonance of the essence experienced/constructed by the reader juxtaposed to the inferred essence of the author’s hidden voice.

The ethics/aesthetics argument of Either/Or, Nietzche’s slave/master morality in Beyond Good and Evil and the false vanquishing of all essentialisms with Sartre’s Being and Nothingness are all footnotes to the Republic’s irreconciliable conflicts between the questions of the existence of a difference between The Good Life And The Good Things in Life and the conditional difference of which is of higher priority if a meaningful difference exists.

No cap: empires in fantasy fiction are essentially evil but existentially neutral. The exigency of fighting a Dark Lord only creates the relative benefit of a lesser evil that is preferable to the hyperbolicly worse alternative. The best world of a pre-industrial fantasy society is one without kings, emperors or Dark Lords.

Connecting back to the structure of magic users in the Ninth series: totemic superhumans (Green Lantern/Iron Man), mystical beings (Thor, Wonder Woman), skilled technicians (John Constantine, Edward Elric, Hank Pym), intentionally-created superhumans (Captain America, Deathstroke) and born superhumans (X-Men, metahumans) are all operating on a similar structure and narrative centering that defines right and wrong from their more powerful and aesthetically pleasing frame of reference. The why of their power is less important than the what has been done with it in the knowledge of the world they love in and the less advantaged with whom they share finite resources. The less said about the Krakoa era X-Men, the better. When the protagonsts use their advantages to build an empire on co-opting the rotting corpses of their opponents on a planetary scale, there is no neutral case.

 

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1 year ago

This was a very interesting essay that made me want to go back and reread the Locked Tomb… again! Thanks for the references as well. 

 

I’ll admit to always feeling just a little bit lost when I finish one of these books-like there is something more that I’m just not catching on the page. The Locked Tomb lends itself so well to rereads because of that. I’ll keep your ideas in mind when I start my next reread!

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Brian Robison
1 year ago

Thanks for sharing your wonderful essay! It’s not every day I succumb to a Locked Tomb link in my news feed and learn something new about poststructuralist thought. Now you’ve got me thinking about heavy metal as a musical horror genre, and “progressive metal” as perhaps its magic-infused subgenre? I look forward to reading more of your analyses. Brava, bravissima!

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apple
1 year ago

Love this essay! You’ve got me thinking about the ways in which necromancy is especially invasive as a category of magic; not just icky when dealing in decaying bodies or skeletons, but constantly bumping up against bodily autonomy and consent and very real questions about whether and how to respect the wishes and remains of the dead. Then there’s necromancy on living people, which Muir continuously highlights as interpersonal and transgressive: Lyctorhood in all its variations of consumption and soul combination and body sharing, killing living beings to produce power, siphoning life force, hijacking perception, even just deeply sensing the thalergy and thanergy and interior workings of other living bodies might be counted an invasion of privacy and autonomy. Over 10,000 years all these things have become more or less cultural norms in the Nine Houses–even murder for thanergy is normalized on the large scale of war–and you’re absolutely right, the structure of the series and the perspectives we’re given really drive the moral complexities home.

Then there’s the ways necromancy affects the wielder! Necromancers are repeatedly presented as actually biologically different–physically weaker and frailer, perhaps as a side effect of holding so much death energy all the time, but also having different organ function, possibly different senses, even as babies before any aptitude for magic actually presents. Necromancers are born, not made (with notable exceptions), and so they embody their magic from the start–then spend their whole magical careers invading the bodies of others with their perceptions and power and sometimes with their own souls.

All this is to say, thanks for this food, I’ll be chewing on it all day!

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Kalcheus
1 year ago

The one thing that makes me hesitant to view John and the Necromancers as the “bad guys” is the origin of the other side: they are the descendants of the rich people who’ve abandoned Earth to its fate. While we shouldn’t blame the children for the sins of the parents, I’m not 100% convinced they’re worth rooting for yet.

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1 year ago

I just love the way these books make my brain all hurty. Good fantasy and SF *should* do that, at least every once in a while. 

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MR
1 year ago

9.: I agree. At the end of the third book I came away with the sense of an overarching theme of (to hideously oversimplify) righteous anger consuming the angry just the same as any other anger. The complexity and believability of the choices everyone is making in the series is one of the things I appreciate so much about the series.

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Kino
1 year ago

PROBABLY SPOILERS

I don’t think as a society the Necromancers are inherently the baddies nor is BOE. I absolutely think John is and likely the BOE leaders/original people that fled from Earth. Both are groups/people that had monumental power that used it without regard to those who did not have that power and haven’t seemed to change.

Which is probably why you see the cooperation between lyctors and BOE at certain levels.

There are real questions about the overall extent of societies and population in the 9 houses and colonies and BOE too.

And BOE and the 9 Houses seem to be fighting each other on the planet in the third book but I was never super clear if it was a 9 houses world, BOE or independent that became contended. 

Then there’s John and his resurrection ability and his memory manipulation. So it’s hard to see whether some of the actions are really evil or consequences of the initial conflict and when you have resurrection at hand are the deaths really deaths or a form of storage as he chases the “real” criminals. And what part is a self serving explanation for his actions in the first place. As he says “he doesn’t make mistakes.”

I think the part that casts a lot of things into doubt is the act of flipping planets though. As the reasoning is to thwart the resurrection beasts and John’s fear of them was one of his lies. But they also relocated people rather than simply letting them die – several times. So the question about that is what was the actual purpose.

And while a lot of the 9 houses actions seem like colonial Empire building there’s no direct comparison to make because the reach of the story so far has been relatively limited. To what extent are BOE doing the same thing and how is that viewed as worlds settled away from earth?

So the actions in the social structure and traditions, technology, magic, relationship with death etc aren’t inherently evil but simply strange to outsiders. While the actions of individuals and use of those powers can be evil (poor Babs). 

And when presented with evidence contradictory to the values and reasoning they had before the necromancers and even Lyctors are shown to change and BOE is also…..

Honestly just can’t wait for the next book.

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mojangles
1 year ago

There is no “good guy” or “bad guy.” Just look at the actions if the resistance. Are they “good guys?” No.  At its heart, in my opinion,  this series is about folks just trying to do their best in untenable situations, and the sympathetic characters are neither good or bad. We just want them to be happy.  

I am going to posit that murdering literal billions of people out of, essentially, pique, MAKES YOU A BAD GUY otherwise what on earth is the point of the word.  Killing hundreds of children to maybe make a necromantic indigo child, ditto!  Lyctors assassinate planets as their day job. 

they may be sympathetic, charming, whimsical but they are dreadful, awful creatures and servants of a profoundly evil empire.  

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